MG OS: A COMMITMENT epi 1,2/59 complete

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hii alll

here is an OS

DO READ AND COMMENT IF YOU ALL ENJOY IT

many of u must be thinking that i am totally mad that i always trouble with with something new... but what to do i cant stop my self...



A COMMITMENT

PART 1


"Hey geetika wait yaar '. Why are you running like escaping from me'kuch nahi karunga yaar 'wait hey geetika'.."

A young handsome and naughty smart an sexy man was following a girl wearing a blue colour shirt , black jeans ' hairs styled with perfection'wearing a white coat and a stethoscope round his neck was following a girl..the girl was just running fast escaping from him' simulaneaously looking behind to see if he was still following her'. Finally he got the hold of his miss geetika''.quickly grabbing her by her shoulders and pinning her to the wall in the end of the corridor in the hospital'. Finally he was relieved to hold her'both were panting heavily one from running the other from chasing'.

After holding their breath '. He looked towards her with naughty eyes and questioning gaze'.. with a slight but visible frown on his face'..

Maan: can't you have wait when I was calling your name like maniacs'.. thank god ..its only one geetika here in hospital warna kitni aa jati'..

The girl looked at him with angry wide eyes'..and shouted at him'.

Geet: its geet'GEET!!!... geet can't you pronounce it like it is'' she said with a frown'..

Maan: ohh come on geetika'.are you still mad at me for that incident'. Are yaar geetika it was just a playful ragging'..i didn't do anything' just made you sing'.

Geet: stop calling me geetika'.my name is geet'..can't you understand this simple thing Mr.MAAN SINGH KHURANA''and you didn't even tell me that day that you are going o play when I am going to sing''

Maan: its Dr. maan singh khurana ..dear 'he said in a flirty way'making geet smile a little with a blush that was probably visible on her face'..

Maan: I still affect you geetika'..

Geet looked at him with a angry face'..

Maan: I know your name is geet'but I like calling you geetika'.its like pure and complete like you'.

Geet: tum bilkul nahi badle na'..still same and old flirty guy'..

Maan: right sweetheart still same'.. tumhare liye paagal'.

She wacked his arm and both proceeded towards the cafeteria'.he was having his arms round her arms..holding her while she just looking at him trying to say him to atleast look at the surroundings''

Both of them were settled '.. the old acquaintaces from college '. They met during ragging and he thinks that she is still mad at him'. Looking at her for the first time in this branch of sanjeevani he was pleasantly surprised '. And when he tried to approach her she ran away '.and finally maan had gotten the hold of his geetika'like he used to call her since that time knowing this irritates her'''

Geet: so finally you are a doctor'.. geet said knowing his reaction ''

Maan: well I do think so geetika'. Indicating at his coat and stethoscope'.

Geet: where were you all these days maan'.. didn't even contacted '.

Maan: look who is saying this'madam if you have forgotton'..you were the one who got missing within a day '. And you are saying this to me'.. kya hua tha geet that you left just after the first year 'he said sounding serious and looking forward towards her for an answer expecting her to share with him at least this time she will open herself'''..

Geet: nothing yaar'just tell me when did you join'..geet asked trying to avoid his piercing gaze towards her '..

Maan took her hands in his and asked her again'.

Maan: kya hua tha geet '.. tell me '.

She was staring at his comforting eyes 'but shrugged off the feel mistaking his reassuring gestures as a pity'..

Geet: maan I have to go on rounds 'bye'..

She left without answering him..without saying anything 'he just looked at her retreating figure going with thousands pain in her eyes '.. taking them with herself'.. never she bothered to ask him the reason the that why this guy is always behind her 'why he had followed her to delhi after knowing her whereabouts'.he knew something had happened that she left after two days for ever '.leaving the college '.leaving him'. He was having a strong feeling for her at that time also and with the passing time that feeling had just changed much stronger '''

Maan was just sitting there she left again without giving the explanation'. How can she do this all the time with so much ease'. Maan was looking at her direction and finally sighed that his geetika is never going to change neither he going to leave teasing her ''

Geet was in the children ward checking a cute four year boy LUV heartbeats' and LUV being a total mischief was just annoying her'

Geet: LUV just breathe'. Geet said in a frustrated tone'..

LUV : Dr.geet why are you doing this leave me I want to play with shruti'.. he said pouting making a baby angry face''.

Geet looked at luv from the corner of her eyes and dear luv was drooling at shruti who was peacefully playing with her dolls'.

Geet st: boys can never change hey babaji..kya hoga iska..she said looking at luv'..

Suddenly a voice said'.

Maan: pyaar''.


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NEXT: maan: geet I know your little secret

Geet was shocked'..

Here is an os of 3-4 parts '

Do leave read and leave ur comments if u like this

LOVE YA
SUHANA


PART 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3233380/mg-os-a-commitment-epi-1-2-59-complete?pn=9

PART 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/73322371

PART 4


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3233380/mg-os-a-commitment-epi-1-2-59-complete?pn=24

PART 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3233380/mg-os-a-commitment-epi-1-2-59-complete?pn=31


PART 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3233380/mg-os-a-commitment-epi-1-2-59-complete

PART 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3233380/mg-os-a-commitment-epi-1-2-59-complete

LAST PART

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3233380/mg-os-a-commitment-epi-1-2-59-complete


EPILOGUE 1


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3233380/mg-os-a-commitment-epi-1-2-59-complete


EPILOGUE 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/80924928


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maanluver thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
beautiful starting di
maan running behind geet
or should i say geetika 😆
geet is ready to pounce on maan for clling her geetika
maan finally caught her
maan used to rag her
maan ragging n all cnt believe it
Dr Maan Singh Khurana is so flirty
but i so luv his flirty avatar
maan still affects geet
who dsnt get affected by maan
maan luved her from first year
n then geet left
but over the years maan's feelings got stronger
n he still luvez her
but she is hiding smthing from him
smthing really big but what can it b
luv the kiddo drooling over another kiddo or kiddi 😆
by the way di dint notice i came first yipppiieee
update soon
waiting eagerly di
luvvv yaaa loadzzz
Edited by maanluver - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its sound different




Intersting also...
Love tha Name Geetika...its sounds really good



& Doctor Maan Shing Khurana & Doctor Geet...Really grat idea
Edited by Mayamaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Suhana cute one dear ...continue...
I won't feel bored reading about maaneet..but always expect happy ending...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice yaar bt geet kya hua tha usko
cont soon yaar

n ur other os also😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful dear
waiting for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great story pl\z update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I liked dis os too.

It seems to b cute bt i gues thr is sum hidden shock too.

Conti soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Frankly saying I m jealous of u .How u write such great works.So what is this riddle now.Why she left him and studies if I m not wrong.If studies how she became doc or she became nurse...😲 jaldi karo okey Loving it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds good
wonder what she is hiding
and where did she go from college
well this is interesting
hope to see you more with this
cheers for pm

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