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PART 10
murado waali ghadi aayi thi
besabri se jiska intezaar kiya
woh haseen raat aayi thi
par kuch alag sa ,
na ho kabhi kissi ke saath jaisa
vaisa woh kuch apne saath layi thi
ek masoom si kali
o khilne se pahle hi
murjhaane si thi lagi
uske liye tho woh tufaan layi thi
is bechaari ne
thik se aasmaan na dekha tha
arre usne tho abhi osse ki thandak bhi na paayi
thi
aur yeh raat ,
uske liye tufaani barsaat le aayi thi
yeh akeli hi nahi thi
is par yeh maayusi chaai thi
kyoki ,
sapno ke sach hone ki aas toh
iss bhavree ne bhi lagaayi thi
dekh kar iss kali ko
iske mann ne li angdaai thi
ek din yeh kali sirf hogi meri
pahli nazar mein hi yeh aas lagaayi thi
kya kasoor tha ,yeh iss bhavree ka
kee
isse pyaar hua is kali se ,
jo abhi phool bhi na ban paayi thi
NAHIII
NAHI
yeh kasoor toh hai uss maali ka
jisne sabse khubsurat kali ,
usske baag mein sajaai thi
tut gaye sab sapne inke
kyoki aaj ki raat sitaaro ki jhilmil
hi nahi
apne ander chupa kar tufaan bhi laayi thi
ab dekhna hai ,
key kya sach tha pyaar bhavree ka
jisse hamne ,
kali ko sawaare ga woh ,yeh aas lagaayi thi
(Courtesy to 9n9i9s9h9u9
thanx dr for it...)
Sun rose next day, spreading its glow all over the world,
bringing happiness all around, giving new life to the basics of life. But in
one of the world, the life of some just got engulfed into darkness as each ray
of sun glowed.
It was early morning; everyone in the house was in deep
sleep, except two people whose lives changed totally in last 24 hours. Whole
night maan kept awake, thinking about the rejection she gave him. His mind kept
analyzing her words, her reasons but his heart was too pained to think anything
rational. Their every phone call, their moments all seemed false to him. He
didn't know what to do now, maybe he rushed their relation, but wasn't that
what people do on suhaagraat, he wondered then how was he wrong when he thought
to give a new meaning to their relation, what was his fault in it, his heart
asked.
Geet all night stayed on floor, sobbing and embracing
herself. His touches, his kiss kept replaying in her mind, making her more
conscious of herself. She kept looking at his back most of the time, noticing
his movements which clearly showed he too was awake all night. She just felt
guilty, guiltier with each passing second.
Her mind asked her to tell him everything now, every fact
which was hided from him. The earlier he would come to know, the less pain it
would give him but her heart felt so filled, so restricted that no word came
out of her mouth. More over his touch had instilled some fear in her heart too.
What if he tried to touch her again, what if he lost his temper hearing the
truth. All this just made her more closed up.
Her body felt heavy and rigid to her. Previous day had been
a long one; all those long rituals and then the physical stress had made her
tired, then the emotional stress and the bottled feelings just made her feel
week. The cold floor, and the heavy saree that covered her body, turned out to
be the another negative factor, she so much wanted to lay down, to stretch her limbs,
but she just couldn't think to go back on the same bed again.
Feeling tired, she tilted her head placing them on the cold
wall, and closed her tired eyes, praying all this just turn out to be a
sorrowful dream.
It was 8 in the morning, and the new bride still hadn't come
out of the room. All the chachi's and mami's in short the gossip queens of each family had
stayed and were to left after two days. But then how can they be quiet and not
interrupt the peaceful environment after such an auspicious function.
So as always, when they didn't saw geet in the first thing
in the morning, they went to savitri who was busy preparing tea and started
their favorite deed, savitri, suraj to kab ka chad aya, or dekh teri bahu ka to
savera bhi nhi hua.
Another said, are sheela, ye to aaj kal ki ladkiya hai, 10
bje se pehle inki subaah kha hoti hai, she said giving sheela a smirk.
Savitri shook her head perfectly knowing how her relatives
are. She continued making the tea, and said, are jiji, kal bada din tha bacho k
liye, thak gye honge. Aap log bhi baithiye, I wil bring tea for you all, she
said giving them a soft smile and continued with her work.
The relatives made some face and left. Savitri immediately
moved toward maan's room and knocked the door. Maan immediately came out of his
thought and got up to open the door. He was about to unlatch it, when his eyes
fell on the sleeping geet on floor. Whatever happened inside, no one should
know, he decided and moved toward her.
He thought of picking her and making her lay on bed, and
moved his hand toward her but before he could touch her, her reaction to his
touch flashed in his mind and he immediately pulled back his hand making a fist
and hitting the wall instead.
Geet immediately opened her eyes, as she felt the light bang
vibration and came face to face to maan, who was just few inches away from her.
The memories returned back and fear covered her eyes. Maan saw the fear
returning in her eyes and immediately pulled himself back creating some
distance.
Wo..umm.. someone is on the door. Could you just stand up
and settle on bed, said maan looking away from her. she could feel the anger in
his voice as he said those words. She immediately stood up and moved to bed and
sat on the corner.
Maan then opened the door to come face to face to his
mother. Geet too looked at her mother in law and immediately stood up from the
bed. Savitri smiled at maan and then at geet. Then turning to geet she said,
bte accha hua you are awake. Get ready soon and come down, we are waiting for
you ok. She again smiled and left to continue with her morning chores.
