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TO THE THIRD THREAD OF

INTRODUCTION

have u any how met super bubbly sharon???-wel u'll meet here...

have u met attitude filled swayam??? u'll meet here...

met cranky rey before???- u'll meet hare...

met composed spicey kriya ???

well u'll find here..

Kriya and Sharon Ghai understand only two things in life: Partying and spending their rich uncle's money. But eventually, their uncle gets sick of all that and kicks them out of the house to teach them a lesson. So what do the two sisters do from there? They move into the first apartment they can get their hands on--with two boys as housemates n who happens to be even their bose. Not only do these two girls learn about love, they learn about the troubles of life when their life took a sharp turn and what it takes to get to where you want to in life.

LINKS: (ALL LINKS ARE HYPERLINKED)
CLICK HERE: THREAD 1 (CHAPTER 1 TO 12)
THREAD 2 (CHAPTER 13 TO 19)

INDEX

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22+23
24-29
30
31+32

THREAD 4

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CHARACTER SKETCH

Kriya Ghai: Age 21. under the custody of Sanjay dobriyal , a very rich business man in the state of California,after the death of her mother-father and fraternal twin of Sharon Ghai. Kriya loves to party, especially with her sister. But of the two sisters, she's a little more sensible. Even though she partied through most of college, she was one of the smartest people in the graduating class. But she never did anything with her life because she was always dependent on her uncle's money.she loves her sister more than her life and possesive n protective 4 her sis.

Sharon Ghai: Age 21. under the custody of Sanjay dobriyal , a very rich business man in the state of California,after the death of her mother-father. Sharon, just like her sister, she loves to party, a college diva,full of life,funny at time,. But unlike her sister, she's a little more irresponsible and didn't try as hard in college. After college, all she did was party and spend her uncle's money, along with Kriya. Also loves her sister

Rajveer singhania: not in this world'but now also he is the Biggest tycoon of bussiness world history'.everyone respects him'before death he writes a will of his property worth millions of dollars

Reyaansh Singhania: Age 24. Lives in Malibu, California , best friend, Swayam. Rey is a very cocky, play-boy & cassanova ,flirty. He thinks he can get any girl he wants (and generally does), until he meets Kriya.but @ the same time he is workalcohic n very much dedicated to his work.Rey works at a very boring publishing company called Malibu Publishing C..(y he is working there is mystery we'll get to know in story)'he lives with swayam in an appartment.

Swayam Shekhawat: Age 24. best friend, Rey. Swayam is a very calm,he is workacholic..he hates his family as his dad married 2nd time..he never made any effort to make up with his stepmother nor she tried'hence he left his home.. He generally keeps to himself and doesn't go after girls (even though he can easily get a girl). He's never been really crazy for a girl until he meets Sharon. Swayam works at the same publishing company with Rey, and also hates it there.

Sanjay dobriyal: Age 44. Sanjay owns a huge coorprate business in Malibu, California. kriya and sharon calls him uncle , friend of kriya's and sharon's dad. After the death of his friend and his wife 10 years ago, he took in Kriya and Sharon,raising them as his very own daughters'well (his character is mystery) at that time kriya n sharon were 11years old'

Shivam dobriyal: age 22 ,son of sanjay dobriyal

Extreamly idiot , dumb, useless guy, greedy, selfish, uses girls as a tissue paper, believes in one night stand'

(credit 4 this pic goes to dazzlerfan)

Abhishek dobriyal: age 24, son of sanjay dobriyal

Same as his brother but little more dumb ha ha

Vicky mehra: age 24, a well established lawyer

Best friend of rey n swayam, his dad was advicer in rey's dad's company,

also loves his wife deewani(neha) a lot

Neha mehra: age21,wife of vicky mehra, also a good lawyer

Best friend of kriya n sharon, loves his deewana a lot'''.

