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Posted: 12 years ago
Nooo!!! Tamilll😭
Now very conveniently GW will bash Thulasi's luck!

Was expecting sweet scenes from you😉! This is such a shock😛!!!

Nice to see you writing again inspite of being busy!!!😊

Waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Esther..now you qualify to be part of the CTs...
just the way they may have taken it...but great of u to have avoided gw's blabh-blah and cut it short...
waiting now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohhh sighggg TA has accidentt?? Hope nothing serious with him...😕 Nicely written Esther akka... Aaama GW oda gutter mouth avoid pannathu innum superb.. Waiting for next part.. Whats gonna happen??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh now accident for Tamil?? Waiting to read next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great start Esther akka⭐️, omg Tamil accident a!!😲 Can't wait to read the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Episode 7: Part 2

Sounds of window opening and paper rustling ...

Tamil's feet are cold ...he wriggles his toes as he slowly opens his heavy eyes ... he squints ... the light coming through the curtains near his bed is too strong ... his side pains ... he puts a hand around his ribs ... he finds a bandage around his ribs ...

"What? ... What is this?" ...Tamil's voice croaks harshly ...

"Mr. Tamilarasan ...are you awake ... how do you feel now... " a voice speaks softly.

"Who is it? Where am I?" ...Tamil's struggles to speak ...

"Don't worry Mr.Tamilarasan ... I'm your nurse ... you are in the hospital ... you had an accident but you're safe now ..." the voice belongs to a young nurse ...

Tamil shifts his body slightly ...he feels better now ... he enquires in a stronger voice ... "Thank you sister ... I remember falling from my bike ... but I don't remember who brought me to the hospital ..."

The nurse smiles ... "Your mother and your wife admitted you in the hospital ... she just went out to the temple ... don't worry ... you have badly scraped the flesh on your side and you have a few scratches on your knees ... you'll be fine in a day or two ... please rest now ..."

The nurse straightens his pillow and goes out silently ...Tamil sighs and lies back on the pillow ...

Suddenly the door opens and GW enters followed by Charu ...

GW and Charu smile on seeing Tamil awake ... GW puts some vibuthi on Tamil's forehead ... "Tamil ... are you feeling better my son ... luckily we were passing that way and saw you on the road ... now you're safe... when your wounds heal we can go home ... "

Tamil strains his head to look behind her ... with a puzzled expression ...

GW asks him ... "What is it my son ... tell me ... I'll get it for you ..."

Tamil says ... "Ma ... The nurse said that you and Thulasi admitted me ... Where is Thulasi ma ... I want to see her ..."

GW giggles ... "The nurse must have thought that Charu is your wife ... now ... now ... Don't worry Tamil ... Thulasi knows you are here ... she will come when her father brings her ..."

Charu pipes in a sweet voice ... "Amanga ... Thulasi knows you're here ... she'll come when she is free... ippo neenga rest pannunga ..."

Tamil sighs ... closes his eyes tiredly and goes to sleep ... he dreams restlessly ... Thulasi smiling ... Thulasi laughing ... Thulasi dressed like a bride ... Thulasi sad ... Thulasi crying ... he mumbles brokenly ... "Thulasi don't cry ... my love don't cry ..."

Suddenly Tamil wakes up from his uneasy sleep... he is sweating... his heart is beating fast ... he looks around dazed...

He can hear hushed tones ... suddenly he hears Charu whispering loudly ... "I must give a box of sweet to the nurse for calling me as your son's wife ... but this is not enough ... Thulasi needs to suffer more... Aunty you are so great ... how well you have fooled that stupid country girl ..."

GW laughs softly and whispers back ... "Illaya pinna ... you have all the rights to be my son's wife and my daughter-in-law ... anyway naan oru great actress ... I have made that stupid girl believe that Tamil is missing ... that no one knows where he has disappeared ... I have convinced her that this is because of her bad luck ... ha ha ha ... how she shed buckets of tears ... a real crybaby... "

Tamil is shocked to hear the venom and hatred in both their voices ...

Thodarum...


Edited by thendralfan007 - 12 years ago
Gisel thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aiyoo amma...I was actually blinking my eyes!
Everyone is expecting to read "your style" of the story!
This is such a shock and surprise!
And without doubt you have once again proved you are a great writer and can handle all emotions so beautifully...

Waiting for your style sooner hopefully😉!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow esther..unexpected second part...TA realising abt gw and xxx so soon...great going...waiting for more to unfold...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Esther.. nice twist... TA missing nu GW told to Thulasi..and TA heard that by GW herself... good going..👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow superb Esther akka.. So fast he knows their plan.. Veryyy niceee..Lets see what TA doess.. Hope he dont fall in any trapp 😕 Good kaa 👏

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