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A COMMITMENT

EPILOGUE 1


Geet was looking at maan she was staring in his eyes.. so deep and contented she sometimes even think that how can remain so cool and composed in his eyes..his eyes always show that mischievous glint that was always missing from her almond eyes… maan was seeing her , he knew that may be she was not contented with his answer .. but she needs to come out of her past.. past will always remain her past.. it will somewhere take her back in that painful era of life that was painful for her… and he never wanted his geetika to get lost there.. she is a sufferer a sufferer of time and may be destiny but does that means that she will blame herself…

She lost her parents and brother that was pre written in their fate… and shruti's treatment was going so she cannot do anything that doesn't mean that all the blame will be on geet..

Maan looked at her he knew she will remain like this if she would given an opportunity and here he is not a fool that knowing her nature and mindset… she will again struck in her past.. maan quickly hold her by her waist pulling her towards him.. geet gasped a little knowing his next move… he smiled and winked at her..making her to blush… she was turning crimson red and was probably wanting to either hide self in him or just stay like this..well maan was no less he was drooling on her … her teasing flicks.. the way she was pouting her lips when she finally saw that the devil was mocking her… maan was hiding his giggle … but geet caught him and that was the limit … she pounced on him… know she was on him and he was controlled by his sweetheart.. well not to mention geet herself was getting so naughty …she looked at him frowning … her cheeks were still red from their previous teasing…

She pinned his hands above his head and was looking at him with a winning smile…

Maan warned her knowing what she will be doing next….

Maan: don't get carried away else you know what I am going to do with you ….

Geet: dhamka rahe ho mujhe..you are warning geet handa… do you even know its consequences MR KHURANA … you are at my mercy now.. I can do anything… she sneered coming dangerously coming close to him… her warm breaths were teasing him and that time maan was cursing himself that he has actually made the tigress release from his shell… geet's hands were lurking in his open half chest..she was caressing his abs..and know her lips touched the rim of his ear lobe making him to gasp… he knew that she will be death of him someday but the day appear so early he didn't knew…

Maan if wanted could have taken the control with him in some minutes but he too was enjoying the rough and wild side of hers… geet was very slowly and sensuously cherishing him ..like she was having her favorite candy…

She sucked his earlobe… coming down towards his throat she was kissing him wet kisses but deliberately left his lips.. he shreaked his brows and she ignored like she did care…

Maan st: be ready for the payback geet .. I wont leave you for what you are doing….

When geet was about to come down..maan flipped her making her to look at him in shock…

Geet scoffed…

Geet: ye kya kiya you know how much I was enjoying and you idiot spoiled my all the fun.. she hit him slightly hit him by her elbow…

Maan looked at her knowing she had definite fun but what about him ..wasn't he was tortured by this evil geet..she was torturing him In an angel's disguise…

Maan : acha you were enjoying and what about me… mera kya.. you were hell bent on loosing your sanity and making me to loose mine… I knew I am handsome and you can't even resist but still … think about it.. log kya kahenge zamana kya kahega..what geet handa was trying to do….

Maan was becoming all dramatic and geet ..she just start hitting him..she was all mad now…

Geet: you are all worried about zamana haan..saying so she hit him…. Duniya kya kahegi..the next she punched him on his stomach..she was turning all wild…

Geet: you idiot you spoiled my fun..and all you are worried about yourself… is this your love for me.. you lier kahinka…

Maan pinned her to the bed post… and did the same ministrations what she did.. she was all hot and flushed with his moves..his tongue was lurking on her sensitive skin.. His hands were shamelessly roaming on her curves… that was just the small demonstration… before maan could stop she pushed him …

He stood up and looked at her giving her his charming sweet smirk…

Maan: that was what I felt..now you disturbed my fun…

Geet blushed and covered herself with the soft quilt… she pretended to sleep but he knew her in's and out she was just hiding her flushed face and confused self….

Maan was about to go… when she stopped him seeing the time..she didn't let him go…

Geet : sleep here… she said..well that was a request that was coming as a command… and maan how can he deny to his sweetheart..

