ISHQ JHAGRA MANZIL (chapter 1-12)

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hey guys happy newyr..

this ff is unified version of ishq jagra manzil since the author jenifer of this ff is busy with her another ff n demand of this ff have been very much ... hence I (chetna)is going to continue it...
the first part is from the previous ff n we will be continuing from 2nd part... i am not a good writer as her but i tried my best, hope u shall like it n critisism is invited...

so presenting

any ideas related to FF r also invited

n also let us know if u all r interested

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INTRODUCTION

have u any how met super bubbly sharon???-wel u'll meet here...

have u met attitude filled swayam??? u'll meet here...

met cranky rey before???- u'll meet hare...

met composed spicey kriya ???

well u'll find all them here..

Kriya and Sharon Ghai understand only two things in life: Partying and spending their money. But eventually, their uncle gets sick of all that and kicks them out of the house on the pretext to teach them a lesson or accept a deal he puts only before kriya. So what do the two sisters do from there? They move into the first apartment they can get their hands on--with two boys as housemates n who happens to be even their bose. Not only do these two girls learn about love, they learn about the troubles of life when their life took a sharp turn and what it takes to get to where you want to in life.

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CHARACTER SKETCH

Kriya Ghai: Age 21. under the custody of Sanjay dobriyal , a very rich business man in the state of California,after the death of her mother-father and fraternal twin of Sharon Ghai. Kriya loves to party, especially with her sister. But of the two sisters, she's a little more sensible. Even though she partied through most of college, she was one of the smartest people in the graduating class. But she never did anything with her life because she was always dependent on her uncle's money.she loves her sister more than her life and possesive n protective 4 her sis.

Sharon Ghai: Age 21. under the custody of Sanjay dobriyal , a very rich business man in the state of California,after the death of her mother-father. Sharon, just like her sister, she loves to party, a college diva,full of life,funny at time,. But unlike her sister, she's a little more irresponsible and didn't try as hard in college. After college, all she did was party and spend her uncle's money, along with Kriya. Also loves her sister

Rajveer singhania: not in this world'but now also he is the Biggest tycoon of bussiness world history'.everyone respects him'before death he writes a will of his property worth millions of dollars

Reyaansh Singhania: Age 24. Lives in Malibu, California , best friend, Swayam. Rey is a very cocky, play-boy & cassanova ,flirty. He thinks he can get any girl he wants (and generally does), until he meets Kriya.but @ the same time he is workalcohic n very much dedicated to his work.Rey works at a very boring publishing company called Malibu Publishing C..(y he is working there is mystery we'll get to know in story)'he lives with swayam in an appartment.

Swayam Shekhawat: Age 24. best friend, Rey. Swayam is a very calm,he is workacholic..he hates his family as his dad married 2nd time..he never made any effort to make up with his stepmother nor she tried'hence he left his home.. He generally keeps to himself and doesn't go after girls (even though he can easily get a girl). He's never been really crazy for a girl until he meets Sharon. Swayam works at the same publishing company with Rey, and also hates it there.

Sanjay dobriyal: Age 44. Sanjay owns a huge coorprate business in Malibu, California. kriya and sharon calls him uncle , friend of kriya's and sharon's dad. After the death of his friend and his wife 10 years ago, he took in Kriya and Sharon,raising them as his very own daughters'well (his character is mystery) at that time kriya n sharon were 11years old'

Shivam dobriyal: age 22 ,son of sanjay dobriyal

Extreamly idiot , dumb, useless guy, greedy, selfish, uses girls as a tissue paper, believes in one night stand'

(credit 4 this pic goes to dazzlerfan)

Abhishek dobriyal: age 24, son of sanjay dobriyal

Same as his brother but little more dumb ha ha

Vicky mehra: age 24, a well established lawyer

Best friend of rey n swayam,rey's cousin, his dad was advicer in rey's dad's company,

also loves his wife deewani(neha) a lot

Neha mehra: age21,wife of vicky mehra, also a good lawyer

Best friend of kriya n sharon, loves her deewana a lot'''.

side characters

pinky (receptionist)

sweet ,bubbly ,fun loving...entry- ch-5

(practically a cook in house, loves to cook )

have a lot of chains of restaurants across the globe

jovial, possesive about his kitchen, funny ...

entry- ch-8

ROBERT (GARDENER)

jovial, funny, good at heart..consider reyam ,martin as his good friends entry ch-10

MISS MARIA(rey's nurse n love interest of martin) entry ch-11 n lovely n jovial

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INDEX

(all pages are hyperlinked)

character sketch

promo

1

2

3

4

note regarding pms

note regarding FF

note of thanks
6

7

8
9
note
10

teaser

THREAD 2

THREAD 3

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CHAPTER-1

The music was loud, pounding in the ears of all its listeners as different colored ray of lights were scrambling around the place. People were on the dance floor, dancing like it was the end of the world, and there were people at the bar, drinking till they blacked out. But through all the music. you could hear the waves of the ocean hitting the shore.

