Maaneet FF- *Love story*#1 link to THREAD2- pg 151 - Page 93

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Posted: 12 years ago
Me postinggg...
Sobi bhaii ko bhi bol do koi
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Originally posted by: mahimaneet

kitna final touches dogi😛

MAAMUUU 🤗
bhagode 😡
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Jaldi bolo Sobia bhaii ko
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(credit for this superbb banner goes to Sobia di 🤗)

This update is a verrryy special dedication to two persons, firstly My Angel di (Dazzling Divz) for achieving her biggest dream of life, clearing the verry tough entrance exam that too with flying colours.

And secondly, to
Eza di, for passing her 5th smester.
Love u both, may u both reach much bigger hieghts than this in life
😃

Also, Guyzzz I have updated the CS, do check out
our very own dear MANEET's pic . ⭐️

MANEET 😳


Along with Rano and Daadima too. Hope now u wont have problem in visualizing our dear Maneet.
😳


Sorry if the update size is smaller this time.

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PART-4

Unknowingly Maan has occupied a special place in Rano's heart in such short span of time, which even serprised her,... but thats what babies are, true and angelic, the purest creation of almighty...

As they were busy in their own world, the bedroom door *again* openned with a THUD thereby announcing the arrival of their very own little devil.

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But she looked more like an Angel with those cute bunch of different coloured roses in her hand... Red, yellow, pink and many other flowers tooo, one small flower adorned her cute pony, making her luk extraa cute. Rano just rolled her eyes at her yet again dhamakedaar entry, where as Geet ran towards the bed shouting for Rano and started jumping im front of Rano, happily flaunting her little hand garden.

While jumping, many leaves from the bunch of flowers got detatched and fell on Maan who was sitting there gaping at the toofan unbelievingly... he was wondering, where does get soo energy from? alwayzz jumping and shouting, dont she get tired of it? his thoughts were broken by the leafy shower on his head... ohkk, other wayss its alwayss shower of rose petals on the hero or heroine from his lover... which gave it a romantic feel, BUT here it was kinda different story all together... After all humare hero-heroine ki kahaani hai hi hatke.

Maan tried brushing them off him while poutingly looking at rano at which Rano worriedly brushed all them off Maan

"Geet, aap bhi na,... dekh nahi sakti?.. aur yeh kya haath mei itnee saare phool kaise aye?"

she said glaring at Geet who stood biting her tongue looking at bechara Maan who was unable to face her due to their previous encouonter. Geet made a cute sorry face looking at Rano this time but before she could apologize to Maan, Rano asked her the same question again

"Geet abb app btaengii ke yeh itnee phool kahaa sey laye app? aur kisse puch kar laye?"

Geet replied chirpily again getting excieted

"Maaa, yeh humne bahar wo badey waale garden shey liye, Daadi ne kahaa humshey k hum yeh gulab tod sakte hai, toh hum le aye... dekhoo kitney shundarr hai naa"

"Haa geet, parr aise kaise app itnee phool tod laye, daadi ne bola bhi tha, parr itney?"

While small Geet sat on the bed with a thud just beside maan, and dramatically told Rano while making a biig annoyed face

"Uff-ohh Maa, app bhi na, hume yeh shaaley phool bohot pyaale lage toh shab le aye, aul dekhooo daadi ne hume yeh bhi kall ke diyaa"

She said flaunting the cute rose adorning her pony...

"thik hai meri maa, jaisa app kahe"

with this Rano just pulled her right cheek fondly while Geet frustatingly shouted "aahaaa, maaa chodo humalaa gaaal,"

"haa baba chod diyaa, chillati kyu hai app?"

"Humalaa gaal kheench diyaa, poola dheelaa kall diyaa humala gaal" Geet said angrily while rubbing her super red cheek while Rano laughed loudlyy at her comment saying,

"Olle humari pari ka gaal latak gaya kyaa? dikhaiye toh zaraa hume" but Geet got all the more angry now and now the redness in her cheeks was due to anger while her nose which was somewhat in good condition noww was again reddening... Oh godd, itnaa gussa, abb kya hoga becharo kaa...

And then Geet puffed up her chest with enormous air confusingg Rano and little Maan beside her and releasing it all with a biiggg HUH!!!! she turned her red face away from Rano while Rano smacked her head with her act while Maan was just stunned... Geet again gave a dangerous glare to Rano to which she actually shivered a bit and then she again turned her face with a strong jerk.

"Erm, erm... Geet bacche, hum toh bass mazaak kar rahe the"

"Mei apshe koi baat nee kalingg"

"Acchaa,... (Rano smirked a bit, but with a puppy face she said to Maan) Maan bete, zaraa humari shehzaadi se puchiye toh sahi k yeh itnee pyaaarrreee phulon ka woh karengi kya?" Bechara Maan was just baffled with it, he was just struggling hard to even raise his eyes in front of this toofan due to the previous embarressment, and here his own new MAA was telling him to speak to Geet! I mean TO GEET, who just before few mins have publically and verbally almost raped the poor baby,... 😆

He was struggling hard to look at Geet to say something, when his thoughts were yet again disturbed by Geet's instant reply which again left him more embarrassed

"Aye nangu, maa shey boldo key Geet unshe koi baat nahi kalegi, aul...aull.. inn shundarr phoolo mei shey ek bhi nee degi yeh Maa ko"

Maan pouted looking at Rano whereas she had to control her smile on listening to Geet's new adjective for Maan, however she tries getting angry on this little devil, everytimes fails miserably... aakhir humari Geet hai hi itni cute.

