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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely Smiles!šŸ‘šŸ¼ Ellam real a nadekura maari iruku, really great!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Episode 6: Part 11

Tamil helped Thulasi get out of the car then looked at the auto. He noticed that it was his mother and Charu who was a family friend. He wondered why Charu was there...

Tamil: "Hi Charu. Hey ma. I'm glad you came to bless us..."

GW: "Dei, stop it! What the heck do you think you are doing? I found out you were getting married today."

Thulasi looked at GW then at Tamil. Tamil noticed how she looked a little scared. He gave her an assuring look and told her everything was going to be fine.

Tamil to his mom: "Well mom, you heard right. I wasn't planning to get married today but after hearing you this morning and after the way you threatened Thulasi, I knew I had to get married to her. I love her too much to miss her in my life. Thank you for everything."

GW: "Dei, what are you saying? Why are you thanking me?"

Tamil: "Enna me, you don't know. It's because of you that I get to marry Thulasi today. She was also worried that you may not come to our wedding but see now it's perfect you are here also. "

GW was confused and mad at herself inside.

Tamil faced Charu now and said: "Hey Charu, meet Thulasi. Thulasi, this is Charu a family friend."

Thulasi said hello and looked at Charu who paid no attention to her.

Suddenly Lavanya comes out of the temple and says: "Finally Anna you're here. Everyone is waiting for you."

She sees her mother and says: "Enna ma, you came also? That's good...come inside."

GW: "I am not coming inside. I do not want this wedding happen!"

Tamil: "Suit yourself Maa, but it's time for us to go now." He took Thulasi and walked inside the temple leaving GW standing outside with Charu.

Inside, all the necessary preparations were ready. Tamil and Thulasi went to the priest and prayed during the rituals and pujas. Tamil looked at Thulasi and noticed how she looked a little nervous and worried. He quickly gave her hand a tight squeeze and whispered:

"Everything will be fine. Paati's here with us remember. You trust me right?"

Thulasi looked at Tamil and smiled.

The priest performed the rituals and finally said:

"Mangalyam thanthuna nena. Mamajeevana hetuna. Kante badhrani shubage. Thwam deeya sharadam shubam..."

Tamil took the gold thaali from the coconut on the plate and tied it around Thulasi's neck while everyone threw flowers at them. He then put kungamam on her forehead and Thulasi started to tear up. Tamil took her in his arms and gave her a tight hug while kissing her forehead. They then performed the other rituals and got the blessings of the elders. Everyone was happy looking at both of them together. Thulasi held Tamil's arm now and looked at him. He looked back at her and smiled.

He said: "I love you pondatti..."

Thulasi blushed trying to hide her smile. The newlywed couple Mr. & Mrs. Tamilarasu looked at each ready to start their new future together.

Thodarum...

Edited by Smiles-20 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks everyone for the encouragement and comments. My parts are all finished. Over to the next writer now.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much Smiles!
Lol! You did bring the famous "GW & Charu" combo back!😈
I can so imagine Shanthi Williams and SriVidhya outside the temple scornful.šŸ˜†
Ester akka! I'm sure that's a twist for you!
And I'm sure you can handle it!
Looking forward to your partšŸ˜‰!
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Posted: 12 years ago
good job smiles...u are an excellent script writer...short and crisp and very clear how u want the scenes to be...enjoyed all the scenes...the marriage scene cud be visualised and the pondatti bit..good one...and casually welcoming gw makes for good reading..
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW SMILESS... It wasss soo fantasticc šŸ‘šŸ‘ Like Jaya akka said your an excellent scriptwriter..Loved everybit of ittt...Too good.. We expect more from youu 😃

T&T scene was sooo awww
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Posted: 12 years ago
Smiles very well written.. really good... TT wedding happened by GW and Charu knowing the news before.. haha superr twist..šŸ‘


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Posted: 12 years ago
Well done Smiles ... crisp, full of suspense, and also romance ... šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superr Smiles!ā­ļø Great job, ningelum oru superr writeršŸ‘šŸ¼ Waiting for Esther akka's episode...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Episode 7: Part 1

"Dei Tamil ... what have you done ... you have married a good-for-nothing girl and you're going to regret your action every second of your life ..." GW roared in anger and frustration ...
Tamil turns towards her crossly... "Ma ... please keep quiet otherwise I'll regret that you had come ... I am grateful to you only because you had helped me take the decision to make Thulasi my wife ..."
Suddenly Tamil's phone rings ... Tamil picks up the phone and puts it to his ear ... he nods his head and then says ..."Don't worry Sir. I'll collect it without fail..." Tamils puts the phone back in his shirt pocket...
MM looks at him worriedly ... "Yenna mapillai ... is there any problem..."
Tamil replies ... "No Mama ... it's my bank manager... he has asked me to collect a document from a client ... so I have to go immediately ... please take care of Thulasi... I'll be back in an hour's time..."
MM pats his back "No problem ... mapillai ... you carry on ... we'll wait for you at Kanagu's hotel..."
Tamil turns towards Thulasi and leans forward to whisper in her ear ... "Sorry kuttima ... I'll miss you my sweet wife... I'll come back soon ..." ... Thulasi blushes and nods her head ...
Tamil takes Kanagu's bike keys and starts the bike ... he turns his head to look back and sees his kuttima looking at him wistfully ... he smiles reassuringly and mouths "I love you ..." and waves his hand... and goes away ...
Lavanya invites her mother and Charu to join them for the marriage feast ... they refuse rudely and make their way to their car...
Lavanya shrugs and joins the happy crowd leaving the temple and making their way to Kanagu's hotel for the wedding feast ...
Meanwhile Tamil has collected the document and is on his way back to Kanagu's hotel ... his heart soars as his mind replays the events of the day ... his breath sings ..."My kuttima ... my wife.." ...


Suddenly a goat streaks across the road in front of him ... to avoid hitting the goat Tamil swerves his bike and loses control ... his bike crashes down ... Tamil falls from his bike ... and hits the ground hard ...
Thodarum...

Edited by thendralfan007 - 12 years ago

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