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Posted: 13 years ago
ah..finally I have read all the updates n all r awesome..full of so many twists and so much suspense.. Bt to be true, chandu n raashi's marriage!!!, I was lyk- :'( :'( <\3.. Btw, do continue soon.. N waiting fr dhuru's arrival in panchala, maybe she n chandu might face each other this tym...will b waitin fr d next update..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: RiniRocks

ah..finally I have read all the updates n all r awesome..full of so many twists and so much suspense.. Bt to be true, chandu n raashi's marriage!!!, I was lyk- :'( :'( <\3.. Btw, do continue soon.. N waiting fr dhuru's arrival in panchala, maybe she n chandu might face each other this tym...will b waitin fr d next update..


thanks for the comment dear and welcome back,sry it will take some time for me to update,i hope you guys are okay with it,when dhuru will come there will be a blast bigger than a nuclear bomb.😃
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Chapter-28-preps of engagement and a prisoner of love but a pawn who knows his plan???????????????????????

Chitra went to the room of vishal,she did not find vishal there and she predicted that Krishna did not came from vishal's room but from somewhere else.she went to meet leenajavi and talked about the dilemma of vishal not marrying and she promised to talk to vishal as she was leaving tomorrow.her children wanted to stay for the engagement so she let them stay here.

In night''

Leena enters vishal's room.

Vishal was going to bed when he saw leena.

Vishal-are aap??kahiye kya baat hain,muzhe bulwa liya hota.

Leena started crying in front of him.

Vishal-kya hua,Krishna ne kuch kaha hain kya,abhe khabar leta hun uske.

Leena fell on his feet.

Vishal-are ye kya kar rahe hain aap??uthiye,aap ye sab achanak..

Leena-hamne kabhe bhe tumse is Vishay mein vartalaap nahin kiya vishal kintu hum tumhare kitne rini hain ye tum nahin jaan sakte.

Vishal-ah.????haaan???khade ho jaiye(confused)as he turned he again said-kis baat ke liye rini????

Leena-hey prabhu,ye bandhu bhe na.tum jaante ho kis baat ke liye rini hain hum tumhare.

Vishal-huh,aapko lagta hain Krishna ke saath vivah karke maine aapka bhala kiya hain.

Leena-kam se kam hamein koi hasane waala to mil gaya.

They both laughed'

Vishal-baithiye'she sat down.

Vishal-kahiye,kaise aana hua?

Leena-chitra ne hamse kuch baat ke hain,use Vishay mein hamein tumse vartalaap karna hain.

Vishal-kahiye

Leena-chitra aur rashi wo dono bahut vismit hain ke tum vivah nahin karna chahte ho.

Vishal murmured-rashi ke bacche,photo diya sab,chodunga nahin.

Leena-kya??

Vishal-nahin kuch nahin,dekhiye aap mere maa nahin hain nahi chitra aur rashi,muzhe kab aur kaise vivah karna hain,karna hain ya nahin,ye mera vyaktigat nirnay hain.

Leena-tumhe koi to pasand hoge,koi bhe.agar koi hain to bolo,mein kuch..

Vishal angry-aapko ya kise ko bhe mere liye chinta karne ke koi aawashakta nahin hain.

Leena disappointed-theek hain,ah kintu ye to bata he sakte ho ke acchanak Krishna ko tum kalinga kyun bhej rahe ho.

Vishal-ye kewal mein ,Krishna aur acharya jaante hain.

Leena-bahut he vismrit lag rahe the we,kya baat hain??

Vishal-vismrit??he thinks-isse pehle to kise abhiyaan par jaate hue Krishna vismrit nahin hua,kya baat ho sakti hain,kahin acharya ne to kuch nahin,nahin nahin,acharya kyun karenge bhala,unka to laabh he ho raha hain.

Leena-vishal..

Vishal-haan.

Leena-hum chalte hain aur suno bacche yahe rehne ke rat lagaye hue hain,koi aapatii to nahin hain na tumhe.

Vishal-nahin koi aapati nahin hain.

Leena smiled and she left'

Suddenly a soldier said from outside(he could not enter)-maharaja bhadrashaal bhaag nikla.vishal shocked.

Vishal came out with hands on his face,soldier shocked but still he could not see his face clearly.

Vishal-jao,aur kise bhe arth mein bhadrashaal mahel ya panchala se bahar na jaane paye.

Soldier-jee maharaja,hum ye jaante the isliye hamne mahel ke chaaron aur suraksha ghera kar diya tha kuch he shano mein,isliye uska mahel se bahar jaan asambhav hain.

Vishal-hmm,bahut acche,ab use mahel se seedhe karawaas mein daal do.

Bhaddu was roaming around in palace seeking for a safety place.as he was roaming around he saw a soldier coming,he quickly hid himself''as soldier left he saw rashi coming in front of him,even in simple clothes she looked so beautiful,so mesmerizingly beautiful,he could not keep away his eyes from her face and her ..ahm ahm'beautiful body.he fell from her the day she captured him,she passed on without noticing him as he was hiding.

Bhaddu totally realized that he fell for her completely,he was very much in love with her.

