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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Aw..so nice Rishu!
The story is so much in the flow...
What is Tamil going to do?
So excited...

Though we all know the story, with the screenplay being different, we really look forward to what is going to happen! What do you say guys?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Nice job with this part what will Tamil do now??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
just loved yr description of someone putting the bag acros his shoulders...
a good flash back..
waiting for more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
lovely surprise and nice continuation Rishi!!! keep rocking!!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Very well written Rishi.. Got reminded of old TA.. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Wow nice Rishi.. Yess good old moments ah irinthichu 👏 Esp TA patthi, lovelyy...
waitingg 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Thank u all for ur wonderful comments.
This part is very lengthy and full of masala in it. Hope u understand and enjoy.😊

Episode 3

Part 3
Deepa and Kalyani bought Thulasi to the park.

Thulasi, 'Ethuku di enna intha parkuku kutituvandinga?'

Kalyani, 'Onnum... illa... Thulasi summa thaaa'.

Thulasi, 'En rendu perum oru mathri irrukkinga?'

Deepa slowly, 'Thulasi..., athu.. vanthu sir than ingga varasonnaru.' Turned back and pointed distance Tamil who was approaching them.

Thulasi looked at Deepa and Kalyani for doing this.

Deepa, 'Thulasi, ellam unnoda nallathuku thandi solrrom sir solra planna kellu.'

Watchman came to their place and called Kalyani to take their auto from the entrance gate. Kalyani went to take her auto and Deepa too joined her leaving Thulasi and Tamil alone in the park.

Thulasi, 'Neega ethukuga vanthinga'

Tamil, 'Etha paru Thulasi vala valanu izukama matteruku varan ketuko. Unnoda scholarship form ku naan marupadium apply pannierukan athamatiri counceling um Deepa unkita sign vanki universityiku annupitanga so nee kandipa padikura attula entha santhakamum illa'. Thulasi felt happy but she doesn't know whether this is for good or bad.

Tamil continued 'Aanna un appa pechaketkuranu un lifa spoil pannikatha.'

At a distance three men were watching their conversation one man called Vel through his phone 'Aiya Thulasi amma antha allukita marupadiyum parkla pesikituirrukkanga'

Vel angrily 'Avanga renduperaium nama guest houseuku izuthutuvanga'

Thulasi turned back not to face him and she also didn't accept his plan.

The goons came at the back of Tamil and secretly pointed a gun at his back saying 'Marriyathaiya prechana pannama vanthudu illa ingaiya renduperaium konuduvom'.

One goon neared Thulasi. She turned and was shocked to see the goon. Goon, 'Amma vozunga vanthudunga ma Velayutham aiya ungala kutikutu varasonnaru'.

Thulasi looked at Tamil and asked through her eyes 'Whether we need this?'

Tamil silently looked to his left to see small children playing in the park and at his right direction he saw couples and old people talking. So he decided to listen the goons.

Two goons took Tamil to one Sumo and Thulasi in another Sumo. Deepa and Kalyani saw this and they both got tensed and they followed the sumo and Deepa called kanaku and Joseph and said the information.

In Vel's guest house

The two goons pushed Tamil in the center of the hall were Vel was sitting putting his one leg above another. 'Oh ivaru tha antha herova'.

Tamil gave an angry look to him. The goons caught both his hands. Thulasi was bought to the same hall 'Vadi en azagu sundariyaa'. Thulasi looked down and was weeping.
Vel, 'Enna da parkuringa Daniel, avanuku kodukura adi la Thulasiya suthama maranthidanum'.

Daniel started to hit him two goons were holding Tamil. Vel came near him, 'Unnaku Thulasi ketkutta!!!' He went to Thulasi who was crying continuously seeing both her and Tamil's condition.

Vel holding her cheeks from her chin, 'Kalyanathuku konja nalla vechukittu unnaku kaadal ketkutha evan oda'.

Tamil shouted, 'Velayutham... Thulasi mela kaiya vecha Tholachuduveen!!!'. Showed his full angry face. For a second even Vel and his Goons got stun. Thulasi looked blankly at him.

Vel, 'Enna da pannuva ah sollu' repeating the word he came forward to him.
Tamil forcefully raised his leg and hits Vel. Vel falls to the floor to a distance. Thulasi was shocked to see this. Even the goons never expected Tamil will do this. Other goons ran to fallen Vel for helping him to stand up. Tamil pulled the man who is catching his right hand and he hits him. And the Left man started to hit him and he (tamil) misses it by bending down and hits the goon on his stomach. Thulasi was looking here and there tensed and she was very afraid that what is going to happen next.

The gun man came and pointed a gun at the back of his head. Vel angrily came near him. Tamil immediately pulled the hand of the gun man to face him and snatched the gun. And he pointed gun at Vel's forehead. Vel fearfully raised his hands up. His goons also got afraid. Tamil to the goon 'Padikkatha unnaka gun pidikatheriuthuna NCCla train ana ennaku evalavu theriyum.' He looked at Vel angrily. 'Intha mathiri nerra guna point panna sollikodu Velayutham un allugaluku, Muthukula illa'.

A goon who came at the back of Tamil hits him at the back of his head with a flower vas. Tamil slightly turned to the man. Thulasi came near Vel who snatched the gun from his hand.
Thulasi shouted at Tamil, 'Vennam ithaelam ethuku ah?' she cried. 'Enna pan nallum unkkala nan Virumba mattan'.
Tamil Turned to face her. He couldn't stand properly. Since he got a hit at the back of his neck and head. His eyes were slightly closing but he somehow managed to open his eyes to see Thulasi. Vel gave a villan smile to Thulasi and Tamil.

Kanagu and Joseph arrived to the place and they ran to Tamil's place calling 'Dei Tamilu'

Thulasi, 'Thulasi yoda vazkai ava appa nenacha padi than nadakkum'. She cried closing her eyes. And she continued, 'Neega en ah kapathinalo illa ena pannallum naan en appava maranthu, unka petcha kenpanu ninaichingala??? sathiyama illa'. All these times he was staring at Thulasi.

Vel felt very happy to hear this from Thulasi. Vel to his men, 'Ithuku mela evena adikkanuma vittu vankada.'

Vel holds Thulasi's hand but Thulasi felt uncomfortable and slowly she removed her hands from him. Vel smiled at her and moved from the place.

Thulasi too moved from her place and turned to see Tamil who was still looking at her. He felt dizzy and he falls on his knees but he didn't close his eyes. Joseph and Kanagu holds him. Moving out of the hall wiping her tear she cried. Tamil closed his eyes and falls on the ground.

Thodarum...

Edited by Rishi87 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Good episode today with the different elements Rishi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Super! Super! Super!

That's all I can say!!!

Same question, what is Tamil going to do next?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Gisel


Same question, what is Tamil going to do next?

he will do what is good for Thulasi 😉
an na thulais romba than ennalaiya mudiyala😆 avoiding him like anything

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