My First Fanfic(Part Fifteen)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Previous Parts

Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318640/my-first-fanfic

Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318884/my-first-fanfic-part-two

Part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/319518/my-first-fanfic-part-three

Part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/332225/my-first-fanfic-part-four

Part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/334344/my-first-fanfic-part-five

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/335966/my-first-fanfic-part-six

Part 7: /forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/337292/my-first-fanfic-part-seven

Part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/340575/my-first-fanfic-part-eight

Part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/341900/my-first-fanfic-part-nine

Part 10:https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=343 324

Part 11:/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/354228/my-first-fanfic-part-eleven

Part 12:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/355250/my-first-fanfic-part-twelve

Part 13:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/356562/my-first-fanfic-part-thirteen

Part 14:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/367962/my-first-fanfic-part-fourteen

Scene 36

In rehearsal hall

Mukti is really tensed as today evening is the event and she was busy seeing to the final details before the show and someone comes and gives her a parcel again. She opens it and sees a very cute tiny baby top.

For Choti Mother India
Choti Ma+ Mother India= Choti Mother India.
He He Ma will kill me if I call our baby Choti Mother India.
-Prem

After readin the note Mukti starts laughin. Prem, who was watchin all this smiles. Namritha comes.
Namritha: Hey Prem how come u look so happy?
Prem shows her Mukti.
Prem: Its so nice to see her laughin again....isn't it?
Namritha: Yeah....but wht did u do to make her happy?
Prem: I will do anythin to bring a smile on her face.... u know I wud die for her smile.

Later Mukti keeps lookin at the top and think abt her baby. Namritha comes.
Namritha: Hey.....such a cute top.
Mukti: Prem gave it.
Prem: Really????He really loves you two.
Mutki: I don't know.
Namritha: I know Mukti.... He really loves you a lot. He really cares for you. More than anyone he regrets wht happened between you two.He can't change wht happened but he can make you happy. I know ur indifference hurts him but he is not sayin anythin because he knows he deserves it and more. But now Mukti he is that Prem u loved, he is not Yudi anymore. he loves u to death Mukti.
Mukti just looks at Namritha.
Namritha: Don't u think Mukti tht ur baby deserves a family? Don't u want a family? Doesn't u baby need a father? Life without parents r hell Mutki, I know. Why don't u give him a last chance? Don't marry him now....at least talk to him and see if u both have a future. Just don't turn ur back on him.
Mukti somehow feels that whatever Namritha is sayin is also ri8.
Namritha: Will u talk to him after the show?
Mukti: Okay.
Namritha gets excited: Great!!!
Mukti: Don't tell him.
Namritha: No I won't, let him suffer for little more.
Namritha was abt to walk off.
Mukti: Her name is Prerna.
Namritha: Wht?
Mutki: Our baby....her name is Prerna.
Namritha: Really??? Wow Prerna aunty will be so happy when she hears it.
Mukti: Prem named her.
Namritha: Thats even more great. You know Prem and Prerna aunt talked out their differences.
Mukti: I know.... Choti Ma told me.



Scene 37

After the event.

Prerna, Bajaj, Anurag and Sam r standin together and Prem comes there.
Prem( excitedly): Ma..... How do u like the event?
Prerna: Very good.I am so happy.
Sam: It was an excellent show.
Prem: Thanx.( HE looks at Bajaj) Daddy co.........Dad?
Bajaj: The event was excellent.
Prem: Thanx. ( He looks at Anurag): Dad?
Anurag feels so happy tht Prem called him Dad. His eyes starts fillin with tears: It was really great. I am so proud of u.
Prem: All the credit goes to Mutki.
Prerna: Where is Mukti?
Prem: Backstage, with Namritha and Sneha.
Bajaj starts smilin: So howz ur wooin comin?
Prem smiles: Its okay.... she doesn't trust me anymore... so I am tryin to win her trust. Don't know wht to do.
Prerna: Don't worry Prem...Everythin will be fine.
Prem: Yeah lets hope.

Scene 38

Prem is talkin to his guests when he gets a call. It is Mukti.
Prem: Mutki?
Mukti: Prem I want to talk to you. Can u come out now?
Prem: Sure Mukti.

Prem goes out and is waitin for Mukti.
Suddenly his (loser)girl friends come. Prem suddenly gets tensed.
Gf1: Hey Yudi...great show.
Prem: Thanx.... y don't u all go in I will come in a while.
Gf2: No lets go party.
Prem: No, I am busy now.... u guys go.
Prem is wonderin: Wht did i see in these girls?
Suddenly one of the girl hugs him.Prem pushes her away when Mukti comes and sees her hugin Prem. She walks off. Prem runs behind her.
Prem: Mukti pls listen to me.
Mukti(angrily): I don't want to listen to u.
Prem: Pls Mukti. I didn't do anythin.... She hugged me, I didn't hug her.
Mutki: I don't want to hear anythin. I was such a fool to believe every1 tht u changed.... but u didn't change at all.u r the same. U will never change.
Prem: Mukti, pls let me explain.
Mukti: I hate u Prem.
Mutki walks off and Prem fells bad and gets in his car and drive off.

Scene 37

Inside

Anurag, Sam, Bajaj and Prerna r talkin.
Anurag: Prem has changed alot.
Prerna: Yeah all the credit goes to Mukti and Namritha.
Mr Bajaj: It feels so nice tht he has accepted us.
Sam: Once Prem and Mukti gets married eveythin will be alrite.

Suddenly Anurag's phone starts ringin. He picks up the phone and listen for sometime.
Anurag gets alarmed : What?
He slowly keeps the phone.
Mr Bajaj: Is everythin alrite?
Anurag: No Mr Bajaj.
Mr Bajaj: Wht is it Mr Basu?
Anurag: Sharath escaped from the jail.

Part 16:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/381849/my-first-fanfic-part-sixteen

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanx to broken heart for the Mini Mother India idea.... Choti Mother India I got it from u.
and pls do comment guys
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wooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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gr8 👏 👏 👏
continue soon 😊
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I love it pls pls conyinue soon!
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awww its soo good cary on!
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wow, continue soon please! 👏
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thats really gud plz rite sec one soon 👏
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hey yaar this is very good..
no words
write the rest of this sooooon 👏
i love this
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oh i luv it cont soon plzplzplzpzplz

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