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Sana

@LoveSana

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Posted: 13 years ago

Preeto was gone to Amritsar that night and Rajbeer was gone to the pub. At the pub NA had hired a girl to make sure that rajpreet had a divorce. That girls was dressed like Preeto would've. She walks over to Rajbeer who is by the bar- hi i'm priyanka. Rajbeer- hi rajbeer.

Priyanka looks at the bar tender and says- one torqilla.

She has a torqilla and Rajbeer has having his drink. She takes Rajbeer's hand and goes to the dance floor. They start dancing, suddenly Priyanka fainted. Rajbeer caught her right before she fell on the floor.

Rajbeer- Priyanka, priyanka. kya hua

No answer so he carried Priyanka to his car and then put her inside. He drove to his house and then carried her to his bedroom. He put her on the bed and he slept on the sofa.

NEXT MORNING...

The door bell rang and that woke Rajbeer up, he saw that Priyanka was on his bed. Rajbeer walked over to the door and opened it to see Preeto. Rajbeer - Preeto. He hugged her right at the door.

Preeto- haye raba mujhe inder toh ane do Rajbeer.

Rajbeer stopped hugging her and let her in the house. Rajbeer- woh Preeto mujhe tumhe kuch baatana hai.

Preeto- Kya

Just then Priyanka came out of the room, with her dupatta missing and then Priyanka started hugging Rajbeer. It looked like Priyanka and Rajbeer had slept together. Priyanka- oh Rajbeer kal raat bhaut acchi thi call me again.

Then she sees Preeto- oh tum kyun ho

Preeto- yeh sawal toh mujhe tumse karna chahiye ke tum mere ghar kya kar rahe ho.

Priyanka looked at Rajbeer- should i tell her how naughty u were last night.

Rajbeer broke Priyanka's embrace- Preeto jaisa dekh raha hai waise nahi hai

Preeto's eyes started to form tears- bas Rajbeer.

Preeto went to the bedroom and started packing her clothes. She closed the door behind and saw that the room was just as messy it would of been if Rajbeer had love with her. She dropped to the floor- mujhe toh laja tha ke mere pregnancy ke baare mein sunke kush hongay. But u cheated me

She got up and started packing her clothes.

Rajbeer turned to Priyanka- tum mujse chahati kya ho

Priyanka- relax baby, meine apna kam bhaut acche se kiya

Rajbeer- just get out, tumhare waja se mere biwi mujhe choud kar chale gaegi.

Priyanka- thats the plan bye

She leaves the house and Rajbeer rushes to their bedroom to stop Preeto.

Rajbeer- Preeto please maat jao.

Preeto- kyu take mein firse cheat hojao.

Rajbeer- woh sab ek natak tha.

Preeto- yeah right.

Rajbeer- please preeto

Preeto- move mujhe jaana hai.

Preeto was about to leave the house with her belongings just when Rajbeer held her hand. Preeto turned around to Rajbeer and shows him the keys that he gave her when they first entered the house saying ''ab yeh ghar tumhara hai. Tum isse furniture se nahi bilke bachoo se sajao.'' She dropped the keys - yeh chabiyan sirf apke biwi ke liye hai

Edited by unknownunknown - 13 years ago

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Sana

@LoveSana

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 2...(By the way its not gonna hurt the members to hit like or comment)

Preeto had left Rajbeer, she had given him divorced papers and now they are divorced.

10 YEARS LATER...

In Dheli...

It was the gym of the Air Force Camp, Rajbeer was unceasingly hitting the punching bag to get rid of his anger. He often had nightmares on how Preeto had given him divorce. Rajbeer didnt know how he had lived without his Preeto, how had he survived without Preeto's good morning, good bye and good night kisses. Then someone stopped the punching bag from moving. It was no other than Jogi. Jogi- kya Rajbeer ab chal apna jussa choud Preeto bhabhi ne tujhe chouda lekin tune unhe rokne ki kushish ki. Nahi ab jaane di.

Rajbeer continued hitting the bag- tujhe kya tera toh ek 11 saal ka betta bhi hai. Mujhe toh patta bhi nahi ke mere koi ulad hai ya nahi.

Jogi- chal mission par jaana hai.

Rajbeer stops and goes to change for his mission.

It is 7 am a alarm started ringing and a hand with pink nail polish put it on silent mode. The hand was ofcourse Preeto's and got up and opened her eyes. Her eyes fell on the alarm, Preeto- MUSKAAN

No response, Preeto walked all the way to her daughter's room. Preeto opened the door to see Muskan sleeping and all her books all over her bed.

