Maaneet FF- *Love story*#1 link to THREAD2- pg 151 - Page 67

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PART-3

"Accha!!!! Kiskee itnee himmat ki woh humare bacche ke kamre ghus ke usey daraa dey? Zaraa hum bhi toh dekhe... ???"

saying this Daadi went ahead towards the bed while Rano followed her with Maan in her arms. Daadi's strict expression turned instantly into a delightful one and she chuckled looking at the person... 😉

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The so called toofan was hiding herself sitting there and curled into a ball and muttering something continuousely... "babaji, pleashhe apni pyaali bacchi ko wo maa shey bachaa lena, hum apko bata lahe he haa, balaa tangg kalti hai hume wo... abhi bhi hume unshey bach ke bhaagnaa palaa, bash issh baal pakad mei na aane dena unke" she was continousely blabbering and praying to her babaji sniffing her nosy several times in mid, when dadima spotted her. Whereas Rano getting confused with sudden change of emotions on Daadi's face peeped curiousely behind the bed and the next moment her eyes widened in shock and just one word came out from her "Geet" aka their own toofan was there.

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Geet turned around listening to her maa's gasp and sat there on her knees looking at the three with a puppy innocent eyes, blinking her lashes innocently... Aoww she looked soo adorable just as a little doll with milky skin, black cute curls falling on her forehead, pink cheeks and... her super "red" nose, red nose????? and the next instant a powerful sneeze shooked her posture and Rano put Maan down on his feet and just pulled Geet out from her chamber whereas Daadi looked at Geet with concern seeing her sneezing uncontrolably.

"Rano, yeh kya? Geet thik to hai?"

And Rano answered Daadi while glaring at Geet

" Wo maaji, baarish mei bhigne ke kaaran inhe zukhaam ho gaya hai, hum inhe dawai dene wale the k yeh badmaash waha se bhaag gayi, aur lagta hai humse chupne ke liye yaha aa gayi... aur Maan bete ko bhi daraa diya iss shaitaan ne,... hum maafi chahte hai maaji, Geet ki taraf se"

"Arre nahi Rano, maafi maangne ki koi zaroorat nahi, hum apse akhri baar keh rahe hai, app dono abbsey humare hi ghar ke sadasya hai, alag mat samjhiyega khud ko... aur koi baat nahi, Geet bacchi hai abhi, dawai se to acche acche darrte hai"

While this time Geet interrupted their talks saying " Nee daadima, hum wo dawai shey dall ke tholi bhaage, woh toh yeh maa humey galam galam paani shey jalane wali thi, toh hum yahaa bhaag aye" widening her eyes she said still sniffing her running nosy.

And poor Maan who was till in shock seeing Geet there got scared hearing Geet's reason of her peek a boo game, and shivering he hid behind Daadima looking at Rano with widened eyes and imagining her as the cruel step mother of story cinderella, who too used to torture cinderella same way as Geet's description of Rano... But he got startled when Daadima just started laughing loudly shaking her head at Geet's cute description. "Acchaaa, tohh aapki maa apko jalane wali thi?" Geet nodded her head strongly with her eyes still widened broadly...

"Haaa pehle bhi maa humale shaath aisha hi kalti thi, jabb sardi hoti thi t.aa.ab...b..." and yet another powerful sneeze made her shut.

"Geet abb bass bhi kijiye, kitnee nautanki karti hai app... aur use jalana nahi, bhaap (steam) dena kehte hai" with this Rano just wiped Geet's already sore nose with her pallu "aahhh aahh maa, dheelee kalo naa (she writhered with the rough texture hurting her nose)... aur jo bhi ho woh, humali naak to jalti hai na usshe"

"Ohh, abb hum samjhe, garam pani, jalati hai... uff Geet app bhi" Daadi said to Geet with a giggle.

"Rano, app dawai aur garam paani laayiye, hum bhi dekhte hai k Geet bhaap kaise nahi leti" she said with a smirk, but Geet started writheling and crying but finally Rano made her agree as alwayss...

But bechara maan who was standing there all chup chap now finally came into the limelight as Rano and Daadi looked at the forgotten baby,... and that too in what condition, he was standing there all nangujust in a towel, which others failed to notice in all haste. Rano looked worried as it was her duty to look after Maan but then Geet's words made the elders eyes widened and Maan... ermm sharam se paani paani.. "Hawww maa dekho, nanguu " Geet said with shocked expression, while Rano and Daadima were stunned at the blunt baby girl...

Rano glared at Geet angrily but Daadmi to avoid the embarassing situation introduced Maan to Geet,... "Geet bete, yeh Maan hai... humare potey " "aur Maan, yeh hai... Geet" Geet who was pouting for getting her maa's scolding, said Maan a faint hello with a grumpy face while Maan hid himself completely behind Daadi from this little devil while his cheeks all red due to embarassment.

To cheer up Geets mood Daadi decided to take her along to the garden as after the rain the garden was looking very pleasant with those beautiful birds chirping and the aroma of the soil added to its beauty. This way she could give Maan some time alone to get close to Rano...

"Geet bacche, app humare saath ayiye, dekhiye bahar kitnaa acchaa mausam ho raha hai, hum dono bahar garden mei baith ke masti karte hai, apki maa ko yahi chod dete hai hum, uske baad geet dawai bhi legi aur stem bhi, Haina????" And geet sniffing just went to daadi and they both left the room leaving Maan and Rano alone behind.