But here this cutey was fuming in anger and Rano had to manaofy her now. "Accha toh humari Geet apni maa se gussa hai?" Rano said while pulling Geet to her side further onto her lap, locking her in her embrace tightly thus hampering the devil's struggle to get out of the hold...

"Aaahhh, chodo humeyy, hume nee kalnaa apshey baat... MAAA" Geet kept shouting but then stopped herself after sometime, her ghussa was already gone by nw, but still her face adorned that cute frown.

"Hogaya???" Rano asked Geet who by now have placed her frowny face on maa's shoulder while her fist filled with those flowers now behind her maa's neck. Geet shooked her face but Rano knew her all gussa was gone by now. "Acchaa abb toh btayiye, itnee phoolo ka app kya karoge?"

"umm, yeh phool na, hum shabko denge" Geet started speaking now settling herself comfily in Rano's lap, while her lega dangling down the bed. "daadi ko, nakul kaka ko, maali kaka ko, maa ko, ermm... aul,.. aull..."

"Aur Maan ko, hainaa" while Geet frowned at Rano's addition to her list "Nangu ko?????"

"Oye! badmaash, unhe nangu bolna band kijiye, unka naam Maan hai" Rano said to Geet while side hugging maan too...

While Geet said with finality this time with head high "Nahi wo sirf nangu hai, humala nangu" "Geet, unka naam Maan hai, M-A-A-N" "Nahiii, unkaa naam nangu hai, N-A-N-G-U"

"Uff! babaji, yeh shaitaan hume hi deni thi apne!" Rano said wacking her forehead... while little Geet jumped off Rano's lap and standing she too immitated her Maa's action saying "Uff babaji, yeh buddhoo maa bhi hume hi deni thi apne" and then she giggled looking at Rano's pout...

Geet then encircled her small arm around her Maa's neck, pulling her down at her level and planting a kiss on Rano's cheeck she gave one of the cute pink coloured fully bloomed flower to her maa and was running away when Rano caught her and said "Arre Geet, aur Maan ka??"

Geet made a thoughtful face and then said "luko" then took one small rose from her hand which was'nt that bloomed, but still looked beautiful but not according to our Geet ma'am, thus she decided to give it her verry own "Nangu"...

"Nangu, yeh appke liye" Geet said chirpily to Maan holding the pretty Red rose in front of his eyes. Her posture was same as if proposing someone with that rose but yahaa aisaa kuch nahi tha...


Maan though would have frowned again listening to his new name, but was lost in the little angel infront of his eyes, and just accepted the RED ROSE from Geet's hand... While the moment Maan accepted the Rose, Geet dashed out of the room screaming for everyone to gift them their Roses. Maan kept looking at the red rose and then asked Rano to keep it safely at which she took out one of the thick books and asked Maan to keep the rose securely in it and Maan closed the book, keeping it safely in his drawer... Their first Meet, and First Rose...!!!!!! 😳


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phew* finally updated part 4... tried making it as good and readable as possible. Pweasee tell me kaisaa hai. bacche ko niraash na karnaa dosto 😭

But Thanx to all those lovely readers who commented and liked, Ummaahhh love u all. 😃 Abhi sabb batao kaisaa tha update 😃


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Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago
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me ...!!
wow me dancing...!!!
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ok so now about update...!!
awww...choti firstly hug to u for such a cute n lovely update...!!!

i so much loved geet's naughtiness...!!!
she is really an adorable kid...!!

"Humalaa gaal kheench diyaa, poola dheelaa kall diyaa humala gaal"
god...i was laughing lyk a mad...she is cho chweet...!!!

"Acchaa,... (Rano smirked a bit, but with a puppy face she said to Maan)Maan bete, zaraa humari shehzaadi se puchiye toh sahi k yeh itnee pyaaarrreee phulon ka woh karengi kya?" awww...poor maan baby...
he was already sharm se paani paani n now rano is involving him into dis...!!!
how much i want to see poor baby's face

"Aye nangu, maa shey boldo key Geet unshe koi baat nahi kalegi, aul...aull.. inn shundarr phoolo mei shey ek bhi nee degi yeh Maa ko"
wooow...being honest i really lyk actually love dis new adjctive or say nick name of maan...NANGU

"Nahi wo sirf nangu hai, humala nangu"
heheheee...
amazing dialogues dear...
"GEET KA NANGU"

bechara maan...
he was so scared of geet's terror...k poor kid hadn't open his mouth even for a singl tym infront of her...😳😳
sadda munda to kafi chup nikala...!!
bt hai bada cute sa...😉😉
Their first Meet, and First Rose...!!!!!!





Edited by deepali1022 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti

MAAMUUU 🤗
bhagode 😡

oyee mai idhar hi hu
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Posted: 12 years ago
chal choti me bhaging...!!!
will comment later...!!!

bada hi cute update tha...😳
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MERA GALTI SE RES HUA HAI...MAINE JAAN BHUJ KE NAHI KIYA😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepali1022

chal choti me bhaging...!!!

will comment later...!!!

bada hi cute update tha...😳

pad bhi liyaaa



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Originally posted by: mahimaneet

MERA GALTI SE RES HUA HAI...MAINE JAAN BHUJ KE NAHI KIYA😆

😆 aisi galtiyaa sirf app kar sakti ho

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