Preeto- hay rabba yeh ladki na mere beti nahi bilke Sonu ki choti behen ha.

Muskaan was under a white comforter, Preeto removed the comforter and caressed Muskaan's hair. (For the role of Muskaan, i'm introducing Ishita Panchal)

Preeto- Muskaan betta, chalo ab school jaana hai.

Muskaan suddenly got - thanx mamma, apke bina patta nahi kya hota mera.

Preeto- ab jao ready hogao. Mamma ko bhi kam pe jaana hai na.

Muskaan smiles and goes takes a shower. Preeto has a shower too and she gets dressed in a orange dress and is putting the breakfast on the table. Muskaan comes and says- mamma plz mere bal bana dona.

Preeto smiles- of course mere jaan. Phele breakfast karo uske baad mein tumhare bal bana ti hon.

Preeto and Muskaan have breakfast. Later Preeto is sitting on the sofa and Muskaan is standing. Preeto is doing her hair and then Muskaan's eyes go towards the bunch of bills that Preeto has on the table.

Muskaan- i wish ke mere papa hote.

Preeto- kyun mamma nahi pasand

Muskaan- nahi mere mamma world ki best mamma hai lekin agar papa hote toh yeh saare bills pay karte na.

Preeto smiles- mere muskaan ko mamma ke bills ke bare mein patta hai lekin apne bal baana nahi atta.

They laugh, then Preeto checks the time. Preeto- Muskaan jaldi karo school late hojaogi.

Muskaan and Preeto leave the house and then Preeto dropps Muskaan to her school and goes to a boutique that she works for.

Her boutique is very big, she has her own little cabin for putting all the designs and stuff in. But she cant work more than 6 hours since she now has Muskaan to take of, she doesnt get paid much. Her salary is just enough to pay the expenses. As soon as she enters the boutique, Mrs. Chahal aurf Radhika Chahal says- Preeto ek ladki ae hai woh ek traditional type party kar rahe hai aur woh tere cabin mein hai.

Preeto- thek hai.

Preeto enters her cabin- sorry ma'am aaj late hua.

As soon as the lady turns around Preeto is shocked it is no other than Simran. Preeto sees the mangalsutra in her neck and sindor in her maang and gets all happy. Simran- hello preeto

Preeto- simran tum, aur tumne shaadi karli.

Simran- yeah 2 saal pehle US mein karthi.

Preeto- thats so great.

Simran- dekho mein aaj bhaut late ho mujhe apne beti ko school choud na hai.

Preeto- are mein apne beti ko school choud kar ae hon.

Simran- tumhare beti hai.

Preeto- ha woh 9 saal ki hai. Muskaan nam hai uska

Simran- oh wow. Your a mother. Listen 2 din baad mere ghar mein ek party hai aur mein aaj apne kuch close friend ko bheejonge unke kapade ready karna aur tum aur Muskaan bhi ana.

Preeto- nahi Simran

Simran- why

Preeto- plz Simran agar woh waha aegi toh jalti se bhi Rajbeer ka nam sonu toh mujse sawal karegi. Aur uske sawal ka jawab dena bhaut muskil hai.

Simran- O i understand. Lekin tumhe Rajbeer ko ek aur chance dena chahiye

Preeto- nahi Simran woh mein nahi kar sakte.

Simran- mein ab chalti hon

Preeto- roko

She pulls out money from her purse and hands it to Simran

Simran- yeh kya hai

Preeto- tumhare beti ke liye

Simran- nahi

Preeto- tumhe nahi tumhare beti ko de rahe hon

Simran takes the money and then gives money back to Preeto- aur yeh mein tumhe nahi tumhare beti ko de rahe hon.

They laugh and then Simran leaves.

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Saina

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Posted: 13 years ago

All different angles of stories ...Nice..Next part sooon

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Sneha Patro

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Posted: 13 years ago

woww superbbb...👏waiting for next part...👍🏼

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Raj_preet

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Posted: 13 years ago

you are writing diff diff types of stories awesome...waiting for nxt part😊

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Bobby1810

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Posted: 13 years ago

So many different stories all happening at once. This is just awesome like the rest. Waiting for the next part.

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Sana

@LoveSana

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 3...

After leaving the boutique Simran takes out her phone and dials Rajbeer's number. He picked up the phone

Rb- kya hai mission par jaana hai

Simmi- guess what mere pas itni acchi good news hai ke tumhare duniye hi badal jaegi.