These were the kinds of parties Kriya and Sharon Ghai threw on their birthdays. Right on the beach front, they had created a whole club setting, just for their 24th birthday.

"Kriya!" Sharon, holding a drink in one hand, yelled to her sister, swaying a little as she walked up to her. "I think I want a pony from uncle this year!"

Kriya took a gulp of her drink as her twin sister sat down next to her. "Oo, a pony sounds nice. We've never had a pony."

Kriya and Sharon continued getting drunk and dancing and partying until almost 4 o'clock in the morning. But that was nothing new for the sisters. There had never been a day since they turned 21 that they didn't come home before 3 o'clock.

By the time the girls' driver picked them up from the beach and they got home, the girls were so tired that they literally fell asleep on the couch of their uncle's huge mansion.

"Ah!" Sharon and Kriya screamed when cold water hit their faces.

"Good, you're up," Sanjay dobriyal said, setting the bucket of water down and sitting down on the table across from the couch.

"What was that for?" Kriya asked as she and Sharon joined their uncle at the table, angrily.

"For coming home so late," Sanjay said.

"Late? uncle, we always come home that late. It's no biggie," Sharon said, waving it away as she drank the coffee the chef put down for her and Kriya.

"I know, and that's about to change. I'm kicking the two of you out," uncle said simply, taking a sip of his tea.

Kriya and Sharon did a spit take with their coffee. "WHAT?!"

"Yeah. Look, I love you guys immensely, but I've spoiled the two of you too much. You guys need to go out and make a career, make your own money. You'll always have me, but I figured after you graduated from college you'd do something."

"Like what?" Sharon asked.

"uncle, you can't do this! Where are we supposed to go?" Kriya asked.

"Well, I suggest the two of you find an apartment quickly. I'll give some money to buy an apartment, but that's it. From there, you guys need to figure things out on your own. Then and only then will you be able come back into this house."

"But-but-"the girls sputtered.

"No buts. We live in Malibu, California for God's sake. You'll find something to do with your life. Now I gotta go to work. We have a huge business deal with a company in New York." And Sanjay left, leaving the girls in complete anger and disbelief.

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CHAPTER-2

recap: entry of kriya , sharon and sanjay

9:00am

a young handsome boy around 24 lay on his stomach sleeping peacefully, with a baby smile on his lips , ray of sunlight sneeked in his room through a window pane seemed wishing him goodmorning...

he slowly opened his eyes, laying still in bed,took out his phone...n dialled a number...

other side
a boy around 24 is sitting on a chair in his own cabin , seriously working but has calm expression, winding up his files, writing something on a piece of paper, took his mobile on hearing it ring

" where r u dude??" boy1 asked

" offcourse in the office, where else??" voice from the other side asked

"dude r u serious?? today is sunday n that too 31st dec ... well goodmorning...n ur in office????" boy1 sighed in hopeless manner

"same to u to dude... still in bed??? wake up ...!!! i think u forgot!!!" voice chuckled

"wat???oh i know u r talking about our company celebration... i remember its 31st dec n 2 years has been completed by our "REYAM CONSTRUCTION" i can forget all my girlfriends birthday but not this day... n dont worry i have done all the arrangements of the party for the employees they will be super happy ...i'll catch u in office in 15 min
bye..." boy sid being delightful

"ok dude bye..." voice answered smilingly

at office

after sometime

a young hansome boy entered in a cabin

"mr. swayam shekhawat sara kaam aaj hi khatam karoge kya...????" boy1 asked

"no mr. reyaansh singhaniya i was waiting 4 u... subah ho gayi aapki.." boy2 teased

"call me rey... n saale tu kab se mujhe mr. reyansh singhaniya kehne laga???" boy1 said faking anger

"jab se tu mujhe "swayam shekhawat " kehne laga
n they both hug each other n laughed..." boy2 retorted

rey was looking out of the glass pane of his cabin

"dude kya soch raha hai??" swayam asked

"kuch ni yar bas soch raha tha ki waqt kitni jaldi fly ho jata hai na?? kal ki hi baat lagti hai...aaj k hi din hamare ek haath me resignation letter n dusre hath me 5 yr ka experrience tha" rey answered smiling