side characters

pinky (receptionist)

sweet ,bubbly ,fun loving...entry- ch-5

(practically a cook in house, loves to cook )

have a lot of chains of restaurants across the globe

jovial, possesive about his kitchen, funny ...

entry- ch-8

ROBERT (GARDENER)

jovial, funny, good at heart..consider reyam ,martin as his good friends entry ch-10

MISS MARIA(rey's nurse n love interest of martin) entry ch-11 n lovely n jovial

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Posted: 12 years ago

VOTE OF THANKS

first of all guys am really happy my last update got 107 likes..

thanks to all my readers who appreciated it

& while starting this thread am little nervous

i think i lost the touch of writing

n special thanks to some special readers (i wont take any name this time,sorry 4 that)

Throughout this whole journey of my ff,i met many categories of friends..

1. who constantly encouraged me..(thank u !! u meant the world to me)

2. silent readers: ahaan!! i am really happy as some of my silent readers turned into active one (thanks a lot guys..your voice became the beats for my heart😃)

3. some of he readers whose comment length increased as the no.of my chapters increased..(i am obliged 2 u 4 this)

4. again new silent readers whose no. of likes brought smile on my face..

5. ajeeb prani: ye un logo mein se hai jinhone mujhe dhamki di n mera jeena mushkil kar diya 4 not updating(yes u all come in this category😉)

6. msg attacker: they asked me to update through sending numerous msgs..(thank u yaad dilane ke liye that i write one ff n its my responsiblity to continue it)

phew...once again thank u guys...may be all urs ways & gestures r different but ur intentions r same...

i am really glad to have each n everyone of u

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CHAPTER 20
ignore the typing mistake not rechecked

recap: flashback of swaron & kria's scene...kriyansh confession of contract marriage to family..viha cute scene

SLAP

SLAP

" you IDIOT ..U DUMBASS ..U FREAK..WHAT THE HELL DO you THINK OF URSELF..U bas***d ..U SON OF THE BI***H..U KNOW WHAT??IT HAPPENED ALL BECAUSE OF U.."

SLAP

this was sanjay dobriyal who was slapping abhishek after getting news about rey's & kriya's engagement..he held abhishek by his collar & slapped him once again..shivam came for his rescue..sanjay was infuriated that he took out his gun from his pocket & pointed towards abhishek .. shivam tried to stop sanjay from shooting..but sanjay was really angry..he was about to push the trigger but suddenly shivam came in between..

" dont come in between ..otherwise i'll kill you too..he almost ruined everything.." sanjay roared in anger

" dad listen ..nothing is ruined .." shivam tried to pacify him

" what do you mean ?? can't you read the news paper all over the world its same news..kria ghai is going to marry reyansh singhania..i dont know from where this f**king singhania came in between.." sanjay said frustrated

" i know dad but i still have the trum card.." shivam said in confidence

hearing of trum card ,sanjay stopped..he looked at shivam with questioning eyes..to which shivam only winked..

" this time let me play dad..THE GAME IS ON.."

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@ singhania mansion..

"..THE GAME IS ON ..MR. REYANSH SINGHANIA.."

"THE GAME IS ON ..MISS KRIYA GHAI..OOPS MRS. KRIYA REYANSH SINGHANIA.."

"dont you dare to call me that!!"

"why?? arent we going to marry??"

"whatever!! i wud surely win this game.."

"i'll make sure you wont"

this was kriya & rey standing in between the living room, fighting like kids for a small piece of yummy chocolate cake only left , where whole family including maria were trying to stop them as their verbal war was turning into physical fight where kriya was holding his collar & pulling by her left hand & her right hand was stretched in order to reach the cake and rey was holding her waist with his right hand and his left hand was also stretched to grab the cake before kriya..both were trying their best to grab the last piece ,ignoring the proximity and intensity ,they are sharing unknowingly..

