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Gisel

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Posted: 12 years ago

" Visirigal Veesum Thendral Poongatru ", a tamil drama written serial by the fans of the famous SunTV serial Thendral. Should we get the copyrights?😛 More fiction

Let us travel through the journey of Tamil and Thulasi conceived by our own ideas!

From the eyes and minds of our creativity...

Starring in our imagination,

Deepak Dinkar as Tamil

Shruthi Raj as Thulasi

Nizhalgal Ravi as Velayutham

SriVidhya as Charu

Hema as Deepa

Suzanne as Kalyani

Neelima as Lavanya

Shanthi Williams as GW

Sudhakar as Muthumanikam

Sadhana as Padma

Vatsala as Thilaga

Kavitha as Pooja

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Gisel

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CONTENTS :

Episode3 Part1Episode3 Part2

Episode7 Part2Episode7 Part3Episode7 Part4Episode7 Part5Episode7 Part6Episode 7 Part7Episode7 Part8

Episode8 Part1Episode8 Part2Episode8 Part3Episode8 Part4Episode8 Part5Episode8 Part6Episode8 Part7Episode8 Part8

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Gisel

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Episode1(Part1):

Scene opens in a temple. Kovil mani adikuthu. Morning prayers are being said. The camera closes in to the shrine and the priest offering flowers and reciting hymns. Then he comes out with the aarthi.

Introducing Padma (introductiona laiya? velangirum🤢😛). Next, Muthumanikam. Next, Thilaga. Next, Thilaga's husband, with the priest showing the aarthi.

Prayers over. Everyone happy and come out.

Thilaga's husband notices that Velayuthum is not there, "Ama, un thambi enga ponan? Ala kanum."

Thilaga, "Olunga parunga. Thulasiyum illa. Inga than engaiyathu irupannga. Chinnam chirusanga😕😆 konjam nerum thaniya irukanumnu nenaichirpanga😲."

Thilaga's husband, "Analam unaku asaai athikam di😛" and looks around confused.

Muthumanikam, with a sly smile, "Ena samanthi yosikireinga?"

Thilaga's husband, "Illa enga payana unga ponnu kadathi talonu pathutu irukom.😲🤣"

Thilaga tugs her husband, "Onam illa samanthi, Thulasi um yen thambiyum enga poirupanganu pathutu irukum."

Padma nervous (thinks to herself), "Ethavuthu loose mari olari, intha samanthathe nasam panirvalo. Epdiyo nechiaya thartham nalapadiya mudijithu. Kalyanamu mudijituna en pillainga life settle airum. Kadavulai ni than atha nadathivekanam."😡

Just then Velayuthum comes there in hastened steps. MM, "Ena mappilla? Thulasi enga?"

Velayuthum, " Atha nan kekanum ya. Enga ya un ponnu😕? Engagement mudijathila iruthu theditu irukiren. Enga ponna?"

All are shocked.

Thilaga, "Ena da sollura? Inga thena iruntha. Nenga rendum perum thaniya poneinganum nenaichum🤢😆"

Padma nags MM and calls him aside, "Ena ya? Un ponnu oodi poitala? Ippo ena pannurathu?😡"

MM angry and lost doesn't what to say😡.

Velayuthum comes there and asks him, "Ena ya? Kanam pochi veladireingala? Enga ya un ponnu? Evanayathu ezhuthutu oodi poitala?"

MM, "Cha. Cha. En ponnu apdi elam panna mata😊."

Velayuthum, "Ena ya un ponnu panna mata? Un modha pondatti odi pogala🥱.", turning to his henchmen, "Dei thedunga da avala!"

MM ashamed looks to the ground.

Meanwhile,

In the road side near a park. An auto is waiting there. A girl is the driver and another girl is sitting on the passenger's seat.

The passenger speaks, "Ena Kalyani ivalo nerum achu.Thulasi vanthirvala?"

Kalyani, "Vanthirva. Wait pannu." looking equally worried and are looking in the side of the park.

A charming young lady clad in a beautiful white with green pallu silk saree hurries towards them. She is adorning amazing jewellery.😳 But she has a worried look in her face. (If she is beautifully dressed, she doesn't smile; if she smiles she is wearing nighty or some chudithar. Thendral Formula)

She calls out, "Deepa! Kalyani!"

