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CHAPTER 22




MAYA KAPOOR (REY'S MAASI) : strict & bossy





recap
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kria-abhishek-rey lift tiff...sharon-swayam coffee date...neha mood swings...plan to go to orphanage..



all went to orphanage named "SMRITI NIKETAN" which was named after krisha's mom ..


the orphanage building had a big playground which was covered with boundary walls,which separated it from the farmhouse next door,orphanage was situated at the outskirt of the city.. hence the environment of the area was like heavenly soothing.. it was very fresh & positive environment around the orphanage.. only few houses near it..


they all headed towards the orphanage gate, as they never visited smriti niketan before, kriya led the way .. reyam , martin &maria followed , vicky & neha were coming slowly behind them .. vicky was holding neha's hand with one hand & supported her by placing his other hand around her shoulder,so that she don't hurt herself while walking asshe was pregnant & it was her 4th month going on .. they reached the main gate where the watchman, an old man around 50 , greeted kriya..


" aao kriya beta ?? how are you ?? its so great to see you.. " watchman greeted them


" kaka am fine how's you?? And aapke legs ka dard thik ho gaya??" kriya answered while smiling


Rey was seeing kriya's & kaka's bonding.. they were talking so freely like they were one family.. he felt proud of his "would be wife".. as in todays world no one even actually like to talk to person who works at a low position & here kriya is talking to just a mere watchman..


"KAKA AAP TOH MUJHE BHUL HI GAYE!!" came a voice from behind..

All looked in the direction of the voice, neha along with Vicky came slowly smiling


" oh neha beta ,u too here??after such a long time.. after you got married you never visited smriti niketan.. hum sabko toh bhul hi gayi??" kaka taunted in affection


" aisi koi baat ni hai kaka.. bas thoda busy ho gayi thi.. " neha replied sheepishly


"someone has become fat .. " kaka joked


" kaka!! am pregnant.. !!" neha whined


" i know.. i think a new member is going to be added in the family.. god bless you my child.. " kaka patted her head


" thank you kaka.. " neha smiled


" i can see some guests here.. " kaka said looking behind neha


Kria introduced them all.. as soon as she introduced rey..

" so this is reyansh.. !!" kaka commented

Kria eyes widened & rey was surprised ,he never thought that kriya would share about him with anyone .. "


" i think you all should move inside as neha baby will get tired.. " martin said


They all headed inside.. as soon as they entered inside.. all children ran towards kriya & surrounded her.. she greeted all of them individually.. children saw others.. one of the girl chirped..


One of the girl was jane

" look neha didi too have come to meet us.. di you have become too fat.. "

Jane complained..


While Vicky, reyam chuckled only to get a glare from neha..They suddenly became quite ..

" di where is Sharon di??" anie another kid asked


" mujhe yaha bula ke pata ni khud kaha chale gayi??" swayam thought


" she will be soon here anie.. now you all go & play.. " kriya replied while smiling

" you wont be playing with us??" jane asked


" i'll join you dear after some time.. ok??"


" yay.. " all children shouted & ran to play their games..


Soon an old lady about 48 years old came out of the building to greet them.. her name was shikha..

She was a caretaker of the orphanage.. she was a very good friend of smriti & gautam.. she was a widow & was brought by smriti & gautam to orphanage.. she used to take care of kriya & Sharon secretly without the knowledge of sanjay dobriyal.. she didn't liked sanjay, she always doubted his intentions.. kriya & Sharon were very fond of her .. they used to call her "bua"(father's sister)..

" kriya beta!!" shikha smiled


Kria ran & hugged her..

" bua .. i missed you so much.. pata hai mujhe aapse kitni saari batein karni hai.. aapko kitna sab kuch batana hai.. aur pata hai.. "


Kria was so excited that she forgot that she was accompanied by others too.. she was blabbering after a long time & all were shocked to see kriya blabbering while neha was smiling happily..

" bas bas kriya thoda saans toh le lo.. " shikha smiled

Kria bit her lips..


