Kriyaansh ss 1st luv Neva..to be 4getten..updated - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
hey guys... 
update is on d way...



Edited by deepshakriya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Yeh part 2 n 3 kahan hai...m confused 😲 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: only_kriyansh

Yeh part 2 n 3 kahan hai...m confused 😲 😕


Arey actually I did a blunder mistake by updating hum aur humare angel in dis first love...ss nw I Changed it..dnt worry I ll update part 2 nw only...😊 Sry fr d inconvience amrutha..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Hey.. Guys m reli happy for  ur reviews..n thnx for liking it..n gud news is tat m converting dis os into an ss..so here I go..wid d 2nd part..


Part-2


Aftr 2 or 3 rings swayam picks d call.
Phone convo...

Sh: hi swayam r u okay nw...??

Sw: Sharon woh kriya kaise hai..? Mujhe usse baat Karne hai..phone usko dohna plzzz Sharon...

Sh: nahi swayam... Abhi nahi Tum usse kal Milna Kk...

Sw: wht..!!?? Kal milena matlab Tum log Mumbai aa rahe ho...

Sh: yaa swayam hum kal waha aa rahe hai...

Sw: wow thnq u sharon...

Sh: swayam mein tumse ek baat puchu...

Sw: haa Sharon kya baat hai 

Sh: swayam sach batao kya Tum taani aur Rey ke relationship se khush ho..??

Sw: Sharon sach batao ke I'm nt at all happy wid der relationship... I can't see anyone in kriya's place wid Rey...

Sh: Kk swayam hum kal aane ke baad Tum Sab logo ko lekar mere ghar aao n tell dem ki I'm bck...

Aur ek baat kriya aur Rey doono aamne samne aana chahiye...  Kk...

Sw: yaa Sharon bye... Love u..

Sh: (blushed)n I like u..

Both had their lovey dovey talks..n slept thinking abt each other..


Nxt day morning..

Kriya n Sharon started der packing...soon both bid..to Deir parents n left fr airport..as soon as dey reach d airport Sharon got a cal..

So she excused herself frm Kriya n went to d other side n took d cal..

Sh:yaa bolo swayam

Sw:Sharon Tum dono airport pahunche ho kya?

Sh:haa swayam just nw..

Sw:sh mein aunga pick karne ke liye plzz..

Sh:okk(blushing)

Sw:ok den I m waitin to meet u both..

Sh:hmm..kk sw gtg bye..

Sw:byee

(guys m cutting dier journey n all..)

By d evening around 6 Krisha reached mumbai..Kriya felt vry emotional...Sharon understood tat n kept her hand on kriya's shoulder..

Den a tall handsome guy behind dem stood wid teary eyes..he could just utter one word  "KRIYA.."

Both girls turned..Kriya was just shocked to see her best friend..

"swayam"said Kriya as tears made der way

He cme forward n pulled her into a bone crushing hug..

Sharon was just smiling broad with teary eyes..

Sw:m sry Kriya..he said btw tears N broke d hug..

Kr:swayam Tum kyun sry Bol rahe ho..

Sw:Sharon ne mujhe Sab Kuch bata diya hai Kriya 

Kriya glared at Sharon..as she soon hold her ears n mumbled a sorry..

Kriya couldn't help by smile at her cuteness..

The trio went to parking lot n hopped in d car..der was a complete silence in d car..

Sw:I hav a surprise fr u both

Sh:(excitingly) what?

Sw:u hav to wait fr tat..

Sh:k

Soon he droved to st.Louis college

Kriya n Sharon were shocked 

Sh:swayam tum yaha kyu laye ho 

Sw:arey first u both come in..

Kr:No swayam m nt feeling well 

Sw:Kriya plz..vaise Tum kal se tho clg join kar rahi ho na so aaj aane Mei kya prob hai..

Sh:haa Kriya chelo na..

Kriya agreed n trio entered d clg dey wer in d corridor..as it was evening 6 so no students wer present..dey directly went to rehearsal hall..

As d doors wer opened..all screamed ..SURPRISE...

N d light wer on..everybody were shocked..by seeing d view infront of dem.. Both Kriya n Sharon r standing hand in hand..n swayam beside em..

Rey's pov
I saw her..my baatcutter..Kriya..after 8-9months I cnt believe ki vo ab meri samne hai.. Wait wait..dude My  BAATCUTTER huh..vo meri thi hi kab..btw wt is she doing here??

                         Pov ended..

D whole gang including Tani were hell shocked..Tani was hell feared..so she caught hold of rey's  hand tat was nt went unnoticed by Krisha..Swayam..he just want to giv a tight slap on her face bt controlled..

