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Posted: 12 years ago
@chandru jaan issiliay aj darru nhn pee ha kissy ki waja say hum nay socha humm kahin kiss scene pr kay jazbati na ho jain or fazol may apni chandru jaan ki lipstick khrab kr dain hahhahaha
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Sonu your one still hasn't finished yet🤔...still no update😡
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SORRY FOR GRAMMATICAL/SPELLING MISTAKES.😆 Apne aap se hi theek kar lena.😆COS KLSH READERS ARE ALREADY TOO SMART.😈 🤣 K HERE IS THE UPDATE. ENJOY.😆
PART -10.1

Uday broke the hug🤗 & looking at Manyata.😊 He was shocked 😲but happy also after hearing the name Manyata from her mouth.😊 Uday smilingly said, " I can't believe this Princess. Iska matlab aapko hum par trust hai ki jo hum kah rahe hain wo sach hai aur aap hi Manyata hai."😊
Manyata nodded her head in yes. Uday hugged Manyata🤗 & said happily," Princess I'm so so happy." But this time Manyata didn't hug him back & broke the hug & said,"Jyada khush hone ki bhi jarurat nahi hai aur ye humein baar-baar hug karna band karo.Humara naam badla hai, humari pehchan badli hai lekin hum wahi Sana hai jo tumhein bilkul bhi pasand nahi karte samjhe ab hato pare."& pushed Uday one side& started walking outside the dargaah.
Uday☺️ (to himself)," Jungli billi humesha jungli billi hi rahegi aur waise bhi Princess pasand-napasand ka toh sawal hi nahi hai kyunki hum aapke hain kaun ye aapko bahut jald pata chalne wala hai. Jus wait n watch Ms. haan nahi toh."😉
Uday also followed Manyata & called her,"Princess wait hum bhi aa rahe hain."
Manyata was already frustrated so without looking at back to him she said😒," Nahi Yuvraaj sa koi jarurat nahi hai. Aapne humein humare nayi family aur naam de diya ab aur kisi meharbaani ki jarurat nahi hai. Aap jayein humein aapki aur help nahi chahiye hum chale jayenge."
Uday walked fastly & stood up infront of Manyata & smirkingly said,"Accha waise aap kaise jayengi yahaan se akele aapko apne naye ghar ka raasta pata hai aur waise bhi Car toh humare paas hai aapke paas kya hai hmm."😉
Manyata smirked at him back & said,"Humare paas do peir(legs) hain kyun tumhare paas nahi hai kya? Buddhu." 😛
Uday replied," Wohoo I'm impressed. Humein toh pata hi nahi tha ki humari Princess itni smart hai." & started to coming close to him & grabbed Manyata's hands.
Manyata was trying to leave her hands from Uday's grab & said angrily😡," Lofar kahin ke. Ye baat baat mein humein pakadte kyun ho? Hum waise hi itne pareshaan hain aur upar se tum tang kar rahe ho.Humara peecha karna band karo aur jakar apne hotels aur business sambhalo."& pushed him again.
Now this time Uday in a serious mood & pulled her closer to him with full strength that Manyata bumped with him, "Princess humne kaha na Car mein baithiye."
Manyata angrily,"Nahi baithenge."😡
Uday also said angrily," Manyata Car mein abhi ... nahi toh...(Manyata cuts him in middle)😡
Manyata also in angry tone,"nahi toh kya zabardasti karoge."
Uday smirked at her😉,"Good idea agar wo bhi karna pade toh karenge.Ab chup-chap humare saath chal kar car mein baithiye.Aap humare saath chal rahi hain samjhi aap."
Manyata said," You stupid, idiot, silly, joker, lofar, bandar I hate you. Jab dekho humein order dete rahte ho. I hate you, I hate,hate you. Humein aaj tak kisi ne aise order nahi diye samjhe isliye apna zor jakar kisi aur par chalao hum par nahi n last time I HATE YOU."😡
Uday laughingly said😆, "But I like you Princess." & picked up Manyata in his strong arms & started walking towards the Car.
"Chodo, chodo humein ye kya zabardasti hai. Humare saath aise zabardasti karoge toh hum shor karke sabko bula lenge." & started hitting on Uday's chest. "Chodo" Manyata said angrily.😡
When they came close to Car many media persons n journalists were waiting for them.Cameramen wanted to click Prince n lost Princess pics together & wanted a breaking news with pictures of Royal couple for headlines.Manyata was too shocked😲 after seeing the crowd of media & press reporters.She was scared & shockingly said"OMG"& hid her face & turned at Uday & her both hands put around UV's neck.😉