" i can see some guests.. oh neha OH MY GOD!! Its so good to see you here again.. " shikha exclaimed


" bua .. namaste.. how are u??"


Shikha & neha hugged eachother ,shikha kissed neha on her forehead..

" am so happy for you , am glad you are pregnant!!"


"thank god bua !! at least you didn't called me "fat".. u know what everyone is teasing me here even kriya & Sharon didn't took my side , even kaka called me fat .. did i became so fat??" Neha asked while hugging shikha like a kid


Neha complained like a small kid.. mood swings were overtaking her.. tears started to pile up in her eyes.. before the flood could occur from her eyes ,Rey came & placed his hand on her shoulder..


" no partner, you are not looking fat.. they all are idiots.. okay!!"

Neha smiled at rey's comment.. she looked at Vicky to say something..


Vicky seeing neha ,expecting him to say something.. he gulped and quickly added.. "yes yes.. you are not fat.. its just that you have become round .. round like a .. " fumbling with words, Vicky was finding hard to express & was confused about what to say..


Just then swayam completed his sentence "round like an elephant"


Without thinking Vicky also repeated "YES!! round like an elephant"

All glared at Vicky .. oops wrong move..


Neha started crying loudly like a small kid.. "uwaan.. uuwaan.. mujhse koi pyaar ni karta.. "


Rey , kriya, martin & maria rushed towards neha.. even children ran towards her.. Shikha also tried to quite neha.. But neha being neha & her mood swings .. no one could stop it.. Rey went to her & made her to face him.. she was still sobbing..


"princess they all are idiots i told you before also.. right.. " he asked caringly.


To which neha nodded in"yes" cutely..


" kriya di why neha di is crying??" jane asked


Kria didn't know what to answer.. before she could answer.. jane came forward towards neha & put her hand in her pocket & tried to find something .. she took a candy from her pocket & forwarded toward neha & said


"di don't cry.. here take this candy .. "


All smiled at jane .. she was so cute.. neha smiled through her tears.. Martin came forward, crossed his arms, stood before swayam & Vicky & said..


"you Mr. Swayam shekhawat & Mr. Vicky mehra , you are not getting any dinner today.. thats the punishment for your crime"


"crime??" Vicky & swayam looked at eachother & asked


"yes making neha is crime in our house" maria explained..


"Maria you too??" Vicky asked..


"yes even maria is with us.. " kriya said..


" Mr. Shekhawat you are not going office tomorrow & Vicky you are on leave tomorrow.. you will be with neha all the time & if i get any complain .. you are going to regret it.. " rey threatened


To which Vicky nodded while swayam asked "then what will i do ,if am not attending office??"


"YOU WILL BE VISITING ORPHANAGE & PLAY WITH KIDS & ME" came a voice from behind..

All looked at the direction of the voice.. sharon was standing holding almost 27 balloons in her hand..


"SHARON DIDI.. " all the children squalled in joy & seeing balloons all children ran towards her..


All the kids came & hugged her.. all asked her about her well being.. while she did the same.. She almost distributed all the balloons & was left with one balloon .. she came & gave it to neha..


Neha smiled & was feeling good.. swayam was admiring Sharon & an unknown smile spread on his lips,seeing Sharon with balloons & kids around her .. she was looking very cute & beautiful.. she bend on her knees & kissed a kid on his cheek & kids also hugged her & kissed her..


they were so happy that their "Sharon di" had come to meet them & play with them.. while all this ,swayam was admiringSharon with smile on his lips.. her innocent face.. her shinning eyes .. her pouted lips on kids comment.. her bouncing hairs.. her melodious laughter .. was so cute to see,swayam never noticed her .. now after seeing like this with these kids sharon's respect in swayam's eyes grew much more & his smile became wide..


All were shocked to see him smiling widely.. Sharon came & stood before him ,placing hands on her hips..


"so mr. Shekhawat ready to spend the day tomorrow with me.. ??" Sharon asked..


Swayam was still in his Sharon-land..

"cute hai na.. ??" vicky whispered in his ears..


