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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha512


ok u wait while i will type another part😉



haha parts pe parts likhthi raho lekin updates ke liye mujhe dekho kithna bolna padtha hai...😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



haha parts pe parts likhthi raho lekin updates ke liye mujhe dekho kithna bolna padtha hai...😡


thats because i am myself litttle confuse with the basic plot isliye am not posting them till i get clear mind
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha512


thats because i am myself litttle confuse with the basic plot isliye am not posting them till i get clear mind



ab main is baat pr kya boolu? i can only say after i read the updates... but am sure u will give ur best and i will be waiting for it😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



ab main is baat pr kya boolu? i can only say after i read the updates... but am sure u will give ur best and i will be waiting for it😳


i just hope it come out well... m going to sleep now... bbye😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha512


i just hope it come out well... m going to sleep now... bbye😊



am sure it will... me too going to sleep... come tom with an update ok? gud nite
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Posted: 12 years ago
chaachis behavior is quite normal...as they r from conservative family...nd all mother worries for their daughter when they r at that age...bt eager to know whoes coming...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting to read more... Glad that u started to write it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think. shalini has found out groom for Geet.. Actually I hate that aunty who poisened Shalini's mind with wrong thoughts..😡 May be Maan is gonna come to see Geet..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Note: girls this ff doesn't contain any mature content or vulgarity so don't worry

PART 3

Shalini welcomed the guests with full hospitality. Two tall men walked in with a middle aged woman in the middle of them. One of those men was aged in his fifties while the other was in his twenties may be approx. 25. His stiff body could be seen from the tight fitting shirt he wore and his poise oozed the charisma he possessed. The women in mid of them wore a simple saree and had a pearl necklace in her neck. She was the wife of the older man and mother of the young man.

Shalini made them sit inside and rushed inside to call the person whose presence is most essential for the purpose. Geet was busy combing her hairs when she heard shalini call her down immediately. She was about to plait them but them decided otherwise and left them open and rushed down to answer shalini's call.

Shalini's heart crunched as she saw the beauty standing in front of her eyes. The girl was just a perfect comparison to angels even in her simplest form too. She just wished she never had to take that step but she was helpless. She just hoped god would help her in it and will not destroy the little angel's life.

In the next few minutes, geet stood in front of the guest's serving them snacks, while her uncle-aunty sat on the other sofa sat. savitri, the lady asked her to come and sit with her while she just wished to get out of here soon as all this wasn't giving her a nice feeling.

Geet sat next to her stiff while she kept looking at shalini asking to let her go. Savitri looked the tensed girl, who in her eyes was 21 year old, she held her hands in hers and asked her about her few questions'

Geet bte what do you like to do in free time, like your hobbies'

Umm aunty nothing much, I love dancing or reading more, replied geet.

Do you know cooking bte??

Not completely, ha thoda bahut basics I know.

Savitri smiled looking at the young lady in front of her. she was here to select the bride for her elder son, Maan and she is sure this beautiful lady would just be a perfect partner for him. She was already told that geet had studied just till class 10th but that doesn't matter as she herself was less educated and the way she had managed her household she trusted geet for that too.

Shalini could see the appreciation in eyes of savitri and knew somewhere her answer would be yes. She remembered how two days met she accidently met her in market. Savitri used to be their neighbor and had seen suhana when she was may be 4 and geet was not even born then. But after that they shifted in the other side of the town and both families lost contact.

When they met in market, savitri told her that she had heard about the news about her elder brother in law's families and that her daughter had shifted with them too. She expressed her wish that her son maan is of marriageable age and she wished to get him settled before he went away for some technical training to Mumbai for few years may be after a month.

Savitri proposed that since they had been close friends since long, she would love to get the families getting into a relationship by asking for hand of their daughter for her son. She didn't knew that suhana has a sister too nor she remember the name of the little girl she had seen then. She just trusted shalini's upbringing.

Shalini was happy to see her old friend after such a long time. They both had spent hours together in their little tea meetings in the evening. But then the contacts broke due to distance and busy life and none contacted each other. After few minutes of updating themselves about their lives, when she was about to tell her about suhana's marriage, savitri gave her the proposal.

Shalini was tongue tied for a moment and was about to tell her that suhana is already married then a thought struck her mind. She knew savitri is one of those calm and understanding women which are rarely found in this cunning world. Any girl would be lucky to have her as mother in law. She thought about geet and the idea just struck her.

Waise bhi maan would go away to Mumbai for few years and as savitri said he will be going alone that means if I get geet married with maan at the end of the month, it wont be wrong too. She just agreed for the proposal and they decided to meet after two days.

And now they sat here for a formal meet to see geet. Shalini not for once thought what about geet's future, what about her dreams. Nor once she thought what would happen with geet after the marriage, will she be able to take care of the marriage responsibilities. Nor once she even considered her age, the fact that she is still a minor.

The love she had for geet was one thing. She still loves her, but the tradition virtues she follows doesn't focusses on anything except world. Society's view matters more than the feeling of individuals that live in this society.

On the other hand, geet sat next to savitri answering few questions which she asked about her. geet wasn't liking the way she was interrogated but was sitting because of the commanding eyes of shalini.

Unaware of anyone, there was a pair of intense chocolate brown eyes which were fixed on her since the time she came down in that green suit of hers. Her long flowing hairs had just made him intake a long breathe. Maan sat in the corner not speaking at all just noticing the woman who will be his future wife. To say he liked her in a first instance would be an understatement. He wont say he love her, as that would be far too soon but yeah he was attracted to her.

he was so lost in her that he didnt even noticed when she stood infront of him to offer tea. It was the rolling of her eyes that brought him back and he took the cup quickly. He was just holding the cup as he never liked tea ever but his lips unknowingly took a sip when shalini said that geet made that tea while geet stood shocked as if when did I made.

Geet saw the man sitting beside her chacha. He looked smart, she thought and his muscles were just bulging out of his shirt making him look more handsome. If suhana wouldn't had married to ishan jiju, I would have got her married with him, afterall he is hotter than jiju, she thought mischievously unknown to the fact that the same man had brought a proposal for her.

Geet's uncle who too agreed for the marriage, asked few questions to maan and after being sure he is financially fit and suits his niece, both the families said yes for the proposal. geet was rooted to ground, when she heard savitri speaking, hme hmare maan ke liye aapki geet manjoor hai.

She gave a glance to chachi who was looking at her too but there was no guilt no sadness in them. She now understood what all was happening whole day. Tears build in her lids as she ran to her room muffling her sobs. None noticed the sadness in them and they all considered it as shyness.

While on the other hand maan was happy. He was glad the rishta got fixed and she would be his forever.

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Edited by neha512 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh just brilliant :D
Maan was awestruck by geet ;)
Ooops but savitri is mistaken geet to be around 21 :s
Poor geet. Her rishta got fixed. Hot jiju nahin now she'll get a hot husband :D
Cant wait for more :)

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