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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gisel

Wow👏! Inspector irunthathu maranthai poche!
MM ithukai maritana😆? chameleon!😡
Thulasi oda kuthvizhaku treatment a?😉
Waiting...

Vel admitting to hving killed his first wife, holding a gun over pavi n threatening to finish heroff..inspector with the tape ready to arrest him..shud be enough for MM to see light...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow... Jaya akka superrb... feels like watching it entirely.. great one ka... hmm wonder who is the person from behind.. may be T to kaapathufy Pavi... 😕

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Posted: 12 years ago
Jeya akka great one👍🏼...already waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good one Jaya akka 👏 Waiting waitinggg
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Posted: 12 years ago

Scene 6

Vel falls screaming and sees that it is patti who hit him with a suthi..

The gun in vel's hands falls down but vel immediately picks it and holding his other hand to his head gets up and says:

Vel: ai kelavi nee ya'.iru unnai enna panren and goes to strangle her..

Immed TT rush and try to pull patti'TA pulls the paati and T tries to bite vel's hand..

Just then vel lets go of paati and takes hold of T and holding the gun to her head

Vel;;nee enna ninaikiri..nee engitenthu thappika paarkaraiya..intha aal (pointing to TA) nimbi nee engitaya vilyadraya..and tells everyone..yaaravathu vantha naan suttooduven..and tells his men..neegal poi antha TA ve pidingol da'

The men rush towards TA, joseph, and kanagu also join..insp pandian fires and comes and there is a big commotion..

Padma takes pavithra and rushes to hide...

pavi''amma, akkavum patti vum maatita..avaale kaapathuvom..

padma; summa irru..neevaa inge..

mohan enge..

(mohan not to be seen or heard)

Vel takes T down the corridor..deepa and kal follow..

T just fights, vel who is holding her and she bits his neck and when he shouts takes the opportunity to pull the gun from his hand, gets down

By then TA pulls the gun from one of vel's men and comes towards T..

By then T aims and shoots vel and'

The bullet strikes his chest and what the'vel falls down..

The men immediately shout..

Ellarum vaangol da'namma thalaiye suttutan intha TA, thinking he did it..

TA, shocked, but recovers and looks at a totally dazed T..

He throws the gun in his hand and takes the gun from T's hands'by then vel's men rush..

Inspector pandiyan also hurries and tells TA..seekiram po ingeyanthu..naan pathukiren..

TA tells T come soon..she just stands there shocked..

TA pulls T's hands and runs and deepa and kal follow'TA shouts to joseph to start the car and quickly TA goes out with T, deepa and kalyani, locks the door and asks kanagu to lock the back door and rush to the car'.

Just as TA pushes T into the car, someone pulls his shirt from behind'

And thodarum'

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Edited by vjayam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Vjayam all parts were great thanks so much.

Who's next on the list?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow super athirady ah irinthichu 👏 Loveddd itt ⭐️ Btw your finished ah?? Its me ah now? 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamz.

Wow super athirady ah irinthichu 👏 Loveddd itt ⭐️ Btw your finished ah?? Its me ah now? 😕

oh no i hv one more scene to go...the most awaited one..
and then to u...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Scene 7

Enga aiyaa kettika ninacha ponne kootinda nee enge da pore? Nee kalyanam kattikalam ninaikarai 'athu thane unodu plan, saying Daniel pulls TA by his shirt and hits out at him..

Immediately TA ducks and catches hold of daniel's hands and says

TA: venda..enkite vachukathe'naan nallavaalku onnu na ethukum asaiyamaten..and pushes him .far'

Joseph comes out of the car and so does T..

Kanagu meanwhile comes from the back, tells TA

Kanagu'Dai, Tamil, neegal pongol da.ilayana time aiyudum'naanum, josephum ivanai gavanichitu varom..

TA quickly pushes T into the front seat and sits in the drivers seat and starts the car'

Immediately after starting the car, TA calls someone on the phone and says, neengal minaadiyai ethina ellam readya vachungol. Da'approm panam kooda koncham thevai..adhyum ready pannanum'engayavathu ATM irunthuchu na konda va..naan vandiya engayum nipata virupa padalai..