"hmm.. " swayam answered , still lost in Sharon..

vicky pinched him..


"OUCH!! Vicky what the hell" swayam shouted at the Vicky..


All started to giggle but stopped by seeing swayam's angry face..

"no way i am not going on a date with u.. " swayam complained


All looked at him surprise..

"waise dude no one said , it's a date!!" rey smirked


"but if you want we can arrange a date for you with Sharon.. " martin said..


Hearing this swayam's face became pale.. but he covered it by saying

"no way .. !!"


"Oh come on SWAYU .. !! we will go on a date & .. " Sharon remarked

Hearing again about date swayam blushed & seeing his red cheeks..

she exclaimed "OMG SWAYU!! YOU LOOK SO CUTE WHILE BLUSHING"


hearing which swayam tried to fake anger & said "nobody asked u.. " & was about to go .. but Sharon stopped him & asked "hey where are you going??"


" with your permission ma'm can i move around??" swayam asked


"PERMISSION GRANTED" Sharon said in highly dramatic voice..


Swayam left & Sharon & all others busted out laughing ..

" true Sharon .. you are the only one , who can make swayam to do all the stuffs , which we can't even imagine.. " martin exclaimed


" ya i never knew swayam can even blush.. " maria laughed


" ya he looks very cute while blushing.. " kriya smiled


Hearing kriya praising swayam , he felt a pang of jealous in him..

" itna bhi cute nahi lagta hai.. " rey said


" you are blind.. reyansh.. " kriya nodded


" hey its rey.. " rey commented


" whatever.. " kriya rolled her eyes


" oh hello .. "miss whatever" .. dont you get it.. its rey & he doesn't looks that cute while blushing.. " rey said making face


" he does.. " kriya retorted


" he doesn't.. "


" yes he does.. "


" no"


" yes"


" no"


" i said yes"


" i said no.. "


" bua aap hi rey ko.. "

Kria looked around to see bua .. none of them was there.. all went to see around the place.. vicky & neha went together.. martin & maria went with shikha while Sharon ran to play with kids..


" dekha tumse pareshaan ho kar sab chale gaye.. " rey taunted


" lo ulta chor kotwaal ko daate." Kriya remarked


" kotwaal what??.. " rey scratched his head


" rey tumhara kuch ni ho sakta.. " kriya rolled her eyes

She turned & left .. but rey followed her..


" arey pehle matlab toh samjhate jao.. "meri hindu dictionary"" rey shouted


" reyansh mujhe tang mat karo.. " kriya replied

He held her wrist & turned her in such a way that she banged in his chest (like radha kaise na jale).. she was struggling to get out of his hold.. avoiding his gaze she was looking down..


" reyansh please chodo mujhe.. " kriya said inaudibly

It was a different sensation for kriya.. that day when abhishek tried to touch her, hold her .. she felt disgusted & unsafe whereas now when even rey held her wrist more tightly she was not feeling any pain or uncomfortable.. it seemed like she was meant to be in his arms..


seeing kriya lost somewhere & she also stopped struggling which was so unlike kriya.. he sensed something wrong.. he placed his palm on her cheek & called her..


" kriya??"

Tears started to swell up in her eyes..


" woh .. " kriya tried to answer


Rey lifted her face by placing his hand on her chin & was trying to read her eyes..

" woh .. lift.. abhishek.. "


Rey looked at her in shock from where does this "abhishek" name came in between them.. then his eyes fell on his hand which was holding kriya's wrist.. he thought that kriya might have remembered about lift incident when he held her wrist tightly.. he thought she might have been thinking him to be like abhishek , which somewhere hurt him.. he regretted that, because of him she accidently remembered that lift-incident.. He loosened his grip & left her wrist as he felt guilty.. he stepped back one distance away from her..

"am sorry" rey spoke..


"sorry meri wajah se tumhe woh accident aa gaya.. jis accident ko tum bhulna chahti ho" he added


He was about to go but this time kriya held his wrist.. Kria looked at him with confused face.. & here goes their silent talk..


