Muskaan LAST PART!!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Muskaan is soo cute...i feel this is actually a story CVs could have continued with the show...thanks for writing :) wonder how preeto will react to all this...😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it sana...this story makes me emotional ...waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
I love this story so much. Too cute Rajbeer - Muskaan scenes awesome.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this FF of urs is one of the besttt one Sana jus loved it...👍🏼👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Preeto saw Muskaan playing soccer, she said- hello Muskaan.
Muskaan- hello mamma
Preeto- toh aj school keysa raha.
Muskaan- bhaut accha
Preeto saw Muskaan's homework on the table. Preeto- kya Muskaan books sare felha ke rakhe hai.
Muskaan- mamma mein apna homework kar rahi thi.
Preeto- tum aur homework. Poora kiya
Muskaan- poora
Preeto- wow
She goes to the kitchen to make a milkshake. Muskaan comes to the kitchen- mamma jaldi dona.
Preeto- ha baba yelo hogaya.
Preeto gives her the glass.
Preeto- waise kal school ke bad patta nahi ke mein tumhe lene aongi ya nahi.
Muskaan- o
Muskaan had a frown but in the inside she was happy. Preeto- agar mein na ao toh tum Naina ke saath ghar ana mein firse 4 bhaje tak aongi.
Muskan smiled.
Next Day...
After school Muskaan was sitting on the bench alone. And again Rajbeer a usual comes to talk to her.
Preeto is done her work, she goes to pick Muskan. She doesnt see Muskaan by the gate, so she goes inside the school. Preeto then sees Muskaan sitting on the bench. But then she gets angry after seeing Rajbeer with her. Muskaan- Papa apko patta hai key mere school mein ek talent show hai parso ap ongay na.
Rajbeer- kab hai.
Muskaan- 7 bhaaje
Rajbeer- perfect mein aonga.
Muskaan smiles and then hugs Rajbeer. Preeto- Muskaan
Muskaan and Rajbeer break their hug and turn around to see Preeto. Preeto was looking red in her red saari. Preeto takes Muskaan's hand and then pulls her behind her. Preeto- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho
Muskaan- mamma yeh mere dost hai mein inhe papa bolati hon.
Preeto turns around to Muskaan- CHUP! Bilkul chup.
Muskaan starts crying. Rajbeer steps in- Preeto kya kar rahi ho bachi ro rahi hai.
Preeto- Muskaan strangers se baat nahi karti meine tumhe kitni bhar samhajaya hai.
Muskaan- but mamma Papa thodi koi stranger hai
Preeto- khabardar agar unhe papa kaha toh.
Rajbeer- dekho tumhare nafrat mujse hai lekin bachi ko kyun rola rahi ho
Preeto turns to Rajbeer- agar yeh galat hai toh uski maa hai usse sahi karne ke liye.
Preeto takes Muskaan's hand and starts walking home. Rajbeer follows- Preeto, preeto suno plz suno meri baat.
Muskaan is crying as she turns to Rajbeer. Muskaan- papa
Muskaan is trying to reach Rajbeer but is failing since Preeto is walking fast. Rajbeer continues following them. They eventually end up at home. Preeto turns and sees Rajbeer followed them. Preeto looks at Muskaan with angry eyes. Preeto- Muskaan tum ender jao.
Muskaan goes inside. Preeto- kya problem kya hai tumhari. Kyun nahi akela choud dete tum mujhe aur meri betti ko.
Rajbeer- Preeto woh meri bhi betti hai.
Preeto- betti, ek bachi ko janam dene se koi uska pitah nahi banta. Uss betti ko acche parwarish aur sanscar deyne padte hai. Aur woh sab uss Rajbeer mein tha jise mein pyaar karti thi. Tumne mujhe dhoka diya tha
Rajbeer- listen mein chup hon isska matlab yeh nahi hai key tum mujhe sunati jao. Jitne woh tumhari betti hai utni hi meri betti bhi hai. Tum usse ek maa ka pyaar dey sakti ho lekin usse ek papa ki bhi zarorat hai. A child also needs a father.
Preeto- then she'll get a father fir chahiye mujhe doosri shaadi bhi kyun na karni padey.
Rajbeer- kyun karega tumse shaadi yeh jaanke ke tumhari ek 9 saal ki betti hai jiska pitah mein hon.
Preeto- sab tumhari therah dokebas aur bemaan nahi hote.
Rajbeer- Tum agar saat janmo tak bhi agar dhondogi na toh bhi mujhse accha baap nahi milega tumhe meri betti key liye.
Preeto- saat janam saath din hi kafi hai uske liye
Rajbeer- saat din... toh saath din mein tum ek isse insaan se shaadi karogi jo meri betti ko apnae aur pyaar karga... agar tumne aisa kiya toh mein Muskaan ke samhe khabhi nahi aongi lekin agar tumne issa nahi kiya toh saat din key baad mein apni betti ko leyjaonga.
Preeto- thik hai.
Rajbeer- aur by the way woh jo Talent show hai na Muskaan ki school mein, i'll see u there.
Rajbeer leaves and Preeto goes inside the house.
Edited by unknownunknown - 13 years ago
love03 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonder what will happen @ the talent show...can't wait..and thanks for the update, was waiting for this..thank you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
superb👏 Waiting for nxt part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
I cant believe u are just a school going girl...what talent u have Sana...keep it up! U write with such imagination!
Do you write other stories also? Besides SSSP i mean...u shud develop ur talent kiddo!
Will read each of ur stories everyday..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

This one of my favourite FF. Nice conversation between papa and beti. Hopefully Rajpreet will be together soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Superbbb loved it... 👏
waiting for next part... 😃

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