Maan : as you wish…

He quickly snuggled close to her … well geet didn't expected this but still she couldn't say anything since all the things were well adapted now may be she wanted someone to bare herself emotionally … and he had done that…


The next morning bright sunrays peeped through their room..both were snuggled with each other..his hands were wrapped on her waist..she was sleeping unconsciously like been drugged ..well she was indeed ignorant about their position… geet opened her eyes when a cold gush of wind made her to shiver but on the other hand his warmth was there proving comfort…she saw maan holding her possessively… first her mind didn't registered at all but the next moment everything flashed in her mind.. her questions his confession..his claim on her… everything was just so sweet just like him…

His possessive and naughty attitude..his charm that made her to fall for him again and again..geet got up very slowly just to let him sleep..it was after so many days she had slept so calmly without any grief..he had washed her every past sorrow and angst leaving the soothing memories for her ….

She very slowly leaned towards maan and when she was about to peck on his M shaped lips..he was quick to indulge her in a soul searing heartfelt kiss..geet didn't know what happened the next second but she all knew that they were kissing so passionately and maan was busy exploring her secrets..she was herself drowned in him..his hands went to caresses her soft skin under her kurti..geet moaned as she felt him tickling … he was actually was loving her shy flushed nature…

Maan wouldn't have left her if she wasn't short of breath…

She made a grumpy face and sat on the bed..when maan wiped her lips..and kissed her cheeks lovingly biting a little…

Geet: ahh…. You wild animal..

Maan: are what I did my jungle billi you even know how you are .. just see my hairs .. you would have pulled them by your grip… look at me.. poor me.. waise I didn't know that this morning will be so perfect … what say geetika…

Maan's geetika rant was again on..and geet was about to hit him by a pillow… when maan immediately stood up..leaving her…

Geet : where are you going… and then suddenly she realized shruti… where is she..she was about to go.. when maan quickly left the room…

Both left the room and saw their sweet angel sleeping peacefully having a big teddy by her side…

Maan looked around there were her's and shruti's pictures some were in same outfit …. One geet and shruti having two pony tails in a frock.. one geet was manofying her… other one was geet with a baby shruti..she was just looking an innocent baby herself and the dazzling smile that was spread on her face was priceless….

Maan caressed those pictures while geet's eyes were struck with a picture her family picture .. she was just sixteen in that with her parents and brother…

Maan looked at her..he asked her…

Maan: you miss them.. especially bhaiyya… haina geet…

Geet: a lot .. answered with tears in her eyes… I never thought they will leave me so soon…

They would have continued but shruti woke up…and maan handled her… even he chose a bright cherry and white frock for her … he was looking at her stuff and geet was cribbing looking at maan saying faltu stuff to geet…

Maan: they are so boring.. geetika you don't know anything..bff I will come with you next time for shopping.. don't take her …

Shruti looked confused but she nodded making maan to chuckle and geet to pout….

Maan and shruti were sitting on the dining table..and geet was sitting in the kitchen..she had prepared cheese sandwiches for maan and shruti … and now was making chocolate milkshake and brownie for her dear neice since she wanted it to eat…

Geet came and served both of them…

Maan and shruti were relishing their favorites…

Maan: I didn't knew you can cook too geetika…

Geet : what else you thought maan that I don't know…

Before maan could answer geet' s cell ringed …. she picked up the call and the next second she was panicking since she was called at the hospital urgently …

Geet: maan what could be the reason I don't have my duty today…

Maan calmed her …


Maan: shh calm down geet we will see when we will reach there….







NEXT: epilogue 2 typing now… we post as soon as I finish

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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm... romantic update 😉
waiting to know d urgency from hospital!!!!
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😳😳😳wow yaar..such a sweet and lovely update..love maaneet romantic moment..cant wait for 2nd epi..pls update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago


A COMMITMENT

EPILOGUE 2 ( scroll up for epilogue 1)


Maan with shruti and geet reached the hospital within precisely twenty minutes.. all the way geet was panicking making shruti panic… both the girls were on the verge of crying … poor maan he didn't knew whom to console first four year old baby shruti or matured baby geet or to drive….