Rb- kya

Sim- mission pora karo.

Rb- thek hai

Sim- cafe new delhi

Rb- sure at 5

Sim- nahi right after mission completes. 2 bhaaje

Rb- fine

They disconnect and Rajbeer goes on his mission.

2:10 PM

Rajbeer is driving by the school where Muskaan studies while driving to the cafe. Suddenly a kid's ball comes on the road and a girl soon follows the ball. Rajbeer's car is about to hit the kid when he puts the brake to the car. The kid turns to the car and is shocked. The girl is no other than Muskaan. Rajbeer comes out of the car. Muskaan gets her ball. Rajbeer kneels in front of Muskan- beta dekho yeh road hai yaha pe cars atte hai. Agar tumhe kuch hota toh.

Muskaan- sorry uncle mera ball yaha agaya tha.

Rajbeer- its okay now go.

Muskaan innocently goes back inside the school and Rajbeer drives off to the cafe. Simran is sitting at one of the tables and Rajbeer sits my her.

Rb- kya tha good news

Simmi- yeh toh tum khabi sapne mein nahi soch sakte.

Rb- paheliyan maat kaho aur news bolo.

Simmi- thoda guess karo.

Rb- dekho ab baatao bhi sahi

Simmi- tum usually kehte hona ke tumhare koi family nahi hai guess what tumhare family extend ho chuki hai.

Rb- kya

Simmi- I mean ke tumhare ek 9 saal ke beti hai Muskaan nam hai uska

Rajbeer starts smiling. Rajbeer- u sure

Simmi- Preeto ne kud baataya

Rb is even more happy- kab mili woh tumhe

Sim- woh ek boutique mein kam karti hai aur aaj mein chahate hon ke tum usse jake mile.

Rb- tumne Muskaan ko dekha

Sim- nahi woh school pe thi

Rajbeer's smiled faded a bit- Preeto ne Muskaan ko uske papa ke baare mein bhaut boora sikhaya hoga.

Sim- nahi Rajbeer Preeto ne Muskaan ko tumhare bare mein kuch nahi kaha

Rajbeer's smile appears again.

Sim- ab jao meine boutique owner se baat ki, unhone kaha ke Preeto sirf 8-3 kam karti hai. After all ek single maa hai.

Rajbeer- o toh yeh baat hai.

Sim- jao meine kaha tha ke ek dost ko bheejongi. Jao

Rajbeer- lekin address kaha diya

Sim- sorry forgot

Simmi gives Rajbeer the address. Rajbeer leaves the cafe and Simran is in the cafe drinking coffee.

As soon as Rajbeer sat in the car, he took out Preeto's address and then kissed it. Rb- mein a raha hon

BOUTIQUE...

Radhika aunty called Preeto- Preeto puttar, yehlo Simran Takur ke contact pe sign karo.

Preeto- kya aunty 10 saal se contract pe sign kara rahe ho. (She signs it) Yelo sign kardiya.

Preeto goes back into the cabin and then starts working again. Rajbeer enters the boutique and Preeto somehow feels his presence. Rajbeer sees the owner- are u the owner

Radhika aunty nods- Ha kyun

Rajbeer- woh mujhe Simran Thakur ne bheeja hai.

Radhika- o i see. Mere designer waha uss cabin mein ha. Mein dekha ti hon.

Radhika aunty opens the door to Preeto's cabin. Rajbeer sees his Preeto working on something that she doesn't even look up. RA- Preeto puttar, woh Simran Thakur ne kise ko bheeja hai.

Preeto- lekin ab sirf dus minute bakki hai. Mujhe Muskaan ko lene jaana hai.

RA- puttar sirf measurement hi toh lena hai. Mein Muskaan ko le ati hon.

Preeto- thek hai aur thank u aunty

RA- your welcome betta.

RA shuts the door behind her and Preeto still hasnt looked up. Finally Preeto looks up and is really shocked. She stands up from her chair.

Preeto- Rajbeer

Rajbeer- shock hona

Preeto- yaha kyun ae.

Rajbeer- tumhe dhoondne

Preeto- enough

Rajbeer walks closer to her- tumne suna nahi Simran Thakur ne bheeja hai.

Preeto takes the measurement tape and looks towards a stool. She points Rajbeer to come stand over there. She starts taking his measurement when Rajbeer places his hands on her waist. Preeto angrily- kya kar rahe hai ap

She makes Rajbeer remove his hands.