Hearing this T, deepa and kal panic..

T..wondering'nijamave ivan kalayanum pana thaan kootinda poraana? Already propose panirkaan..ana ippo?

She looks at deepa with a pleading questioning look and deepa asks TA,

Deepa: sir nammal ippo enge porom?

TA: koncham summa irukela..naane bayangara tensionle iruken..ellam unga friend oda life mattarthuku thaan'naan ipidi panina thaan unga friendku oru paadukaapa irukkum..

.

T is puzzled by this..oh no..is he taking to marry me..will that only safeguard me'no but not like this and now..

T: neengal theliva solarela ilayana naan carlenthu kudhichoodava?
TA: enna',immediately grabs her hand and says..amam nee senchaalum sevai..ana inime ithu ellam mudiyaathu..ipo thaan naan unodu kaiya pichutene..

T, frightened a little..vidungol enodo kaiya..seri naan onum seiyamatten..

TA looks at her with an fierce look and leaves

T, deepa, and kalyani keep quiet and deepa looks out of the window.

T keeps mum and just stares at nothing and looks back at the events that happened..

Suddenly they are pulling into a building and the car comes to a stop..

The door opens and TA waits and tells T..

TA: ena ..ippo erungungol.

Deepa and kal get down and are excited seeing where they have come to.

T gets down and still in a shock is unable to realize..

Deepa: T, paaru di..nammal engg college le irukkom..

T: looks around and almost faints.and suddenly she finds TA's arms around her.she looks up at him and thinks'is this true, can this be'is this how my God is?...

Slowly TA steadies her and calls out to her'T stands still, still not able to absorb..

She finds her hand being pulled and sees TA walking in front tugging her along like a father ..and leaves it only inside the building..

TA: ippo unga kavalai pocha? ..neengal formku vendi queue le nilungol..naan poi mathe velai ellam parkuren..

Deepa and kal, thank him but T is still dumbstruck..

The form is got and T signs it. When the guardian sign is needed, T just looks at TA with everything told by her eyes, eyes that signal him to sign for her behalf, taking on the role of a guardian..TA is unable to let go off her gaze and slowly deepa puts the pen in his hands and tells, sir, neegal guardian eduthule sign podarela..

TA shaken out of his reverie, says,,aa..and signs..

T is then called to formal acceptance and comes out with admission secured in the engineering college, with a promise of education that she so much wanted..

She looks at the person responsible for all this and a brief flashback of how fate brought this person into her life and the incidences after that'her near accident on the road, how she got nearly hooked by the rowdies on the road, how she wud have been totally destroyed by vel, how the chance to her education would have remained a dream, but for this one person and rushes to fall at his feet'.

TA shocked pulls her up and asks

TA: enna ithu ellam? Ithu ellam ungalaale thaan aachu and proceeds to give an electrifying philosophical talk, leaving the girls looking up at him speechless.

TA avoids but his look is drawn upto the girl, whose face is forever in front of him, both while awake and in sleep, in his dreams and in all acts ever since he laid his eyes on her and the ice-cream dropped, only to lay his eyes on the cream of his life..and

Once his eyes met hers, he was done..he was melting into her gaze..

My whats happening to me'why cant I pull away my glance..

T looks at him with everything she had in her eyes'never having known anything but patti's and deepa's comfort words, she was lost in this person's nature'his openness, his friendliness, his possessiveness, his frankness, his angry stature, and her heart was in her eyes..and

TT continued to look on'.

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Edited by vjayam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you gisel for letting me find the writer in me...wanted to always pen something and thanks for the opportunity to test my skills for whatever it is worth..i thoroughly enjoyed writing it and do hope all of u who read it also do . while on the job cud not help thinking that the original creativity must be appreciated and thank the original framework with which I cud build on...
thanks for the encouragement and my best wishes for the next in line..shamz is that you? then it shud be jujubee for u...all the same, my best wishes so u can share yr creative best with us...
Edited by vjayam - 12 years ago

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