New AbhIya SS:Never Let me Go(EPILOGUE*pg88*Jan14)

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

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wonderful tanzie!!! 👏magnificient!!! 👏 I can truly see how hard you have worked for this update! 👍🏼 this SS has proved that nt only in supernatural but also in handling emotional stuff you are an S!!! what a beautiful portray of human feelings n heightend emotions! wonderful!! 👏 ⭐️ whether its abhay's love,pain,helplessness...aryan's painful condition of being a friend and a doctor at the same time...or a terrified yet yearning pia whoz unbound love for her husband cn go to any length...were very well painted...the xact colors of their emotions ,feelings just made the story more meaningful!! brilliant!!! 👏 you knw sometimes people whm they love..they often take them for granted...without giving them their due respect..untill deathlike or something terrible hits them hard n makes them show what they are going to lose...which is sad! 😔 hm..though its nt entirely true in this case maybe but somewhere I felt there is similarity... poor misha..she is broken..totally mad at abhay..but I wnt blame her...hope she will understand one day what they mean to eachother n how much pia matters to abhay.. the part where abhay asked dadi whether he is a bad man..was truly heartbreaking...shows how much broken n emotionally torn abhay is...his pain is soo beautifully painted with words...that those fictional characters n we became one!! and that's what's so incredible about ur writing...!! 👏 little shreya doesnt knw anythng abt the cruel fate..that her mamma...is bestowed wth... doctors n their act of..proffesionalism...inability to change the inevitable...feeling terrible...yet maintaining calm at the same time was again depicted brilliantly..!!! I like aryan n same goes for peehu...she made her mark..even though we hardly got a chance to have an encounter with her...! and that makes your way of presentation so undeniably powerful!! 👍🏼 now I just hope pia gets well soon!! n I think she will...becoz she has to... N abhay will make this possible..!.n ya in any kind of illness.. the urge to fight is the most important thing...and that is a vital point u have mentioned!! Hm..so Chand is soon going to make his appearance but am sure he wont be able to separate abhiya this time...simply becoz abhay wont let it happen anymore!!
once again marvellous job!! ⭐️
plzz..carry on..awaiting the next part.. n thanks a lot for the pm dear...n plz..tk..cre... 🤗

Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Awesome update Tanzee and mind blowing dialogues

"I love my wife and she is not my property to use for my pleasure. "

Wow what else can be a proof of his unconditional love.

"He is feeling like a killer now, killer of his child, he is responsible for that and right now he can feel exactly how Pia felt all the time when she was accused of being the reason of Aryana's killer. "

It is sometimes really sad that one has to go through the same situation to feel the same way how the other had felt when accused of something.

"but you always leave me.."

"I won't ever leave you doesn't matter what happens. But be with me. don't bail on me again Pia. Please. Promise me you won't try to escape again. If something happens to you I will die too!!"

Now this is something I always wanted in the show that something happens which makes Abhay realise that he and only he can make her a whole and complete person by being with her and not away from her.

"It was impossible for him to control his emotions but he has to because he had to be Pia's strength too now"

That is Abhay as always 👍🏼

OMG, You did a thorough research. Now that is what is dedication.

Thank you very much Tanzee for this wonderful update. This one really touched my heart.

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

tanzie its really an emotiombl update... i think u did lot of research on disease multiple solerises... i first time heard about this... hey its request i want to knw abt alina also wat happen to her and hw abhay handle chand... wat strom u r talking abt in precap... thank god finally misha agreed dat pia should be wid abhay...

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ilove99

@ilove99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#484

amazing work yaar!!you are making it perfect!

but breeze before storm?i wonder is it chand...

this man can never live peacefully in any ff😆

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Nabakov_Musings

@Nabakov_Musings

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#485

this ff is so high on emotions , i just love it. such a beautiful update. awww. she won't die . i know she won't.

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Seema

@...Seema...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#486

Im really really really short of words.i read da pm for dis update in da morning nd spent da whole day in realizing dat it was a fiction but still im in dilemma u dnt knw wat mythical nd hypnotizing effect ur writing hav on ur readers.u hav pend dwn in such a way which gv a feel as v r standing in a medical ward watching nd feeling da pain nd grief of a real patient.im still in trance.u r amazing.u should write a book nd it wil b among da best sellers i bet.u r frm bangladeshr?im from pak.thanx a lot for pm.continue ur legendery work. ⭐️

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Neetz

@.Jane..

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

Multiple sclerosis! I should've known from the symptoms that the disease has something to do with the nervous system. Gosh, Tanzie, tumne choose bhi kiya toh aisi disease😳

Pia is the patient but in this update you captured how her disease is affecting people around her. I can understand that when someone suffers from a chronic disease, it is almost equally difficult for the people around the patient to deal with it as well. I am honestly shocked that Pia was living alone in Canada in this condition.

Abhay-Misha confrontation was very well-portrayed and I don't blame Misha for blasting Abhay but I'm glad she finally agreed to let Abhay take Pia's responsibility. He feels guilty enough because of indirectly being the reason for Pia's miscarriage. It is just so sad. How much damage communication gap can do and these two learnt it the hard way...very hard way. Well, at least Chand is one less botheration to worry about. I shall have to see the character to judge him though but that doesn't change that along with Alina, he too is responsible for separating AbhIya in a way.

After a long time, they talked everything out calmly and finally, everything is sorted at least on the relationship level. I know Abhay will be Pia's strength and support her throughout. But sometimes, even the best of our efforts seem less. Don't take it the wrong way, please, but I don't trust you at all in certain things, Tanzie😛 You're so unpredictable that i don't know what to expect even though I have gotten a fair idea of what the ending to this SS is going to be. Let's see if you manage to surprise me😆.😆

"Hours later Aryan entered and saw Pia is peacefully sleeping again and Abhay sitting on the chair near the bed also sleeping putting his head on the bed. Their hands entwined and Abhay's other hand holding Pia like noone could take her away without his permission. He checked the drip and left with a smile silently."

^^I pictured this scene and it seems beautiful and poignant❤️

Edited by -BlackBeauty- - 12 years ago

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#488

very emotional update.. you just made me cry.. for abhiya.. awesome..

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#489

Amazing ff.
I read it in one go.
I can't see ABHIYA in so much pain.
Plz update the next part soonest.
Take care!

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#490

its just so emotional and lovely update...ohh poor piya had suffered alottt becz of abhay and misunderstanding...kabir is rite give a chance to abhay...so emotional scene when piya said i dont want to you to see me dying ufff i have tears when reading these lines...hope they both make it together everything alright but now shit chand will be coming...cont soon