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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Xaffron-



Manu claps three times. "Haye, chudail. Hum hijron ko bhagwaan ne neeche se aisa banaya hai, upar se hum sab samajhte hain," says Manu. He turns towards his mentor, Laxmi Narayan Tripathi's pic, and seeks her blessings. 😆😆😆

Priyanka says, "Oh, whatever! I am leaving. I better get the report tomorrow." As Priyanka reaches her house, she sees Shalini trying to take a peek into her house through the window. "What the hell are you doing at this hour," asks Priyanka. "I have found a new clue," says Shalini. "I don't think Vishal is the killer and I have a gut feeling about the bar girl's murderer also," continues Shalini. "Let's go inside and talk," she says. Priyanka lets her in.


The both of them go inside and sit in Priyanka's living room. Priyanka makes tea for Shalini (she hates Shalini, but knows that Shalini can be a premium bitch without her 11PM chai). "Why do you look so upset... didn't get hit on at the club?". Priyanka turns around; "oh go to hell Shalini. I came back from Manu's lab... that two-bit creature asked me why Vishal's been at my house... don't know what new leaves he's found to smoke." Shalini's eyebrow points to the sky; "... how random. Why did he ask you that all of a sudden? And why were you at the lab?" Priyanka explains, "ughh.. I was tired and irritated after we talked earlier on today. I got home and found ink prints on one of my coffee cups, and it definitely wasn't my thumb. So I took the cup to Manu.. everything was fine, I was in his lab, he was investigating.. don't know why, the twat began to accuse me of sleeping with Vishal all these days without telling him..."
Shalini's eyes grow big; "Priyanka, you CAN'T be this stupid! Manu didn't bring Vishal up just randomly! Didn't you say he was investigating something?..."
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: liverach

The both of them go inside and sit in Priyanka's living room. Priyanka makes tea for Shalini (she hates Shalini, but knows that Shalini can be a premium bitch without her 11PM chai). "Why do you look so upset... didn't get hit on at the club?". Priyanka turns around; "oh go to hell Shalini. I came back from Manu's lab... that two-bit creature asked me why Vishal's been at my house... don't know what new leaves he's found to smoke." Shalini's eyebrow points to the sky; "... how random. Why did he ask you that all of a sudden? And why were you at the lab?" Priyanka explains, "ughh.. I was tired and irritated after we talked earlier on today. I got home and found ink prints on one of my coffee cups, and it definitely wasn't my thumb. So I took the cup to Manu.. everything was fine, I was in his lab, he was investigating.. don't know why, the twat began to accuse me of sleeping with Vishal all these days without telling him..."
Shalini's eyes grow big; "Priyanka, you CAN'T be this stupid! Manu didn't bring Vishal up just randomly! Didn't you say he was investigating something?..."




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The maid enters the scene as they're conversing. "Maidumm, majha kaam sampla. Atta mi jatey ghari," she says. "Oh, whatever, bitch. You and your work," she mumbles under her breath. Shalini is watching all this happen very curiously. "Wait a sec, she was at your home all this time," asks Shalini. "Yeah, she's my maid," replies Priyanka. A furious Shalini grabs hold of the maid's arm, twists it like a whirpool and slams her on the floor. "Tell me, who killed Vishal? Tell me," she screams at the maid. Priyanka stands there clueless.

RACHNA, POSSIBLE PLOTLINES (TO YOUR DISCRETION)

- THE MAID KNOWS OF THE INK STAINS
- MANU AND THE MAID ARE AWARE OF THE SITUATION
- MAID AND MANU ARE A MILI-BHAGAT


THE MYSTERY SHOULD UNFOLD WITHIN THE NEXT COUPLE OF PAGES. WE WILL THEN PUBLISH IT ON THE FORUM.

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