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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Beautiful writing, Hollie. The description of the scene is nice and the idea of archanai thattu is also very good one. And an element of suspense also. And a good reminder of those good old days, jolly good person TA liked to take Vadai and tea.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Great parts Hollie 😃 It looks real and cute with the friends. Esp
Deepam part is nice and lovely 👏 waiting for next... Enna achoo? 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Awesome part Hollie!
I actually sat up straight towards the end only to be fooled to see the 'thodarum' sign!
Waiting!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
another great part hollie...
a nice cute scene..so dreamy...
waiting for next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Here is the next part!😃


But then in one second is Thulasi dragged backwards, the archanai thattu falls on the ground. The truck drives away (ama athaan seiye theriyum😡). Thulasi stands in shock, her body vibrates. Tamil shouts to the truck, ''Adai pathu poge theriyata, madaiya!!😡'' The people comes from the side to them. Someone from the crowd calls, ''Yarukum adi padelaiye?!''
Joseph and Kanaku come running. They come through the crowd to Tamil. Grandma comes to Tamil and says, ''Thambi''
Tamil turns and sees Thulasi's grandma. Grandma,''Thanks thambi, nee varathiku enne nadanthurukummo...🤔''People on the side sees there is nothing happend and walk all away.
Tamil,''Thanks ellam vendam patti, ninge ivalange pattheramma kuttikondu ponge😃.''
Grandma, ''Nee nalla iruppa pa, my petthi lives by you👍🏼.''
Thulasi comes from her shock then she looks at the guy who has saved her. She want to say something, but no words come out. At that time a auto comes there by along. Tamil stops the auto and says, ''Patti ningelum ungande petthiyum ulla erunge.''
Grandma gets in the car. Thulasi looks to Tamil. Their looks crosses each other😳. Tamil hopes if she will say something, but she doesn't and gets in the auto. Thulasi says the address to the auto driver, Tamil listens(now he knows where Thulasi lives). The auto leaves, Tamil is watching the auto, quite awhile he hopes or Thulasi will look at him. And at that moment looks Thulasi out of the auto to him. Tamil feels as if he is floating...😳

Joseph and Kanaku come to Tamil that dreaming far looks in the distance. Joseph, ''Anthe auto poi oru month achu😆.''Tamil is out of his mind. Tamil,''Vange tea kadaiku povom.''

Tamil sits on the bench. Kanaku, ''Tamil, nee ennada ippidi hero maari kalakithe.''
Joseph, ''Yarumme kanele anthe truck vanthetu, nee mathum athe kanduthe, anthe ponna kapathite, eppidi da? Dei nalla kalam yaarukum ondume nadekele.'' Tamil is silent. Kanaku comes to sit next to him and says, ''Dei ennada pathulle kanavillai?''
Tamil looks at him, ''Dei naan ungalutha oru visaiyam sollonum.''
Joseph, ''Ennada?''
Tamil, ''Naan anthe ponne love pannuren.'' Joseph and Kanaku look at each other.
Kanaku, ''Unmaiya va sollure, anthe ponnuku theriyumma?''
Tamil shakes his head. Joseph, ''Ava yaaru enne peru, endu theriyumma?''
Tamil, ''Avantha per Thulasi and inge kitthe thaan avantha vidu.''
Kanaku, ''Appa enneda poi unthe love a proposal pannu.'' (athane poi solle vendiyethu thane😉)
Tamil, ''Ana athulle oru sikkel, ava kum Velayutham kum kalyanam nadekepoguthu🤢.''
Joseph, ''Enna da sollura, anthe kilavan odaiya😆? Thulasi inthe year enne anthe Velayutham ku year enne. Dei Tamil, nee athu oru kalyanam endu ninatchu anthe ponna vitthurade.''
Kanaku, ''Ama da anthe ponnu ku pudikama thaan anthe kalayanam nadekuthu pole. So nee avala vidathe, Unnaku enne help vendum endalum kekalam.''
Tamil smiles, ''Thanks da😃.''

Thodarum!

O happy our hero has saved Thulasi⭐️, nalla kalam ondumme nadekele...

Edited by Hollie24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
👏beautiful scene and interesting conversation Hollie ... could almost feel the floating sensation that TA must have felt when T looked out of the auto...❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Ada, enum propose pannalle?🤔
Waiting!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Gisel

Ada, enum propose pannalle?🤔

Waiting!!!

Wait Gisselu wait😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Very nice one hollie! Loved ur style and its content...waiting for next part
Edited by Tanu. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Well Done Gisel and Hollie!! 👏👏👏👏

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