Deepa, "Sikram va! Vandila eru! Time illa!"😲

Thodarum!

Story slighta than change akumnu sonnaium ana inga Thulasi oodi pora lai!😲

Hero va avalo sekiram ma introduce pannir vom ma?😆 Wait and read!😉
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MindFreezer

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amezing part Gisel👏 The episode is exciting to read, enne Thulasi run away a?😲 Or does only Thulasi racing to say that they also have to come to the temple😆, theriyele papom enne nadeke poguthu endu, can't wait for the next part

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Episode1(Part2):

Deepa, "Chikuram intha application form la sign podu, enum oru mani nerathila submit pannanum" (ivalo thana😛)

Scene shifts to park.

There is a child playing on the swing. An ice cream man comes there. The child almost falls of the swing to run towards the ice cream man(be careful😲).

A beautiful girl, looks up from her videocam that she is using to shoot her niece and the park, shouts out to her, "Pooja ma. Nilu. Chittapa ice cream vangitu varuvanga."

She calls out, "Anna. Enga irukura? Un kuttimaku icecream venuma. Poi vangi koodu. Anna!"

A handsome guy comes there with a big teady bear and some chocolates in hand, "Itho vanthuein." peeping his head out through the teddy bear.😳

He goes to Pooja, takes her of the swing, kneels down to her height and gives the teady bear and chocolates to her. "Sollu kuttima! Ena icecreaam venum? Vanilla? Strawberry? Chocolate? Pista? Chocobar?"

"Conela ella flavours um mela mela vechu persa" stretching to her arms wide open😃. "Ok! En chella kuttimaku innai ku super deluxe ice cream. Itho vangitu varein.", getting up, " Unaku ethavuthu venuma Lavanya?"

"Enakum same same." says Lavanya in a kidish voice.

"Um..Enaku oru thangachi!" and keeps his arm on her head lovingly and makes a face in front of the video camera and leaves to buy the ice cream😛.

Pooja starts playing with the teddy bear in the park bench. Lavanya continues taking the video. Pooja says, "Inaku en birthday ku ivalo special a ena pathukirathu ku. Thanks attai and chittapa!" into the videocam. 😳

Just then, they hear a heavy thud. 😲

They can hear Tamil's voice and both of them turn towards the sound😲.

Tamil, "En ma? Pathu vara kuda tha? Ice cream kotu nathu kuda parava illa anna rendu perukum dress nasam aidichei"😲

Thulasi gets up and hurries away murmuring a sorry. (Thulasi ya?😲 Oh! Intha kuttimaku than icecream a?😉).

Tamil, "Ena ga ithu? Konjam nilu ga! Ada sorry kuda olunga solla ma poranga😳😆" looking at his shirt which has formed a tricolor flag of white, pink and brown icecream, "Ice cream mum nasam! Shirt mum nasam!"😛

Pooja and Lavanya come there laughing.😆

Tamil, "Ena siriuppu?"cutely annoyed, trying to take of the icecream from the shirt making it worse😆, then he also starts laughing😆 thinking about something.

Lavanya contrlling herself, "Ena annai? Ni ethuku srikira?"

Tamil, "Illa enodathu avuthu 500 rupa shirt, antha ponnu poturinthathu pakum pothei therinjichu romba costly ana saree nu, athuvum white colour, atha nenchain, sirichein.😆😲"

Lavanya, "Summa iru nain ena azhaga irunthanga theriyuma?😳 Itho intha cam la kuda record airuku nenga rendu perum motitu vulunthathu.☺️"(Even I want to see😭)

The three of them watch the rerecord and Pooja and Lavanya start laughing again.

Tamil, "Seri vidu! valkaila ithu elam sagajam appa" smiling.😆

Scene shifts to the temple.

Thulasi hurries inside. Thilaga notices her coming towards them, "Va ma Thulasi enga poita?"

Thulasi, "Athu...antha pakam..."😲

Velaytham, "Nan anga vanthu pathaine." with quering, suspicious looks.😲

Thulasi, "Illa antha pakam..antha kolathu ka kita..."😲

Just then Velayuthm notices the icecream stains on her saree.😲

Thodarum!