Maan cooed shruti giving her a big bar of chocolate asking her to be calm and to his good luck shruti behaved as a very good and obedient girl unlike geet who was ready to burst out crying ….

Maan st: whom to calm down… what to do know… he signaled shruti to see his geetu ..and shruti with her chocolate filled hands made geet calm..she very lovingly wiped those pearls of tears that were on her pink cheeks… making her face chocolate filled..maan was finding it difficult to drive while such a cute and adorable scene was infront of his eyes… but he controlled himself..

Geet cleaned her face with a tissue that maan offered guiding her to wipe off the chocolate marks .. and cleaned shruti's hands as well…

Geet and maan reached sanjeevani.. geet was ahead and shruti was in maan's arms… well maan was to leave for Km with shruti but he assured geet that he will go after sometime with both of them …

Doctor treating shruti's mom nandini was coming from her ward… she smiled at geet and patted her back… she informed geet about nandini's comatose position..she was all right now..she had came out of coma this early morning..and right now she was willing to meet her family…

Geet thanked the doctor and rushed towards the ward… she opened the door and saw her sister in law standing towards the window… nandini turned and the next second the tears that geet was hiding till now erupted into deep sobs ..she engulfed her sister in law in a bear hug , both of them were at the high fow of emotions..when maan with shruti came inside the room… shruti as soon as saw her mother ..she ran towards her .. her eyes were glittering nandini couldn't keep herself away from her little doll she was her life..she looked at geet who smiled…

Shruti: mumma wake up.. bua see mumma listened to shruti… sshe was smiling and kissing her mother … and nandini was showering her love on her little baby..unaware of the loss she had incurred these days…

Nandini ( to shruti): baby mumma is sorry.. mumma wont sleep this long now…

Shruti nodded and the mother daughter were having a peaceful time.. The ice broke when nandini asked about her husband and family…

Nandini:geet where is akshay he didn't come to meet me and ma where is she geet.. are they fine.. the accident was very perilous .. is akshay fine na..she tried to know about her husband…

Geet didn't know how to control herself..in a moment she loose her control and revealed all the truth..

Geet ( sobbing): bhabhi.. bhaiyya and ma left us…

Geet expected nandini to pour out her grief but to her dismay nandini didn't utter any single word..she was cold as ice.. her expressions were not readable..she just engulfed her daughter in mother's warmth and then the silent tears gushed out of her eyes.. the pain of loosing her dear ones was so big that she if wanted couldn't let out a loud cry knowing her baby will not be able to bear the loss the she and her mother had went through… even she looked at geet who was pretending to be all brave.. but nandini knows all her ins and out…

Maan who was also confused by nandini's behavior didn't know what to say….

It was almost one week that nandini was discharged from hospital geet was still taking care of shruti and now even nandini too while managing her hospital schedule… one day geet was giving medicines to shruti when nandini asked about them..and geet , she didn't know how say to nandini about shruti but after gathering all the courage she told her about shruti's disease the time when shruti was admitted in hospital… and lastly maan treating her…

This information shattered nandini she was broken now.. the loss of her love and her family made her weak but she somehow knew that her daughter needs her but know after knowing about shruti she didn't knew why god was playing with their life….

Nandini : geet why this is happening with us only… what my daughter did that she is suffering first I lost akshay and now shruti .. I wont be able to live if something happened to her….

Geet consoled her while shruti who find a way to escape from eating those bitter medicines she was about to sneak away but geet was quick to get her..

Geet: kahan jaaya jar aha hai.. you know I wont leave you till you will have these medicines… now open your mouth..geet asked her ..but shruti made a yuck face..nandini couldn't stop herself laughing seeing the two girls bickering and the next moment both looked at nandini with a visible pout..meanwhile maan entered .. shruti squealed seeing him and was in his arms laughing as maan was tickling her..

Shruti : no… bff ticky…

Maan : ticky… acha.. he gave her a naughty look and the next second both were laughing.. geet saw them and was now jealous… seeing them since whenever maan got here he never had time for her not that she was complaining but the attention she was getting she was used to it …

Geet : maan what are you doing here … we don't have any appointment with you….

