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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: J.Rahman

hey neha u alright ?

am fine had mehendi in my hands... just thinking should i type or not afteall mehendi ka sawal h
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neha512

am fine had mehendi in my hands... just thinking should i type or not afteall mehendi ka sawal h

hmm...to jub dry hojae n tmhy easy ho to update krdena...😊😛

ok na...??

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nemra

hmm...to jub dry hojae n tmhy easy ho to update krdena...😊😛

ok na...??

ok... after all how can i say no to my dr readers...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
jb dry hojaye tb update krdena...me b mehndi lagawa leti hu ab since update will b late
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Posted: 13 years ago

happy raksha bandhan to all my friends and

hope you all have your pockets filled with lots of money

and girfts…🥳

PART 46

they went outhouse and freshened up… till they reached mansion for dinner dev and annie too came back… they gave geet a teasing look for coming back with maan as they made armaan speak out the truth once they find him alone… geet got an instant blush remembering whatever they did in hall… these days we had been really shameless no not me only he jab dekho shuru ho jate h he never cares about the place huh she thought blushingly…

they all settled down for dinner… shyna came late and settled beside geet… the dinner was silent affair… in the middle maan asked rice to be passed… the bowl was kept near shyna and she extended her hand to give it too maan… geet was sitting between the two and when shyna extended her hand she noticed few red marks on her hand… shyna what's these asked geet shocked taking her hand in his… maan looked at them and saw red finger marks and then he remembered he held her tightly when he pushed her out of the room… ahh geet that's nothing said shyna trying to take her hand back… no shyna these look like finger marks how did you get them… shyna looked at maan for a moment and geet caught her eye too but soon shyna diverted the topic saying some guy messed with her when she was out and thus the marks…

geet was about to ask something when maan interrupted… geet I think they are not much deep and she would be fine by tomorrow we should continue… ha geet maan is right it would be ok… said shyna supporting maan… geet looked at both of them and felt a tension between them… but then she dismissed the thought saying may be I am thinking too much maan would never do that to a girl… shyna come with me I will apply some ointment… geet took shyna with her in the room…

they settled down and geet brought the ointment to apply on her mark… shyna thought its an opportunity to start her plan… waise geet did you both had love marriage shyna asked looking at geet as if really interested in the matter… no we both had arranged marriage said geet giving a slight smile to her… so how long had been you married… asked shyna… more than 7 months or nearly 8 months I say… that's great so you would have started understanding each other better too… hmm said geet we know each other better than we know ourselves… said geet getting lost in her husband… that's what I will test geet how better you understand each other… shyna thought with an evil smirk…

waise did you both had any relationships in past too… geet gave her a questioning look… no I mean you know girlfriends boyfriends before marriage said shyna clearing her point… no I never believed in these relationships before I met maan said geet with a glow and blush on her face… but what about maan I mean did he had any girlfriend in past … geet stopped in tracks… she looked a little uncomfortable with the topic… she didn't liked the idea of maan having any other person In his life… she felt that she have the sole right on him and no other girl could have him… geet said shyna broking her of thoughts… shyna I never asked him and if he ever had too they were past and past are not meant to be remembered In present… now he have me and beside me he would never think of anyone… said geet with a confident look which spoke of her trust on maan…

shyna was dumbfounded with her trust and the confidence she spoke… with the look of geet when she was busy in thoughts she assumed that now geet would feel uncomfortable or would doubt maan but she seemed so cool on the matter… geet I understand what you are saying but seeing maan we both know he has an amazing charm and looks that can attract any girl like a moth to fire said shyna tried to enrage geet… geet gave her a smirk and said you are right shyna he can attract anyone like a moth to fire but that moth just has a destiny to burn and destroy… she can never survive after trying to get near the fire… it's the candle wick which can have and handle the fire … that is burn to accompany fire till both dies at the same time and that's only one…

