I believe in u...PART 2 on pg 3

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d rain splashed outside n inside KMA, all d cadets were busy celebrating d early end of d classes. all d cadets, xcept, cadet naina singh.

she stood in front of d window near d corridor, n looked outside at d rain, splashing hard on d trees.....n she remembered dose days...dose beautiful days wid her brother....she remembered how dey used 2 sneak out wen it started raining n how dey played football, n always ended up losing d ball...how, wen dey came back home, dere mom wuld fuss sayin dat dey wuld catch a cold, n dere dad wuld get angry sayin dey wuld hav 2 miss skool now.... n how she n navin wuld laugh n keep beggin deir mom 4 tea n samosas.....

"bhaiiya, aapke saath aisa kyun ho gaya?" she aske herself...n wiped a tear frm here eye...

"lagta hai andar bhi baarish ho rahi hai..."naina turned around as she heard dat voice she new so well....cptn rajveer singh shekhawat stood dere, a caring smile on his face....

"kyun cadet singh? aapki aankho mein aasoon?"

"woh...sir main......bas, bhaiiya ki yaad aa gayi.."she sed

"navin.....hmm...haan.....use bhi baarish bahut pasand thi...jab hum yahaan cadets the, toh humesha peeche se nikal jaate the, aur baahar football khelte the....aur use kho dete the.....abhi bhi humaare dost unke footballs ke liye wait kar rage hai.....bechaare, soch rahe honge ki humne unhe kyun borrow karne diya!"

naina smiled

"toh cadet singh, chale hum?"sed raj

"kahaan sir?"asked naina, slightly confused😕

"baahar, aur kahaan?? football nahin khelna?"😛

"lekin....humaare paas toh football nahin hai sir..."

"mere paas shayad koi puraana waala pada ho....chalo mere saath.."

he n naina go 2 his room n get out an old, reaalllly reeaallly old football....n lukin at it, naina begins 2 laugh...."sire...yeh toh.."

"haan, lagte hai ki thodi buri condition mein hai na?" says rajveer, rather sadly..

nainas still laughing...."haan sir, lekin sirf thodi si buri condition mein..."😛

now raj also starts laughing😆...."toh phir chalo, kuch aur khelte hai....bolo, wat wuld u like 2 play cadet singh?"

"uh....sir....."😕

"hmm....khelna nahin hai? ok den, aise hi baahar chalo!"

n widout a word, he moves out...n naina, still not sure wat 2 do, follows him....

dey step out of d academy, n feel d raindrops on deir faces..

"cadet singh, kal aapka major nair ke saath rifle test hai na?"asked rajveer

"haan sir"

"toh phir chalo, hum rifle practice karte hai!"

dey move towards d sheds n get out a student rifle.

"cadet singh, ab apna haath uthaao, aur rifle ke saath shoot karo.....aim n shoot cadet singh, cummon!"

n naina lifts d rifle, still unsure....she feels d drops on her face, her hands, n her hands tremble,

"cadet singh, remember, believe in urself, because i...believe in u!"😊

n as he sed dose wards, sudden strength reached nainas hands, n her heart.....she aimed, n fired!😃

"BULLSEYE!!" cried rajveer.........kya kaha tha maine cadet singh?"n he gives her a thumbsup.😳

naina smiles.."thanks sir....thank you.."

n as she sed dat, she realised, how much she meant it......

d next day dawned bright n sunny, as if d rain had washed d sky clean..

"hai rabba" sed pooja "aaj bhi baarish kyun nahin hui?? kam se kam us nair ka test toh miss ho jaata!"

"nahin pooja, aaj main yeh test dena chahti hoon"

"kya? naina...yeh NAIR ka test hai?" sed pooja, rather confused dat NAINA was sayin dis😕

"toh? nair se zyaada important insaan hai is duniya main, aur unme se kisiko, kujhpe bahut vishvaas hai.....aur yeh mere liye kaafi hai..."😊

hey guys!

my first try at fin fic writing! so plzzz tell me how it is....plzzz give comments ppl, n ill write furthe, warna i'll stop....so tell me if it was fine...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was nice imagination 😊 .keep it up 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great imagination yaar superb writing keep it up 👏
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thnxx ppl! 😳
i'll give in d next part tomorwow 😊
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It was brilliant yaar 👏 plz continue soon!
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Ver nice and I almost thought it was shown actually in today's episode. Keep it up.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!! gr8 work!! 👏

Neha
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Awesome fiction waiting for more 👏
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Very nice yaar 👏 👏 👏
Waiting for the next part.
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awesome gr8 work 👏
waiting for the next part 😊

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