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geets realisation n her pain written brilliantly

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oh ... I so loved it... again an emotional bt with geet's realizion of hr love twards Maan...

Awesome n superb part plz don't do anything wrong with Maan eagerly waiting 4 next part its superb

painful yar

superb but very painful but i know ki geet ki pyar ki inteha jitegi eagerly waiting for next part

guys before reading that I have a request… my all readers blamed geet in the beginning for her acts and anger and some also felt that maan deserved someone better… but after reading this update I really wanna know your views that who is the lucky one in this relationship… plz it's an humble request…

PART 28

plz listen to the song guys for the feel

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vjbj51SRgys[/YOUTUBE]

it was midnight still maan didn't made a single move… geet kept holding his hand caressing it…praying almighty to save her love… armaan saw her condition… it had been full day still she didn't intake a single drop of water or a morsel of food… he tried so many times… but his words fell on deaf ears…he was broken too to see her playing with her health but it seems that she was just a statue not reacting to anything… he remembered the time few years back when she was the sweet little geetu who used to spread happiness in everybody's life…

it was a summer time and they were playing in handa haweli on first floor… geet was teasing armaan and running around while he was chasing her… they were panting heavily still no one was in the mood to stop their game… suddenly geet reached near the stairs but didn't noticed when her leg slipped off and she kept rolling down the stairs…armaan's heart stopped seeing her going down the stairs… he screamed for help and within a minute everyone was surrounding them… geet was in the last stair and blood was flowing from her head… she was fainted… Mr. handa picked her and took her to hospital… Amy to accompanied her… he was shaken with the incident… doctors immediately rushed to check her… they checked her wounds and bandaged them and gave her few sedatives… though there was nothing serious still there were many bruises and injuries in her body… after few hours when she woke up and looked at her surrounding she screamed loudly tearing eardrums of many…on being asking the reason she cutely complained of the bad smell of hospital and said she was scared of these equipments present in the room… after that she never stayed in hospital however necessary it may be…

and here it had been so many hours and she is not even ready to leave maan's side for even a moment… armaan looked at her eyes which are admiring his face without even a blink… she is totally worn out… god knows how many equipments are surrounding her… the room is filled with so many medicines and the smell was very strong still she didn't paid attention to that… she looked like a intense lover at the moment for whom her love meant neither the god nor her precious possession but he is the breath the heart beat on whom her entire self is dependent…

surgeons came after an hour and they asked geet to move out…she glanced him last time and moved out like a zombie… they examined him and declared that his condition has gone worst in the time … his blood had made a clot near his brain and heart… and the physical wounds had deteriorated too… geet felt her heart would stop hearing doctor's words… her tears were long dried… her words were frozen in her mouth and she didn't even know what to do at the moment…. Mrs. khurana we are gonna operate him again… it's a 24 hour operation and if he didn't reacted to it then we are very sorry to say no one will be able to save him…

geet closed her eyes as fresh layers of water flowed… she joined her hands and fell on doctor's leg… please doctor save him… do whatever is needed but please save him… armaan pulled her up and supported her… he could feel her body going numb… Mrs. khurana we will try our best but I can say that it's not always the medicines that save a person… kehte h duva me dava se zyada asar hota h… you pray to god he will listen to you… he said and left inside OT…

doctors started their treatment while geet kept praying to god to save him… whole night passed and it was dawn still there was no news of him… she was pale and her body was weak… the emotional turmoil made her lose her energy and if she continued to be in the same may it was sure that she would be need to admit soon beside maan… armaan brought coffee and few sandwiches for her but she refused to even have a drop of water… there were few calls from dev and Annie as they were worried for her not finding her in the trip… she asked armaan to pick the call and say that she was with him as he had some urgent work and needed her… he did as she said…

after finishing the call he asked her… kiddo why didn't you told them the truth… maan is their brother and if they came to know about him they will broke down and come back…. maan will never be happy with that and I can't do anything that he didn't like… kiddo you had become so mature ha…BUT YOU CAN INFORM UNCLE AUNTY NA... AMY THEY ARE OUT OF COUNTRY SINCE A MONTH.. she gave him a slight smile which didn't even reached to her swollen eyes and turned back to OT…

after 18 hours she saw a nurse coming out of the OT… she immediately rushed to her and due to that her purse fell down… she asked her about maan's condition… I am sorry to say but he is sinking… doctors are trying to save him but nothing is reacting to him… she rushed back inside after saying so… geet turned back and saw her mangalsutra on the floor… she immediately picked it up and touched her forehead to it as if praying to god to save her suhag and wore it…she knew now what she had to do.. she immediately ran out of the hospital…. armaan kept calling her but his words didn't reach her ears and soon she was on the roads running…

she ran to her destination which was few kilometer away from hospital… she was bare feet and the stones were prickling her but as if she felt… blood came out of her legs still she didn't stopped she was not even paying attention to the roads… a car was coming toward her in full speed but missed her just my a inch… still there was no fear In her…. she ran and ran for her life…her maan… she reached at the temple… it had around 100 steps… she took two camphor packets and took it in both of her palms….she saw a boy nearby and asked him to burn the camphor…boy looked at her as if she was an alien burning camphor on her naked palms but she requested him again and tears made their way… that boy felt bad and wiped her tears with his small hands and burned the camphor… she kissed him as a thanks and went to the steps….

she knelt down on the ground and placed her knee on the first step to climb up… the camphor was burning in her hands and with the heat her hands started burning a little but she didn't even did a single hiss… she took another step up and repeated it again and again the little boy to kept her following her at back… her knees started bleeding badly and with each her step her blood imprint was left on the stairs behind…. her hand came into the direct contact of the fire as the camphor burned more… her skin was peeled off and the fire was catching her inner skin… the worshippers around her were shocked looking at her… how can a human inflict so much of pain on herself and still didn't even make a whimper….

