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WickedSlayer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: liverach
Just as Shalini leaves the house and is walking down the road with her chamachas, a man comes in front of her, as if he was violently pushed from a nearby building. On the ground, he rolls, screaming in his tattered clothing, and stops at Shalini's feet; "Bhagwan ke liye mujhe bachao!" he screams while grabbing Shalini's feet

"Kaun ho tum?" yells Shalini. "Kya hua hai tumhein? Kya chahiye" she yells again. "Please mujhe bachao, meri jaan khatre mein hai. Kuchh log mujhe maarkar saboot mitaana chahte hain." he pleads. "Saboot? Kaisa saboot?" asks a shocked Shalini.

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@Chippeshwini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

The man starts to cough uncontrollably; "PAANI CHAHIYE!!!", and with that, he goes unconscious. Shalini thanks heavens for letting sunshine fall in front of feet.. she urges her chamachas to get the man to her guesthouse, where they nurse him to better health.

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WickedSlayer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: liverach
The man starts to cough uncontrollably; "PAANI CHAHIYE!!!", and with that, he goes unconscious. Shalini thanks heavens for letting sunshine fall in front of feet.. she urges her chamachas to get the man to her guesthouse, where they nurse him to better health.

"Bade hi hottie ho tum," says Shalini. "W*F tumhari problem kya hai?" he gasps. "Now tell me, hottie, kya batana chahte the tum mujhe? Kaun tumhari jaan ka dushman hai?" The man tries to escape the bed he's lying on. Shalini grabs him by his collar, gives him a sleazy look, and pushes him back on bed. "Ab bol!" she says.

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@Chippeshwini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

"Jee... aap toh badi shareeef si lag rahi thi kal raat", the man says, sitting up and straightening his collar. "Waise, aapne hamari jaan toh bacha di toh.. badi meherbaani ki, thankyou ji, ab main ghar chalta hoon". Shalini turns around, gives him a stern look, and in a thick Marathi accent, exclaims, "ae shahne, tujhpe dil aa ke collar nahin khheech di maine... Fataaafat bata de, tu kal mere pairon pe gira KYUN?"

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WickedSlayer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: liverach
"Jee... aap toh badi shareeef si lag rahi thi kal raat", the man says, sitting up and straightening his collar. "Waise, aapne hamari jaan toh bacha di toh.. badi meherbaani ki, thankyou ji, ab main ghar chalta hoon". Shalini turns around, gives him a stern look, and in a thick Marathi accent, exclaims, "ae shahne, tujhpe dil aa ke collar nahin khheech di maine... Fataaafat bata de, tu kal mere pairon pe gira KYUN?"

Shalini "ARORA" in a thick "MARATHI" accent... hahahaaahha... I am loving it!! 🤣

"Ok maidum (madam). Main batayega aapko," says the ghaati man. "Thodi der pehle maine ek murder dekha tha Hotel Bimbo mein," he says. "Wahan ek aurat thi kaale wakeel ke libaas mein, aur woh kuchh photo li. Marne wali us hotel ke club mein item girl thi" he continues.

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Koiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: liverach
"Jee... aap toh badi shareeef si lag rahi thi kal raat", the man says, sitting up and straightening his collar. "Waise, aapne hamari jaan toh bacha di toh.. badi meherbaani ki, thankyou ji, ab main ghar chalta hoon". Shalini turns around, gives him a stern look, and in a thick Marathi accent, exclaims, "ae shahne, tujhpe dil aa ke collar nahin khheech di maine... Fataaafat bata de, tu kal mere pairon pe gira KYUN?"

the man cries and speaks his side of the story" muje paisay diye gaye hain apna mu band rakhne ke liye aur yeh kaha gaya hai ke mein court mein yeh bolo ke vishal innocent hai or else they will kill me and my family along.

Shalini is impateint" kon hai woh jisne tumhein paisay diye hain, muje btao, mein ek police officer hu, meray hotay hoay tumhein koi pareshani ki zarurat nae"

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@Chippeshwini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

oh shiit, wait is Shalini Juhi or Madhuri? damn 😆😆

anyway lmao

Shalini got impatient. "Kuch NAYA batao na! Ek toh katphatiye kapde pehen ke mere pairon pe tapak gaya... aur kya hua? Photo liye ussne, phir? Haan! Uss camera mein ik chip thi... woh tumne dekhi?"

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WickedSlayer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: koiza.k
the man cries and speaks his side of the story" muje paisay diye gaye hain apna mu band rakhne ke liye aur yeh kaha gaya hai ke mein court mein yeh bolo ke vishal innocent hai or else they will kill me and my family along.
Shalini is impateint" kon hai woh jisne tumhein paisay diye hain, muje btao, mein ek police officer hu, meray hotay hoay tumhein koi pareshani ki zarurat nae"

Originally posted by: liverach
oh shiit, wait is Shalini Juhi or Madhuri? damn 😆😆
anyway lmao

Shalini got impatient. "Kuch NAYA batao na! Ek toh katphatiye kapde pehen ke mere pairon pe tapak gaya... aur kya hua? Photo liye ussne, phir? Haan! Uss camera mein ik chip thi... woh tumne dekhi?"

Adding to both of your stories.

PS: Shalini = Madhuri, Priyanka = Juhi, Vishal = Randeep Hooda, Item girl = Sonam Kapoor

"Haan, maidum, marte samay ladki ne Hotel Blue Star ka naam liya tha aur kaha tha ke khooni Vishal nahin hai. Usne 'Chaman...' kaha aur mar gayi. Uske baad police aa gayi to main bhag nikla," narrated the man. "Phir kya hua?" asks Shalini.

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Koiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

shalini thinks again

she remembers that this person just told him that some one has forced him to say that vishal is innocent and now according to what reshma said about the person chammam, she is wondering what story to believe.

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WickedSlayer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

"Theek hai, mere saath police station aao aur ek official bayaan de do," says inspector Shalini. In the mean time, she gets a call on her cell phone. It's Vishal's lawyer, and Shalini's arch-nemesis, Priyanka Desai.