Muskaan LAST PART!!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hope you continue soon...love to know what will happen next...take your time though :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Preeto is done taking the measurements and is about to get off the stool and suddenly she looses her balance. She falls straight into Rajbeer's arms and Rajbeer smiles- tum haar bhar meri bahoon mein hi a girti ho ya iss bhaut hota hai.

Preeto gives Rajbeer her famous angry face and goes out of Rajbeer's arms. Preeto is writing the measurements as Rajbeer sat in the chair in front of her. Rajbeer- waise humare betti keysi hai
Preeto stopps and looks at him- humare you'rE wrong woh sirf meri beti hai.
Rajbeer- no i'm pretty sure ke woh mere jaise hi hogi.
Preeto finishes writing down the measurement when she heard- MAMMA
Preeto rushes out of her cabin since she doesn't want Rajbeer to see Muskaan. She sees Muskaan and takes her out of the boutique and gives her money for the snow cone. She takes Muskaan before Rajbeer came and saw her. Preeto shut the door behind and stopped Rajbeer from seeing. While Preeto is giving Muskaan money, Rajbeer goes to Preeto desk and sees a picture of Muskaan and her. She was hugging Muskaan in the picture and Muskaan was smiling too. Rajbeer smiles and then thinks i've seen her somewhere. Then he hears Preeto coming and goes back in his chair and sits down. Rajbeer gets a flashback on how his daughter almost met an accident with his car.
Preeto tells him- kal ake lejaana
Rajbeer- tumhe aur Muskaan ko
Preeto makes a loud noise by putting her pen down- apne kapdo ko.
Rajbeer smiles and leaves the Boutique
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG , I am really liking this FF yaar ..This is totally unique from all others..
You have captured the essence of Rajpreet through these lines
Preeto tells him- kal ake lejaana
Rajbeer- tumhe aur Muskaan ko
Preeto makes a loud noise by putting her pen down- apne kapdo ko.
Rajbeer smiles and leaves the Boutique
Absolutely loved it Sana and please yaar thoda lamba likha karo...
I was waiting so eagerly and it was very short...Next time make it double bonus (2 parts at a time)...Please continue soon Can't wait now
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love this one :)...it was short and sweet...thanks. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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though short update its really tooo cuteee loved it sana...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I too love this one it is absolutely wonderful. Yaar Sana please continue this one soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sure i'll write 2 parts next time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Next Day...
Rajbeer went to Muskaan's school. It was about 3, just time for her to leave the school. Rajbeer goes by the park, and sees Muskaan sitting there lonely. Rajbeer smiles and walks over to her. He sits next to her and says- hi
Muskaan looks at him- arrey ap, (then she looks forward) mama ne kaha hai key strangers se baat nahi karte.
Rajbeer- toh phir hum donu ek doosre ko jaan lete hai. Hey mera naam Rajbeer Singh hai, mein ek fauji hon
Muskaan smiles and looks at him- wow mein bhi ek singh hon, Hello im Muskaan Singh aur mein apni mamma ke saath rehti ho, 4th mein hon aur
Rajbeer- abhi tumhare mamma tumhi lene atti hogi
Muskaan- ya
They shake hands. Rajbeer- hum kal fir se milte hai.
Muskaan- ha
Rajbeer leaves and Muskaan goes to the gate to Preeto. Preeto hugs
Muskaan and says- chale.
Muskaan- chalo.
Muskaan sees Rajbeer in his car and waves to him, he waves back.
Home...
Preeto got Muskaan a glass of strawberry milk- Yelo tumhare milk.
Muskaan- thank u mamma.
(In Muskaan's mind, agar meine mamma ko mere nae dost fauji uncle ke baare mein baataya toh jussa hogi.)
Muskaan smiles. Preeto- dekho betta kal kya tum Naina aur Saina ke saath ghar ao gi plz mamma ko kam hai mein kal 4 bhaje tak agaongi.
Muskaan- okay fine

NIGHT...
Rajbeer at his house, imagines Preeto Muskaan and him as a complete family. Then he opens his eyes- aaj se woh din dor nahi Preeto. Mein tum aur humare pyaar ki nishani, Muskaan ek saath hongay.

