Maaneet's Poetic OS: Haal-e-Dil. Part3 Pg61/dt1/10

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hehe me first yet again 😉
Lovee u for the first u know na why 😆

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aowww this was actually something i dont know about the rest but my first experience to read such thing in life !! Maine aaj se pehle aisa kuch nahi read kia and Ritzie U know it was damn too beautifull
aoww the words from their dreams to their meeting then their friendship and then knowing to finally coming to feelings...it was soo beautifully and mesmerizingly written as if U have jotted down the armona of some nostalagic soul making me spell bound and spectaculated this was indeed too good

hehehe Ritzie I love ur poetry always as for me i always thought your poetry shows your pure heart and soul
and today this was indeed a bowler I Just Loved the way you wrote the way you brought out their feelings their emotions aowww that was too good Just Love It...!!

U know first I actually thought the time U told me this idea That this is gnna be diff for me to understand but it wasnt !! I just loved it and went into flow with it aowww Just Love You For a new experience of such a cute work

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awesome de 😃
just love it 🤗

Edited by payalpari - 12 years ago
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ritzz ,just beautiful . simply wow . it was so lyrical to read which potrayed and each and every emotions of maaneet . Ritzz, enjoyed to d core and plz continue soon .

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de abb jaldi os dedo plz me waiting
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Congo for new OS

going to comment now
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ok finally me here to comment
my first reaction after watching this was
OMG a new side of Maaneet that too a poetic one
some one never tried this on If
A new and fresh Idea
and your poetry uff
sonay pe suhaga
loved it
I a in love with your poetry and that too on Maaneet
me dead
kamal kia hy Paroo
thats a superb piece of work
I really liked it
no no actually I loved it
well done Paroo
u gave a new idea like FFs can be written in poetic way too
u r a trend setter wow gal u always amaze me and look once again
u did it successfully bravo man
luv u
DO continue soon
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All right

first of all i would say the way or this OS is really unique
and then not only unique but gripping and also interesting
the way u have emeded their emotions and story
in form of poetry,, its so catchy plus interesting.
and i was enjoying it to the core
while reading it
brilliant
superb
simple the best
and i think u have dont full justive
and now i cant wait to read more
i feel like reading this sort of story more
and i hope u continue to write such stories even after
this Os is finished
hats off to u
and a huge round of appluase for my ritu
luv ya baby
and really proud of u
hugsss
waitinggg
...
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de jaldi dona abb kitni der aur ?

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