SS| Redemption| chap 2; page 8 - Page 7

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

awesome...👏👏👏really...i got goosebumps...phewww...u r a awesome writer mais...👏loved it...continue soon...their was a lump in my throat while reading...simply amazing!!

Awww! Thank you! You are sweet! <3

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

wow...thats amazing!!!!

thank you!! 😳

Originally posted by: AKlover101

Awesome update!! Do continue soon!!:)

Thank you! In Sha Allah will do soon! <3

Originally posted by: sweetshab

PERFECT!!

i felt the the pain..the loneliness and also the emptiness..

the emotions rightly described.. and i love the bro-sis bond 😃

how did i miss this.. better late than never..

cont soon maisy :)

Awww! SHABS!!! 🤗 Please don't call it perfect...it's not that good. Just my honest attempt at emotions :P Thank you so much for liking it! Yups, will try to continue it sooon! 😉

Originally posted by: ilvuday

i just dont noe wat to say...uve left me speechless but all i can say is...SPECTACULAR!!!

loved every word of it...

You are too kind and sweet! LOADS of thank you!!! 😳

oh God!!! this is great.amazing.

amazing part mias...

Originally posted by: a.anu

oh God!!! this is great.amazing.

Thank you!! 😳

Originally posted by: nityah

amazing part mias...

just wonderful...

will be waiting to read more...

thank you so much! 😃

Originally posted by: arryline

God it's super awesome Mousie⭐️.Just what I wanted to read after M's eye closing act.God I loved the running part so so much😳

Oh yeah, that running act 😆 Again inspired by Devdaas. You know when Paro is running in the climax scene? But M didn't have long hair or sari so it turned out like this 😆

Originally posted by: -scarlett-

Take a bow!👏⭐️
Firstly, I have just read the two chapters and like everyone else, I am glued.
Partially intrigued and fascinated as well by the amount of depth you have included in your writing!
The first chapter was enough to get me hooked because I am weird and love sad tracks,
I know, I feel like a sadist but those kind of tracks really bring a lot of complexity to the character.
Just like your SS.
I love the way you made Uday say all those things and how torn Manyata was feeling, honestly I am hoping a redemption track happens in the show as well as its so important for our highness to realize how valuable Uday is for her. Though, I think that the 3 year leap has just created an even more intensity for the time that they will meet again.
The best part about the chapter was the mystery, not so much, but just the tad bit of suspense that you have riled in is soo freaking annoying yet interesting!
I loved the last line describing the old vs the new Manyata, now I just can't wait to see the output of all the family on Manyata's change as a Yuvrani and also the time that she meets Uday.
Btw, a great scene between VB-M and ManVeer.

First of all, LOADS of hugs and kisses to you! You have no idea how much I like detailed comments despite the fact that I suck at writing them or replying to them :P But reading them makes me feel good and happy, like all my hard work has been paid 😳

Trust me, all lovey dovey stories are so not my preference. I suck at writing cheesy stuff. I go by the motto, "Jo maza leads ko alag karne mein hai, wo unhen milane mein kahan?" :P

The mystery element was annoying? hahahah! 😆 I like mystery, keep them hooked. It will be explained soon so don't worry 😛 Oh yeah, M has changed a lot. She is a completely different person. Let's see if UV can fall for this completely new girl or not?

Thank you soo much for reading, liking and giving me a detailed response. I appreciate it sooo much! Hopefully you'll like the future chapters as well! 😳

Wow! That was amazing!! So sad and painful! I seriously can't wait for more! Loved it!!

You know what I love the most about this SS and your writing ofcourse? That you describe even the minutest of the details or emotions of the characters so well that I can actually feel those emotions myself.
Loved this update. It was amazing 👍🏼
But oh man they have been apart since 3 years
So if I'm not wrong, Uday is in London right? And now Manyata is going there too. Hmm nice. Looks like we'd get to see an intense encounter between them. I am already so curious! Eeep 😳 . You better not separate them for long Mais 😡 . Lol 😉
Update soon. Pretty please!

Originally posted by: sim1623

Wow! That was amazing!! So sad and painful! I seriously can't wait for more! Loved it!!

Simran :D...

Thank you!! 😳

Originally posted by: fia21

You know what I love the most about this SS and your writing ofcourse? That you describe even the minutest of the details or emotions of the characters so well that I can actually feel those emotions myself.
Loved this update. It was amazing 👍🏼
But oh man they have been apart since 3 years
So if I'm not wrong, Uday is in London right? And now Manyata is going there too. Hmm nice. Looks like we'd get to see an intense encounter between them. I am already so curious! Eeep 😳 . You better not separate them for long Mais 😡 . Lol 😉
Update soon. Pretty please!

Well, I never said that UV is in London. All I can say is that wait for it. I won't make it a tragedy but making them meet so soon won't be fun :P Just cuz I love you I will tell ya, don't look for romance in this SS. wo HAI hi nahin :P But I wont separate them for long...i guess...

@bold = 🤗 thank you sooo mucch!!! 😳😳😳

Update will be soon, In Sha Allah!😳