Kriya just ignored..as tears filled in her eyes..bt controlled..

Sh:Hey guys..

Gang:hey Sharon 

Simmi rinni both hugged Sharon where as,vishaka n neha too hugged Kriya n started crying..which she equally responded..

Vi:y did u left us..Kriya she said while crying

Ne:haa Kriya kyu chodke chali gayi thi hame

Amar n Bharat also hugged Kriya nw d weaklings team wer in d group hug..
Aftersometime dey broke d hug

Sh:guys I hav to tel u all a news 

All:what?

Sh:Kriya n me r sisters..She said proudly..

All:kya?

Sh:yaa y u ppl r soo shocked

Sim:bt how?

Sh:jab mein dance camp se Delhi chali gayi dad ke paas so unhone mujhe meri mom se milvane ke liye bulaya hai..n I went to Delhi I got bak my mom n came to knw tat smriti aunty is my mom n sweetu..ahh..I mean Kriya is my Sis..we both r twins..Kriya is 5 mins elder Dan me
N I got my life n family bak..she said all dis in tears..
Whole gang wer sad..bt happy as well..bt fr Vicky it was nt just dis thing..his best friend was hurt coz of her..so couldn't stop n blurted out..

Vic:den y did u left Rey Kriya..he asked silently looking down..as he is chuddy buddy of rey he can't see rey like tat..

Dis was enough to make Kriya tears  der way out..Rey was also wanted to knw n waiting fr her response so impatiently..tat he backed off his hand..frm Tani..
Sharon thought tat it would be better if dey come to knw abt d truth tomorrow..n she spoke..

Sh:Guyz we r tired..so hum kal Baat karte hai..vickey n gang nodded..

Rey saw tat n moved towards her..bt Sharon went to Kriya n hugged her sidewards..Rey felt bad..tat y she she behaving soo strangely 

Sh:n u knw wt guys Kriya ne mujhe har situation Mei support ki hai..she is  my real BESTIE she said glaring at Rey 

Rey was soo damn shocked by d sudden change in Sharon ..infect d whole gang was dumbfounded..

Sw(selftalk)my Sharon THE DIVA is bak on her original place n smiled..

Vic:Sharon ye Tum kya keh rahi ho Rey..he was cut by sh

Sh:oh yeah..seriously hw d he'll can I forget..

Sim:what Sharon

Sh:I didn't even wish d newly couple of our clg..Reyaansh singhania n miss Tani.. She said with a killer smirk..

Sharon went to dem n forwarded her hand to Rey 

Sh:congratulations..Reyaansh..

rey's pov
Sharon kyun aise Baat kar rahi hai mujhse..usne mujhe Reyaansh kehke bulayi..I don't believe dis..Kriya ko apne Bestie kaha..what's happenings I want to knw..

Rey too shooked his hand..n before he could speak Sharon moved back n said

Sh:guys kal evening sab log mere ghar ajana..m organizing a party fr my sis..n a surprise too..fr her..She said looking at Kriya..

Ok gtg guys..let's go sweetu..n trio left..Kriya n swaron

Here d whole gang was surprised to see Krisha dis close..n happy too..
Bt two persons who wer numb..n tat was non other dan so called...taa...rey(ta...rey.. My foot)


Hogaya..
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Luv ya..
Deepsha



Edited by deepshakriya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
amazing update...
finaaly kria met whole gang...
loved krisha bond...
hate tht taa_...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
finally i am happy kria meet her best friend swayan ... who know everything...
the whole gang is shocked by what sharan told them that kria is her sis...
finally sharan and kria are best sis... rey is shocked that sharan wish her for his new relationship... rey is also shocked for the change behavior in sharan toward him...
i cannot wait for the next part... continue soon wait early...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update
 kria meet her best friend swayam...gr8
whole gang is shocked by what sharan told them that kria is her sis...
finally sharan and kria are best sis... rey is shocked that sharan wish her for his new 
rey ka chehra dekhne layak tha..😆😆
loved it
thnks 4 pm
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
amazing updte 
yippie finally the whole gang kriya..
luvd swayum...
luving sharon ka attitude towards rey 
rey ka chehra dekhne layak tha..
updte soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
finnaly u updat
nice 1
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Yay!!! Kria s bck...
Hawww loved krisha...
Sawyu hmmm gussa hata   hai bt...chalo maaf kiya...
Bt rey gadha saala tu meri samne ha tumhe kaccha chabalunga...taaa yuck rey go to hell...
Kria rona dona plz she dont deserve dis...
Sharon rey ko hell dikhani chahiye...
Rey again hate u countless...
Bt deepsha loved it to the core...
Nxt part jaldi...plzjjj