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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely Rishi and full of suspense 👏👏👏... and now eagerly waiting for your continuation ... Jaya!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Episode 4
Scene 1
TA is totally lost for a minute. He just looks at T's wounded and dismayed expression..He cud just feel her sense of dejection but he wondered why?
T: ellam pochu. Ivalo varushama naan ethukaga poraadineno athu ellam veena pochu. She looked at TA through her tears and said..
ungallaku theriamma ellarum ennai odukali odu magal thaan koopuduva.. ennodu appavum yen ennai namabala theriyumma...yenna avarukum en melai sandehama thaan irukku..engai naanum enodu amma ve marri avare vittu odi poyuduventhu.. ippo athu seriyanna marri thaane...and she again puts her head down and starts crying..
TA's heart goes out to her and he looks at her with new eyes..his eyes mirror his love and affection doubled now..he now understands her stand and thinks,
enna oru ponnu..avalodu appa marubadiyum emarra koodathukaga oru kettavane kooda kalyanam panarthuku aval readya irukka...
he looks at patti helplessly..
TA: enna patti..yen T ippidi addam pidikirra..(inside TA cant help admiring T's determination and integrity...)
Patti: ammam TA. MM venda sonnathaan aval velai kalyanam panna matta..
TA: yen patti, ivolo nalla magala avar purinjakaga ippidi oru karyam senchukurar...
Patti: ellam T odu chitti panra velai...aval enodu payane disai thiripi vitturkaal...Manickam oru appavi..avanukku mattu padma odu ketta ennam therinchana avane intha kalyanam niruthuvaan..
suddenly TA goes into a thinking mode...
He goes into the backyard and dials someone, says something and
Ta: appidi mudiyma da? ok..appo nyabagam irukkitum..ellam correcta, seriyana neruthukku nadakanam..kaalele 6 manikule ange irukanam...
Just as he is about to make another phone,
he hears patti shout..
ada Tamil..inge va..
TA comes running..patti is worried and says, T ve kaanam..naan oru nimisham kanne moodi murugan kitte ivalodu nanmai ki vendi vendinen...kannu thorundha paarthal, avale kaanam..
TA: enna solarel patti..ungal peithi kku enna oru aavesam...and he runs out
TA, worried sick calls out T , Tulsi..his heart beats fast..he thinks kaduvule...silently praying that she shud be safe, both in the road and from vel, he calls joseph and kanagu who have gone out to buy some tea. thinking she cannot have gone far they just go in diff directions but T cannot be seen..TA wonders, cud she have taken an auto? where is T?
at another place patti is busy calling out to Lord Muruga...
search thodarum...
[where is T? will she land up at the manadap in time for the marriage...Who was TA talking to and about what?]
Thodarum...



Edited by vjayam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Jaya akka!
Inga irunthu oodi poitala?
FF la kuda nama sollura pecha Thulasi kekamateingiralai😛!!!
Waiting to watch(read) how Tamil stops the marriage...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice job Vjayam!! Where is Tulasi off to?
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely continuation Jaya ... and still full of suspense!!! waiting for the next part!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely episode Jaya akka 👏 Ur very creative, didnt expected Thuls will go out nu. You made us to wait, what will happen?? Hope TA somehow stops the marriage 😃
Great onee, nicely written ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Supero super Jeya akka👏 Nalle idea that Thulasi runs away endu..where is she? Can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago

Scene 2

At the road

A well-dressed girl looks about her with an anxious expression:

T knew that soon TA and his friends wud soon be in all directions looking out for her..she had heard patti's scream and had quickly hid in the car park 2 houses away.

She had to go to the mandap and not let her father down..but the crux of the matter was she did not know which mandap MM had fixed her marriage with vel'(that was how much she cared about it)..what should she do now? Maybe call her father? How.will some 24/7 medical shop be open? By now there wud be commotion in the mandap..she keeps walking slowly, hiding behind cards and trees the moment she heard bike sound..soon she saw a shop open..she has to go and request them to make a call? And slowly heads there..

What she does not see is a group of guys drinking and making merry in a car nearby..

At the mandap..

Vel, the whole gang along with padma and her group have woken up from their respective states..

Padma to pavi: yaaru da athu'T enge poi paaru..antha paavi pasangal'namma asaile thani podathuki irukunam..

Pavi comes with deepa and kalyani: amma akka ilai room le'deepavum kalyani akkakum theriyillai..

Padma to mohan and pavi: pathaya ena karyam panirkka ungalodu akka..avalukkum avalode amma voda budhi thane..

Deepa: itho parungol ungalodu asinga pechu ellam ungaloda irukuttum..engalodu friend pathi ethum sollathengal'

MM enter: enna padma enna achu..

Athu kule oru booming voice..

Vel: enna MM, enna nadakirathu inge. Ennodu pannam nalla sappitutu ippo aale vachu engale ematha parkalaam ninaikiraiya? Unnai marri alle ellam policete oppo aduchu mutti ku mutti thattanum pa'ippo puriyathu en unodu mudha manavi unnai vittu odi poyita..ivalo kevalam anna oru aal nee..

MM: angry, Mapillai,

Thilaka's husband's mind voice: (amma nalla mapillai'mamanaarum mapillaiyum kitte thatta ore vayusuaga ippo thaan naan parkaren..che')

MM: koncham mariyathai odu pesungal..

Vel: Unakuum ellam ethuka da mariyathai..kevalaum panathuku asai pattu ponne katti kudukara appa thane nee'ippo paisavum eduthukitu thiruttu velaiya panarai..enge koopidu T ve..

MM looks at padma.

Padma with a constipated look..: enanga, T avalodu room le illai..

MM shocked: ena solarai

Vel: naan solalai'nee ellam oru kevalam ana oru aal

MM: avasara padathengal mapillai..T inge engayavathu thaan iruppa..

Vel: itho paaru..T mattu konjam nerathukulai varatta, naan police kitte nee ennodu panathe thiridirkai solli complaint kudupen..

MM: illai mapillai'

Vel: dai enada mapillaindhu'po poi T enge paaru..unnai ellam enodu mamanaar solikave vekkam a irukku..

..At joseph's friends house

TA gets on to his bike..

TA: kavalai padathe patti..T inge engayo thaan iruppa..

Joseph, kanagu neenga short cut le pongol..

Naan main road le poi thedurren..

TA felt that T wud be near by and she wud be alert..

So he takes joseph's cycle and proceeds keeping an eye all round..

A little away he spots 4 to 5 rowdies surrounding a girl and his heart skipped a beat'he rings joseph and kanagu..

And

Thodarum'.

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Edited by vjayam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! Thulasi doesn't know the madapam???
What a twist!👏
Can't wait to read TA saving T from the rowdies...
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Posted: 12 years ago
U girls (gisel/hollie.rishiii, jaya akka) rock...all parts r nicely written...very interesting and filmy...progress of scenes in each & every parts are too good and well portrayed...feels like watching a real scene...i am now scared seeing everyone🤣...looking fwd to read Jaya akka's next part...i knew Jaya Akka is not going to let T reach hall that easily..😆

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