New AbhIya SS:Never Let me Go(EPILOGUE*pg88*Jan14) - Page 47

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Siva--

I now accept with full complete heart. You are seriously one hell writer. I expected this story to be flowers and hearts with small small fights,


What have you done, Tanzie? Why cant u give me a soothing story instead giving me heart attacks all time? I mean it.

Pia from a disease, may be incurable too? Why?

Make her better soon or I'm going to sue you.. Please?

And again, I didnt expect this turn. Its frightening..

Thanks for the pm.

P.S: Too much of threatening? I'm sorry couldnt help controlling my fear for the couple! :(


Awww so sorry 😆 this is ME... what can I do 😳 dont worry... enjoy the emotional ride... power of love and inspiration for fighting death 😊
dont be sad... everything will be alright 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
that was a really emotionally charged update Tanzie. Everyone's emotions were written and expressed beautifully.
I am glad Kabir could make Pia understand. I wonder who will handle Chand. Hope Rajlakshmi does in her own way 😉
Abhay's pain and guilt have been very beautifully written. The pain of losing someone and the guilt of losing ur own child, can really kill a person from inside and that's what Abhay is going through here
Edited by ..dishu.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Multiple Sclerosis? 😲 that's bad... But please don't kill or completely paralyse her...for abhay!
God I feel so bad for him. Poor guy is already distraught and there goes Misha! I can't blame her either... But thank God for Kabir.
Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh!!! god tanzie its highly emotional
really u tk my hrt away wid ur updt ...poor shreya missing her mom & abhay his h💔t hs been breaking in2 millions pieces ... he needs 2 b strng in 4nt of piya ...chand is cuming😲 ab kya hoga, he didnt lik her
updt soon
Edited by luckdiya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very emotional update.Finally the disease is revealed.Poor Abhay is shattered from inside...but trying his best to hold himself together for Pia's sake.Misha had to open her big mouth...she is bound to b angry on Abhay,but that was ttly the wrong place and wrong timing...luckily Kabir controlled her.Shreya taking care of Abhay...awww.Abhay would try his best to support Pia...hope they can fight the disease together and lead a happy life again.Precap is scaring me...breeze before the storm...so storm is on its way to Abhiya's life...hope everything wld b f9 in the end
Edited by Monami_50 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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emotional yet beautiful update Tanzie
You have written everything with so much care. The chapter was informative but not boring at all. I enjoyed reading it

Feeling bad 4 abhiya they are suffering so much. Hope Pia will be better very soon


Even in this state Pia tried to escape ROFL, Pia won't change
Chand coming soon,hope he wont create problem
Edited by .rumki. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

First n foremost I wanna applaud the hard work u put into ur research for this FF 👏 U amaze me with each n every update of yours. When I read ur updates I can literally feel each n every emotion a character feels n when they feel elated we feel happy 😊 n when they r in pain it breaks our heart too 😭 And I really feel u should heed ur readers request n publish ur book someday, hopefully sooner n I will be one among the first few to prebook it 😃

Coming to the update as u mentioned it was high on emotions n even though BD will always be numero uno favorite here, I must admit emotionally this is the best work of yours. There's nothing too dark about it. Just fate playing its cruel game with 2 soulmates who long to be with each other but circumstamces always stand in their way 😭 But even the sheer simplicity of it is so beautifully penned down 👏 that it leaves me craving for more.
Abhay 'Ironman' Raichand for the first time ever is rendered so helpless in his life that he wants his friend's assurance to hold onto the hope 😭 The starting part has been very heartbreaking. Aryan though a doctor himself cannot find the courage to break it to his friend that his wife is suffering from a chronic disease that has no cure n he let Dr. Mehta do all the talking. Dr. Mehta must have seen such many cases in his life n its not easy for any person to break such news to another but their profession demands that from them n that is the reason they are the chosen one. But just one question here. Did her miscarriage lead to it?
Abhay was stammering incoherently n all that was on his mind right then was to save his wife n I am sure he would part with any possession of his to trade her well being 😭
Multiple sclerosis has no cure n it relies a lot on luck but I suppose it will only prolong your lifeline a little bit longer than cure it completely Poor Pia! Of all people she had to endure all this? How more tragic can it get? You were right. Its Pia who got the worst end of the stick 😭
Being a doctor Dr. Mehta cannot give false assurances but at the same time its down to him to make sure his patients dont give up n fight coz at times if nothing else works then the fighting spirit sure does 😊 So now Abhay n Pia have to goto Canada? I assume they will go back to their farm house that has some happy memories of theirs but that was also the place where they both lost something precious as well
I totally loved Abhay when he said that his wife is not some kinda object meant for pleasure n she needs all the love n care to recover 👏 n that no matter he will keep fighting ⭐️ He also doesn give a damn for a multi million deal 😃 Way to go!
Misha Abhay confrontation was the most painful part of this update 😭 I felt so terrible for both of them 😭 Poor Pia 😭 Just imagining the whole scene play out in my head hurt a lot 😭 Pia lying there on the floor bleeding n her baby dying was so painful 😭 This is probably the most painful story I have ever read but its beautiful nonetheless.
How could Misha forgive the man who was responsible for her sister's miscarriage? Abhay was not there when she had to go through that but seeing Pia in that state must have been so hard on her. I loved Kabir here. He was so understanding n mature 😳 I am glad that he could understand that Abhay was in remorse n for Pia's betterment even Misha gave into him.
Poor Shreya I dont want her to lose her mom once again 😭 Wats that poor child got to do in all of this? Abhay is a broken man n even his grandma feels so bad for him. Wish Chand too understands but I guess tats asking for too much. I can already see a storm coming I am happy Abhay has great friends like Aryan n Peehu beside him. I really hope Abhiya can overcome this hard time together 😳
Abhay's anxiety n fear on losing Pia when he saw her missing was so heart warming. I could visulaise the whole scene where he found near the fire exit n it made me cry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Now I realise y Pia was being harsh on Abhay all the while she stayed with him in their house. She didn wanna let him see her dying 😭 But even our Abhay is no less No matter what happens he is not gonna leave her, not for Chand, not for anyone n not even for Pia 😳 I hope they get through this crisis n finally find their solace 😳
Beautiful update Tanzie 👏
Edited by mandy1024 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all i m so sorry 4 updating my comment so late.I m hell busy at uni now a days;not getting enough time 2 come here.

Coming 2 d update FANTABULOUS AS USUAL N EMOTIONALLY CHARGED UPDATE tanzie!

OMG Piya s suffering from multiple sclerosis! Hope she recovers 4 Abhay!
Abhay's condition after learning abt Piya's disease n suffering were sooo beautifully described dat it made me cry.
Now i understand why Misha despises Abhay.It would have been more painful than thousand knives stabbing Abhay 2 know dat he was responsible 4 killing his own baby.This part made me speechless!
Aryan,peehu,Shreya n dadi r right now d only pillars of strength 4 Abhay.D way he said"Am i so bad dadi? Why death always surrounds me?" were just heartbreaking.
Piya can never see Abhay in pain n if it means suffering alone or even death she will happily embrace it n this is what she showed by trying 2 escape in this condition.Confrontation b/w Abhiya made me cry.All fears n insecurities of Piya led her speak "u always leave me".Loved d soothing convo b/w Abhiya.
Precap seems bringing some good hope.
Continue asap n I m xtremely sorry once again.
Edited by cutesukirti1987 - 12 years ago

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