" kriya baby leave it ,i'll make another one for u.." martin said unsure

" rey leave her.." maria said to rey

"no way maria she needs to learn some manners"

"look who is saying..reyansh leave me..& let me eat it..its you who need to learn manners"

"no way darling ..the last piece is mine"

" no way ..its mine.."

suddenly vicky yelled "STOP IT !! BOTH OF U!!"

suddenly sharon chirped " thanks vicky .."

& she gulped the last piece down in her stomach..
all were looking at sharon.. kriya & rey were in same position.. kriya & rey holding each other but they were unaware of their promity instead they were startled by vicky's shouting & were glaring at sharon who ate their cake..

" what ?? i havent committed a crime & waise bhi in fight between two cats , there is always monkey who wins.." Sharon said smartly

hearing this..swayam started laughing ..
all looked at swayam with questioning eyes..

" did you just hear d that she is calling herself monkey..

he laughed holding his stomach tightly..
sharon glared at him .. vicky chuckled with neha..

" well bro i have never seen you laughing so much.." neha said out of the blue

silence flew across the room..all looked at swayam ..

without saying anything he left from there..

sharon & kriya were confused ..why did neha said like that..although they were now a part of the house ,their family, but still some of the secrets are yet to be revealed & are still unknown to eachother..there is more yet to come now..they all have to see more in life.. & know more about eachother..every individual hold some secreats in their life..

kriya & rey were still in same position & still unaware..
the atmosphere filled with silence still was blowing in the room..then rey suddenly said

" guys i think we should leave for our respective work.."

" yes , its pretty late , i should leave now.." maria said looking at her watch

" guys lets get back to work." Rey interrupted..

all nodded but nobody moved all were looking at kriya & rey ..kria & rey looked at them & were confused why all were looking at them..just then they both noticed their position they flinched back away from eachother..

"ok maria let me drop u" martin offered

kriya & rey went in different direction ..sharon too left to her room..she was still thinking about swayam..for the first time she realized that he was different ..he never laughs contently..Recalling all her memories from the time she met him ,he always tried to keep others away from himself..he don't really gel up with everyone..inside the house around family members ,he always showed his real personality..what is he, but in outside world he would just be with himself..not bothering anyone..well not really..he always bothers her..

sharon was still thinking about swayam,just then kriya shook her up..

" sharon ??? SHARON?? kaha khoyi hui ho???" kriya shook her

" umm nothing.."

" ok you get ready & come to office am leaving..bye!! meet you at office.."

sharon smiled & they both bid gud bye to eachother..

kria stepped outside the house just then a car came & stood in front of her..rey was sitting in it & opened the passenger door for her & shouted "MRS SINGHANIA HOP INSIDE"

" reyansh am not a frog & please dont call me that.."

rey became really serious..in a very serious tone he said "oops sorry MRS SINGHANIA am sorry for that ..i will not call you MRS. SINGHANIA from now.."

" reyansh shut up ..dont try to act oversmart .. you are again calling me that .. do you think am fool??"

rey acted like he was thinking..seeing which kriya fumed in anger..

" ok ok ..peace.." rey said making peace sign

" why are you here??"

" to take MRS. REYANSH SINGHANIA to office.."

" dont call me that .." kriya glared at him

" ab toh MRS. SINGHANIA bhi ni bola maine.."

" argh!! reyansh you are impossible..i dont want to come with you ..get lost.."

she walked away ..while rey was smiling & chuckling at kriya seeing her innocence..

" i am possible bas ek baar try kar ke toh dekho.." rey thought

as soon as he completed the sentence ..kria looked back at him..he stopped chuckling instantly

" did she just heard it??" rey scratched his head

but kriya started her walk..

" hey MRS. SINGHANIA wait!!!"

" dekho reyansh i can go by myself & mujhe MRS SINGHANIA bulana band karo.." kriya said

" REY!! its rey not reyansh .."

kria got why he is calling her MRS SINGHANIA ..

" but i prefer reyansh & i will come to office i dont need your help & unlike you, i work..not just goof around with garbage like chicks hanging around .."

rey enjoyed her annoying look..but he was angry at kriya's comment that he doesnt work..he drove his car by her side & said..

