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Koiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Priyanka informs shalini that 02 september is the date given by the court. She informs shalini " Ab mujhe tum se koi contact nae karna, jo aamna samna hoga hamara court mein hoga, tumhein jitne saboot akathay karne hain karlo us ke khilaaf, mein usay be-gunaah proove kar ke hi raho gi"

Shalini gets a wake up call but she very smartly gets into control and says " Good luck, hearing mein sirf hafta hai, you might need it as you dont have time"

Priyanka disconnects the call and leads to her mission to find proof to prove vishal is innocent as she just has a week's time where as shalini heads to make her claim right that vishal is the criminal (being a determined police officer)

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mnmj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

lol, this is hilarious...we need a random comedian in this, johnny lever!!

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WickedSlayer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: listen786
lol, this is hilarious...we need a random comedian in this, johnny lever!!

😆 Thanks. You too can add to the storyline. We need more creativity here. 😃

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hasini009

@hasini009

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: -Xaffron-

😆 Thanks. You too can add to the storyline. We need more creativity here. 😃

do we need to know the story plot first, or we can write whatever we want?😆

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WickedSlayer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: hasini009

do we need to know the story plot first, or we can write whatever we want?😆

Technically speaking, it would be good if you read the past posts to make it interesting, but if you wanna change the face of the story, you're more than welcome to.. 😆 So far the story is still stuck in the investigation part.

We still have to wait for Vishal's part to come through. 😆

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@Chippeshwini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Priyanka thinks about the case all night. Multiple cups that were once filed with coffee lay strewn across the floor... until she sees one cup that has strange markings on the handle; "I wouldn't be caught dead with blue nail polish..." she takes a closer look at the cup, only to raelize that the color on the handle is not paint, but the kind of ink one has to touch to make official sarkaari papers.

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WickedSlayer

@TheSlayer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: liverach
Priyanka thinks about the case all night. Multiple cups that were once filed with coffee lay strewn across the floor... until she sees one cup that has strange markings on the handle; "I wouldn't be caught dead with blue nail polish..." she takes a closer look at the cup, only to raelize that the color on the handle is not paint, but the kind of ink one has to touch to make official sarkaari papers.

"Oh, my God!" she screams in disbelief. She rushes to the nearest forensic lab. Manu Walia (played by Karan Johar) is watching po*n on the computer. The lab is dead - It's 3:00 am.

"Manu, kai kartaay aapan?!" shouts Priyanka. "Hay hay hay! When did you learn Marathi, honey darling?" asks Manu. "Shut up! and find whose finger prints are on this mug!" she says. "And please for God's sake, no more Bang Bros DVD in the lab, or else I will complain to the authorities," threatens Priyanka. Manu snarls at her and gets back to business.

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@Chippeshwini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Two hours of sloppy, half-hearted analysis takes place in the lab, as Manu, the clearly underpaid lab technician swaps sample slips into his microscope. Rubbing his eyes, Manu wonders aloud "yaar Priyanka ne bataya nahin ki Vishal was staying over at her house... The fuq's he doing in your house eh? AND HOW DARE you hide it from me? Saali chudail..." Priyanka gets off her chair and walks towards Manu. "What bullshit. I haven't seen Vishal for months you twat!"

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WickedSlayer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: liverach
Two hours of sloppy, half-hearted analysis takes place in the lab, as Manu, the clearly underpaid lab technician swaps sample slips into his microscope. Rubbing his eyes, Manu wonders aloud "yaar Priyanka ne bataya nahin ki Vishal was staying over at her house... The fuq's he doing in your house eh? AND HOW DARE you hide it from me? Saali chudail..." Priyanka gets off her chair and walks towards Manu. "What bullshit. I haven't seen Vishal for months you twat!"

Manu claps three times. "Haye, chudail. Hum hijron ko bhagwaan ne neeche se aisa banaya hai, upar se hum sab samajhte hain," says Manu. He turns towards his mentor, Laxmi Narayan Tripathi's pic, and seeks her blessings.

Priyanka says, "Oh, whatever! I am leaving. I better get the report tomorrow." As Priyanka reaches her house, she sees Shalini trying to take a peek into her house through the window. "What the hell are you doing at this hour," asks Priyanka. "I have found a new clue," says Shalini. "I don't think Vishal is the killer and I have a gut feeling about the bar girl's murderer also," continues Shalini. "Let's go inside and talk," she says. Priyanka lets her in.