First n foremost I wanna applaud the hard work u put into ur research for this FF 👏 U amaze me with each n every update of yours. When I read ur updates I can literally feel each n every emotion a character feels n when they feel elated we feel happy 😊 n when they r in pain it breaks our heart too 😭 And I really feel u should heed ur readers request n publish ur book someday, hopefully sooner n I will be one among the first few to prebook it 😃
Coming to the update as u mentioned it was high on emotions n even though BD will always be numero uno favorite here, I must admit emotionally this is the best work of yours. There's nothing too dark about it. Just fate playing its cruel game with 2 soulmates who long to be with each other but circumstamces always stand in their way 😭 But even the sheer simplicity of it is so beautifully penned down 👏 that it leaves me craving for more.
Abhay 'Ironman' Raichand for the first time ever is rendered so helpless in his life that he wants his friend's assurance to hold onto the hope 😭 The starting part has been very heartbreaking. Aryan though a doctor himself cannot find the courage to break it to his friend that his wife is suffering from a chronic disease that has no cure n he let Dr. Mehta do all the talking. Dr. Mehta must have seen such many cases in his life n its not easy for any person to break such news to another but their profession demands that from them n that is the reason they are the chosen one. But just one question here. Did her miscarriage lead to it?
Abhay was stammering incoherently n all that was on his mind right then was to save his wife n I am sure he would part with any possession of his to trade her well being 😭
Multiple sclerosis has no cure n it relies a lot on luck but I suppose it will only prolong your lifeline a little bit longer than cure it completely Poor Pia! Of all people she had to endure all this? How more tragic can it get? You were right. Its Pia who got the worst end of the stick 😭
Being a doctor Dr. Mehta cannot give false assurances but at the same time its down to him to make sure his patients dont give up n fight coz at times if nothing else works then the fighting spirit sure does 😊 So now Abhay n Pia have to goto Canada? I assume they will go back to their farm house that has some happy memories of theirs but that was also the place where they both lost something precious as well
I totally loved Abhay when he said that his wife is not some kinda object meant for pleasure n she needs all the love n care to recover 👏 n that no matter he will keep fighting ⭐️ He also doesn give a damn for a multi million deal 😃 Way to go!
Misha Abhay confrontation was the most painful part of this update 😭 I felt so terrible for both of them 😭 Poor Pia 😭 Just imagining the whole scene play out in my head hurt a lot 😭 Pia lying there on the floor bleeding n her baby dying was so painful 😭 This is probably the most painful story I have ever read but its beautiful nonetheless.
How could Misha forgive the man who was responsible for her sister's miscarriage? Abhay was not there when she had to go through that but seeing Pia in that state must have been so hard on her. I loved Kabir here. He was so understanding n mature 😳 I am glad that he could understand that Abhay was in remorse n for Pia's betterment even Misha gave into him.
Poor Shreya I dont want her to lose her mom once again 😭 Wats that poor child got to do in all of this? Abhay is a broken man n even his grandma feels so bad for him. Wish Chand too understands but I guess tats asking for too much. I can already see a storm coming I am happy Abhay has great friends like Aryan n Peehu beside him. I really hope Abhiya can overcome this hard time together 😳
Abhay's anxiety n fear on losing Pia when he saw her missing was so heart warming. I could visulaise the whole scene where he found near the fire exit n it made me cry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Now I realise y Pia was being harsh on Abhay all the while she stayed with him in their house. She didn wanna let him see her dying 😭 But even our Abhay is no less No matter what happens he is not gonna leave her, not for Chand, not for anyone n not even for Pia 😳 I hope they get through this crisis n finally find their solace 😳
Beautiful update Tanzie 👏
Edited by mandy1024 - 12 years ago
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