Yash's Diary Entries - Update pg 5 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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You are a great writer, and there is something compelling about the journal form that you have chosen because it has a great public appeal. Narratives written in the first person tend to draw the reader into the story in a manner that is easy for them to identify with the character, and since you have a good handle on the psyche of the lead characters whose views you express, this mode is very successful. I wish you all the best, and my prayers for continued excellence in expression in this and all areas of your life are always with you. Om shantih.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely entry !! Yash's feelings are really well defined !! 😊
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