Maaneet FF- *Love story*#1 link to THREAD2- pg 151

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Hey guyss here presenting my first individual story. This concept was there in my mind since looonnggg time and finally decided to pen it down. Its basically a simple love story of our beloved Maneet admist not so simple circumstances.Its about how two souls find the lost calmness and solace in each others presence. Hope you all like it bless me with you likes and comments... Finger's crossed guysss.


This story I specially want to dedicate to lot manyyy lovely peoples of my life, firstly Varsha di for guiding me in it and helping me out in it, then my sweet sissy Harshita for suggesting this cutey title, then My entire Spammer parivar- Sanu dee(meri bhuri ankho wali behen), Ritu di, Akriti di, My sweetu Moni maami, Beauty maa, divzi dadaa, Khushi naani, Eza Nanu, Arpi di, Payal di and my Gargi maami,

Ummmahhh love u all to the core. AND last but not least, mere Sobia bhaiiiyyyaaa for making this extremely cutely, ammazingly SUPERB banner for me in such short span of time.

Now here jumping to the prologue...

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PROLOGUE-

What is love? It is one of the most difficult questions for the mankind. Centuries have passed by, relationships have bloomed and so has love. But no one can give the proper definition of love. To some Love is friendship set on fire for others Maybe love is like luck. You have to go all the way to find it. No matter how you define it or feel it, love is the eternal truth in the history of mankind. (credit- google baba)

What happens when little Maan and Geet fall in love without their own knowledge,when they are taught since long that they are the life of the other, nd how they face the difficulties that comes their way and overcome those unwanted situations.


So, here presenting to you all my new FF- LOVE STORY



(All credit for this superbb banner goes to my Sobia Di, Lubbb yaaa diii)

CS nd Index below 3 posts... Sowwiee mei res krnaa bhul gaya tha 😆




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When I first met you
I felt like I had known you forever,
telling you my secrets
and what I didn't want ever.

you listened to me
I bet you thought I'd never end,
who would have thought
we would become more than just friends.

Over a period of time,
I got to know the real you.
A boy so caring and gentle,
with a heart so true.

You've survived your life
with hurt and loneliness by your side.
I told you I'd never leave

because of the feelings I have inside.
I know you
like no one I have ever known,
and sometimes I wonder
what I'd do if you were gone?

So I have decided
time answers all.
If it is meant to be
time will remove the wall.

I love the way we are together,
you can always make me smile.
Will it ever really be forever?
I guess I will have to wait awhile.

Time will reveal, what lies ahead
but always remember
what I have said.

Meeting you has changed my life
and I really love you so,
the feelings I feel for you
I am never letting go.

Remember me always
and I will too.
I always think of
me and you.

(credit to the uploader)
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Isolophiliac00 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept baby...
loved it...
congrats for ur first individual story👏
childhood love story haaye
waiting eagerly for it...
ohhho sobiii lovely n awesome banner...
nxt time mela banner baniyo😳
n the poem really suits the situation yar...
lovely words...
jaldi se update kr dena nhi to
waiting eagerly...
this is for u😉
Edited by moni6262 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey babu...
Howz you? Nd ek gud news mera ek bhai internship k lie chala gaya*me dancing*
pr dusra hai abhi ghar pe*pta nai ye kb jaega*
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hmmm... Title is interesting.. Or ye story to maaneet k bachpan se hai to i m lukng frwrd to it.. Hme maaneet ki bachpan wali stories kuch jada pasand hai na..
Or ye to lag hi raha hai ki bht achhi hogi.. After all its my swty's hardwork..
Nd pls update jldi2 dena..
Or hme banner nai dkha.. Kahan hai banner!!
Edited by Appy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for the love story

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Posted: 12 years ago
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😳

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chalo finally me back to comment ...