Uday smiled at his Princess & than media reporters.😊 He signalled head security Shiv Singh to control media n Journalists & one guard opened the door of front seats. Uday put Manyata on front seat & sits next to her for driving the car & left the place.
Manyta breathed to Sigh of relief & said," Bach gaye.Ye sab toh aise humari photos le rahe the jaise hum Salmaan aur Katrina ho. Silly media wale. I hate them."
Uday said laughingly😆,"Princess waise hum dono unse kam bhi nahi hai.What's say. I love media. Aaj unhonein wo kaam kar diya jo shayad hum nahi kar pate. Princess ye tumhari hatered list mein aur kaun kaun hai?"& winked at her.
"Fikar mat karo tumhara naam top par hai. Ab saamne dekhkar car chalao humein sahi salamat apne ghar jaana hai samjhe."Sana said & making an angry face at him but Uday was smiling 😊 n seeing his Princess's irritating face.
Manyata was silent for sometime. Uday liked Manyata's all the time blabbering & likes to tease her. He knew Manyata doesn't want to show her sadness after the revelation of her true identity cos afterall She is a royal & Royals never show their weakness to anyone. If he was in her place He was also reacted same jus like she did in the Palace but he was also impressed by Manyata's ability to understand the situations & the power to accept all the challenges.
Uday smiling & called Manyata,"Princess."But no response from Manyata's side.
"Princess" Uday called Manyata but when he looked towards her, She was already slept. Uday was continuously staring at her. She was looking like an angel, so beautiful n innocent. Uday remembered his first meeting & fight with Manyata in his hotel.He was smiling.😊
Uday(to himself),"She's different. Sote huye cute lagti hai lekin jab bolti hai to Mashallah."He was still staring at her. His concentration was not on the road & suddenly he lost his control when a truck came towards them with full speed. Uday shockingly said,😲"O Sh** ." He tried to control the car but it was slammed with a tree.
Suddenly Manyata woke up & started screaming so loudly,"AAA AAA AAA AAA'"
Uday closed his ears & said loudly,"Stop it Manyata. Stop screaming right now." but she was not in the mood listened to him.Uday puts his hand on her mouth n said,"Stop it Princess. Hum zinda hain. Ab chillana band karo."
Manyata removed Uday's hand from her mouth & said angrily,"Humne kaha tha. Humne kaha tha tumse ki hum chale jayenge lekin tum jab dekho apni Yuvraajgiri hum par chalate rahte ho. Humein upar bhejna chahte the kya?Jab drive karni nahi aati toh karte kyun ho? Ek driver nahi rakh sakte.Sab kuch bura humare saath aaj hi hona tha."😡
Uday said with smile on his face😊,"Ye bhi tumhari hi wajah se hua hai Angel."
Manyata was staring at Uday with angry eyes & said,"Humari wajah se. Humne kya kiya? Drive hum kar rahe the ya tum silly.Ab jao aur jakar check karo ki kya hua hai tumhari iss Car ko."
Uday got out from his Car & checked it. Manyata asked from Uday loudly from the car,"Kya hua Yuvraaj sa? Ye aapki F1 humein humare ghar tak chodegi ya humare ye do peir(legs) hi saath denge humara.
Uday(to himself).,"Jawaab dena toh koi tumse seekhe Princess aur specially humein." & smiled.
"Na Princess lagta hai tumhein gusse mein dekhkar isse bhi hum par gussa aa gaya hai. Ye humein aapko le jaane se mana kar rahi hai." Uday said loudly.
"Ye sab tumhari wajah se hua hai. Dhyaan kahaan pe hota hai tumhara?" Manyata was frustrated now. "Aap par Princess, I mean I'm sorry Princess. Ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya ab hum ismein kya kar sakte hain.Hum abhi dusri Car ka arrangement karte hain."Uday said & called his Security head.
"Manyata also gets out from the Car & said,"Aur haan saath mein ek driver ka bhi arrangement karna, Ab humein tum par aur tumhari driving par koi trust nahi hai pata nahi kab aise Car ko takra do." "Thanks for the suggestion Princess." Uday said to Manyata smilingly.😊
IN DEVGARH PALACE:-
Everyone was worried for Manyata including Rahil & Nafisa(Sana's Parents).
Komal said worriedly,"Masaheb humein toh bahut chinta ho rahi hai. Pata nahi Uday ko Manyata mili bhi hogi ya nahi."
DS said confidently,"Chinta mat kijiye Komal. Manyata ko kuch nahi hoga aur humein Uday pe poora bharosa(trust) hai wo Manyata ko liye bina nahi aayenge."
