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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is 4 p.m. and Kanaku state at the house of Thulasi. He stands there without anyone can see him. He suddenly sees a auto for Thulasi's house stop. There steps 2 girls out of the auto. Kanaku hears them talking.
''Deepa, Thulasi beach ku varuva thane?''
''Vare matha thaan, summa ethavatu solli thaan kutthi kondu pogonum.''
''Sarri nee poi kutthi kondu va.''
''Sarri Kalyani.''
Kanaku watch them, The girl walks in and comes back with Thulasi.
Deepa points to the auto, ''Thulasi ulla eru.''
Thulasi, ''Engedi porom?''
Kalyani, ''Oru different place ku porom, nee ange poi iruka mathe...''
Deepa, ''Ellam sollirathe pa, avave pakethumšŸ˜†.''
Thulasi, ''Ennedi suspends vaikure?''
Deepa, ''Athu appidi thaan. Muthal nee eru auto kulle.''
Thulasi gets in and Deepa too. Kalyani starts the auto and drives away. Kanaku calls Tamil.
Kanaku, ''Dei Tamil!''
Tamil, ''Solluda.''
Kanaku, ''Tamil, Thulasi yaaro 2 girls ode beach ku pora.''
Tamil, ''Enne beach a?''
Kanaku, ''Ama da, dei ithan da unnaku nalla chance Thulasi the proposal pannurathukušŸ˜‰.''
Tamil, ''Hmm ja...ithan nalla chance. Naan ippeve ange poren.''

It is 5 p.m. Kalyani stops the auto. They come out. Thulasi looks around and she sees the beach.
Thulasi, ''Inge ennethuku vanthom?''
Deepa, ''Oru timepass ku thaan. Nalla iruku enne inthe place?''
Kalyani, ''Ama Deepa, anthe sunset a parunge, wow lovely a irukku.''

They sit in the sand and watch quietly to the sea that moves back and forth. Thulasi sees that the beach is empty. Thulasi feels calm inside. She looks around and then she sees in the distance a sand drawing. She stands up and walks there.
Deepa, ''Thulasi enge pore?''
Thulasi, ''He oruka vange ange povom. Etho sand ille draw panni iruku.''
Kalyani and Deepa walk with her. They see the sand drawing. The sand drawing looks like Thulasi😲.
Deepa, ''Thulasi, inthe drawing unna maari irukku!''
Kalyani, ''Deepa, maari ille, ithu Thulasi thaan.''
Deepa, ''Thulasi, unna pathu...yaar drawing panninathu?šŸ˜• Athuvum super a irukku pake?''
They look around. Deepa sees a little further that something is written in the sand. They walk over and Deepa read the text, ''Are you Thulasi?'' They look at each other astonished. At that moment someone comes towards them...

Thodarum!

Yaar anthe sand ille draw panniyathu? Tamil a ille vere yaaro va?šŸ˜•

Edited by Hollie24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
nice one hollie...waiting for the next part already...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
So it is the beach where Tamil proposes!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
simply superb hollie ithuku mela I dont know what to say
waiting for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Wow wonderful Hollie..Really waiting for the next part. Sikirama post pannumaa šŸ˜†
Awesomeee ah iruku Im scared that it could be Velayudham nu, plss nooo šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Nice Thendral breeze flowing in this part I like it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
gets more and more interesting Hollie ... keep it up!!!šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

''Hi.'' Thulasi looks up and sees a guy with a smile on his face. She immediately recognizes the face.
Tamil, ''Ennaiye theriyumma? Andaiku anthe accident...''
Thulasi, ''Ja nabagam irukku...'', Deepa and Kalyani don't know who he is. Deepa tap her and whispers in her ear, ''Thulasi yaar di avar?šŸ˜•''
Thulasi, ''Naan sonnenan elle andaiku yaaro ennaiye kapathinethu endu, athu ivar thaan.''
Deepa, ''O anthe superhero a?šŸ˜†''
Thulasi, ''Summa iru di.''
Deepa, ''Sarri ma, nee continue, nange summa irukurom.''
Thulasi asks Tamil, ''Ninge inge eppidi?''
Tamil, ''Summa enthe friend ode inge vanthenan.'' Tamil's mind voice, ''Naan unnaiye thedi thaan vanthenan, athe naan eppidi solle poren o...šŸ¤”''
Thulasi smiles to him. Tamil, ''Ippe nange second time sandhikirom, ungande name enne?''(athu ungaluku theriyatho?šŸ˜†)
Thulasi, ''Naan Thulasi, ungande name?''
Tamil, ''En peyar Tamil. Ivange yaar?''
Thulasi, ''Ivange thaan enthe friends, Deepa and Kalyani.''
Tamil greeting them, he says to Thulasi, ''Naan ungaluthe oru visaiyam sollonum.''
Thulasi kijkt hem vragend aan, ''Sollunge.''
Tamil is suddenly nervous. He decided to remain calm, but he didn't succeed as expected.
Tamil, ''Naange muthalum santhichanange nabagam iruka?''
Thulasi, ''Athan anthe accident.''
Tamil, ''Ille athuku muthalum santhichanange.''
Thulasi is thinking, but doesn't know. Thulasi, ''Illange nabagam ille.''
Tamil, ''Andaiku ninge ennaiye anthe park ille ennaiye mothinathu? Penthu anthe icecream...''
Thulasi knows it and says, ''O ama...sorry inge naan etho avasarattille...''
Tamil, ''Ah che ninge ean sorry solluringe, athu paruva illa...''
Thulasi, ''Ama ninge enno sollonum endu sonneninge?''
Tamil, ''Ah athuvantu...naan ungalaiye...'' He can't say anything. Deepa and Kalyani look at each other. Kalyani, ''Sollunge sir?''
Tamil says, ''Sarringe naan solluren, ennode vange.'' Tamil walks away. The girls look at each other amazed and walk with him. Tamil stops at the Thulasi sand drawing. Tamil sits down with his knees in the sand. He writes something. Thulasi looks curiously. She sees ''I Love you Thulasi...'' in the sand...😳

Thodarum!

Ennum oru part iruku...Thulasi inthe reaction enne? Athan next part ille varum. Athu varai konjam wait pannunge😃

Edited by Hollie24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
oh..nice one hollie...so cute...can well imagine the scene...writing on the sand...romantic...and this time kal too is present...
cant wait for the next one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Tamil on his knees😳!!!

Wow! Beach, the breeeze, the tension! Loving it!!!

And Deepa teasing Thulasi, so natural!

Love the way you give suspense šŸ‘!

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