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Posted: 12 years ago
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DARMIYAAN


Kuchh pal saath chale to jaanaa,
Rastaa hai jaanaa pehchanaa .

Saanso ko sur de jaataa hai,
Tera yo.n sapano mai.n aanaa.

Maine jatan kiye to lakho.n
Mann ne meet tumhi ko maanaa

Ab to haath thhaam lene do
Aur kaho na , na na , na na !

Kuchh kaho na !


Sau janam ka saath apna,

Sans ka dhadkan se jaise,
Aas ka jeevan se jaise,

Kaise kate saal solah,
Shyam ki jogan ke jaise.

Jhoot ke parde na dhoondo,
Sach kaho na .


Kuchh kaho na !..

Ek dooje ke liye ham,

Haath main kangan ke jaise,
Pyaas main sawan ke jaise,

Roop ko darpan ke jaise,
Bhakt ko bhag_van ke jaise.

Jheel si simtee na baitho,
Kuchh baho na .


Kuchh kaho na! ..

(Copied from net! Thus no courtesy)

I am back again guys with this second ff of mine. I know I was saying to quit but this concept started bugging me and I was forced to write it.

I hope you will shower me with your love and support again and would enjoy this too like INTEHAA.

I would try to keep it a short story provided my mind doesn't play again like it did with intehaa.

Hope to get your support and nice comments



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Neha512

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CHARACTER SKETCH


MAAN SINGH KHURANA

A 25 year old, middle class person. He is an accountant in a nationalized bank and lives in a sub urban delhi with his family i.e. his dad and mom. His life is like a normal middle class person, yet he is different from them due to his sensibility and good heart.

GEET HANDA

A 16 year old girl, had just given her tenth boards. She is an orphan as her parents died when she was just 2 leaving her with her uncle-aunt (chacha- chichi). She loves her real elder sister Suhana (21 year old), the most and could do anything for her happiness. Geet is one of those girls whose beauty could be compared to those of fairies and angels.

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wooow...
u are back wid new story...!!!

welcome back dear...
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congratsss...for new short story...!!!

continue soon...
will b waiting...
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Cont. soon...
Plz give prologue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks neha...for starting another ff ,me reading inteha again...already finished 70 parts...but pls do pm when u update
Waiting eagerly for the updates
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Congrats 4 new Story 🥳
Continue soon
Add me 4 PM pls :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrtas dear for new story..
waiting for updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on the new Fiction neha...

Am sure you would give us yet another awesome story like Inteha...

And characterization seems to be of normal class... A different one... looking forward to yet another maaneet journey...

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