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Continued..







Vicky stared at neha who has been gulping pani puri one by one..


"Neha stop! U already have enough" vicky warned her.


Neha already gulped 6 panipuri-es..


"mmm Kria makes magical chaat" neha said, still eating mouthfull of stuffs..


"Neha plzz, let me eat the rest" vicky pleaded to not let her eat anymore.


She looked at him, stuffed one more panipuri & nudged in his mouth..


"seriously, magical" vicky said, lost in its flavour..


He opened his eyes to saw the last piece left, already taken by his witty wife, smiling sheepishly at him..


"this is cheating" vicky pouted.


"hello, I let u eat atleast 1 puchka..Thank me atleast" neha said in attitude..


"arrggh . . Leave it now, finish it off & get back to sleep" he commanded.


"NO!!"


"shutup & sleep fast" vicky shouted..


Neha started weeping..


"I'll tell rey.." she said slowly.


He hit his forehead.."Neha, i'm sorry plz so jao, you should sleep on time na" he kneeled on floor in front of her with a smiling face..


Neha looked at him & smiled "pehle hunny bunny"..


"no" he cried, already feeling sleepy..


"yes" she clapped her hands..


He got up unwillingly & took a medium sized teddy bear in his lap & sat on bed..


Whenever she's sad,, he cheers up her mood with the funny teddy dance...


..

She played the song:


*You are my pumpkin pumpkin

Hello honey bunny

I am your dumpling dumpling

Hello honey bunny

Feeling something something

Hello Honey Bunny

Honey Bunny, toko toko*


he hold the hands of teddy from back & made it dance like puppet on the music...


She giggled on this cute dance & hugged vicky..


He made her sleep on bed, covered her with blanket, kissed her forehead & slept beside her...






Edited by yogini64 - 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 30

ignore the typing and grammatical mistake not rechecked




next day went calmly but at night

Nahi please , please ..please..m...mom...m..m..mom..please mom ..

NAHI..mom..

Rey..REY...


All were trying very hard to wake up Rey, but it seemed as if Rey was going through some trauma or shock..he was scared of something in his sleep it was clearly visible on his sleeping face..his eyes were tightly closed, he clutched the bed sheets with his one hand while the other hand was stretched in the air..Kria and sharon were shocked to see him in this state..


MOM!!!


REY woke up with a jolt ,panting heavily ,his forehead was covered with sweats..he was sweating badly..


Maasi hugged him immediately, after few seconds maasi cupped his face and asked

"phir se wohi sapna dekha??"


Maasi hugged him again and caressed his hairs.. maasi asked him

"aaj dawayi nahi li??"


Rey with tears in his eyes didn't said anything , he just moved out in the living room ,all followed him, he sat on the sofa n announced coldly

"I WANT TO BE ALONE "


All were really scared to say anything , they better thought to leave Rey alone for sometime, at that time Kria and sharon were trying to absorb everything around them ,everything was new to them as Rey never reacted like that before ..they also went to their room..


"sis don't you think aaj jo kuch bhi hua woh kuch weird tha??" sharon asked placing her head in Kria's lap..


"kiddo sab ki life mein kuch issues hote hai ,may be Rey ki life mein bhi kuch..." Kria left the sentence incomplete,


after sometime she felt sharon breathing heavily, she adjusted her on bed & tucked her in blanket very well..she thought to check at Rey..she headed towards living room..


Rey was sitting on the sofa with his both the palm under his chin..he was looking pale and was staring in front looking at nothing... Kria went and sat beside him..unknown to his surrounding, Rey still looked straight ahead.. She saw his body shaking.. Hesitantly she moved beside him placing a hand on his arm...but Rey jerked it suddenly looking horrified at something...His eyes grown wide as he have seen something bad.. Really bad..

" Reyansh .. Are you.. Are you Fine..??" she asked


He looked at her lost.. His eyes showed vulnerability.. Words were not coming out of his mouth.. Kria saw him trying to talk.. She moved near the table picking up glass of water..

"Here take this.."


Drinking it full he kept the glass down closing his eyes.. His face reflected pain which she couldn't figure out.. What was happening to him.. She moved more close to him concerned..

"neend nahi aa rahi??" she asked being concerned..


Rey locked his eyes with hers and nodded his head in negation..

"sona hai??"


"dar lagta hai..!!" Rey said like a kid in pain..


She took his hand in hers and tried to assure him..

"main hoon.. Reyansh!! yahi par.. tumhare paas.."


Rey looked at her like a small kid..

"mom ki yaad aa rahi hai??"


Rey nodded his head in agreement..

"main sula doon?? " Kria asked sweetly


Rey looked at her with confusion

"woh jab bhi sharon ko neend nahi aati hai ,tab main use sulati hoon" she replied caringly..


Rey nodded in yes..


She shifted at the corner of the sofa..and gestured Rey to place his head on her lap.. Rey slowly placed his head on her lap like a kid..she placed her palm on his forehead and closed his eyes..she started to move her palm softly in his hairs to his forehead to soothe him..she rested her head on the back seat of sofa ..both Rey and Kria soon shifted in deep slumber..



