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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
congrats on the new thread!

loved the last part... a lil emotional...

now am much eager to know about geets past

u updating!!!! me waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
congratzz for new thread dear !!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Its 11.45 pm...now I am
Will read tomorrow
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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys will take an hour more...
please keep waiting for the new entry...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratz on new thread
waiting for the update.😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CONGRATS ON THE NEW THREAD.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha512

dear 20 mins more...

okzz...m waiting 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I can't believe we reached on thread 4 me flying in air out of happiness' thanks guys its all possible because of your love and support for our ff' and I am impressed by your intehaa love for this ff'

PART 43

maan was shocked to see geet's cell ringing that to at around 6 am' it was early morning and who would call her at this early he thought' he looked at geet's pale face as she picked her cell to see the caller' but as she saw the caller id her face regained her lost color and a bright smile shined on her face' she immediately picked the call and started shouting' I hate you hate you hate you' and scrunched her nose showing fake anger'

maan was getting shocks since yesterday and now her sudden change shocked him the most' as per his experience with her if she is sad once she would take a long time to regain her bubbly self and now in front of his eyes she changed her mood totally that to within a second' he could hear a faint sorry coming from the other side around hundred times still she didn't speak anything just gave a 100 dollar smile with each sorry of the person'

though he is thankful to the person for making his mishty smile still he didn't liked that she smiled because of some other person'now he knew he was behaving over possessive but still it was his mishty and he have right to be with that her' he tried ask her who is calling but she didn't paid any attention to him' he then heard her showering more than 10 kisses on the person from the cell which made him lose his temper and he left to washroom banging the door still she was oblivious to her surrounding'

boyfriend I am very angry from you said geet puffing her cheeks to the caller' hey girlfriend you know I was so busy these days so I was not able to cal you' busy these days said geet pressing each word' it had been more than 6 months that you called me and you are saying just these days huh she said cribbing sweetly' janu you know na I had an important mission and I was busy on that since those days but now I am here for you na' he said tried to manaofy her'

ha ha I know your being with me over the phone right' she said sarcastically' nah there is a surprise for you guess what' don't say you are coming here in Delhi' she said excitedly' yes dear I am coming and would be there in next 8 hours' he replied' omg great news I will come to receive you on airport' I will be waiting' see you soon and please don't miss the flight like last time remember I had to wait for you full 10 hours on that bloody airport still no sign of yours and then I was told that YOU DIDN'T BOARD IT DUE TO SOME NEW ASSIGNENT she said angrily' no janu this time I will paka come just be there on time for me' ok now me hanging up my flight is going to take off' byee boyfriend' they both hung up'

now maan was seriously gonna faint with what he heard' doesn't she just addressed her caller as boyfriend or my hearing power had any defect'he clicked his fingers near his ears' nah am sure she just said boyfriend but to whom' he was standing on the bathroom door still trying to analyze who that bas***d was to whom she was calling her boyfriend that too so sweetly' he looked at his mishty who was engrossed in dancing in the room with the happiness' as she saw maan she went to him and pulled his cheeks'

maan my boyfriend my janu is coming today am so happy she said hugging him tight' he thought she hd completely lost it' come on how can she say to me that her boyfriend is coming and that too so excitedly' geet who is coming he asked her breaking from his thoughts' but before he could complete she left the room excitedly leaving him all confused behind'

he left for his work out frustrated and practiced his tai-chi vigorously trying to calm himself still he wanted to know who was that person' he remembered In college there were many boys who approached her still she rejected all... she never had any affairs then when did her boyfriend born' after an hour torturing himself he came to his room seeing her all ready to go out somewhere' geet where are you going this early he asked impatiently' she kept wearing her earrings replying him through mirror'

maan since he is coming na and he will ofcourse stay with that dumbo armaan thus I am going to his house to ensure that everything is well prepared for him' you know he loves everything perfectly and you can't imagine amy to do all that so its only me who can set his room she replied fast and left for armaan's house'

geet rang armaan's house bell continuously for 10 mins till he opened the door' abe pagal ho gyi h kya kyu mera dimaag khane ayi h itni subah tujhe maan ne ghar se nikal diya kya' she pushed him aside and shouted from inside her boyfriend's room shut up dumbo maar khayega and come help me to settle the room' he came slowly rubbing his eyes kya yaar why are you setting his room now when he will come do all that' o hello we have college in 2 hours and after that I have to go to pick him up how will I do then' armaan gasped you mean he is coming today' she slapped his forehead'

kaise cousin ho yaar he is coming after almost a year and you have no knowledge of him she said going to change bed sheets' oh please don't blame me mera bhai h par mujhse jyada dujhse chipakta h wo' he said taunting' he said moving to help her' why don't you say you are jealous ki jab wo ata h to riddima tujhe ghas ni deti she said laughing loud' whatever he said twisting his lips' still I can't believe last time when he came you all used to come here to whole day just to spend time with him and that ridzy hai to meri girlfriend but whenever we both fight she takes his side leaving me all alone' he said making weird faces'

they both settled his room beautifully with new covers pillows curtains flowers everything'

even armaan didn't had such a beautiful room but he loved his bro way too be jealous of him' he adores him for being the perfect gentle man and support of the family' ha that's a different thing that he has mre female following than him he sighed thinking the last part'

both rushed to college as they were late and they had to tell everyone of his arrival too' whole gang was excited to meet him but geet was flying in air with the happiness' she would be this happy only when he would be in delhi and those days of her would be completely dedicated to him'

nearly 3 geet and amy rushed to airport to receive him' they were waiting him for him when geet's cell buzzed.. it was maan who was waiting for her in the office thinking she would join him today permanently' but his wishes were crashed when he heard her maan aaj wo aa rha h so am not coming office please ok byee she cut the call without hearing his reply as she saw him coming toward them' maan was angry with her ignorance since morning and now she cut call on me maan singh khurana' yeh kaun aa rha h jisne meri jindagi ka ek din me yeh haal kar dia he thought'

geet rushed to him and hugged him tight while he to held her tightly from waist lifting her in air and turning making her laugh in happiness' their hug was broken by armaan who said oh hello I am also there to receive you no one loves me he said cribbing like a baby' while he too was engulfed in a tight hug' as he leave armaan he received a tight slap from geet who pulled his collar and said loudly mr rajveer am still damn angry on you for not coming back for more than a year and not calling me for more than 6 months and then herself hugged him back' I missed you raj so much she said as tears flowed from her eyes out of happiness' me too janu he replied kissing her on forehead'

their hug was broken by armaan's voice abe tum logo ko public drama karna jaruri h kya lets go to home and then do your roothna manana' he taunted and received tight punches from raj and geet and they left to armaan's house'



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Edited by neha512 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Super update
Maan ke tote ud gaye😆
Maan J😡 this will be fun
Raj kafi bhaari bharkam entry hui
continue soon
😳
Edited by heytal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
wow superb update.
geet is calling rajveer boyfriend and giving kisses over phone.
And maan is getting J
oh I am enjoying it.
Poor maan.
love it.
Edited by J.Rahman - 13 years ago

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