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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon


no sorry worry...its demand of the story...n ys shyna would come to maan to show us hw cheap that girl is n hw pure our maan is...n i hope geet will trust her maan also like maan trusted her for raj...i m only saying geet has to try to understand her responsibilities more n behave like a matured girl when she is bounding wth her in laws...

i agree with you and i will surely make her do so this story is just a half way complete you need to tolerate me for next 30-40 updates and see the slow changes in her
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb but i really hate this shayna i hope ki iski vajah se maneet ke beech koi probl na aaye aur raj aur geet ke baare main bhi maan ko koi mu na ho pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
MAAN WAS JEALOUS AT THE THOUGHT OF GEET BEING WITH RAJ

AND THIS SHYAN😡A
AM GLAD THAT HE IGNORED HER BUT STILL DONT TRUST HER
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb dear, loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 45

it was next morning both were sleeping till late… both didn't get much sleep last night because of the whole ruckus that happened and it was nearly 10 still both were sleepily cozy with each other… dadima sent nakul to wake them up as both were late for their college and office respectively… after few loud bangs maan woke up rubbing his eyes tiredly… he looked at the watch thinking who is disturbing him so early and was in for a big shock seeing the time… oh god itna late hogya and i had a meeting at 11 ab how will I reach there on time

he rushed to washroom after giving geet her usual morning kiss… after 10 mins he came out in his trouser and towel hung around his wet water dripping shoulders… at the same time geet opened her eyes to welcome such a heavenly scene at morning… she kept staring his boy lost while he got ready unaware of the piercing gaze that was following his every move… maan was combing his hair when he saw geet staring at him through mirror… geet I know I am hot but you can stare me later now get ready for your college as you are late… he gave her a smirk which made her go red with blush…

she stood up from bed and heard knock… nakul came with maan's breakfast… nakul I am late I will eat something in office… said maan to nakul in hurry of getting ready… nakul looked at geet and she gestured him to keep the breakfast on table… nakul did so and left the couple alone… geet saw him struggling with his tie as in hurry he was not able to do it right… geet shake her head thinking looking his stupid struggle… she picked the sandwich from plate and went near maan… she pulled tie from his hand and gave the sandwich to him… geet am really late mazak mat karo abi… he said getting frustrated…

she moved his hand with sandwich to his mouth and made him take a bite forcefully… then she placed the tie around his neck pulling him to her… she straightened his collar and tied the tie around his neck while forcing few bites in his mouth In mid whenever he would get lost in her… after the tie was done she brought his wallet and cell and gave it to him… he gave a sweet peck on her forehead and rushed back to his office…

geet got ready and went to meet dadima in mansion… whole khurana clan was present there… dadi gave her a sweet smile as she saw her… bte you trio didn't went to your college today dadi there is some college fest for juniors and thus we seniors had holidays chirped annie… that's great so whats your plan for today asked dadi to them… dadi movie plan h evening mein with whole gang.. that's great but be careful you all… said dadi warning them about their security… dadi itne hatte katte dolo sholo wale h apan k sath ki hona h hme said annie… the mention of muscles reminded geet of maan now there was an urgent need to be with him… dadi I am planning to go office today that's great bte waise bhi maan is late for the meeting aj unke work schedule clash ho jaege you go and handle his work… dadi patted geet and they left for their respective work…

geet entered inside office happily asked pinky for maan… geet sir is busy in meeting will be free in few minutes said pinky nibbling her chocolate sundae… geet thanked her and was about to go when she heard adi's voice from back… she hid behind the pillar and looked them from hiding there… pinky are you free today… she heard adi speaking holding pinky's hand… kya adi sir leave my hand anyone will see said pinky being all blushy blushy… not before you agree to come today with me said adi romantically… geet saw pinky just seeing here and there looking if someone is coming or not… god they will never move ahead thought geet( though madam ki khud hi hi love story bhut slow track pe h😆)

she entered maan's cabin and looked at the black arm chair on the other side of the table… she went near it and caressed the black leather head rest trying to get his feel from him… she slowly kept moving her hand on it lost in the morning incident… she heard loud footsteps coming in the direction and hid herself behind the curtains… she saw maan coming in taking long footsteps with a stern look on his face… maan kept the file on table and stood there to drink water… he was surprised when two soft hands slipped around him from back… he knew who exactly was there and pulled her hand more close slamming her on his back…

geet caressed his back with her cheeks rubbing there… he was getting lost with her soft caresses over that thick coat and shirt still he could feel the heat generating in him… not being able to control himself he pulled her to him in front… he placed his hand around her petite waist while she placed her hands on his firm shoulders… so madam aaj yha kaise.. he asked her rubbing his nose on her cheeks… she felt his warm breath falling on her and moved more closer to him… college is off so thought of coming here to be with you she said softly trying to control her fast heartbeats…