Morning

Martin came outside his room..but stopped to see what maasi was looking at..he couldn't tell as her back was facing him..he tried to peep from behind and what he saw ,he froze in his place..soon Vicky,neha swayam and sharon came out of their respective rooms..their reaction was same as that of martin they too froze on their places..they were looking to and fro from maasi to kriyansh.. swayam gestured sharon to wake up Kria whereas he shook Rey to wake him up..


They both woke up only to find everyone staring at them.. Rey looked at Kria who was scared on seeing maasi in front of her..


"maasi woh.." before Rey could say anything maasi cut him in between


"kal raat medicines li thi??"


"nahi..woh khatam ho gayi hai..isliye woh dream..again.." Rey answered..


"thik hai tum jakar fresh ho jao..and miss Kria you ..get ready fast ..tum mere saath mandir chal rahi ho" maasi almost ordered Kria..


"ji.." Kria said getting more scared..


"mujhe lagta hai maasi mandir Kria ko 'shudhi-karan' ke liye le ja rahi hai.." Vicky said


[shudhi-karan is an orthodox ritual which is said to be done for making your soul clean and purify]


"shut up Vicky" neha glared at him


continued below



Edited by crazysky - 12 years ago
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Temple

Kria and maasi went to a small temple nearby that is built by some of the Indians near their house..they did the puja and maasi led her under a shady tree where people used to sit and relax..

"tumhe pata hai..main tumhe yaha kyu leke aayi hu"

Kria was already scared and feeling awkward with maasi , she meekly said "nahi"

"Rey ke mom dad is mandir mein bahot aate the.."

Kria smiled a bit

"tum Rey ko kitna janti ho??"

"ji?? Main kuch samjhi nahi..!!"

"tum janti ho Rey ne kal aise kyu react kiya,uske bare mein kya jaanti ho??"

"nahi..but main bas Rey ke bare mein itna hi jaanti hu ki jaise woh bahar se hai..andar se woh aise bilkul nahi hai, haan sab ko dikhate hai ki woh funny hai n sabko hasate bhi hai but uski hasi ke peeche ek dard hai..infact woh apni family ko le kar bahot hi possessive hai..family mein sabki choti se choti needs ka khyal rehta hai unhe..but apne bare mein sochna bhul jaate hai..unka dil bilkul bacho jaisa hai..saaf"

Kria said it without looking at maasi ..after some time

"maasi main apko kuch batana chahti hu"Kria said..

"hmm.. bolo"

"woh maasi main aur Rey..woh" Kria was figetting about whether to tell the reason behind the marriage and the will or not..

"Kria mai janti hu ki Rey aur tum yeh shadi 'will' ke liye kar rahe ho.."

Kria suddenly looked at her horrified and scared..

"don't be shocked !! maine sab pata kar liya hai ,Shikha ne mujhe tumhare dad ke will ke bare mein bataya ..tumhare dad ke will ke bare mein jaanne ke baad mujhe tum par bahot gussa aya .. aisa laga that you are using my kid..but jab Rey aur tumhe ek saath itna comfortable dekha and jab Rey ne shadi ki baat chedi then i got everything that Rey was involved in this plan too..fir kal raat ka incident ..jab tumne Rey ki itni care ki..tumhe pata hai Rey aaj tak itne sukoon se bina medicine khaye kabhi nahi soya..use bina medicine liye nend tak nahi aati.."

"maasi woh..can i ask u something??"

"hmm.." maasi was soft this time..

"woh Reyansh ko blood se itna dar kyu lagta hai??" not sure if maasi would answer her this question..

"actually mujhe bas itna pata hai ki Rey and uski mom ka accident hua tha and dotors were able to save Rey but his mother died..from then he gets those scary dreams..but Rey ko wo dreams mein kya dikhai deta hai woh kabhi kisi ko bata nahi paya ..mujhe bhi nahi" maasi narrated looking sad..

Kria felt bad for her,she placed her palm on maasi 's shoulder and smiled meekly..

"i wanted to confess something.."maasi said looking at her..

Kria nodded in approval..

"woh jo tumne biryaani banayi thi usme namak and spices maine add kiye the.."

Kria narrowed her eyes but smiled and gave a look of 'go on'

"and main har baar intentionally tum par chillati thi and tumse rudely baat karti thi, tumhara patience level check karti rahi thi..infact woh jo cake ka order than a woh maine hi cancel kiya tha..tum toh mujhe pehli nazar mein achi lagi thi.."

Kria cocked her eyebrows and said "pehli nazar mein??"

"ha pehli nazar mein..jab tumne Rey ko us ladki pam se bachaya tha..the way you retorted back to Rey without caring who is he..the way you take care of him..and i've never seen him so worried about any other person..u both fitted in eachother's life as jig-jag puzzle"

Kria just smiled at her..

"tumhe mujh par gussa nahi aa raha ??" maasi asked looking at smiling Kria..

"nahi aapne jo bhi kiya woh Reyansh ki bhalayi ke liye kiya and its ok.."Kria replied genuinely..

"ek aur baat puchu??" maasi asked

"kya tum Rey ke sath hamesha nahi reh sakti uski life partener ban kar.."

