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Posted: 13 years ago
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thats soo sad 😭😭, hope Rajbeer will be reunited with his family...Sana Thank you sooo much for updating...love this one...great writing as always. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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My favouriting FF of all your writings...
Yaar tum bhi CV's ki tarah Rajbeer ko mat tadpao 😉
great going can't wait for "HAPPY ENDING"
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Muskaan and Preeto had left him again and he went back come empty handed. As soon as he entered the house he went to a room. Not his bedroom but another room. He opened the door and looked at all the toys he had bought. The room was colorful, with lots of stuffed animals on the bed, there were many books in the room, lego blocks, everything a child would want. Then room was however designed for girl. He lifted a doll and then sat on the pink bed. Rajbeer had a tear ' yeh sab meine tumhare liye liya tha Muskaan. Apni betti key liye. Mere pyaar tumhari mamma ki zid key samhe haar gaya. Haar gaya.

He looked at a photoframe that held a picture of Muskaan that he had secretly taken. He was in the room till like 9 pm when the doorbell rang. Rajbeer didn't want to see anyone, he didn't want to open the door. But the person ringing the doorbell was really stubborn. Rajbeer finally gave up and then went to open the door. He looked straight but he didn't see anyone. Then he heard someone say- papa

He looked down and saw Muskaan. He kneeled down and hugged her. Rajbeer- Muskaan

Muskaan- apko patta hai mamma ney apna decision change kar liya.

Rajbeer- lekin mamma hai kaha.

Preeto- yaha

Rajbeer looked up and found Preeto. Rajbeer- Preeto.

She smiled and kneeled down. Preeto- bhaut pareshaan kiya than a meine' im sorry

Rajbeer- its okay

Rajbeer didn't say anything else and hugged his daughter and wife. After years of waiting he finally reunited with his family.

Muskaan- ab kya ap donu firse shaadi karengay.

Rajbeer and Preeto smiled.

1 week later'.

The family had been watching a movie, they had comforter and popcorn. Rajbeer was in the middle and Muskaan was sleeping. On one side of Rajbeer, Muskaan was sleeping, she cuddled against him. Rajpreet were still awake and then the movie ended with the leads kissing. Preeto too cuddled against Rajbeer. She looked up- acchi movie thi na.

Rajbeer looked down and smiled- bhaut acchi thi.

He was trying to bring his face close to hers. Preeto got up- chalo bedroom mein choud ao Muskaan ko.

Rajbeer- thik hai.

He got up and then carried Muskaan to her room. Preeto opened the door for him, and he went and placed Muskaan on the bed. Preeto pulled the blanket up for her and caressed her hair. Rajpreet then got up and walked out of the room. Preeto looked back and then closed the lights. Rajbeer closed the door. Preeto was going to their bedroom when Rajbeer pulled her wrist. Rajbeer- tum kaha ja rahi ho

Rajbeer bent and then picked her up in his arms. Rajpreet smiled.

Bedroom'

Rajbeer finally put Preeto on the bed, she was on the bed and he was on top of her. Preeto- Rajbeer bhaut raat ho chuki hai soh jao.

Rajbeer- nahi' itne saal hoga a aur ek bhi kiss nahi mili

Rajbeer brought his lips towards hers and then kissed her lips. Rajbeer made a sound that clearly meant he like it. He kissed her more making the same noise and then Preeto started laughing. Rajbeer finally stopped kissing her. Rajbeer- tumhara yeh naya lip balm pehle wale se bhaut accha hai. Pehle mujhe thodi takleef hoti thi tumhe kiss karney mein after all tum pehle strong mint wala lip balm use karti thi' lekin ab yeh naya wala hai strawberry wala.

Preeto smiled. Rajbeer rubbed his lips against hers and said- bite me.

Preeto- nahi

Rajbeer- mujhe bite karo ya mein tumhe bite karlonga.

Preeto started biting his lip a little. Rajbeer- pehle wala bite karo na

Preeto then bite his lip and he winced. Preeto- kya hua dard hua

Rajbeer- khabi khabi mujhe lagta hai key tum ek vampire ho' itni sharp teeth

Preeto laughed- thank u

Rajbeer- ur welcome

Preeto- meine toh pehle hi maanah kiya tha.

Rajbeer- maanah kiya tha' abhi dekhta hon.

Rajbeer buried his head in her neck and she smiled.


THE END!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
OMG Finally Jiddi Preeto Maan gayi..Very happy ending
Gosh, i was blushing reading the last whole scene .😳😳😳😳
Sana - A big hug for writing Muskaan and bringing Muskaan on our face..🤗🤗🤗🤗
This is my favourite FF of all your writings ..will surely miss this but glad you ended on right note w/o stretching too much :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankitaluv

OMG Finally Jiddi Preeto Maan gayi..Very happy ending

Gosh, i was blushing reading the last whole scene .😳
Sana - A big hug for writing Muskaan and bringing Muskaan on our face..🤗
This is my favourite FF of all your writings ..will surely miss this but glad you ended on right note w/o stretching too much :)


Thank u and please stay on this forum and read my Imaginary Episodes,
Edited by unknownunknown - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
I dont want to stretch the current event in the Imagination episodes because its kind of boring... Preeto is seating in the bed, Rajbeer comes with her food and all. Lets get down to the real punch.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww Sana loved this FF...it was just superb...you did an amazing job and the ending was sooo nice..I am soo happy rajbeer, preeto & muskaan are all united, what lovely ending and Saina is right good you didn't stretch it...Thank you soo much for writing Muskaan. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
I too loved this part all emotions are here mainly i love father and daughter relation.. and a happy ending at last our Rajpreet united amazing job sana👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Yayay Rajpreet ka milan akhir hogayi 😃
Finally Picture Perfect Rajpreet Muskaan...🥳
and Sana last scene omg iam saying na ur besttt at writing Romantic scenes...i was jus blushing...Rajpreet too hott...☺️☺️
Grt Job Sana loved Muskaan FF...👏

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