I thought you would be with that friend of yours… he said with a voice that reflected his longing and jealousy too… she understood he was not happy with her not being with him for whole day… she felt bad on herself… though raj is special to her still maan's place is much higher than anyone for her she realized that very instant… ab mera itna hot and sexy hubby h to mai khi aur kaise jau and if I continued to get my morning coffee regularly tab to mai apke bina reh hi na pau… she said to lighten the situation clearly hinting him about the morning feast she received… maan pulled her closer hearing her bold comment reducing even an inch of distance between them… she could see the longing being replaced by an instant love and passion for her and did a little bhangra in her mind to bring him back…

maan looked hungrily at her pink plump lip and licked his lip clearly telling her his intentions… an instant pink hue adored her face seeing him back to his naughty self… maan rubbed his thumb on her cheek giving a churn in her the pit of her stomach and placed his lips slowly on the corner of her mouth… geet groaned seeing his torture… he slowly removed his lips and placed them back to the other corner… it was enough for geet to control… she stood on her tiptoes and placed her lips harshly on his taking his both lips in her mouth… she was carnal… she bit him licked him suck him… he moaned her name in the passion… he moved his tongue into her mouth making it contact with hers… they played their own sweet game till it was difficult for them to breathe…

they broke apart while geet hid herself in the protective shield of his arms… they were disturbed by the knock on door for meeting and maan made puppy face not being ready to go… geet smiled at him and said today I am here for you whole day happy now go and attend the meeting…

whole day they spent together sometimes working in mid too if they were free of each other for sometime… around 4 she received call from annie about the movie… she looked at maan if can she go… he looked the desperation in her eyes and agreed… they picked her up from office and all met in the theatre…

all were deciding on which movie they should see… now girls wanted to see romantic bollywod movie while boys action Hollywood movies… they were in for a fight there themselves… nupur by mistake pointed on horror movie… as nupur was the only girl who loved horror movies and geet pretended to love them for her so called strong izzat in the girl clan the boys agreed for that thinking of getting some cozy time with their partner… they tried to get all seats together but they got 7 seats together and one on the last row…

the couples didn't wanted to seat separate and annie need dev and raj by her side to see the whole movie or god knows she would have ended in washroom for the three hours and thus finally geet was left alone at the back… geet made an angry face but none paid attention to her cribbing and left her alone… she said there giving gallis to them when her cell beeped she looked at the message from maan… jaan hows the movie he texted her… maan these idiots lift me alone at the back row that too in the middle one to see the horror movie... just let us out I won't leave them… she texted back…

as the movie started the hall was dimmed… scary voices and loud howls covered the hall making geet dead at the moment… she tried to see the movie saying its all fake its all fake but as the scary ghost with blood stained face came on the screen she closed her eyes tightly thinking kash maan would have been with her… in the next second she felt a hand around her and she turned her face scared in order to see the most enchanting eyes she ever saw… she hugged him tightly hiding her face in his neck… he could feel the tremble in her lips due to fear and a light shiver in her body… he saw the theatre was mainly occupied infront and middle and none was seeing back engrossed in the movie with their partners he pulled her to him mostly making her sit on his lap…

she rested herself completely on him…trying to cover her ears from those scary voices… maan placed his hand on her ears rubbing her back to sooth her… soon he felt her calm and separated her from him a little… my mishty too is scared of something that's a surprise otherwise its always me who is scared of her… he said to transfer her mind from those voices while she smiled knowing his attempt… she gave him a smile which relaxed him finally you smiled warna I would have killed that raj for this stupid plan he said to her… she gave him a glare… don't say anything to my raj its that nupur who planned it… maan made a face at my raj and geet smiled seeing him jealous…

she hugged him tightly while he watched the movie… geet waise the movie is nice he said seeing her not at all even giving a glance to screen… of course you will like those ghosts you to belong to their race only she taunted him back… he gave her a glare for that while she twisted her lips in response… geet atleast see a little if you won't like it we will return ok… geet looked at him scared eyes while he just made her see the screen…

she did felt less scared as his presence was itself enough for her to know that nothing can happen to her if he is there… they saw the movie together and sometime glancing each other… whenever a ghost would appear she would hold his hand tightly digging her nails into him still he didn't made a hiss knowing she would feel guilty looking at those marks… he left with her before anyone can see them as the movie ended and she messaged armaan that she is with maan who understood the rest and handled the situation…

I knew many wanted to give me their love with juttis and chappals because of yesterday's update 😡so here is this…now I think I deserve long long comments…..😉


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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED the Maaneet scenes !
Edited by lil.mizz.smexii - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update dear
Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
muski di you read my update its really an honour for me😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hain Maan 😳
Geet's morning coffee dose
so cute n adorable
Geet making up to Maan
Adi -Pinky lovestory needs a dhakka😉
loved the movie part
😊
Edited by heytal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

love love love it...❤️

morning treat for geet n good nite for me...😉hehe...😆

love the movie part...🤗

awsome update...👍🏼


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