shyna looked at geet open mouthed… she didn't expected that answer… she expected her to be jealous… well who won't be if he had someone like maan but geet's each word spoke of the blind trust and faith she had in him… I never expected that from her damn but still I will execute my plan to see how long this trust lasts… geet lets see till when your husband can escape me.. thaught shyna… before shyna could say anything geet excused herself out…

whole night geet kept repeating shyna's word… her marks her interest in knowing about them and the look in her eyes confused geet… she looked at maan sleeping on her keeping his head on her chest and arms around her waist holding her tightly… she traced his manly features… she had felt him tensed whenever they were in mansion after shyna's arrival… but she dismissed thinking that he is uncomfortable with them around as he would be normal in there room… she looked at his calm face… however handsome he may…. but more than his physical charm it's his golden heart that attracted her to him… though she would not deny that his sensual looks came as a bonus… she kept thinking about shyna didn't realized when sleep engulfed her…

next day both maan and geet were working together in office in their respective cabins… maan was engrossed in his files when he heard a knock on his cabin…without looking up he asked the person to come in… he heard click sound of doors being closed and looked up at the person… he was shocked to see shyna there…

what are you doing here in my office and my cabin… he shouted on her… she came near him trying to touch him… chill maan I was going somewhere and thought to have a check on you… she was about to touch his jaw when he backed out… shyna stay away or I will have to throw you out of here… he said gritting his teeth… ahh you look more desirable when angry said shyna trying to touch him again… he pushed her and gave her a glare as if it affected her… shyna how low are you… even a prostitute would be better than you… but you huh I even feel ashamed to take your name… he said with a disgusted look on his face…

shyna opened first 3 buttons of her tightly fitted top which gave a better view of her cleavage and her deep valley too… maan was still unaware of that… he went back to his chair and was going to call security…she bowed a little on table so that her moulds could be seen and gave a seductive look to him… maan who is saying you to leave geet just few moments with me won't hurt much did it… she said which blew maan's temper to a new level…

he raised his hand to hit her but stopped in mid hearing the sound of door opening… his hands were still in air when he looked wide eyed to the person standing in front of him….


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Posted: 13 years ago

happy raksha bandhan to all my friends and

hope you all have your pockets filled with lots of money

and girfts…🥳

PART 46

they went outhouse and freshened up… till they reached mansion for dinner dev and annie too came back… they gave geet a teasing look for coming back with maan as they made armaan speak out the truth once they find him alone… geet got an instant blush remembering whatever they did in hall… these days we had been really shameless no not me only he jab dekho shuru ho jate h he never cares about the place huh she thought blushingly…

they all settled down for dinner… shyna came late and settled beside geet… the dinner was silent affair… in the middle maan asked rice to be passed… the bowl was kept near shyna and she extended her hand to give it too maan… geet was sitting between the two and when shyna extended her hand she noticed few red marks on her hand… shyna what's these asked geet shocked taking her hand in his… maan looked at them and saw red finger marks and then he remembered he held her tightly when he pushed her out of the room… ahh geet that's nothing said shyna trying to take her hand back… no shyna these look like finger marks how did you get them… shyna looked at maan for a moment and geet caught her eye too but soon shyna diverted the topic saying some guy messed with her when she was out and thus the marks…

geet was about to ask something when maan interrupted… geet I think they are not much deep and she would be fine by tomorrow we should continue… ha geet maan is right it would be ok… said shyna supporting maan… geet looked at both of them and felt a tension between them… but then she dismissed the thought saying may be I am thinking too much maan would never do that to a girl… shyna come with me I will apply some ointment… geet took shyna with her in the room…

they settled down and geet brought the ointment to apply on her mark… shyna thought its an opportunity to start her plan… waise geet did you both had love marriage shyna asked looking at geet as if really interested in the matter… no we both had arranged marriage said geet giving a slight smile to her… so how long had been you married… asked shyna… more than 7 months or nearly 8 months I say… that's great so you would have started understanding each other better too… hmm said geet we know each other better than we know ourselves… said geet getting lost in her husband… that's what I will test geet how better you understand each other… shyna thought with an evil smirk…