"ok miss ghai you've got 15 min to reach office & if you wont reach in time,be ready to face the consequences.."

with that he zoomed off with his car leaving a shocked kriya behind ..
kria came out of the trance & started walking fast , she knew if rey gets in his cranky avtaar ..he would again ask her to do something stupid like last time & this time she dont want to end up in bathroom with him..

she tried to see for a cab but she didnt find it & literally ran on the side footpath to reach for the office on time..

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@home

sharon was waiting for swayam in the living hall..

" where is he???" Sharon asked

" he'll be coming in few minutes" neha answered

just then swayam came there..

" chale??" swayam said

" hmmm.."

" bye bhai.." neha said

swayam didnt said anything ..he just walked out..neha didnt felt bad , she knew the feelings that swayam was going through..

" bye neha.." Sharon replied

" sharon ??" neha stopped sharon

" what is it??" Sharon asked

" can you see that bhai is alright??"

sharon smiled & replied "sure"

swaron were in car..nobody spoke a word..swayam was in his own world..he was just driving seeing straight..sharon pressed the music ,but yet swayam didnt said anything ,that was unusual..this was not so swayam shekhawat..
usually he would argue with sharon over the song..swayam took a sharp turn..which was opposite route to office..

" swayam hum kaha ja rahe hai??" Sharon asked as he took different route

swayam still didnt answered..he stopped the car in front of the restaurant..

" are we gonna have lunch here??" she asked cheerfully

swayam didnt answered her..

" are we on a LUNCH DATE???"

swayam still didnt answer..only sharon got a glared from him..sharon sighed hopelessly..she just followed him..they sat on a table..a waiter came and stood beside her to take order..sharon being sharon started to place order..

" do you have indian food??" Sharon asked innocently

" yes mam.." waiter replied

" ok then bring chicken biryaani, kadhai paneer, 5 naan, 1 masala dosa, 1 raita, 1 plate salad, 1 daal makni,kashmiri pulao..hmmm & nothing more thats it..swayam tum kya loge??"

swayam was shocked , he had not even heard the name of some items she has ordered..

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@office

kria reached the office & greeted pinky..she looked at her watch "shit !! am 5 min late.." she hurriedly asked pinky where is reyansh..

" hey calm down kriya you are just 5 min late by the way congrats for getting engaged.." pinky said cheerfully

" thanks but your boss may eat me alive.."

" cool down girl he is rey not swayam.." pinky assured her

kria ran from there yelling "but now he will be in cranky avtaar.."

" oops best of luck dear.." pinky replied

kria buzzed in the lift, no one was in the lift except one man who had a cap on his head & was looking down at the floor, basically hiding his face..kria didnt paid any attention to it she was least bothered ..she was worried about her scolding which she would surely get from her so called "cranky boss"..

she never noticed when that stranger went towards the lift's button & pressed "stop button"..the lift came to halt.. kriya came out of her thinking ..she looked at the man & was shocked to see him..

" TUM???" kriya asked

" ha main ??" man replied

" tum yaha kya kar rahe ho & why did you stopped the lift??" kriya asked in shock

" tumne kya socha ,tum puri duniya ke saamne mera majak bana dogi toh mai kuch ni kar paunga?? that bloody singhania will always protect you from me??" man replied coming closer to her

" shut up abhishek ,reyansh ke baare mein ek shabd bhi bola toh mujhse bura koi ni hoga.."

yes that man was none other than abhishek dobriyal..after being dumped by kriya he was angry but after talking to sanjay dobriyal his rage for kriya grew more & having kriya became his motto of life ,whether by hook or by crook, doesnt really mattered to him..

he came near to her while kriya moved back until her back hit on the walls of lift..

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rey in his cabin

" yeh baatcutter ,abhi tak kyun ni aayi.." rey thought

he was constantly trying her cell phone she wasnt responding..she was late for 10 min..

