MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 9 - Page 50

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Posted: 12 years ago
This was a unique scene. I love the step by step improvement in their relationship.

And I loved the way you handled the intimacy part. It was natural, free flowing and mature...not exaggerating the slightest bit.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome so sweet love the way they intract with each other
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nazdeekhiya dheere dheere bad rahi hai😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part dear

wow their first kiss is so pure

thanks for pm

cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
read all the three parts together ... loved it dear ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
r u updating today???
plz say yes!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jus read both parts.
Part 57- lovd d way maan choose to stay at home bcoz it jus showed he knew geet will undrstand his situation n she did.

Lovd d way geet held his collar n told him wid full ryt dat she is his wife...


Part 58- OMG!!! Maan itna budhu... Asking geet hw to manaofy her... Lolz!

Kiss...!!! Actually a vry vry diffrnt kiss bt maan ko samaj aa hi gya hoga kuch aur sochne se betr hai kiss krke hi manaa lu. Well done!

Geet didnt felr any pain wen hurt,dis shows hw lost she ws in maan's lov. Haaye!!

Maan humesha galat baat pe sry bolta hai ya circumstance aise ho jaate hain ki hr dhamaal moment k baad usse sry bolna hi padta hai... Lolz


Terrace scene ws actually vry diffrnt n vry romantic. Bcoz usually on terrace alwaz sum decoration etc is shown to celebrate/manaofy bt here it ws no such thing bt still it ws a special moment of maaneet.


Ab precap nahi diya toh kahin koi twist ya dhamaaka to nahi.

Waise maan ki punishmnt abhi poori nahi hui
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update dear n thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous update 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
do cont soon
waiting eagerly fr ur next update👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG OMG OMG...

hayeee their first Kiss and 😳😳😳😳😉


wow amazing update...No Precap...😭

SUSPENSE...hmmm then i need a dhamaka update...
hehehehehehehe😃😃😉

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