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congratulation for ur new FF choti ...⭐️

okiee mene sab se pehle poem parhi thi tou will say on that 1st ...😆


When I first met you
I felt like I had known you forever,
telling you my secrets
and what I didn't want ever.

you listened to me
I bet you thought I'd never end,
who would have thought
we would become more than just friends.

me tou flat over this one choti ...n that line
I bet u thought I'd never end ...
gosh i actually started laughing ...😆

mind blowing selection ..⭐️⭐️

Over a period of time,
I got to know the real you.
A boy so caring and gentle,
with a heart so true.

now u better tell me kahan se mili yeh poem aur kis ne likhi ...😡
4 lines 😲😲 ...just 4 line aur poore ke poore MSK ko define kar dala ...😳😳
bravo meri jaan ...👏👏 ⭐️⭐️⭐️ 👏👏

So I have decided
time answers all.
If it is meant to be
time will remove the wall.

hope soo ..it will ..😊

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sorry but the line beneath the banner held me to scroll down AGAIN ...😆😆

aww ...Luv ya too meri choti ..n pleasure to help u in any manner ...🤗

ehehe ..i must say Google baba has learned alot about Love ...😆

bang onn start n mind blowing prologue ...

n

Concept ...i would say ..
yuppiieee

another childhood love ...
mela fav. concept ...

ALL the v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v. Best for this one ..
will love to see OUR naughty CHOTI ka naughty mind working over here ..

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now me entrying with my maaneet ...








Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Character Sketch


Geet - A cute little 5 years old girl... had seen many difficult situations till now and have only her mother by her side who loves her a lot. A tiny bomb in real and as active as a squirrel. Apple of Eye for all... all loves her to their dear life, admist her naughtiness. But totally pure at heart, cant bear anyone's tears, be it her maa or any stranger. So she is Geet, Geet Handaa.


Maan
- He too is a 5 yrs old boy... a cutie, but verry quiet types. Have just lost his both parents in a car accident 15 days back. Still in trauma, isnt able to come out of that dreadful incident which snatched everything from him. his innosence, his fun-filled nature, all died along with his beloved parents. Pure from heart. Have all luxuries of life, love his daadima a lot but hardly express it. Lacks the art of expression...



SO HERE'S OUR "MANEET"



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Rano
- A poor household worker... leads a hard life but want to give her daughter all basic comforts... Loves her baby daughter to the depth of her heart. Has no one except her baby. A sweet, tender, gentle and loving lady who would'nt think twice before showering all her selfless love on someone else than her baby...An epitome of purity, but her pure heart was'nt recognized in this mean world untill...





Daadima (Savitri Devi)
- The eldest lady of the Khurana khandaan... which now only comprises of her and her great grand child, Maan... shaken by the sudden death of her son and daughter in law, worried for her baby Maan, she understands him more than himself, his every gesture is enough to tell her the further story. Sweet and extreme kind at heart... not at all among those proudy and outshining kind of wealthies. She is rich both from heart and wealth.






Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@sobi
banner bht khubsurat hai.. Haaye kinni wadiya smile hai gurti ki.. Nd vo roses.. Uska to pucho hi mt.. Its beautiful... Amazing..
Love ya sobi..*aaja gale lag ja*
Edited by Appy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Appy

hey babu...
Howz you? Nd ek gud news mera ek bhai internship k lie chala gaya*me dancing*
pr dusra hai abhi ghar pe*pta nai ye kb jaega*
**************************
hmmm... Title is interesting.. Or ye story to maaneet k bachpan se hai to i m lukng frwrd to it.. Hme maaneet ki bachpan wali stories kuch jada pasand hai na..
Or ye to lag hi raha hai ki bht achhi hogi.. After all its my swty's hardwork..
Nd pls update jldi2 dena..
Or hme banner nai dkha.. Kahan hai banner!!

Mei badiyaaa hu di... 😃
And wahh! Me to apko hi miss kar rha tha, u know me thought k kaash sabb hote, nd the seeing ur res, me was 😲
And yeppss, childhood se starting hai... will surely update jaldi sey. Already typed hai mere pash 😉
Hope sabko pasand aye
Lubb you😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: punam2712

congrats for the love story


😆 Meri nee, maneet ki love story.
BTW thank uu 😳

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