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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
😊nice start...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Wow nice start..
waiting for more..continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73


C
ongrats for ur darmiyaan...

sorry to comment late... lappy was not working for 2 days...

i really wish ur mind plays more games this time so as we get an another awesome lambaa waala maaneet se bhara hua ff😉...

now me off to read part 1 ... will comment after reading...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was really a lovely start... i loved the character sketch a lot where msk for a change is not a multi billionaire having every thing on his finger tips... but he is a simple man like us... and then geet as 16?!?! i love the age diff between the both😉 ... one innocent and the other mature...

now coming to the part... though i understand the so called auntys concern for the angel geet especially when she is an orphan but the remedy they have suggested is such an absurd one... marrying off a gal at that age rather than befriending her, protecting her and loving her????

chachi seems to be a loving one not that evil step mom types... but with all this talks will she decide to marry off geet??? feeling sad for geet too... on one side her elder sis was married off and on the other side all this talks!!

am so keen to read the next part... kab milega????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely start
waiting for more update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
nehaji kahaa ho??? next update kab milega??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

nehaji kahaa ho??? next update kab milega??


aj chahiye kya???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys just trust me with the story. It wont contain anything which you being a girl wont accept except the beginning as it is just to build a base and the actual reason would be revealed later. Thus just go with the flow of it.

PART 2

Two weeks passed since then, and all tried to forget what that aunty said. But unknown to themselves, her words had left a mark on both geet and shalini's mind. Since then geet started being more careful about her moves while shalini started noticing the way people glance at her. it all of the sudden started giving creepy feelings to her.

It was one such day when geet and shalini had gone for grocery shopping. Shalini asked geet to buy few veggies while she went to a nearby confectionary shop. Geet was busy checking and bargaining, when she felt someone passing by and touching her back in wrong way.

She immediately turned around to shout but there was no one then. She cursed the person under her breath while continued to buy the veggies unknown to the fact that someone had actually seen it too.

Shalini had forgotten her wallet with geet and came back to take it when she saw the man touching geet and quickly going away before she could do anything. Though it is common in the busy places, all this touching and misbehaving in the name of rush, but still the words of that aunty flashed in her mind again.

She just shrugged her mind and went to geet and took her wallet. Soon both completed the shopping and went back to their house.

It was another day when geet got a call from her friend about meeting in a caf. She asked shalini for permission wo chachi, seema had called and was saying that they had planned to meet today at the caf near our school. So can I go too please??

Shalini thought for a moment and asked, kaun kaun aa rha h..

Bas we all girls in our group chachi, aur kaun.

Ok bte, jao but be back in two hours. Geet nodded and happily went for getting ready.

It was around 5 and geet still wasn't back. More than three hours since she went and geet still hasn't come back. Shalini was hell worried. Nowadays her mind was hell worried and above all her being late had just made her more angry. Geet had always ensured to be home in the given time limit but today' khi kisi aur ke sath to' nhi nhi meri geet is not like that.

Well it's a common mentality of parents if they are conservative and focuses more on society's thought. Shalini was also one of them. Though she loved geet like her daughter but she always believed being a girl you should be in your limits. She had always preached her both daughters to stay away from boys while studying in co-ed school or not interacting much with the opposite sex. Girls were not allowed to go much outside the house except for school and even when for once a while when they were allowed they were expected to be back in an hour or two without any delay.

Moreover when you are conservative, you pay so much attention on your daughter's each act that even if for once they go against your wish even by mistake you just straight away points that the reason behind that is the wrong company or some attraction toward boys. And when someone in the society points the same about your daughter then its just the limit. You would just lose your mind when that happens. Even though she trusted geet cent percent, but it is also said that if you believe someone unconditionally, they can hate you unbelievably. The present condition of her mind was not stable to think about another reason how much she tries to deny it but somewhere it still bothers her heart.

Geet came around 5:30 all tired and tensed. Shalini came and looked at geet who had few bruises on her hands and face. Shalini stood shocked looking her condition. Some wrong thoughts clouded her mind but she immediately pushed them off. She held geet by shoulders and asked, what happened bte, ye sab kaise hua??

Geet just shook her head and said, wo chachi while we were coming back, we couldn't got an auto you know due to traffic and thus we had to walk back till here tabhi in mid-way some cycle wala lost his balance and fell over me pushing me in stones heap built on side of the road. Thus I got all these bruises on my hands and then my friend took me to the near by doctor for a tetanus shot thus I got so late.

Chachi just sighed in relief that it wasn't what she thought and took her inside applying some ointment on her bruises. Soon geet slept due to the pain but shalini just couldn't rest with all those increasing thoughts in her mind.

It was 2 weeks since suhana's marriage and shalini's restlessness was at peak. In each and everything, her mind would start doubting making her days and night miserable. The condition of geet was neither better too. She had noticed the changes coming in her dear chachi's behavior.

Shalini who used to be sweet and patience would become hyper in small-small issues. She would just worry about irrelevant things and would keep questioning geet's each and every act. It was not that geet didn't know what cooking in shalini's mind. The way shalini tries to make geet speak, she know what is troubling her but the fact that she doesn't trust her enough just hurts geet to no limit. She couldn't believe the woman who was like a mother to her would change so much just in few days.

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One such day shalini was more than happy she had been in past few weeks. She was busy cleaning whole house like a machine while geet wondered what the issue is. She hadn't seen her so happy in past few days and knew the reason must be big that's why all her restlessness and tiredness went away in a jiffy.

She even asked geet to get ready in the same green suit she worn in suhana's marriage. She tried to know why but she just said few guests are coming and they had to be a nice host. Geet tried to argue but she just didn't gave her a chance even.

Precap: any guesses

<<Part 1 Prev Next part 3>>


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Edited by neha512 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kya baat hai yaar!!!! maine update maanga aut tumne phatak se de diya... i know u would have update otherwise too but ki pharak penda hai... mujhe thoda khush hone de is chakkar main... and see i came first too...




well coming to the part... lovely one... wahi hua jiska shak tha... her aunt has started changing or to be exact we can say she is changed... loved the way u described the logic behind shalinis changes... though its true that i dont agree with that societys thought but its true that such thoughts prevail around us...

at the end of the part geet is asked to dress up??? is it for ladki dekhing??? kahi maan tho nahi????

i know u just updated but plzzz update the next soon... kal plss... dekho kithni achi hoo main... maine abhi tho nahi maanga kal ke liye keh rahi hoo...



Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

kya baat hai yaar!!!! maine update maanga aut tumne phatak se de diya... i know u would have update otherwise too but ki pharak penda hai... mujhe thoda khush hone de is chakkar main... and see i came first too...




well coming to the part... lovely one... wahi hua jiska shak tha... her aunt has started changing or to be exact we can say she is changed... loved the way u described the logic behind shalinis changes... though its true that i dont agree with that societys thought but its true that such thoughts prevail around us...

at the end of the part geet is asked to dress up??? is it for ladki dekhing??? kahi maan tho nahi????

i know u just updated but plzzz update the next soon... kal plss... dekho kithni achi hoo main... maine abhi tho nahi maanga kal ke liye keh rahi hoo...




u can be completely happy by the fact that i just updated because you asked as i was thinking to update tom!!!

and what if i say next update is typed too😆

but
but
but

update kal i am not sure about that...😆

bcoz kal i would pm for this update

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