Preeto was in Muskaan's room and Muskaan was in Preeto's lap. Preeto was telling her a bed time story. Finally Muskaan was asleep and then Preeto went to her own room after putting a blanket on Muskaan.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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can't wait for Rajbeer to get his wifey and daughter bback ..continue soon
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Next Day...
Rajbeer went to Muskaan's school. He found her sitting on the bench again. Rajbeer- hello.
He was hiding something behind him. Muskaan- hello fauji uncle, aaj patta hai mamma 4 bhaje ghar aegi.
Rajbeer- thats good.
Muskaan- lekin mujhe ghar Naina ke saath jaana hai.
Rajbeer's smile faded- o
Muskaan- lekin ap na apni car mein humare pitche pitche ao. Aur ap apne pitche kya chupa rahe ho.
Rajbeer- guess karo.
Muskaan- mujhe nahi patta, baatao na
Rajbeer kneels down- thik hai.
He pulls out a chocolate bar, Muskaan smiles- mere liye
Rajbeer teases her- nahi yeh toh meri liye hai. Of course tumhare liye.
He gives her the bar and watches her eat it. (Flashback: He remembers Preeto was fighting with him before the divorce because she wanted to eat a chocolate bar at 2 am. Rajbeer- Preeto tum pagal ho raat ke do bhaaje tumhe chocolate khane hai. Preeto- how dare u mujhe pagal keyse kaha. Rajbeer- thik im sorry meri maa. Tum pagal nahi ho
Rajbeer finally got her a chocolate bar. Rajbeer- yelo tumhari chocolate.
Preeto hugged him- thank u Rajbeer i luv u
Rajbeer- i luv u 2
Rajbeer watched her eat the chocolate and then Preeto gives Rajbeer a piece of chocolate and Rajbeer eats it from her hands. Now Rajbeer knew why she had crazy demands at crazy times. Because she was pregnant.)
Rajbeer comes to reality when Muskaan hands him a piece of chocolate and Rajbeer smiles. He eats the chocolate from Muskaan's hand. The father-daughter scene is interrupted by Naina. Naina- Muskaan chalo.
Muskaan goes home and Rajbeer follows her. Naina goes and Rajbeer goes to Muskaan. Muskaan does to the welcome foot mat and lifts it. Then pulls out the house keys and opens the house. Muskaan- welcome to my house.
Rajbeer enters and sees that it is full of picture of Muskaan and Preeto. Rajbeer- Muskaan tumhara ghar toh bhaut accha hai.
Muskaan- thank u
Rajbeer helps Muskaan with her homework and later they play soccer outside in the backyard. While playing soccer, Muskaan- fauji uncle, ab accha soccer khelte hai. Mamma nahi khelti mere saath.
Rajbeer- thank u for the compliment.
Muskaan- waise apko kam nahi hai kya.
Rajbeer- ha toh sahi lekin 3 se 4 free time hota hai.
Muskaan- thats nice
Rajbeer let Muskaan win on purpose and then Muskaan came running towards Rajbeer. They hugged and while hugging Rajbeer got the same feeling that he got when he hugged Preeto. Rajbeer caressed her hair. A tear came out of Muskaan's eye when she finished hugging him. Rajbeer wiped the tear- kya hua.
Muskaan- fauji uncle mere papa nahi hai na lekin agar hote toh woh bilkul apke jaise hote.
Rajbeer- aaj tak toh sirf mein fauji tha lekin aaj mein fauji uncle baan gaya.
Muskaan- mein apko papa bolao.
Rajbeer smiled- ha betta.
He looked his watch - arrey 4 bhaj gae tumhare mamma atti hogi. Bye
Muskaan- bye
Right after Rajbeer left the society, Preeto entered.

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