MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 9 - Page 52

Thank you friends for your lovely comments. Please let me know if you think story is getting boring. This FF is going to end in other 10 or so parts anyway but if you feel story is stretched, I can end in a chapter or two. So do let me know.

Also, I want to share something. I recently read a three part OS which is completely written as a poem. This effort from mishtiritu is very unique and fresh. Words used are simple Hindi but the poetic narration takes it to next level. So if you understand Hindi, I will suggest you give it a try. I am sure you all will love it.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3198809/maaneets-poetic-os-haal-e-dil-part3-pg61-dt1-10

I feel bad when I see only 36 likes for such a wonderful effort. We find it difficult to write a story and she has written a story through a poem. She definitely deserves much more appreciation than this.

-Lakshmi- - you are a champ dear…loved all your "Hi" pics…sorry for late updates but was travelling so had no net connection…

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Chapter 59

I feel it all within your kiss
the love, the passion the emotional mist
kiss me like you have never kissed before
...kiss me like you will never stop wanting more

Kiss me let me taste every tooth and tear
kiss me let me imbibe every pain and fear
I will never forget even if I tried
I will never get over it even if I cried
I will love you to death
I will spare my last breath
I will do it all for you

Kiss me now before you regret it tomorrow
Kiss me, let happiness spread instead of sorrow
Kiss me, I will not close my eyes
I know it feels like a dream in paradise

I will never forget even if I tried
I will never get over it even if I cried
I will love you to death
I will spare my last breath
I will do it all for you

kiss me and enjoy every second we spend
kiss me before this dream comes to an end
kiss me don't hesitate or think of consequence
kiss me it will be over soon a memory nothing else
Kiss me and magically drive me insane
kiss me before we wake up once again .

Contributed by Neha5058

Geet stopped his hand as he draped her saree back properly. She blushed slightly - "Please don't tarnish best moments of my life by saying sorry. Kya aap ko sach mein galat lagta hai…jo kuch…I mean whatever happened."

[Please don't tarnish best moments of my life by saying sorry. Do you really feel you have done a mistake...what ever...I mean whatever just happened?]

Maan closed his eyes and hugged her lightly – "Nahi Geet….That's not what I mean. Lekin dard ho raha hai na."

[No Geet…That's not what I mean. But is is paining right?]

Geet parted and pouted cutely, nodding her head.

Maan lifted her in his arms and started walking towards the bedroom.

Geet giggled – "Chot mere haath mein lagi hai…pair mein nahi."

[I have hurt my hands not legs.]

"Shut up Geet. You don't know how I am feeling right now. How could I hurt you again?"

"You did not hurt me…samjhe aap"

She hid her face in the crook of his neck and teased him – "Haan lekin itne zor se pyaar karne ki kya zaroorat thi"

[Yes, but what was the need of loving me with so much strength.]

"Ab koi cheez bahut intezaar ke baad mile toh ho jata hai Jaan."

[Now when you get something after a long wait...it happens.]

Geet blushed crimson red with his response and hugged him tight. He placed her on the bed and got a mug filled with warm water. He gently wiped the blood away to see medium nick in her right hand a deeper cut on the left wrist. He put a bandage on the right one but left one was still bleeding excessively. He tried blotting the blood but it was not stopping.

"I think we should go to the doctor."

"Oh come on Maan…aap na…faltu mein ghabra rahe ho. Let me put some haldi and I am sure it will stop bleeding. Moreover 11:00 baj rahe hain and I don't want to go to emergency for this. Bahut wait karna padega. "

Maan sighed and went downstairs. He applied haldi and blood seemed to stop. He then bandaged the wrist carefully.

"Bahut dard ho raha hai?"

She shook her head in denial but then nodded in yes.

Maan gave her pain killer.

"Tumehin pata bhi nahi chala jab chot lagi. Bol nahi sakti thi?"

[You did not even realize when you got hurt. Couldn't you have told me?]

