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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
I could read all parts of the episode by you today only, Hollie. It was all very nice reading.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update hollie
I will continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well written Hollie... Good one..šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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EPISODE 3

PART 1

In Tamil's house

Lavanya and Tamil having there dinner

Tamil, 'Pooja kutti saptala'

Lavanya, 'sappitu thugita anna.'

Tamil thoughtfully shaked his head 'hmm..'

Lavanya slowly asked her brother 'Anna ne aduthu enna pannapora?'

Tamil looking at her and after chewing his food said, 'Theriyala Lavanya. Thulasi ku padipu onu than lakcheeam aasai enu solra. Avala eppadi compel panna mudium solu.'

Lavanya putting her left hand on her fore head, 'loosa anna nee!!!' Tamil blankly looked at her. And Lavanya put some sense in Tamil's head. 'Theliva than irrukkiya illa Thulasi accept pannikulanu ippidi agitiya. Anna, anni padikannumnu solranga an na avanka vetula irrukuravanga avangala antha kazavanukku kattiveka parkkuraga. Avanga nalla padikura ponnu anna meritla vera pass agi irrukanga ippo Velayuthatha kalyanam pannikuta avangalala padika mudiyathu ithuva nee kalyanam pannikuta padika veppiya matiya???'

Tamil without any hesitation told "kandipaa" Lavanya, 'attu!!!'

Tamil having an idea in his mind and taking his last mouth of food in his hand asked 'Lavanya, thulasi meritla pass na kandipa avanga school layo illa govermentla yo avalloda padipuku help pannuvanga illa.'

Lavanya swollowing her food completely, 'ada aamma illa.' Lavanya's mind voice, 'hm.. nama ellam meritla pass aaki irruntha thana theriyarathuku'.

Tamil, 'Thulasi paddicha school ethunu theriyathe'.

Lavanya taking her and her brother's plate moving towards the kitchen said 'Atha pathi nee kavalapadatha anna ennaku kalyani yoda auto stand enga irrukkunu theriyum avankakitta ketta sollaporanga.'

Tamil was happy that he got a chance to prove his love for Thulasi.

Next day morning Lavanya went to Kalyani's auto stand, 'Hi Kalyani'.

Kalyani, 'Neega'

Lavanya, 'Naan Lavanya, annaikku unnga auto la vantheene'. Kalyani remembers. 'Naan Thmaiz Arasu oda sister'.

Kalyani, 'inga ethaku vanthinga.'

Lavanya, 'illa thulasi paadicha school ethunu katka vanth.'

Kalyani, 'ungaluku ethuku?? Unga annan alla Thulasi neeathu romba upset agitta thayavasengi ponga.'

Lavanya, 'Aiyyo Kalyani naan Thulasiku help panna thaan vanthu irrukan.'

She told what her brother told about Thulasi's education and Kalyani too felt that Tamil will help in this matter and told her school name.

Lavanya updated her brother and Tamil immediately went to Thulasi's school and got the information that the application for the government scholarship was given to her chitti.

Afternoon in Thulasi's house. Thulasi and patti cleaning the puttina. In the middle of the hall, MM and Padma counting the money which Vel gave for the marriage. The door bell rangs Thulasi went to open the door.

Padma, 'Aye neelu.' Thulasi stopped and looked at padma. Padma ran to her room to keep the money safe. Padma came out of the room and ordered, 'ippo thara'.

Thulasi opened the door and was shocked.

Thodarum...

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Edited by Rishi87 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Who can it be?? Tamil or Lavanya??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was so natural when Kalyani said Thulasi was upset...

It could be Tamil or VelsšŸ˜›!

Waiting Rishi!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well done Rishi!šŸ‘šŸ‘ I think it would be Tamil ... maybe he has come to ask MM for T's hand in marriage

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely part Rishi!šŸ‘ Good write style!šŸ‘šŸ¼ Waiting for the next part...Tamil a thaan irukonum endu namburen...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Nice Rishi... I think its either TA or Lav, twist na it can be Vel too 😃 Waiting for next part... Lovely written šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u all for the wonderful comments
Episode 3

Part 2

Thulasi opened the door and was shocked.

MM peeped his head to see the person and asked, 'Yaar neega'

The person wearing his bag in cross ward and holding his bag looked at MM. Raising his right hand towards his face 'Vannakkam sir. En perru Thamiz Arasu naan bank la velai parkura'. He moved his eyes slightly to see Thulasi and smiled at her secretly.

Coming out of the shock Thulasi went to her patti and stood behind her patti uncomfortably. Patti smiled at Tamil as she remembers him saving Thulasi and she also know what happen between Tamil and Thulasi yesterday. Patti whenever she sees Tamil felt that something good is going to happen in Thulasi's life.

MM, 'ulla vaanga.' Tamil came inside the hall. MM, 'Ukkarunga. Enna vishayama vathu irrukkigga.'

Tamil, 'ingga Thulasi kerathu yaaru sir.'

Thulasi was surprised for one second "why this man is asking as if he doesn't know about me."

MM looking at Thulasi, 'En ponnu than.'

Padma came near MM and said 'itho ivathan athukku enna venum.'

Tamil, 'Sir naan Thulasi school ku poi erruntha avanga unga ponnuku engineering padika governmentea kodutha scholarship form koduthangalam' Padma started to rotate her eyes here and there. The other three doesn't know what Tamil was talking about. Tamil continued 'Government 50% help pannuvaga mitchanthuku enga bankla irrunthu loan vakina enga banka padikurathuku pannam kodukum.'

MM with confusion 'Neega entha form pathi pesurringa.'

Before Tamil could tell Padma interfered in there talk and said 'amma atha enkkita tha kodutha antha missu.' Thulasi looked at Padma confusingly. 'kalyanam agga pora ponukku ethuku atha form ah chilichutan.'

Tamil stood up in shock. Thulasi started to cry looking at her father and patti. Patti shouts at Padma, 'Adi pavi ithu engai yachu nadakkuma thana vantha Saraswathiya kizuthutanu vaai kusama solriya'. Thulasi cried more hearing those words from her patti. Tamil felt bad for Thulasi.

Padma, 'Haai! Kazavi vaya mudu Saraswathi ya Saraswathi un pethi Velayuthata kalyaman pannikuta Lakshmi ya varuva.' Looking at her husband 'itho parunka iva padichu yaara kapatha pora ithuva Mohan paddichana itha vetta avan nalla parthukuvan. Ivva epadiyum innoru vettuku pogaporava thanna.' MM listened to his beloved wife blindly.

Tamil, 'Yean ivankka padicha intha vitta parthuka mattangala.'

Patti, 'Nalla kelunga thambi.'

Tamil, 'Itha parrunga nalla padikura ponnuku kalyanam panivetchu avanga lifea spoil pannathinga.'

Padma, 'Nee yaaru atha solurathuku veliya poya.'

Tamil gave an angry look to Padma. Padma got afraid of his looks and asked her husband, 'Ena... yaa... parthutu irruka nama vettu kaa vanthu nammala moraikuran veliya annupu ya'.

MM, 'Velya ponga ennaku theriyum intha vettuku enna pannanumnu.'

Tamil moving out of the house got irritated with padma and MM's talk looking at thulasi said "Unga ponna baliyaka than theryum unkkaluku". Thulasi heavily crying ran to her room patti came behind her to console her.

Thodarum...

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Edited by Rishi87 - 12 years ago

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