"aaj hi k din humne ye company "REYAM construction inaugrate kiya tha... aaj pure 2 yrs ho gaye...and humari company aaj top 3 companies me se ek hai..." rey added

" n ye sab tumhari wajah se..." swayam smiled

"dude?? meri ni tumhari wajah se.." rey complained like a small child

"no dude am serious.. mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai k agar tu ni hota to mera career graph itna rise ni karta..." swayam said gratefully

" dude agar tune phir se aisi baat ki to mai tujhse phir kabhi baat ni karunga...remember hum dono dost hai n partners bhi...right partners??.." knowing that swayam would not give up ,rey sighed

"yes partner!!" swayam smiled while answering

"and waise bhi mujhe ek aise bewakuf dost ki jarurat thi jo meri millions of dumb girlfriends ko handle kare sake..." rey exclaimed in his cocky tone

"oh really??" swayam asked while raising his eyebrows knowing very well what rey is trying to do

rey gave his best innocent smile and answered "yup really..."
they both started laughing...n hi fived...

swayam used to laugh openly only in front of rey... he is afraid to show his inner feeling to others... whereas rey gives his real innocent smile only to him ...unlike swayam he laughs n smiles before others but a million dollar cocky smile after which no one could stop admiring him

just then rey's phone rang

"hello"

voice:hello rey darling where r u ?? m missing u wanna meet u...

" hi babes bas aaj thoda kaam hai m busy today so cant meet u" rey excused & cuts the phone.

swayam asked " kaun thi??"

"pta ni hogi koi maine babes keh kar matter solve kar diya.."

"tu bhi na kabhi ni sudhrega... n waise tu kisi k sath serious b hoga?

in dumb gals k sath bore ni ho jata??"

"look who is speaking..tu mujhse girls k bare me baat kar raha h... tune apne aapko dekha hai... khadoos...!!! kisi gal se baat bhi ki hai??" rey retorted

"leave it... m not interested in dumb gals...and waise bhi i need a secretary to handle my workload..."

"oh yeah yaad aaya newspaper me add de diya hai...kal interviews hai two female secretary k liye..."

"wat 2 secretaries???? but y...???? y 2??? that too female !! huh!!" swayam said becoming irritated

"look dude i cant bear bore male secretary ..thats y female n dude u too need to get a life...dont worry i'll myself take interview for u n select most sexiest secretary for u ..." rey answered

"in that case i'll select secreatary 4 u that too perfect one and i'll make sure she must be sensible one ...who could put some brain into u ...well u'll see it 4 urself "

"yeah watever...n aaj office party k baad disc jayenge ok n tu bhi chalega..."

"yeah ...but waha mai bore ho jaunga..."

"dont worry waha aaj is city ki saari sexy gals ayengi" rey grinned

"isliye to bore ho jaunga "

" shutup dude u r coming n thats final.. sometimes i feel u r a gay.."

swayam glared at him that told him to instantly shutup

evening 5:30
@ ghai villa

sharon n kriya were in their bed room,sharon busy in her wardrobe..kriya was sitting in a sofa...

"oh god! why am so confused ?? ... what do u think kriya ... what should i wear at the evening party????" sharon asked while scratching her head

(no answer)

"kriya??"

(again no answer)

sharon turned around & looked at kria who seemed to lost somewhere
sharon shooked her

"where are you lost sis??" sharon asked

"umm...nothing. i was thinking what am doing is it right ?isn't it too early...???" kriya asked to herself

"r u talking about ur engagment thats going to be happen in few mins.." sharon asked who heard her question

"yup"

"toh isme sochne ki kya baat hai engagement mat karo... simple...n waise bhi mujhe wo idiot abhishek pasand ni hai..."
kriya smiled 2 sharon's remark...

"u know na agar uncle ni hote to hamara kya hota...agar maine ye engagement ni ki toh uncle ko kitna bura lagega..."

