A COMMITMENT
PART 3
Geet was stunned with maan's revelelation not only that dangerous heart problem but depression ., geet was looking at maan with many impending questions in her mind , here she is a guardian to her neice who is no less than a mother for her now fear of loosing her the scary feeling that was somewhere till now hiding within her was slowly and steadily taking place in her life.. A fear that crept in her mind which always say
"YOU WILL BE ALONE IN THIS WORLD NO ONE WILL BE THERE BY YOUR SIDE TO SHARE YOUR HAPPINESS TO TAKE YOUR PAIN"
maan was seeing her, everysecond every passing minute the changing expressions the unsaid pain that was deep hidden in the recesses of her heart she never let herself open up infront of anyone , he only knew how he felt when he saw the beautiful shy timid girl who was being standing with her friends and getting ragged there was a bubbliness , a naughty glint that always shine with her but now there was nothing except blankness and pain...
geet : i will take your leave Dr. Khurana ..
geet quickly tried to run ,maan didnt tried to stop her knowing that she cant face all the things along need some time to cry alone... He knew from that blankness...
maan : let me check my patients too geetika maan just flashed a smile followed by a flirty wink... Geet smiled a little and gave him a glare
geet : dare you say me geetika again.. Maan tum kab badloge ..
maan came close to her and playfully kept his hand on her shoulder..
maan : you see sweetheart maan singh khurand can never change and that you too know geetika... Now let me go i have to meet the little romeo and his sweet juliet ...
geet looked at him with confusing eyes maan chuckled
maan : uff you are still a tube light geetika i am talking about Luv and Shruti.. I think they will be perfect for each other and look LUV LOVES SHRUTI so much and you meri feelings ki toh kadar hi nahi hai.,
geet rolled her eyes seeing him again doing his drama and so called nautanki...
geet: are you done of your match making i still wonder you did made you a doctor you seems to fit for bollywood very well...
maan : then what about your SRK AND MR.PERFECTIONIST they would have jealoused with me seeing my looks and persona...
geet: tumse toh baat hi karna bekaar hai... With that geet left his cabin maan just saw her leaving and he too left to see shruti for whom he had shifted with his family...
maan looked at the ward both the kids were playing nurse was there .. Maan entered and saw her sitting beside luv looking lost.. Maan looked at the nurse and told her to bring some snacks and juice for the kids...
maan neared shruti's bed and sat near her he first looked at luv who smiled seeing him..
maan : hey champ what are you doing... He asked simultaneously keeping an eye on shruti.. Luv jumped from the bed and showed maan the games there were spiderman , doremon toys a video game of car racing..
Luv : doc will you make shruti fine ?? Maan looked at him skeptically ... Luv first looked if shruti was looking at him when he got confirmation that she is engrossed in her own world he came near her and whispered in maan's ears..
luv : shruti does not play with luv she clies a lot saying pain in her heart and calls dr. Geet ...
maan listened to him he knew that the pain must be very bad for her to bear afterall she is just a small child ...maan assured the little boy who was more worried for his friend
maan : believe me nothing will happen your shruti will be fine and she wont cry anymore ..
maan : so luv who is this beautiful princess he asked to luv
Luv : the cindrella princess Shruti...
maan: aww so whats the cindrella princess doing
maan said looking at shruti..
luv:not playing with luv...
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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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