Maan again locked the door as his mother went away. Silence
prevailed for the while as they both stood fixed on their faces thinking how to
break the silence. Finally, not able to stay in the same room anymore with him,
geet moved toward her suitcase and took out a pair of red salwaar kameej.
She was about to go for bath then realized she doesn't know her
way. She knotted her dubatta as she realized she have to ask him. Maan somehow
understood her hesitation and before she could even ask, he said, go right; the
door at the end of the corridor is bathroom.
She nodded and was about to say thank you, but he just
walked out of the room before she could even speak. Geet realized he was way
too angry, the happy go guy, with whom she had long night calls, and he wasn't that
now who used to laugh off her every comment. He had not even glanced at her
since morning and she knew it was no other than she herself. Sighing, she moved
to take a long shower before her mother in law calls her again.
Maan came after half an hour, after his morning exercise and
the first thing he saw was his beautiful wife clad in red chudiyaar kurta' she
was smelling lavender, may be her shampoo he thought, as she wiped off the
water of her wet hairs. Her eyes were lined with a thin layer of kohl and a
natural pink gloss enhanced her pink supple lips.
Thinking of the lips, their first kiss flashed in front of
his eyes and so the events following it. He broke off his reverie as he
realized how she repulsed him, and a pain filled his heart. How he had dreamt
his life to be, how much he was planning to spend this whole week with her, in
her arms, making her his again and again till their passion, their desire would
have consumed them in it but all just proved to be a far off dream. Would they
even be close for once in this close, he now wondered or it will be that he has
to go away without a single memory of their togetherness.
Geet was unaware of maan's presence till she saw him through
the mirror. She immediately pull down the towel and stood looking at floor
knotting her dubatta. Maan didn't glance at her but her tension and nervousness
could be felt even from far too. He gave his back to her and moved to take his
clothes while she moved down to meet her mother in law.
Geet entered the kitchen where her mother in law, savitri
and some other women was present too. Sheela saw geet first and looked at her
open hairs and smirked. She turned to savitri who was preparing for breakfast
and said,
savitri teri bahu ko tameej hai bhi ya nhi, she said with a
taunt full of hatred.
[savitri, did your daughter in law had values and culture or not]
Savitri looked at her direction shocked and then turned her
gaze to where she was looking and saw geet standing at the door of the kitchen
with her head bowed, savitri could tell from the look of her that she must have
heard sheela's taunt.
Are geet bte, ander aao na, wha kyu khadi ho,
[geet bte, please come inside, why were you standing there??]
she said giving her a smile while geet smiled weekly in
return, feeling bad with the words sheela said. Savitri turned to sheela and
said, kya hua jiji, aap meri beti ko bura kyu bol rhe ho, she said with a
loving glance at geet.
[what happened jij, why are you saying wrong for my daughter??]
Savitri bahu ko beti manne se wo beti nhi banti aur dusri
baat teri bahu sunder chahe kitni ho, par itni tameej nhi ki bado ke samne
pallu dhak kar ana chahiye, you nange sar nhi.
[savitri considering daughter in law a daughter does not make them a
real daughter. And secondly, may be your daughter is beautiful but she doesn't have
the basic manners of covering her head when she stands in front of elders,
instead of moving bare head]
Savitri just shook her head at the taunt knowing how mean sheela
can really be. Sheela had wanted her relative to be married with maan but when
she came to know about geet and the alliance, she just hated geet the most. And
above all her beauty was something which could make anyone lose himself, so if
maan chosen her over her relative wasn't much of a doubt and thus she was just
trying to find out one or the other thing in geet.
Savitri herself didn't believe in all this. But she knew
they wont leave her in peace till geet actually behaves as per their wishes so
she eyes geet to cover her head who immediately complied and that when her eyes
fell on something very important and her anger rose.
Geet felt hatred toward the lady who was taunting her but
she just couldn't say anything wrong as its her first day and it wont look
right. She hoped her mother in law would atleast take her side but sighed when
she also asked her to do the same. Would I ever be allowed to live as per my
wishes instead of that of society's, am I not allowed to do one thing I like. She
looked away to hide away the tear that was fighting for his release but then
got alarmed when she felt a strong grip on her hand and was pulled away.
Savitri pulled geet away to her room before she says
anything wrong to her in front of her relatives. As she entered her room, she
closed the doors and pulled geet toward the mirror. Geet gasped as she was released
off and looked at savitri with fear.
Geet how can you do this, how can you be so careless??? Said
savitri in a low but firm tone which made her inside churn. Geet looked down
and said slowly, what happen maa, did I do something wrong???
Savitri turned her toward the mirror and said, ab you are
married and for married woman her marriage symbols are important than their
life. Aj first day hai so I will not say much, but don't forget that ever. For a
married woman, uska singar tab tak pura nhi hota jab tak wo bindi, chudi aur
most importantly sindoor na lagae.
She took out her own vermillion case, and handed her. geet
got stunned as she realized what fault she did and immediately filled her
partition with a pinch of vermillion. Then savitri handed her a small red bindi
and few red bangels and left her to get ready.
Geet looked at herself after getting ready, but she didn't find
any difference in herself. For her, these symbols meant nothing, just nothing. If
she is wearing them, its just because savitri wants, but for her they are just
a piece of decoration only. She smiled sadly as she felt what more she would
have to bear.
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