" baatcutter !! nice name ..even mrs. singhania is also good.."

before him kriya's cute angry face flashed ..he couldnt help but chuckle at her cute face..

" argh!! rey tujhe kya hogaya hai..waise ye abhi tak aayi kyu nahi..??"

he called pinky

" hello sir.." pinky replied in receiver

" pinky, its rey not swayam dont be formal.."

" hey rey..so what do you want me to do ,cancel all the meetings haan?? & by the way how is your would be wife?? you must be having fun with her in your cabin alone..??" pinky informed

" woo wo wo..pinky hold down & romance toh tab karunga na ,jab woh office aayegi.."

" rey dont lie she already stepped into the office here 5 min ago.."

" what ?? but she hasnt reported in my cabin yet.."

" she must be in her cabin.." pinky said

" oh!! ok i didnt checked there..thanks.&..bye"

" bye & have fun.."

rey slided the curtains blades of his cabin & tried to see in her cabin but it was empty..

he came outside his cabin & tried to call her again but it wasnt any of the good..he was getting worried now..his intuition was telling him that something is not right..
he thought to check ..he thought to go on the ground floor by lift..he went to the lift & was constantly trying to the number..

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in lift

abhishek grabbed her by her arms

" itni possesive that too for that moron..akhir usme aisa kya hai jo mujhme nahi.."

slap

kria slapped him ,the sound of slap echoed in the lift which added fuel to his anger..

he grabbed kriya wrist with his hand ,pressed her & was trying to kiss her on her neck..kria was filled with disgust at his touch..she was struggling under him & tried to push him away but he was more stronger than her..

seeing kriya not agreeing to him ,he grabbed her her hair & tilted back so that he could get enough of her & kiss her..seeing animal in abhishek's eyes,she pushed him, harder this time & with full strength, abhishek fell down on the side, she stumbled to press the "start" button but succeeded..

it took time for abhishek to wake up ..he pulled kriya & pressed her against him ..he cruely cupped her face & was forcing himself on her..he was trying to kiss her..while kriya was trying her best to push him tears were constantly flowing through her eyes..

he was about to place his lips on her ..but fortunately lift's door opened and the creaking sound of lift's door disturbed him ,rey was standing there & was looking in his cell , while kriya shouted his name "REYANSH" which was enough to acknowledge him ,rey was stunned to see the scene..kria pushed abhishek & ran towards rey , she hugged rey tightly & cried on his chest ..he hugged kriya back very lightly, he was ragging with anger & was seeing at abhishek who was standing before him..he was brought back by kriya's sobs,he lightly kissed her on her hair while staring at abhishek in anger..

he asked kriya to look at him..
"kria look at me.."

she looked at rey, he placed his one of his palm on her cheek & said

"i'll be back in few minutes ok"

with that he pushed abhi & himself in the lift..he pressed the random buttons ..the lift of the door closed..

kriya could only see reyansh's face inside the closing door..

rey turned back & held abhi by his collar and roared

"HOW DARE U???"HOW DARE YOU TO TOUCH KRIYA??"

he gave him a punch & abhishek's nose started bleeding..rey again punched him in his eyes ..abhi fell down aside..rey was continuosly beating him..when he felt abhishek was not responding..he checked his pulse.he was alive but unconscious..he pressed the button of lift and reached ground floor..he called guards..

he was roaring..

"GUARDS!!!"

seeing him so much angry ,no one even dared to ask what happened..they were shocked to see sweet rey into a angry one..
" yes sir.."

" take this man into hospital & MAKE SURE HE WONT BE SEEN AROUND THIS OFFICE.."

pheww!!!

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chapter-21

recap: swaron lunch date, kria-rey-abhi lift fight,

@ restaurant

" sir..SIR order please.." waiter waited for swayam's response

swayam came out from trance..

" please cancel the order that madam has given instead bring 2 cup of coffee.."

sharon was shocked ..