Maan looked at her intently and the next moment she was left out and nandini and shruti were with maan ….nandini knew maan as geet's friend but he will be treating her was a new surprise…so she had called him and he was there as he was free at the moment…

Maan: I don't think so geetika…. I have appointment with my patient 's mom..what say bhabhi,,,

Nandini asked him lots of question and he patiently answered them telling her the treatment process the surgery that will be after two months… while geet was looking disturbed with something… maan looked at her and asked her..

Maan: kya hua hai geet why are you looking tensed …

Geet looked at maan and nandini who was also expecting an answer from her..

Geet: bhabhi we need to look after the business .. there are certain problems in the marketing department till now I have handled all the responsibility to munshi ji but know we need to do something warna..bhaiyya ki sari mehnat pani me mil jayegi….

Nandini: I will handle business geet you don't have to worry… I cant let the business to get destroyed that akshay started with his sweat and brow …

Geet was now worried since nandini didn't know anything as everything was handled by akshay till now …

Geet: but bhabhi how will you it will a problem.. aap toh kuch bhi nahi jaanti hai and moreover we cant trust anyone since there are many competitors of bhaiyya … they will want us to get doomed..

Maan left from there … informing them about the dinner at his place he invited three of them….

AT DINNER IN KM…

Nandini with shruti and geet reached Km..maan and his mother welcomed them… and krish welcomed his baby princess..and the next second the children were off too playing while nandini wanted to stop shruti but maan's mother and maan stopped her…

Maan: bhabhi let her go..

The children went to krish room and karan who was working on his laptop had to close his work since the naughty cute brats will not let him work he knew.. while they played mingling karan with them…

Maan initiated the talk that he wanted to discuss…

Maan: bhabhi you want to learn the business techniques and handling na.. karan bhai will help you.. what say mom…

Even his mother second him..asking nandini not to feel alone as they are here … and supported her like a family..meanwhile dinner was served and karan came down with the two children .. while shruti was in his arms..the three were giggling…this made geet and nandini smile..geet scowled seeing the two kids didn't even pay their attention towards her…

Geet: you two are not even seeing me… and even my bf krish ditched me… haina krish now you got your princess so apni gf ko bhul gaye…

Krish sweetly came towards her and kissed geet making maan to burn his nephew was flirting with his love.. he wanted to shove the little one away but couldn't do it…

Its been almost a month that nandini was learning business with karan and were sharing a comfort level with each other … they were having a closeness just like friends have and even krish was close to nandini and both sometimes tease karana nd poor he is struck between two…

Maan saw this first and asked geet what he was thinking… but geet blasted on him…

Geet: are you mad or what maan .. how can you say this… bhabhi to get married married with karan bhai… do you even know what are you saying… its impossible… maan knew what she was saying but the next moment maan's words left her stunned…

Maan: so you want her to be alone geet ..humari shaadi ke baad she will be all alone and now don't you dare to say that you will remain unmarried just to support bhabhi when you know what will happen… and shruti and krish dodnt they deserve a better life geet and I have seen them..they share a comfort level and looks good together…

Geet looked at maan and said

Geet: but bhabhi won't agree maan even if I will force her…

Maan: so do you think bhai will agree we need to do emotional blackmail…

Geet nodded

Geet: fine I will call malhotra uncle here bhabhi ke papa hi samjha sakte hai ab…

Geet and maan with their emotional blackmail tried to persuade their siblings…both were saying same things.. and here MR MALHOTRA .. nandidni's father did what geet said since he knew what she and maan were doing was for betterment …. And maan's mother too agreed ….

Geet: bhabhi think about shruti she needs a father….

Maan : bhai think about krish he needs a mother….

a child needs both father and mother that both nandini and karan knew and they agreed just for the sake of their kids… that was the marriage of conscience and they agreed for a simple court marriage followed by a small ceremony at temple…

geet was alone at her place since nandini left with shruti …. That was a gloomy night with raining like cats and dogs..the thundering and lightening made her shiver as she was coming from the hospital after her late night shift… though after every small intervals nandini calls geet and asks about her whereabouts… but still geet was alone know..she was about to cross the garden going towards the parking lot when someone pulled her and made her blindfold… and even he made tied her hands….