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"Maan bete app hume bata dijiye apke kapde kaha hai, hum apki madat karte hai, hum dono baate bhi karenge aur jaldi sey tayyar bhi ho jaynge" Rano said chirpily picking Maan up and making him stand on the bed. While maan just kept looking at her face searching his dead mother in this new lady who supposedly was his nanny."Maan, kyaa huya? accha btayiye appke kapde kahaa hai? " While maan just pointed towards his cupboard and Rano went towards it to take his clothes out.

She kept asking Maan which cloth he wanted to wear by taking out each pair and showing them to him but he kept shooking his head at each cloth. Finally Rano picked him up and took him near his cupboard and asked him to pick the dress of his choice. Maan after searching a lot finally took out one yellow T-shirt and black half pant. He was looking at the T-shirt with sad eyes, Rano sensing it softly asked him, "Kya huya beta?" caressing hid head softly...

Maan in trance started speaking to her, unknowingly opening his wounded heart for the first time since that dreadful day, "Pata hai, yeh meli mamma ne layaa tha, mele 5th b'day pe... mujhe yeh na bohot pasand aya tha jabb hum shopping pe gaye they, pall isshe pehle mei mamma ko bol pata driver uncle aa gaye, aul hum ghall aa gaye, pall maa ne mujhe ussh T-shirt ko dekhte dekh liya tha aul,.. aull na next day mele b'day pe wo mele liye yahi T-shirt le ayi, wo toh pari thi na toh, unko pataa chal gaya k mujhe yeh acchi lagi thi... pall phil wo mujhe chodke chali gayi, Daadi ne bola k wo kabhi wapash nee ayengi, maa wo kyoo gayi mujhe akela chod k? mei toh acchaa baccha hu na, roz duddu bhi peeta hu aull.. aull HW bhi kaltaa hu, phill kyu gayi wo mujhe chod k? App bolo na maa, kyu gayi wo?" saying this Maan totally broke down in
Rano's arms,... hugging her tightly from her neck sobbing loudly and again again questioning "Wo kyu gayi Maa, apne maan ko chod k kyu chali gayi wo" It pinched Rano's heart seeing this small baby's pain. the question was a simple one "Why" but the answer to it was'nt alwayss simple, the toughest one infact. The grief of losing a near and dear one can never be erased, it can only be subsided with time, but a slight scar is alwayss there.

Rano's eyes too got filled sensing Maan's pain. She kept cuddling and patting him...and then distancing him a little she made him look into her eyes and spoke lovingly while making him wear the dress"Maan, apko pata hai jo bhagwaan ji hai na, unhone socha, k Maan ke paas to unke pyaari si Daadima hai, parr mere pass to koi nahi, tounhone appki mamma ko unke paas bula liya,... but jaise abhi apne hume bola k apki mamma toh pari hai, aur bhagwaanji apni sabhi pariyon ko bade pyaar se rakhte hai, toh apki mamma bhi wahaa bhagwaan pass bohott khush hogi. Toh bacche rote nahi... nahi toh mamma ko bohot buraa lagega k unke maan ro rahe hai" She said all this to Maan ,while maan just kept listening to her intently, withteary eyes as if listening to some fairy stories... nodding his head in mid, capturing Rano's each and every word in his tiny mind. "Pall maa, papa ko kyu?" "Hmm abb papa mamma sey bohot pyaar karte they, toh woh apki mamma ko bhagwaan ji k paas akele kaise jane dete? Issiliye wo bhi mamma k sath chale gaye, , aur abb dono khush hai ek dusre ke saath, aur wo bhi yahi chahte hai k unke Maan bhi khush rahe yaha... aur kyaa pata apki mamma-papa upar sey apke liye bhi koi pari bhej de, jo apko sabsey zyaada pyaar kare, humeshaa apke saath rahe, har pall, har pall lamhaa apki nazro ke saamne rahe.. Wo joh sirf apki hogi, apki Pari"

"Meri pari???" maan asked cutely while Rano powdered him and combed his hairs lovingly... "Hmm babu, sirf apki, Maan ki Pari" she said pecking his forehead...

"abb yeh kya? aishe koi rota hai kyaa? Hmm??... abhi humare Maan apni maa ko ek pyaari si muskan denge,denge naa?" Maan smiled a little listening to her sweet talks, but then Rano frowned "Ae lo! Inni kanjusoo wali muskaan" maan got confused " pall,,..meine mushkulaya toh shahi..."

"Aise nahii, aise..." and she started tickling Maan to which he squirmed under rano, and fell down on bed laughing hard. His laugh was like a musical rythm, so beautiful, one could get lost in his lovely laugh but alas! God had already done a henious crime by snatching this laughter from this small baby, but as a ray of hope Rano vowed to never let a tear enter his eyes till the time she's alive... Unknowingly Maan has occupied a special place in Rano's heart in such short span of time, which even serprised her,... but thats what babies are, true and angelic, the purest creation of almighty...

As they were busy in their own world, the bedroom door *again* openned with a THUD thereby announcing the arrival of their very own little devil.

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PRECAP- Maan was sitting there gaping at the toofan unbelievingly... he was wondering, where does get soo energy from? alwayzz jumping and shouting, dont she get tired of it? his thoughts were broken by the leafy shower on his head😆...

ohkk, other wayss its alwayss shower of rose petals on the hero or heroine from his lover... which gave it a romantic feel, BUT here it was kinda different story all together... After all humare hero-heroine ki kahaani hai hi hatke😉

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phew* finally updated part 3... tried making it as good and readable as possible. Pweasee tell me kaisaa hai. bacche ko niraash na karnaa dosto 😭 , each update is of around 2000 words. Otherwise mei updates ki length kam karu

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