"how can u..??"

before she can say anything swayam turned to waiter & said "thank u"

waiter gave them a weird look & went away..

" why did you cancelled my order..i was going to pay my bill ..u dont have to pay it.." Sharon crossed her hands across he chest and flared at him

" we are not here for lunch sharon.."

" toh hum kya yaha coffee date par aaye hai??" Sharon said sarcastically

" its not a date.."

" i know..agar mujhe date par jaana hota toh tumhare saath nahi balki robert pattinson ke saath jati.."

" me too.. i would go with kristen stewart.." swayam retorted in same tone
soon their coffee also arrived..

they were silent for the time being..sharon was getting hell bored..but swayam was feeling good ..he was happy in the silence just sharon beside him ..even he was amazed why he was feeling good..just happy, was it because of sharon ?? he himself didnt knew..

"chup rehti hai toh itni buri bhi nahi lagti.." but to his bad luck, sharon chirped at the same time when he praised her mentally for being silent..

" swayu hum yaha kyun aaye hai???"

before he could answer..they were interrupted by someone..

" hello mr. shekhawat" man greeted

"hello mr. andrew.." swayam smiled and replied

" here are the papers sir.." Andrew handed some papers to swayam

" oh please have a seat andrew.."

" actually sir , i came here for lunch with my family ,my wife & my children..can you please.."

swayam looked at the table where andrew's family were sitting ..they were happily enjoying their time..swayam signed the papers & greeted him

" have a nice time !!" swayam smiled

when andrew was moving towards his table..his 5yr son came running towards him & hugged his father ..swayam's eyes filled with tears..which he removed instantly..
he got up & went towards the car..sharon had seen his tears ,she didnt want to disturb him, she quietly followed him..

they sat in the car & swayam was constantly seeing straight..there was pin drop silence..sharon placed her hand on his shoulder..swayam looked at her..she could see the pain in it..

swayam stopped the car on one side..he came outside the car & stood beside his car & stared at the sky..sharon too went out , she placed her hand on his shoulder..he looked in her eyes.. & instantly hugged her tightly, sharon was numb for a minute but composed herself soon..

" swayam..swayam look at me.."

swayam realised what he has done..he was feeling awkward as he showed his feeling to someone for the first time other than rey..

" am..am really sorry sharon.." he apologized

" its ok.."

with that he was about to go but sharon caught his wrist..
swayam looked at her..

" you know neha is very lucky to have u.."

" thanks.." swayam smiled

" can i drive??" sharon asked

" why??"

" because today i had the honour to have a coffee date with MR. SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT.."

swayam couldnt help but smile at sharon's over dramatic line..just then sharon's phone rang..

"ok we will be in an hour..swayam we need to rush to home , neha was crying.."

" what??? is she fine??"

" yes dont worry, lets go home & find out.."

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@office

all were shocked to see rey's bleeding hands ..he called pinky..

" yes rey??"

" break all the contracts & deals with dobriyals..i dont want to have any relations with them.." he ordered

" yes..rey what happened, is everything fine?? is kria fine??" pinky whispered

hearing kria's name, he rushed in the lift..

he hurried to his cabin..kria was not there..he went in her cabin too but didnt find her..he searched whole place but couldnt find her..he went back to his cabin sat on the couch placed in his cabin..

he held his head with his palm & was thinking about kria but then he heard some sobbing ,he rushed to his washroom, kria was sitting on the floor hugging her knees & crying..he went to her ,knelt down & placed his hands on kria..

" kria??" rey whispered

kria looked up & instantly hugged him & cried out loud..
he caressed her head & back..he whispered again

"kria ,shhh..main hoon..abhishek will never harm you again..now stop crying.."

he took kria out of the washroom ,made her sit on the couch & was about to get up to bring water but kria holds his hand..