Geet was trying to hit but the next moment she knew who was he.. maan's strong masculine smell made her to stop her hitting… they were drenching in rain… maan took her to a small cottage it was decorated with white orchids and red roses.. as soon as they reached the place a song started playing

And maan whispered in her ear

Maan: happy birthday love… his husky voice made her like a jelly ..

Geet softly said..

Geet: thank you…

Next instant she was looking at the decoration… she was looking with her mouth open… her eyes were open with tears and those orbs were shining she didn't knew how to express herself when maan took her to cut the cake… geet fed him first and the next second she pulled him in a passionate heartfelt kiss that was clearly depicting how she longed for these small gestures .. it was geet's initiative and was ended with maan… their bodies were burning with passion which wanted to erupted right know…

He next second was on his knees and asked her with all her love…

Maan: I know I am not perfect for you.. I know I lack some maturity..i know I will spoil you with my love and our children but still I want one just one chance with you to believe the person in front of you and give him a fair chance of proving his love.. will you be my love for ever geet.. will you marry this jerk whom you fondly calls a flirt … will you marry me geetika….

Geet smiled and bent down to hug him..she whispered in his ear…

Geet: I will be for yours forever my flirty maan….

A loud sound came out of the room., it was twenty two year shruti who was chasing krish they were in a cat dog fight..when another hand caught krish… shruti was all right know after her three surgery… she was taken care by maan and karan..she was his princess and even krish took care of his baby sister that he finally got…

Parth: di ..here bhai you are gone… he cheered at his sweet di… he was maan and geet's eiggteen year old parth..the apple of geet's eyes and maan's biggest competitor since he is the one who gives him a big competition when it comes to geet…

Shruti gave a flying kiss to parth….

Shruti: love you baby …. And she looked at krish who was just saying a No to her and glaring at parth… but parth made a face..and was now cheering shruti while anvi ( nandini and karan's daughter seventeen year old ) was cheering for her bhai….

Maan saw them ..when he announced the news to all….karan was sitting with his mother and krish was also there…

Maan: bhai I have seen a perfect match for shruti I hope she will like him and he is coming to meet her today ..

Shruti made a face and was about to go… when geet stopped her…

Shruti: I don't want to meet anyone geetu….

Maan: why bff do you have someone in your life…

Krish and parth who are all protective came to defend shruti….

Boys: no shruti/di don't have anyone.. you don't have anyone na shruti/ di…..

Shruti nodded in a No….

When a call disturbed maan…

Maan: he's is here … wait let me introduce him..before he could go..shruti went saying she will bring him inside…

Shruti looked everywhere she couldn't see anyone..when a broad muscular figure approached her ..she was shocked and wanted to give a good punch but he hold her….

Shruti: what are you doing here… this is not the hospital…. And you better go from here before I kick you out….

The guy looked at her..he wanted to hug her kiss her right know but the next moment … he apologized to her… he had came once at her hospital and made a mess to be treated by her….

Guy: I am sorry doctor shruti …I was bit childish at that time…

Shruti: if you are done you can go….

Guy: are you sure cindrella princess he said with a visible smirk…

First shruti looked confused ..then it struck her….

Shruti: tum.. LUV ..what are you doing here….

Luv looked at her with a visible frown….

Luv: didn't doc geet and buddy told you… I missed you so much love…

Shruti tried to ignore .when luv next words made her to pounch on him….

Luv: fine if you are not interested I will say no.. after all there are many behind me..after all I am the one of the handsome economist ..

Shruti chased him while he was all running to save himself…

This was the start of a new commitment…..

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan n geet part..
totally romantic..
geet accepted maan by full heart..
n what happened
she got call from hospital
is it regarding shruthe
hope it s some gud news that shruthe will b f9 soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it waiting for net epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mounacuty

loved it waiting for net epilogue



thanks dear updated next one too

do check
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

maan n geet part..

totally romantic..
geet accepted maan by full heart..
n what happened
she got call from hospital
is it regarding shruthe
hope it s some gud news that shruthe will b f9 soon




thanks di

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