"really do you think like that??" kria asked mentally


"think what??" rey answered mentally


"yahi ki aapke paas aane se mujhe woh incident yaad aa gaya.. "


"toh phir tumne abhishek ka naam kyu liya.. ?? agar mere paas aane se tumhe abhishek yaad aa jata hai toh phir kabhi .. " before rey could complete his sentence in his mind , kriya stepped forward & nodded in "no"


"reyansh aisi koi baat nahi hai , infact mujhe aapke saath jo safety mehsoos hoti hai woh kabhi abhishek ke saath ni hoti thi .. "

Rey was happy to hear that..


"hmm.. are you .. ?? rey asked her in his mind..


But kriya spitted out from her mouth.. ".. yes am fine.. !!"

They didn't realise when their silent talk became their verbal talk ..


Kria still was holding his wrist..

Rey came near her but kriya didn't move away or flinch away .. she stood rooted at her place.. rey came near till his warm breath touched her face , kriya's heart beat raised & she closed her eyes..


Rey whispered in her ears "i know am smart , that doesn't mean you'll hold me tightly & won't let me go.. "


Hearing this kriya's eyes snapped open & she hit rey lightly on his arms.. they both started laughing..


he was about to go but realised the mark of the wounds given by abhishek was still there on her wrist & she hadn't even applied ointment on it..


Rey gritted his teeth & said "abhishek ko us din hi maar dena chahiye tha!! aur tumne is par ointment kyu ni lagaya??" anger can be seen in his eyes..


"Woh.. " kriya tried to answer but rey cut her in between..


"pata hai pata hai.. mujhe tumhara koi bahana nahi sunna .. tum sabka khyaal rakh sakti ho but apna nahi.. " rey argued..







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CHAPTER 23
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recap: orphanage visit



Swayam was sitting under the tree & was reading his book which he brought secretly hiding from Sharon..

"thank god sharon ne ye book nahi dekhi warna mera majak banane mein der ni lagati" swayam thought..

He chuckled a bit saying "itni bhi buri nahi hai balki cute hai..bahot cute.."

He slightly hit his head & opened his book to read smilingly.. but before he could read it..one boy 5 year came towards him & tapped his shoulder from behind..

"hey swayu wanna play with us??" boy spoke..

Swayam smiled at the boy who stood holding a bat with him.., he smiled at him who just called him swayu..

"no actually am reading this book" swayam answered politely..

"are you doing your homework??" boy asked..

Swayam smiled & answered "no actually reading books is my hobby"

Boy came & sat beside him..& asked raising his eyebrows "is your real name swayu??"

Swayam looked at him said "why?? Well my name is swayam ..hi.."

He forwarded his hand towards the boy to shake in friendship..but the kid didnt forwarded his hand..

"swayu !! nice name..do you see sharon di there??" boy asked pointing his hand towards sharon who was holding a toddler in her hand, with many kids around her & the toddler was playing with her bouncing hairs..she was laughing & playing with the kids..swayam was lost while seeing her ..

But the boy shook him to which swayam came back to earth..

"do you like her??"

Swayam was startled by the boy's direct question..he looked at the kid with amusement & his age..

"dont be shocked ,its written in ur eyes" boy answered..

"but.." swayam retorted

Before swayam can say anything ,boy cut him in between..

"she likes you too.." boy answered..& continued

"don't get confused ..she likes you too because she gave a nickname "swayu" to u..& sharon di gives nickname to only those whom she likes.."

Swayam was shocked & was listening to the kid patiently & with amusement ..The kid stood up from his place & about to go but swayam stopped him

"hey wait..u didnt tell me your name??.."

the boy turned back & said "my name is arnav but sharon di calls me "pumpkin" ..do you see this bat in my hand..??"

swayam nodded in yes

"if you hurt sharon di then i'll beat you with this bat..deal??" boy asked..

"deal..!!" swayam said smiling at the arnav who just threatened him ,if he ever hurt sharon..

Arnav went his way..