waise did you both had any relationships in past too… geet gave her a questioning look… no I mean you know girlfriends boyfriends before marriage said shyna clearing her point… no I never believed in these relationships before I met maan said geet with a glow and blush on her face… but what about maan I mean did he had any girlfriend in past … geet stopped in tracks… she looked a little uncomfortable with the topic… she didn't liked the idea of maan having any other person In his life… she felt that she have the sole right on him and no other girl could have him… geet said shyna broking her of thoughts… shyna I never asked him and if he ever had too they were past and past are not meant to be remembered In present… now he have me and beside me he would never think of anyone… said geet with a confident look which spoke of her trust on maan…

shyna was dumbfounded with her trust and the confidence she spoke… with the look of geet when she was busy in thoughts she assumed that now geet would feel uncomfortable or would doubt maan but she seemed so cool on the matter… geet I understand what you are saying but seeing maan we both know he has an amazing charm and looks that can attract any girl like a moth to fire said shyna tried to enrage geet… geet gave her a smirk and said you are right shyna he can attract anyone like a moth to fire but that moth just has a destiny to burn and destroy… she can never survive after trying to get near the fire… it's the candle wick which can have and handle the fire … that is burn to accompany fire till both dies at the same time and that's only one…

shyna looked at geet open mouthed… she didn't expected that answer… she expected her to be jealous… well who won't be if he had someone like maan but geet's each word spoke of the blind trust and faith she had in him… I never expected that from her damn but still I will execute my plan to see how long this trust lasts… geet lets see till when your husband can escape me.. thaught shyna… before shyna could say anything geet excused herself out…

whole night geet kept repeating shyna's word… her marks her interest in knowing about them and the look in her eyes confused geet… she looked at maan sleeping on her keeping his head on her chest and arms around her waist holding her tightly… she traced his manly features… she had felt him tensed whenever they were in mansion after shyna's arrival… but she dismissed thinking that he is uncomfortable with them around as he would be normal in there room… she looked at his calm face… however handsome he may…. but more than his physical charm it's his golden heart that attracted her to him… though she would not deny that his sensual looks came as a bonus… she kept thinking about shyna didn't realized when sleep engulfed her…

next day both maan and geet were working together in office in their respective cabins… maan was engrossed in his files when he heard a knock on his cabin…without looking up he asked the person to come in… he heard click sound of doors being closed and looked up at the person… he was shocked to see shyna there…

what are you doing here in my office and my cabin… he shouted on her… she came near him trying to touch him… chill maan I was going somewhere and thought to have a check on you… she was about to touch his jaw when he backed out… shyna stay away or I will have to throw you out of here… he said gritting his teeth… ahh you look more desirable when angry said shyna trying to touch him again… he pushed her and gave her a glare as if it affected her… shyna how low are you… even a prostitute would be better than you… but you huh I even feel ashamed to take your name… he said with a disgusted look on his face…

shyna opened first 3 buttons of her tightly fitted top which gave a better view of her cleavage and her deep valley too… maan was still unaware of that… he went back to his chair and was going to call security…she bowed a little on table so that her moulds could be seen and gave a seductive look to him… maan who is saying you to leave geet just few moments with me won't hurt much did it… she said which blew maan's temper to a new level…

he raised his hand to hit her but stopped in mid hearing the sound of door opening… his hands were still in air when he looked wide eyed to the person standing in front of him….


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Posted: 13 years ago
whatever happens Geet has to trust Maan !
pweaseee !
Edited by lil.mizz.smexii - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update ! Loved it ! Ohh God u ended it on a clif hanger :/ continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

geet he hogi or kon hoga...

bt i dnt think k geet maan se gussa hogi wo khud shyna ko sabaq sekhaegi just like sasha...

nice love it...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update! How would he explain the situation to Geet now?

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