"but kriya u don't love him" sharon tried to reason

"but he is my friend!!!" kriya answered more to herself

" friend????" sharon asked raising her eyebrow

"ok not a friend but i know him from chilhood"

"whatever !! get ready soon ... guest might soon be coming..."
and sharon left to her wardrobe

"hmmm..." kriya sighed

flash back

@ doriyal mansion
sanjay was sitting in his room reading news paper

"hello uncle need to talk to u" kria said while entering the room

"yes my princess" sanjay cooed her lovingly

"uncle y r u doing this, i mean throwing us out of the house...don't u love us anymore..." kriya came to the point

"princess i do love u both but i want u to settle n live in peace after my death...i dont want u to beg anything from anyone so i've decided something"

"what is it?" kriya asked

"u hav 2 choices
choice1: mary one of my son or
choice2: go out, make your career & earn for ur living" sanjay said

"kria beta dont think i want u to marry my son but its just i want to see u in a safe hand..n i want u to well established ...if u agree to mary i wll not throw either of u out of the house n ur engagement ceremony can be held tommorrow i.e. 31st dec..." sanjay explained the reason

"ok uncle i need some time" kriya sighed

"dear u hav 12 hrs of tonight, i want ur answer tommorrow morning"

"ok uncle but out of ur son whom i am going to get engaged"

"its abhishek, well u both know eachother from childhood ...and almost same age"

"ok i'll take ur leave...bye uncle"

"bye princess" sanjay side hugged her and bid bye

@ dobriyal mansion
31st dec - morning @8:00 am

sanjay was in his lawn n kria entered

"uncle i have decided to marry abhi at 1 condition"

"whats the condition??" sanjay asked eagerly

"its that u will not lay any condition before sharon to marry or work n u'll also not tell her about our conversation that we had ...is that ok with u???"

"offcourse as u say..."

"thanks uncle...bye"

" bye" sanjay smiled at her and bid her bye

31st dec - morning @9:00am
@ ghai villa
breakfast time @ dinning table

sharon n kriya were having their breakfast

"sharon i've decided somthing...promise me u will be with me in my every decision.." kriya said nervously as she well know how sharon would react to the news

"sis am always with u in every decision of ur life...wats it ??spill it" sharon said eagerly

"iamgoingtomaryabhi!!" kria said in one breath
sharon wrinkled her forehead as she was unable to understand what kriya said ,rather blurted out and asked "come again"

"i-am-going-to-mary-abhi!!" kria said slowly emphasizing on each word

"WHAT??" Sharon jumped out of her seat and asked with a shocked expression

"yup i have pondered over it last night...n uncle wanted the same"

"uncle wants it!!!!!... but did u asked urself what u want..."

"sharon plz i have already decided"

"kria 4 god sake ...no ...dont do this ...n wait what u said right now? 'u've decided' ...!!! how can u take such important decision of ur life that too without disscussing with me..."

"sharon plz.."

"kria no... a big no... do u get it?? ... no..."

"sharon u just now promised u'll with me in me every decission"

at this sharon calmed down a bit n looked at kria...she placed her hand on kria's hand"

" r u sure??" sharon sighed defeated and asked

"yup" n faked smile

they hug eachother

flashback over

seeing kriya again in thoughts ,sharon poked her on her cheeks and asked

"where r u lost again??"

" huh!! nothing" kria answered

@ the party
sharon n kria were dressed in indian attire
kria was standing near abhi n sharon was standing near shivam

"hey shivam" sharon greeted him

"hey sharon !!looking gorgeous!!" shivam complimented

"thanks"

shivam was holding drink in his hand

"whats the time?" she asked

he turned his hand to see the time lo drink fell on his own shirt

sharon looked at him in hopeless manner

"as usual dumbo..." sharon muttered

"ladies and gentle man!! may i have your attention please!!" sanjay said gaining everyone's attention and added
"i have to make an announcement...today am very happy because my son abhishek dobriyal n my best friend's daughter kriya ghai...are getting engaged ...kriya n abhi beta plz come here so that we can start the ring ceremony..."

kria slipped ring in abhi's finger n abhi did the same...

(everyone clapped n congratulated the new would be soon married couple)

after all guests left ..

sharon n kria were sitting in their room
"finally boring party is over" sharon said while landing on bed

"yup its finally over"

sharon looked at her sister's sad & pale face thought of cheering her up

"ummn...kria lets go & celebrate new yr outside"

"no yaar not in mood"

"hey don't be spoilsport... come na its only 10:00 pm ... come lets go out n enjoy.."

"ok as u say..."

they walked out of their house n drove towards disco...

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Thank you for continuing!

Chapter 2 is long and will read when I'm free.

I've sent you the buddy request for pmz.

And yes, if possbile, can there be like a little space between each dialogue or a paragraph. That'd save me from getting a heart attack 😆😳

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dude...thanks for contiuing this ff...shivam is so dumb...haha...continue soon

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