Swayam thought "i like her.."

He went towards sharon & pulled her towards him..he put her hair lock behind her ear & whispered

"beautiful.." to which sharon cant help but started blushing..she looked in his eyes & their look look hawa hawa started..the toddler was still in her hand-lap, who was busy playing with her hair..

********

neha was really excited to see the little kids, she was playing with the innocent kids..
Vicky also joined her, the joy of parenthood was little far away but still they were happy with the feeling that they'll have their own babies in near future..

Vicky looked at neha who seemed busy with a baby boy who was trying his level best to catch her nose, but neha did'nt let him do so by moving her head sideways.. While moving, Whenever Her hairs strikes on the baby's face, he chuckles.. Which gives immense pleasure to neha & she smiled brightly..

She looked up & found vicky smiling at them, she pecked the kid's forehead & placed him among his friends..She got up & moved out with vicky..

" i'm feeling so happy to be here, these kids are full of life, their innocence, their laughter gives unknown happiness.."

Vicky smiled at her..Suddenly neha turned a bit sad..

" kya hua?" he asked worriedly

" kaise kaise log hote hai na, itne maasoom bachho ko aise hi chod dete hai, inhe bina maa baap ke kaise feel hota hoga.."

" I know, kuch logon ko bachhe bojh lagte hai, aur inme se kuch bachhe aise bhi honge jinhone apne parents ko kho diya hai.."

Sensing neha's tension, he changed the topic..

" you know what, humein apne baby ke liye abhi se arrangements shuru kar deni chahiye, like toys, clothes, etc etc

neha started laughing at his childish behaviour.. There was a lot of time for their baby to arrive & he was considering all those things.., but felt happy n proud that he's double excited..& vicky felt relieved that he was able to make her happy..

Neha put her arms around his neck & said "Arre budhu, uske liye to bahot time hai, abhi tum apne baby ki mom ko pamper karo.."

Vicky embraced her in a possesive hug & said drammatically "yes mam, always at ur service.." & whispered in his mischiveous voice - "Anytime""

she blushed & hugged him back..

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Rey soon went to bring first aid box..

He applied ointment on her wrist..kria was staring at him..how can one be caring & sweet..?? but before her ,rey was the perfect example..

" waise tumhe yeh toh manna padega..AM THE SMARTEST BOY ,U COULD EVER GET.."

" in your dreams reyansh"

" its true mrs. Singhania.."

" no way"

" yes"

Shikha along with maria & matin was witnessing the scene from the french window of the living room of the orphanage building which opened in the playground..she was quite happy with the family the Kria & sharon were living with..

am satisfied today that rey is perfect for her..i wish they remain like tis forever.."she said ..

"yup they are perfect..they fitted with eachother like jig jag puzzle" maria said..

"not only Kria- reyansh but sharon 'swayam looks cute together" martin added..

"yeah..but all the more am happy that they got ,family like you to live with..i was initially not assured when i got to know that Kria & sharon were going to live with neha as she lived with her family..but after meeting everyone of u..i am fully satisfied.." Shikha said with greatfullness in her eyes..

"dont worry about them , they have perfect life partners beside them.." maria assured..

"& family too.." martin added..

To which shikha smiled & nodded,she looked at kriya & rey who were still fighting..

" yes" rey continued

" no.." kriya retorted

" yes"

" no.."

Just then anie came & shook rey while pulling his trousers ..she also pulled kria ..rey bend on his knees & sat at her level "don't you know ..kria di is sweetest ,why are you fighting with her??"she asked rey..

Anie turned to kria "& di rey bhaiya is the most SMARTEST boy i've ever seen.."

& she ran away from their..

" tumhe yaha laana hi ni chahiye tha..kids ko kitni galat faimy ho gayi..U & SMARTEST ??what a joke ??" kriya commented

"kria??" rey said in most sugary voice..

Kria looked at him..