her tears were replaced by a determination in her eyes as if she is challenging god to bring back her maan… her burning hand had the onlookers shiver and feel heat coursing through their body still she was numb to the pain…she was just imagining her maan who was standing at the last stair opening his arms for her and she was just moving to reach him… her knee was also badly damaged and the skin was removed due to continuous rubbing against the hard rock stair… some stones and pebbles scratch her bare knee making them worse…. her hand turned deep brown and was burning again…

she reached 80^th stair and her energy was totally gone… she felt she would faint any moment and felt the darkness consuming her but still she kept climbing up… soon the darkness over power her and she slipped off… people were frightened seeing her faint and falling but as she was going to stumble back the small boy held her and made her stable… she came to her senses and thanked the boy who just smiled back and asked her to move on… soon she gained her lost strength and reached up…

her hands were paining badly but she didn't felt any pain as the pain her heart was empowering her physical pain… she prayed god to save her husband moved down… she looked at the stairs having blood and realized that her knee was badly injured… but the calmness she felt In her heart made her determined of her next move…

in the hospital doctors felt a sudden raise in heart beat of maan as if he felt the pain of his jaan… doctors were shocked with his sudden reaction and were happy that soon they will be able to recover him if he reacted the same way but still there was a long way to go as the blood clot was not melting… they just prayed to help them…

geet climbed down the stairs and saw that boy was following her again he came and held her hand and she took him to a dargah…actually the setting was such that both dargah and temple were opposite to each other… so it was a few step distance… she was limping and fumbling… her body was giving up each passing second but it seemed that she had decided to test her love today…. there were many people praying to god doing sajdah for their love ones and here she was among them too… her torn dress and bruised and burnt body caught attention of many… some pitied for her while others prayed to god for her well being…

she bent in front of Allah for sajdah and asked him to give her maan… she took the rounds around the dargah and tied a thread for protecting maan… it was second night after maan's accident but it seemed that world had stopped for geet…she was still living at the time when that truck moved over maan's car… his smiling face… his love filled eyes was coming in front of her eyes… she was about to turn away when she saw that few people were gathered around a place… she went there to see what was happening there….

here in hospital... doctors completed maan's operation and came out… how is maan dr... asked armaan… we had completed the operation… though he didn't reacted initially but god knows what happen that after some time he gave us an instant response… though we had saved him but if he didn't came to senses in next 2 hours he may go to coma… doctor left saying that….armaan sat down trying to reach geet but he was not able to contact her and can't leave the hospital too… he kept trying to call her…

she neared the spot and saw that a burning coal path was laid in front of her… she saw the same baba which she saw in mussoorie… he said beta maine tyujhe kha tha musibat aane wali h aura b tu hi h jo use bachayegi... log to pyaar me abaad hote h par tujhe aj fanaa hona padega uske liye…the baba's word kept ringing in her ears… fanaa hona padega uske pyaar me… she looked at the long burning path and kept her injured foot on it… the surrounding were awed by the torture she was inflicting on herself…

her entire body was numb.. bleeding… injured still her each move was bringing an unknown glow on her pale face… she kept completing rounds bringing tear in the eyes of the people who were watching her… some even tried to stop her but the look in her eyes made them shiver… the pain which wrenched the heart of onlookers was nowhere to be seen in geet's eyes because she could feel her heart being alive again a sign that her maan is getting ok…. the tears which earlier were of pain and agony were now flowing because of the relief and happiness… her legs which still were moving lifelessly on the burning coal…

her hands and legs both had turned brown due to the burn… people felt she had gone mad… they felt that now only god can stop her but they didn't knew that here the fight was itself against god and destiny and she will stop only when her love will win over her fate….

in the hospital, everyone were waiting for maan to come in his consciousness… but as the time was passing by everyone's hope was going down… doctors declared that he is in coma and can't be said when he will gain his senses… they were about to go out of his room when they felt a little movement in his fingers…. they immediately rushed to check him…they checked his blood pressure and heart beats which were at all normal… they all were shocked with so much improvement that too in blink of an eye… they felt him opening his eye… he was murmuring geet… though his jaw was paining badly still he kept on calling geet… armaan looked at his desperation and again tried to contact geet….

finally it was the god who had to melt down in front of the selfless love of them… at the same time rain fell down on the earth calming down the burning coal… everyone bowed down to Allah for his rehmat and ending the torture on the girl for whom they were feeling pain… it was the first rain of the season… the first rain that give relief to everyone from the scorching heat… the first rain which brings blessing with it… the first rain which give lovers a moment to remember lifelong… and may be this rain will bring back the happiness back in their life… as the rain fell on her burnt body… it felt that its soothing not only her burned body but the burnt soul too…she felt her phone vibrating and looked at the caller which was no other than armaan… she immediately picked it… geet geeet screamed armaan from the other side… ha geet said shivering with the fear… geet maan ko hosh agaya… she fell down on the ground hearing him… she thanked god a million times to save maan…

she saw the little boy coming toward her… diii aap ka pyaar jit gya… he said that and ran away…. she didn't understood why that boy came with her… why he helped her and how he knew about the reason for her act… but kehte h na bacho me bhagwan basta h shayad isiliye wo mera unkaha dard samaj gya… she got up and ran back to hospital after that…

it's truly said that the one who has more anger

loves the most too…

coz if red is the color of anger than

it's the color of love too…

Guys it's the longest update ever and I need long long comments and that too form every one please I really wanna know how you felt reading it….