"OUCH!!" he creamed..

then he noticed blood on his palm..his fear for blood took over him..he began sweating , he became numb..

kria watched his pale face & saw him becoming numb..she remembered the way rey behave seeing blood..she quickly took her purse ,took out a hankerchief and tied it to rey's hand..a drop of tears fell into the rey's hand which brought rey back,he looked at kria who was crying & tying handkerchief on his hand..he placed his hand on hers..she looked at him & said

"sorry yeh meri wajah se.."

"shh isme tumhari koi galti ni hai"..

" nahi rey woh tumhe chot lagi.."

" i said na isme tumhari koi galti ni hai..n waise bhi MRS. SINGHANIA ko MR.SINGHANIA hi bacha sakta hai.. you see i am a superman ,i eat lot of burgers & icecream.. & sharon ka ghatiya pasta..

kria burst out laughing & smiled through her tears..

just then rey's phone rang..
he heard someone crying..he looked at the caller id ..it was from neha ..

" hello.."

" hello bhai.." neha's voice cracked

" neha what happened???" rey asked getting tensed

" bhai can you please come home..please.."

neha was sobbing continuously..

"bhai please"

" neha dont cry am reaching home ok.."

" ok bhai.."

kria stood beside him & asked "kya hua??"

" pata ni neha was crying..lets go..they both rushed towards home.."

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they(kriya-rey , sharon-swayam) all reached home at the same time..

neha was sitting in the sofa & munching chips with pepsi in her hand..n vicky was standing like a fool seeing at her..they were shocked to see her smiling & looking at tv..swayam asked vicky by his eyes

"what happened ??" to which vicky replied by sighing in hopeless manner ..

" hey all of u???"

she greeted smilingly..

" NEHA WHAT THE HELL..KYU TUMNE HUM SABKO CALL KIYA???"

swayam literally shouted at her which made neha scared..tears started to swell in her eyes..she threw the popcorn & pepsi from her hands..

martin came out from the kitchen with a tray of yummy pastry in his hand.. he was shocked to see the scenario..

swayam was angry & his angered showed on his face..thats it..

neha started crying loudly throwing her tantrums..
rey , martin & sharon rushed towards her, they glared at swayam..while swayam just got scared on getting glares from them..

rey hugged her ..

" princess shh..i am here na.."

" swayam ..how can you talk with neha like that.." Sharon scolded swayam

" i'll kill you swayam shekhawat.."martin too threatened him

swayam gulped hard , but managed to defend himself..

" what she keeps on troubling others, she dont know how others suffers because of her..she has become stuborn & you all are spoiling her, look at vicky ,he is fed up of her .. and her tantrums.."

swayam said it in a one go..only to get deathly glares in return..n hearing this, neha cried more loudly..

REY BHAI NO ONE LOVES ME..*SOBS* EVEN SWAYAM BHAI DONT LOVES ME..*SOBS*..EVEN VICKY ALSO DOESNT LOVES ME..*SOBS*

" MR. SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT you both vicky & you ,dont have ANY RIGHT to shout at my sister cum daughter-in -law like that.." rey scolded them

" appolize to her,vicky.." kriya said for the first time

" but why me???" Vicky asked

only to return glares from martin & rey..

" okay.." Vicky gulped

" swayam you too.." Sharon said

" okay.." swayam & Vicky both said in unison & in defeat

they both kneeled down in front of neha & while holding their ears..

"we are sorry princess"

neha peeked at them from rey's hug .. & smiled at them.. seeing her smile, everyone took a sighed of relief..

just then kria's phone rang..

" excuse me guys.."

she went in a corner for attending the call..she came back, smilingly..

" kiska phone tha.." Sharon asked

" woh orphanage se tha..they said children were missing us.."

" i want to go to orphanage .." neha said out of blue

" but now..??" Sharon asked unsure

" am not coming , i hate kids.." swayam declared

" but i love them.." neha argued

" neha its already afternoon.." Vicky also reasoned

" i want to go..rey bhai please.." neha looked at rey pleadingly

" ok ok we will go.." rey assured her

" yay..she squilled in joy.."