" even i believe that you & SWEET??? Biggest joke of history.." rey retorted

Kria turned to go but she bumped into one of the kid..

dhruv(5 year old,one of the orphan) was crying ,he bumped into kria..seeing him crying like that kria became tensed , she stood on her knees & came to his level & asked him

"what happened??"

to which dhruv replied in his childish tone crying

"di is it true..hiccup.. that..hicup.. no one wanted me..hicupp.. thats why they threw me here..hicupp.. just like garbage??..hicupp..am i garbage??..di?? why dont we have parents like others???..tell na di..!! " he asked in childish tone..

hearing him kria eyes swelled with tears..how can she answer that when she herself didnt get her parent's love

Kria immediately hugged dhruv & wiped his tears ,she kissed his forehead & said

"no dear , you are not garbage..none of the gods creation is garbage & you all are his special child, infact he loves us the most thats why he took away our parents n he himself took our responsibility & look around you have the most amazing friends around you ,right ??"

to which dhruv felt satisfied & nodded his head..

"now i think its ice cream time right?? " to which dhruv squilled in joy..

"yay icecream time!!"

kria called all kids to have icecream ..dhruv was about to go but kria stopped him & asked ..

"dhruv why were you sad??did anyone told you something??"

"di that girl in the next house told me that i was garbage ,when i went to get our cricket ball from her house back .."

thats it!! that was the height of the inhumanity..she went out n literally shouted at the house next door the house was divided by a fence.. kria knew who it can be..

" PAM?? PAM KI BACHI BAAHAR NIKAL..samajhti kya hai tu apne aap ko??BAAHAR NIKAL.." kriya shouted

just then a very stylish & modern girl came out of the mansion..she stood before kria like she was a model & looked at her as if kria was a nobody..she was pam..pam was a very haughty n spoil brat girl who didnt care for others sentiments..a total bimbo..

" you are talking to me??" pam asked in a bit attitude filled tone..

hearing kria shouting , all came outside..even swayam came out of his sharonland & sharon also came there holding a toddler in her lap..all gathered around Kria..

"HA HA TUJHSE HI BAAT KAR RAHI HU..CHUDAIL..KI BACCHI!!"

"can you just speak a little slower..cant you just talk in a sofisticated way??" pam asked

all were shocked to see kria like that, infact more shocked to see her fighting with anyone that too typical fighting like that, they were trying hard to stop kria..

" kria baby calm down.." martin said

" yes kria.." maria too pacified her

" yeh kria hi hai na??" swayam asked Sharon who was standing beside

" shhh!!! just see the REAL KRIA.." Sharon whispered

" what do you mean by REAL KRIA??" Vicky asked who just heard them

" shhh!!! just wait & watch.." neha said

all the while rey stood their shocked & dumbfounded as if he was suffering from any trauma..

" rey kuch kar.." Vicky said

he didnt move from his place..while all glared at him except sharon & neha, they were busy enjoying the fight..all focussed towards the fight..

"NO WAY HOW CAN ANYONE TALK TO MY KIDS LIKE THAT??" kriya again shouted

"u mean ?? these??"

Pam asked pointing towards the kids who stood there surrounding kria

"these garbage??"

" shut your mouth before i break your teeth.." Kria said showing her fist forming into punch ..

seeing her in "rani ki jansi" form like this,swayam n vicky came forward towards rey..& wispered to rey

" rey tu kria ko rokta kyu nahi??"

rey didn't replied anything, he was admiring kria's hair which was bouncing on her shoulder while she was moving her head, her lips which was constantly opening & closing & beautifully curving..,her pout when she sighed in frustration..

"how anyone can look so beautiful while fighting??" that was what he was thinking continuously..

he was smiling at this new kria his own jhansi ki rani , not only rey ,all were shocked to see this new kria ,they never saw kria fighting like this, this was really new kria..till now all came to know from neha & sharon that kria was a bubbly kind of girl ,they never knew she would look so cute while fighting,yes inspite of fight took place on a serious issue yet all were finding kria cute & fight funny..

swayam & vicky came forward to stop kria..while rey stood like the statue with smiling face admiring the new kria ..

swayam shook kria "kria stop it!!"he wispered..