Unnati came & said happily😛,"Dadisaab, Aunty Komal. Humein bhai ka phone aaya tha unhonein kaha hai ki Manyata unke saath hain aur wo kuch hi der mein unhein apne saath lekar aane wale hain."
Komal & everyone was very happy after hearing that Manyata finally coming to her real home after 16 years.Sana's Parents also happy after hearing that their Princess is alright n coming back to home.
On the other side, Manyata was wandering in frustration n thoughts," Pata tha. Pata tha humein ki kuch aisa hi hoga. Hum kaise bhul gaye ki hum Yuvraaj Uday ke saath hain. Jab jab ye milta hai tab humare saath kuch na kuch galat hota hi hai."
Uday was looking at Manyata's worried face & smiling at her continuously.Manyata saw him & giving him death glares & said," Ab ye muskurana band karo isse dekhkar humein aur jyada gussa aa raha hai." "Lekin humein toh aapko dekhkar aap par pyar aa raha hai." Uday said with cheesy smilie.
"Uhhh Kabhi kabhi toh humara mann karta hai ki hum tumhein...".(Uday cuts her in middle).
"Ki humein ek tight si huggy karein hai na🤗." Uday completed Manyata's sentence & winked at her.😉
"What?😲 Huggy aur tumhein. Tum pagal toh nahi ho gaye ho. Ya humein samajhte ho."She was already trembling in anger n Uday was still enjoying to tease her.
"Ab ismein sharmane ki kya baat hai. Lekin ismein aapki kya galti hai Humein dekhkar toh har larki ka dil karta hai humein hug karne aur ki..."(Manyata interrupts him)
"Shut up. Tumne humein kya aisi waisi chipku larki samjha hai, hum un bimbos ki tarah nahi hai jo tumhari iss cheesy smile se flat ho jayenge. Ab tum humse bilkul baat nahi karna. Ab humein kisi bhi tarah yahaan se jaldi nikalna hai, humare Mum Pa humare liye pareshaan ho rahe honge aur humne toh unhein phone..." Manyata stopped in middle & started sobbing.
Uday thoughts," I think kuch jyada hi ho gaya. Hum toh sirf aapke andar ki Sana ko bahar lana chahte the Angel Jo kisi bhi situation se nahi darti hai.Pata nahi kyun lekin hum aapko aise rote huye nahi dekh sakte. Humara aapko rulane ka koi irada nahi tha."
Manyata was remembering all the moments n flashbacks with her Parents of her childhood & started crying so badly.😭
Uday came close to her & was trying to console her. He touched Manyata's face & said,"Princess rona band karo aur humari taraf dekho." but Manyata continuously crying😭 & not looking at him."Princess I'm sorry.Please ek baar hum jo kah rahe hain usse sun toh lijiye." When Uday said that Manyata looked at him.😒
"Manyata aapki kismat mein Princess banna likha tha aur aap chahte huye bhi apni kismat se nahi bhaag sakti hain. Hum jaante hain ki ye aapke liye itna aasan nahi hai, lekin Princess itna mushkil(difficult) bhi nahi hai. Hum aapse aapke Parents ko bhulne ke liye thode hi kah rahe hain. Unhonein aapko 16 saal tak itna pyar kiya hai, aap aise kaise unhein bhul sakti hain aur bhulna bhi nahi chahiye. Lekin Princess aapko pata bhi nahi hoga ki aapke real parents aur khas kar(specially) Komal Aunty aur dadisaab unhonein ye 16 saal kaise aapke bina nikale hain. Sab unse kahte the ki aapko bhul jaye ho sakta hai aap iss duniya mein hi na ho lekin unhonein kabhi aisa nahi socha. Toh Princess aap hi bataiye ki kya humne aapko aapke asli Parivaar(Family) se milakar koi galti ki aur aapko lagta hai ki hum galat hai toh I'm really sorry Angel."
After hearing all these things from Uday, Manyata was feeling very bad for her behaviour with her both Parents & dadisaab in the Palace. Manyata hugged Uday 🤗& crying loudly.😭 She wanted to flow out all the tears of guilt which she was feeling for her rude behaviour with her both families(Sana's family+her real family).
"Humein aisa nahi karna chahiye tha humne humare Mum Pa ko itna gussa kiya." Manyata said to Uday cryingly & hugged him more tightly.🤗
Uday also hugged her back.🤗 He broke the hug &touching Manyata's both cheeks. "It's ok Princess. Aapne jaan bujhkar toh aisa nahi kiya na.Ab sab theek ho jayega." & kissed to her forhead. Manyata & Uday both were looking into each other's eyes. Uday started to coming more closer to Manyata. Manyata closed her eyes but tears still rolling down on her cheeks.
Uday was staring at Manyata & than started kissing to her eyes, than her both cheeks & finally he kissed on her luscious lips.