"but i want vicky & swayam bhai to join us..,martin call maria too..it will be gr8 picnic together with kids.." neha declared while throwing the actual bomb

o..o.. now that was really hard..taking swayam in between kids..

" i said i am not coming.." swayam said

" why?? why not??" Sharon asked

" i dont like kids.." swayam answered

sharon turned towards everyone..

" does he bites kids???"

neha giggled at sharon's question & said "no" while giggling..

" then swayam shekhawat you are coming with us.."

" no am not & who are you to order me ??"

" are you pregnant???" Sharon asked out of blue

all were shocked at her instant question ..that too out of the context..

vicky wispered to kria "is sharon all right?? i mean , dont you think this is out of syllabus question???"

" just trust her.." kriya replied

" WHAT??" swayam asked in shock

" yup answer me.."

" no way.. are you nuts..??"

" then why are you throwing tantrums??? you are coming thats it.." Sharon reasoned

swayam didnt said any thing ,he headed towards his room..

" hey where are you going ..??" Sharon asked

" i dont want to go like this..can i change.."

" oh come on SWAYU !! at least you can smile.." Sharon smiled and teased him

swayam fakely showed his wide grin & said

" is that ok miss sharon , now can i go???"

all stood up in shocked rather than surprised.. they all giggled when he showed his 32 teeths ..sharon skipped a heart beat ,she never ever thought that swayam would do that..she felt happy inside but covered up & chirped like a small kid..

"O-M-G SWAYU?? YOU HAVE SEXY DIMPLES.."

with that swayam thought earth to tear apart & burry himself inside ..his face flushed with embarrassment..he didnt looked here & there & just rushed inside his room..

after he went ,sharon looked at everyone.. & everyone looked at eachother..the living room burst in laughter..everyone had a hearty laugh..!!

pheww!!!

its over...

precap:orphanage with kids, a fight ..entry of storm

ps: ok guys plz hit like button n give comment

any suggestions n criticism is invited...feel free to say anything..i know i lost my touch of writing, i am sorry 4 late update..feel free to complain swaron less kriyansh more,kriyansh less swaron more..??i tried my full to give justice to each n every character..i know viha is less in this sorry...

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crazysky

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

yup Chetu i know which category I belong..ha ha ha..Kya kya kiya..

chal ab mera res lag gaya...
Wait for it i can t wait more..

unres

Loved it Chetu..
Did u just say u lost touch..nakrebaz..kuch nahi gaya..
Fiannly as u updated after so long..after so many wating and warning..
I would say say i wanted to hug u now..
u know wat kriyaansh scene it stole way the worries..

Yup S KR has that power...
The way rey protected her..MRS.Reyaansh Snighania wala part and the way he comforted her I just love it..
Now to Swaron..Yiup shron has the power to make Swayam change his decisions..
What was the paper dat Swayam signed?Y am i feeling something wrong abt the papaers...

And with VIha Neha has def mood swingss.sab ko shock deti hai yeah...Loved it...

And Next update plz make it preety fast..
By Preety fast i mean by weekned of coming week..
Kal karo tho sone pe suhaga..Par now agar maine woh pucho tho tu mujhe dande leke maregi hai nah..

Edited by asmaju - 12 years ago

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

i scrapped u asking to res...

and u never replied...

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

awesome...
ah finally ur back...
missed u so much all this days!!

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star_2012

@star_2012

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

loved the update

MR singhania and MRS singhania(cute☺️

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spicyrays

@spicyrays

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

ah... u updated ... yippie...👏👍🏼
👍🏼m so happie lastly u updated... it luks lyks ki u updated aftr years bt do do chapters dat was a complmntry treat... loved it...
chapters was reallie awsm... specially cake nd teasing part of rey nd kriya nd neha nd all... was reallie fun... to read... just luv thnx for updating...
nw hopin for nxt update soon...
tc...

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