Kria was startled at first but she started thinking about it..

seeing her so quiet maasi shook her

"dont you love Rey ??"

"pata nahi maasi ..haan Reyansh mein woh sari quality hai jo ek life partner mein honi chahiye but aage kya hoga mujhe kuch nahi pata.." Kria answered genuinely



Maasi smiled at her answer and they both headed towards home..









Edited by yogini64 - 12 years ago
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precap: masi decision , masi departure..twist & turns in kria & sharon's life..shivam sharon dating...




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Edited by crazysky - 12 years ago
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maine toh kal se hi padhna shuru kar diya tha pura😃

and pata hai i am so glad aapne inni badi chutti ke be post kiya... massi wala kaand pura ek baar mein nipta diya...

yayyy!!!!!!

woh cake ka order cancel.. mereko samajh hi aa gaya tha massi ne kiya hai... aise kaarya koi aur thodi na karega...

so loved how u showed everything surfacing up... u know how massi was hell bent to break kri in anyway...

it was amazing how u construed her way of checking kria... how she was testing her point to point jabki she had already likes the girl...

u know checking sona khara hai ki nhi...

fir how u kept their fights still on... i mean lovely... actual KR weren't lost... and the caring KR also not lost...

awww... kri made him sleep... sweet...

then the mandir talk... yayyy...

go for it...

loved kria's genuineness... i mean she doesn't want to cheat anybody close to their family and if she can avoid it...

great guns...

waiting for next part...

comment i know unna lamba nhi hia... cholli for that...

sorry if u needed another post...

i had inquired yogi di yesterday ki res karna allowed hoga...😳

mujhe karna tha😃
Edited by -Vaish- - 12 years ago
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wow😃

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Hey Chetna & Yogs🤗🤗🤗

A big tight hugs to u sweeties ...I mean how do u do this mahn...u guys write so beautifully and give us a treat like this ...6 chapters back to back...all are so beautiful and cute parts ...that makes me feel ashamed of myself for my laziness ...both in writing my FFs and commenting late...anyways...lets not go to my laziness ...it will become a book otherwise...

This wonderful FF is one of my fav ..KR+SS FF...not only because the delicacy u maintained while designing the characters...but also u have given space to all teh characters be it KR..or SS or even the other supporting characters to grow and have an effect on the reader...I read all the threads of this wonderful FF over a period of 1 day...I couldn't stop myself till I finish all of it...that can prove the effect this FF has on the reader...its enchanting...

Coming to the back to back chapters ..or longest chapter as u say...I so loved the cute KR chemistry ..the understanding...the underneath love...is so evident...

Kriya is such a sweetheart ..the picture perfect girl for any guy...dream girl...adarsh bahu😆...so sweet...she took all the tests given by maasi so positively...never reacted to her criticism ...

Loved the little scene when she pacified the scared Rey..just like a small baby...so cute and adorable...m loving KR here...

Coming to SS...sharon the cute little spoiled brat of her sissy..and swayam the serious guy...they just make me go awww every moment they were mentioned in this FF...so cute ...the cute cute SS scenes made me grin like an idiot...ahaaa..I LOVE AND ADORE them...so so much...the bathroom romance was so sweet..can't wait for them to accept their feelings ...

Maasi character entered like a storm ...but it helped the couples to be close to each other ...be it KR or SS...

Goshhh...so beautiful chapters...my comment can't do justice to it..still i wanted to express my gratitude here for giving us so many wonderful chapters...i hope ur exams went well...can't wait to read further ...

PS-forgive me for late comment...really sorry

Luv
Deep

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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wowww such looonnnggg updates

awesomeee updates😃

lovedd each and every part of d updates😃

waiting for d nxt part😳
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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6 chapters back to back 😃
Rey n vicky convo was nice
Kriyansh
Rey lost in kria hehe good that they start understanding each other soo well in such a short period..:)
Sharon is sharon I was rofling when sharon said sexy to masi. 🤣
Finally kria came.Loved the way she handled sharon n answer Maasi ques.
Swaron
Hehe Majnu again lost in his sharon land.Sharon is the cutest in this ff. 🤣 she slapped swayam
Kria wore saree n here our romeo rey again went in his dreamland*huh in dono(reyam) ka kuch nahi ho sakta*
Krisha
I always adored them in this ff
Liked the part where kria hugged rey the unknown bonding between them make their relation more beautifull
Kriyansh fight was hilarious 🤣 dusri shadi ke liye pehli wali ka gala dabaya 🤣
Loved swaron convo they know about each other soo much
🤣 🤣 sharon makeup swayam's face by cake lol n then their cleaning session romance 😳
Viha part was cute.Kria make paani puri for neha n maasi too eat it chupke chupke lol.
Hunny bunny dance 🤣
Kriyansh part was adorable.Kria handled rey very well..:D
Finally massi accepted kria n told her everything
Precap:sharon shivam date confusing
Waiting for next part
Update it ASAP
Edited by sadiyaswaron - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditi061

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will unres in march

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey thanx for the awsum updates they r really awsum just mind blowing I really luved but I didn't luved the prefab knowing shivam Sharon dating plzzz update next part soon

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