Kria ignored it.. "swayam stay out of it , let me teach this "shop of fashion" some manners.."Kria spoke

" who the hell are you to teach me manners..first you teach these little devils some manners..in shaitano ne ball maar kar meri khidki tod di!!" pam complained

" arey ball hi maraa hai na, KOI BOMB KA GOLAA TOH NAHI MARA..??" kriya commented and added

"aur bache khelenge ni toh kya karenge..bade hokar tumhare jaise "bimbo" banege??"

" how dare u?? tumne mujhe "bimbo" kaha??" pam said in anger

" oops!! tumhara name toh "MAHA BIMBO "hona chahiye ya fir "QUEEN OF BIMBOS" ??" kria said sarcastly..

suddenly there came someone, vicky shook rey .. rey didnt said anything this time also..this was enough for everyone , martin went towards rey & pinched him,which was enough for rey to wake up..rey came forward & tried to stop her but all went in vain..

" umm kria??"

Kria ignored him & resume her fight..verbal fight..rey tried to stop other party that is PAM,

" excuse me, miss beautiful.."

hearing "miss beautiful" from his mouth kria instantly stopped saying what she was commenting on pam..while hearing "miss beautiful" from someone like rey pam smirked at kria looking at her..which added fuel to kria's anger..she glared at rey, while rey gulped hard..seeing the tension arising in between kria & rey, pam thought to play along,she came forward & traced her index finger on rey's face n said seductively

"i can see someone smart in between some fools..hi my name is pam.."

" hi my name is reyansh..reyansh singhaniya ..u can call me rey.." rey said in his husky voice

Seeing pam so close to rey..kria pulled rey towardds her & said "back off pam ,he is mine.."

All were shocked to see kria claiming rey..even rey was shocked but he was feeling happy..Rey thought to have more fun..he came forward towards pam & said

"u are sensible too pam"

Kria was angry now , she knew pam is not going to stop now..she came forward and placed her hand on rey's shulder & asked in her most sugary voice "darling..did you take medicine??"

"which medicine??" rey said while not removing his eyes from pam..

"tuberculosis darling.. you remember?? you have tuberculosis !!" kria said replying in same tone..

Hearing which rey choked & started coughing..kria started patting his back.."see i told you to have medicine on time..u know na its an infectious dieseas"

Almost all choked ..

Pam was hearing all this ..she immediately stepped back from rey..& said "it was nice to meet you , rey .. see you later" pam went in her house..

" from when & where did i have tuberculosis ??" rey asked

" when you became my fiance .." kriya smirked

" couldn't you just take name of other diseases..??" rey asked frustrated

" how about AIDS??" kriya smirked again

" kria??" rey shouted

All were laughing at their talks..

"YOU SHOUT TOO MUCH GIRL" came a voice..

All looked at the source of the voice..all froze to the ground..

Rey's maasi MAYA KAPOOR , an 45 years old lady, wearing a classy sophisticated saari complementing her age was standing in front of them..all face colour went pale seeing her..

None spoke..only Kria & Sharon were standing unaffected as they didn't knew maasi

Without knowing kria said "aunty sorry for my shouting, but he keeps on irritating me &.."

Kria kept on blabbering whilemaria wispered to rey "stop Kria before its too late!!"

rey came forward & touched maasi's feet..all did the same ,Sharon & Kria stood at their places on realising who she was..they too come to touch her feet but maasi interrupted "iski koi jarurat nahi hai"

she moved towards Shikha without giving blessing to Kria & Sharon greeted her & said "ab hume ghar jana chahiye..!!"

" arey aise kaise ?? abhi abhi toh aayi ho..??" shikha said

maasi & shikha were great friends inspite of their difference in their behaviour..

" yaha kaafi drama ho chuka ha hum phir kabhi aayenge " she said while eyeing at kria..

They all went to home..


pheww!!!
its over...
precap:maasi bossing around..kria in hell..swayam & sharon more close

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Edited by crazysky - 11 years ago

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