Manyata & UV both started to kissing each other. At the time of kissing UV wiped off his Jhalli Manyata's tears which was rolling down on her chubby cheeks.He kissed don't know how many girls like this before but never felt so good n complete with any girl like he was feeling today with his Princess. Both were still busy to kissing each other n Suddenly Manyata realised what was she done? She opened her eyes n pushed UV with her full strength & started to shouting on him.
Manyata(angrily):-😲 Haaye Rabba ye tumne humein ki...Tumhari himmat kaise hui aisa karne ki? Samajhte kya ho apne aapko? Yuvraaj ho toh kya kuch bhi karoge humare saath.Chodenge nahi hum tumhein. 😡
UV pulled Manyata with full strength that she bumped with him n both're stood up so close to each other n UV put his fingers on Manyata's lips n with other hand he grabbed Manyata's both hands. She was trying to release herself from UV's grab but it was too strong.
UV was smiling & still couldn't believing on which was happened between him n Manyata some moments ago."Abhi 2 minute pahle tum humein kiss kar rahi thi aur phir se hum par gussa kar rahi ho. Kuch samajh nahi aata hai humein tumhare baare mein Princess." Uday said smirkingly.
Manyata hid her face with both hands & said sobbingly," Ye humse kaise ho gaya. Humne jaan bujhkar nahi karna chahte the. Ab hum kya karein."
"Iska matlab tumne kabhi kisi larke ko kiss nahi kiya."Uday asked to Manyata & waiting for Manyata's answer.
" Manyata removed her hands from her face & replied," Sabko apne jaisa samjha hai kya aur ye jo bhi hua na wo tumhari galti hai, haan nahi toh." & than opened the door of the car & sat back on her seat.
Uday also sat back into the car
. Manyata said," Ab hum tumhare saath nahi baithenge jab tak dusri car nahi aa jati hai. Hum bahar hi wait karenge."
She was trying to open the car door but Uday pulled her towards him & locked all the doors of the Car. " Ye kya kar rahe ho. Lock kyun kiya Car ko. Humein bahar jana hai, hum tumhare saath nahi baithenge. Chodo humein." & started hitting him. " Uday Chodo"Manyata requested to him with teary eyes.
Uday was now angry with her & shouted on her,"Enough Manyata. Aisa bhi kya kar diya hai humne jo tum hum par itna gussa ho rahi ho Hum aisa kuch nahi karna chahte the lekin humse ho gaya ab kya sari zindagi hum tumse sorry bolte rahenge kya, kya humne zabardasti aapko kiss kiya aur tum toh aise ro rahi ho jaise humne tumhara r** kar diya ho."
She was scared to saw Uday's anger. She started sobs again.
Uday was trying to calm down & said calmly, " Princess rona band karo. Humne kuch jyada hi daant diya. " but She didn't say anything.to him & staring outside the window.
Uday opened the door of his side & got out from the car than went towards Manyata's side. He opened Manyata's side door & said, " Aapko bahar nikalna tha na toh lijiye. Ab hum aapse jabardasti nahi karenge." But Manyata didn't move from her seat."
Uday said to him in frustration,"Are yaar ab kyun nahi bahar aa rahi ho? Ms. Rajdhani ab aapko jahaan jana hai wahaan jaiye. Bahar khada hona hai ho jaiye.Hum kuch nahi kahenge."
Manyata(cryingly)
:-Hum bahar nahi aayenge. EK toh hum par itna zor se gussa kiya, humein kiss kiya, humein itna tang karte ho humesha aur toh aur humein itne saare naam se bulate ho kabhi Jungli billi, hawa hawai, Ms. haan nahi toh aur, aur...
UV completed Manyata's sentence smilingly,"aur Ms. Rajdhani."
Manyata was wiping her tears with both hands like a kid n said (sobbingly) Haan aur wo bhi.
UV was so happy to see Sana's come back as Manyata, his Princess n future queen.He thoughts," Thank God Kam se kam kuch bola toh sahi.Jhalli kahin ki." n smiled.