He pointed to his clothes which had blood stains "Dekho kitna khoon nikla"

[See how much bleeding has happened.]

Geet blushed and hid herself in duvet – "Ismein meri koi galti nahi hai. I was not in my senses…mujhe kuch aur feel nahi hua."

[It is not my fault. I was not in my senses…I did not feel anything else.]

Maan didn't know how to respond to her innocent confession that she was as lost in him as he was. He coughed – "Hmmm….Let me go and change."

Maan felt another wave of disgust as he saw stains on his clothes as he changed. There was some blood in his hair also – "God….one kiss and…she must be in so much pain."

He took shower quickly and changed into tracks and vest. He picked her night dress

"Tum bhi change kar lo and then sleep."

[You also change and sleep.]

Geet lifted her head and nodded. But she winced as she took clothes from him.

Maan hurried and sat next to her – "Bahut dard ho raha hai Shona…"

[Is it paining a lot Shona…]

He caressed her bandaged wrist lightly.

Geet smiled – "Aap fikar na karo. Kal subah that thik bhi ho jayega. Lekin Please I don't…I just don't want you to feel guilty."

[You don't worry. It will be fine by morning. But please I don't…I just don't want you to feel guilty.]

He looked at her to see her love filled but scared eyes as she said softly – "Please don't step back…it was just an accident."

Maan cupped her face – "Please jaan…asia kuch nahi hai. I know. I am your husband and now nothing, not even my mistakes will let me step back. You can share your fears and pains with me and I promise I will share mine."

Geet nodded as she heard his assurance and kept her head on his shoulder.

After few moments of silence, Maan parted her

"You should take rest…let me get Meera to help you with changing"

"Lekin raat ke 11:00 baje and how will we explain all this?"

"Hmmm…toh thik hai, let me help you."

Geet's eyes widened and Maan chuckled

"Don't worry…I am not going to pounce on you"

Red hue covered her at his words.

Maan removed pins and took off her saree. Maan felt her getting very shy so covered her till waist under a duvet. He slipped his hands inside and opened the side hooks of her inner skirt. Geet hugged his arms and blushed profusely. Her breath was heavy as she felt so many sensations again embracing her – "Maan"

Maan straightened and hugged her properly. "It's ok Jaan"

He calmed her down by lightly caressing her back. When he felt her breathing slowing down, he opened her dori. He came forward and started opening front hooks of her blouse. She felt like hiding herself as her bosom heaved due to her deep breathing. Not able to hide the emotions he was stirring inside her with his touch; she let her head hang backwards and closed her eyes. Maan though finding it little difficult was able to control his urges seeing her bandaged hands. Blood stains he had seen were still fresh in his mind and he focused on just opening the hooks keeping the two parts of the blouses as close as possible.

He pulled her t-shirt on her neck. He finally closed his eyes and removed her right side from the blouse. Then he turned as she removed the left side slowly with the help of her right hand. She also put on the t-shirt from left side. Maan turned after some time and pulled her right hand through. They both were in hugging position and Geet was by now lost again in her la la land by feeling Maan's breathing on her neck and touches everywhere.

Maan was still in control and finally he took his hand inside the duvet, pulling her skirt out. He then bent towards her toes and make her wear her tracks. She hugged his shoulders and lifted herself as he slipped the tracks up to her lower waist.

Maan looked at his blushing and slightly mortified wife and smiled – "Ho gaya…ab tum so jao. Is it still paining a lot?"

She shook her head in denial. Maan took her clothes and put it in laundry bin and then settled her inside the bed properly. Adjusting the pillow, he covered her with duvet and caressed her head till finally medicine took the effect and she slept off. He also lie next to her in half sitting position and dozed off with his one hand still on her forehead.

Precap – So guys tell me how was the update about Maan changing Geet's clothes…LOL. Btw I also fulfilled one of my friend's wish to show Maan taking care of Geet when she was sick.

loving d pace of d story ritzy .Loved d update and enjoyed to the d core .