Changing lifes!😆😛
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MindFreezer

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Posted: 12 years ago

Aw cute part Gisel😳, appe Thulasi odi pogele athane pathean, Gisel ninge konja nerathille engaluku oru shock thanduthinge😆...Anthe park scene rombe different idea. Aw pooja ve story ku konduvanthatu nice. The icecream scene aw so lovely, waiting for the next part...

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Esther John

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Posted: 12 years ago

Both the parts are super cute Gisel ... and I can almost imagine T/T colliding with each other ...😆

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JAYASHREE

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Posted: 12 years ago

Super gisel..part 2 especially great creating thinking...waiting for part 3

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Arizes.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Two parts are well written Gisel!!...

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Gisel

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Episode1(Part3):

Velayutham, "Enga poiruntha? Poi sollathe."

MM looks at everything confused.

Padma looks worried and angry.😡

Thilaga, "Dai! Bayam paduthathe da. Inga than engaiyathu poiruppa. Nee vama. Romba time aiyduchu vanga veetuku kalambula."

Everyone leave.

Velayutham asks his henchman, "Dai inga pakathila ena lam iruku? Ethavuthu ice cream parlor iruka?"

He replies, "Athalam theriyathu. Itha kovil ku thotu pinadi oru parku iruku; parku ka antha pakam main road. Main road la irukalam."

Velayutham, "Park a? Um.." looking even more suspicious. They get into the car. Velayutham sits next to Thulasi in the back seat making her feel uncomfortable.

Tamil is starting the bike. Pooja climbs behind Tamil.

Lavanya, "Anna! Nejamavai antha poonu unaku super jodi na! Rendu perumum pakka made for eachother mathiri iruthein ga theriyuma."

Tamil, "Ama thaiya. Maru padiyum thodangathe. Ivalo nerum polambanathu pathatha? Un polambal thangama than veetuku poram. Vandila eru!"

Lavanya sulks and gets in the bike, "Illa anna..."

Tamil, "Ai! Vettuku pogurathu veraikum ethuvum pessa kudathu. Puthu videocam vangi kuduthathu en thapu. Antha ponnu peru kudatheriyathu...ithula anni am..."

They drive away. Velayutham's car comes opposite. Camera shifts...Tamil's bike..Vel's car...Tamil's bike...Vel's car...*Bang*

Tamil, "Youv! Ena ya vandi ottura." Three of them get of the bike.😲

Tamil goes to fight with the driver. Velayutham annoyed at the disturbance comes out. He notices the ice cream stains, is shocked, becomes angry and holds Tamil by the collar. Pooja gasps, "Pa.."

Tamil, "Enaga thappa nenga pannitu, en collar a pidikireinga!"

Vels notices Lavanya and Pooja and leaves him assuming they are a family, "Poo da! Vena adi pattu sagathe."

He turns to look at Thulasi. She peeps out😳. Vel fumes with anger😡 but Thulasi doesn't see Tamil, "Vandiya edu da" to his driver and gets in the car.

Tamil adjusts his shirt. Lavanya notices Thulasi in the car as the car leaves. Without a second doubt, she takes her new videocam and shoots the number plate of the car!

Lavanya nags her anna, "Nan mudivu panitein avunga than nama veetu marumaga, yenoda anni!"

Tamil, "Anni ya? Yaru?", realising what she is going to say, "Ama thaiya. Antha ponnu inga enga vantha?😆"

Lavanya, "Nee paka liya? Antha car la than iruthanga."

Tamil looks at the car dumbstruck, which is fading by the horizon😳.

Lavanya waves her hand in front of his face, " Hello anna! Antha car poi 5 nimisham achu. Vandiya edu."🤣

Tamil, "Ada chi. Vaa. Summa. Ena vechu comedy pannalana unnaku thukam varathei.😛"

He looks at the bike mirror and adjusts his hair, smiles to himself.

Lavanya(to herself), "Nalaikai RTO office poi intha vandi number yaaru odathunu pakanum. Approm easy a anni ya kadipidichiralam. Annain ku theirya vendam"😲

Thodarum!

I don't like the idea of Lavanya going alone to the RTO office!
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