...TO BE CONTINUED.

THANKS FOR READING.😆

If you guys really like the update Please hit the like button & leave your comments(Appreciations/Criticisms/Request) anything you want. I want to know what are your feelings after reading the update. Which part you don't like of the update & which one is your favourite.

REQUEST:- Hi Silent readers, I jus want to say thanks to like my FF. I know many members are silent readers but it's my personal request that KLSH'S MAIN CHARACTER MANYATA (SANA) IS TOO MUCH TALKATIVE N WRITER OF THIS FF IS ALSO TOO MUCH TALKATIVE😆 SO WHY'RE KLSH READERS SILENT HMM. So if you really like the update than Pls leave your comments/suggestions on the update.😉
LOVE YOU ALL

Now I'm going to hid myself.😆 Hum toh ja rahe hain chupne. BA.BYE.
























































































Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sona Bacha me 1st after ages I reserved my spot asap since u updated finally update kardiya ab I can say for sure no sandal from my side and wakhi sab bhi nahiye mareghe no rotten tomotoes or eggs... Bacha you done a amazing job with the update so no need to hideAmazing Update Sona Bacha
Luved the conversation of Manveer at the beginning Uday was so happy that Sana had finally accepted the truth that she is Manyata he hugged her awww so cute... then she told him although hse has new name she's still the same person... luved the emoticons too Sona Manyata and ur UV is blushing emoticon thats great... then Manyata dialogus was awesome when she called him Loafer i too agree with her why isnt UV taking care of his business and hotel😆... when the reportes came that was epic Manyata goes we aren't Salman and Katrina that the camera are taking our photos🤣Manyata should know even royals get pictures taken... Lol Sona bacha UV is winking quite a lot in this part lagtha hai Dewu ki bemaari lag gayi auseh🤣 Manyata in this fanfic is too funny and cute... then the car scene UV should concentrate on driving Manayta ko dekh raha tha Sona see it could of been a worser accident very bad UV auseh kuch samajaya karoh😆 All the family are really happy for Manyata return wonder how she will react when she sees them... UV thinks too much of himself Manyata neh acha sunayah😆 then she was remembering her childhood so sad😭 yeah she shouldn't of behaved badly with both parents but she was so shocked and didnt think but hopefully they will forgive her... Sona bacha Manyata dialogues were really funny shes too innocent... it was a great update🤗
cont soon
Edited by Anam Ali - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

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First of all sorry for late comment...actually i completely forgot that I havn't edited it

Awesome and superb update Sonu...👍🏼

Just loved it...the way Sana turned into M and then reacted to Uday...so cute😳

and their love scene was so romantic na☺️☺️

and best part was the last scene...when she said all those things while crying and said

Haan woh bhi...super cute😳

beautifully written ...tooo good⭐️

thanx for the pm and update soon.🤗🤗

Edited by adorable_rana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update loved ...so uv calling manyatah angel ... Really he needs a driver wen he is wit manyatah
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally update kardiya!!!! 😃 Amazing update!!! 👏Continue soon!!!! 😳
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Fabulous update Sonam!
Really loved it... it was indeed ManVeerlicious!
Loved how Uday kept poking and prodding Manyata with his words and actions and our strong willed, jungli billi Manyata kept on retaliating and answering him left, right, and center..
She's one headstrong girl and love that about her...

A superb update... plz update the next part soon!
Edited by mahi0809 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww such a fantastic update. love u didi
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sorry for reserving so long . comment edited on page 118
Edited by Jarin04 - 12 years ago

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