Bhaddu-aise bhaavnayen pehle to kabhe mere hriday ne kabhe sparsh nahin ke.wo bhe is paagal stri ke liye,he remembered all his scenes with rashi and her curing his burns on bank of river and her smile,her fighting skills.kintu mein kya karun,agar mahel se bahar jaane ke cheshta karta hun to pakda jaonga aur agar nikal bhe gaya to bhe shaayad is stri se phir kabhe na mil paon.kya karun??muzhe ek baar to isse awashya he milna hoga,muzhe isse vartalaap karna he hoga,ab iske liye chahe muzhe karavaas mein he kyun na jaana pade.

Rashi entered her room and chitra was all on bed with lots of jewellaries and lehngas.

Gandhara ke hone waale maharani ko mera pranaam.rashi was actually very upset but she showed her fake smile as she shows everyone.

Rashi-ye sab kya hain???

Chitra-ye sab aapke liye hain,kal aapke sagai hain aur aapko isme se chunna hain ke aapko kya pehna hain.

Rashi-hmm'.dekhen to'''ah ye gulaabi waala,kitna pyaara hain na.

Chitra-haan kitna pyaar hain aur vishal ke pasand hain,hain na.(she said innocently)and she saw rashi's face,she had a smile on her face but tears in his eyes.

Rashi-haan(in teary voice)aur..aur shaayad'cc'.chandra'..and she started crying heavily.hum ye nahin kar sakte,kadaapi nahin kar sakte,hum aur'aur nahin jhoot bol sakte.

Chitra had tears in her eyes too seeing her contradiction.

Chitra hugged rashi,rashi started crying heavily.

Chitra-hum jaante the,tum sabke saamne kewal swaang kar rahe ho.jogita was passing by and she saw rashi and chitra.

Jogita-shama karna,vishal ne tumhare saath jo bhe kuch kiya hain na rashi,mein jaanti hun tumhe chot pahunchakar use kitni peeda ho rahe hain kintu wo apne saath jo kar raha hain uske parchai se tumhe dur rakhna chahta hain,kintu dekh lena,is vivah ke baad jo kuch bhe hoga uske parchai ka sach tumhe awashya pata chalega aur phir tumhe aur chot pahunchege,kintu ye vishal ka banaya khel hain jise sirf acharya takkar de sakte hain,bhagwaan kare is baar vishal ke'''and she left.

Chitra-mein vishal se awashya baat karunge,mein abhe jaake baat karti hun.

Rashi-nahin tum..

Chitra-nahin rashi,ab muzhe mat roko,tumhe itne peeda dene ka vishal ko koi adhikaar nahin hain.

Rashi-kintu chitra but she left.

Rashi-hey prabhu,pata nahin chitra kya kya kahege.

Chitra went to vishal's room.

Vishal was sleeping really good sleep and chitra touched him-vishal,vishal utho but he had no intentions to wake up as he was so tired.

Chitra-vishal hamne kaha utho hamein ek mehatwapoorna varatalap karne hain.

Vishal in sleepy voice-ah'kya hain chitra.

Chitra-hamein tumse varatalaap karna hain.

Vishal get up and rubbed his eyes-accha.

He grabbed her waist and pulled her towards him,he again made her sat on his lap.

Vishal-kaho.

Chitra-vishal hum bade ho chuke hain,ye tum'.

Vishal-tum vartalaap karoge ya nahin(to be fair chitra was wearing a sleeveless blouse top and lehna and robe just like mihika,it was all white and sexy'..vishal is a boy after all'he he he')Vishal touched her naked waist and made her hand around her shoulder,this time chitra felt awkward but she knew vishal can't take her advantage as he highly respects women plus she had complete faith in him,she trusted him like god so she did not complained(chitra jee zyada faith bhe khatarnaak hota hain,kab samzhoge tum,idiot,seriously a girl should have dignity,but that is the thing I will develop in later chapters)he started twining his fingers in her long hair which he does frequently.

Chitra was feeling highly awkward in the situation.

Chitra and vishal's faces were too close.

Chitra-vishal tum rashi ka vivah Chandragupta se mat karao.

Vishal-rashi ne tumse kuch kaha??

Chitra-usne hamse kuch nahin kaha hain kintu hamne uske netron mein dekha hain ke wo kewal tumse prem karti hain,wo bachpan se karti aaye hain,wo kaise do shanon mein kise aur ke ho jaaye.

Vishal thinks-yahe niyam muzhpar bhe laagu hota hain chitra,mein kise aur ke bare mein soch he nahin paata hun kewal tum he mere liye ho.nahin reh sakte mein tumse dur kintu mera bhagya tum muzhe is jeewan mein nahin mil sakte kyunki mera lakshya kewal muzhe '.

Chitra-kya soch rahe ho vishal??tum ye sagai rokoge na,bolo.

He pulled her more close and grabbed her shoulder tight-aur kuch kehna hain.

Chitra-ah'.ah'chodo hamein ah'peeda ho rahe hain(vishal's frustration always made him hurt her,she was so close to him but he could not have her,that made him hell angry inside)but this time he could not control himself,he grabbed her more tight from both hands.

Chitra-vishal'chodo hamein,kya kar rahe ho???he was smelling her hair and pushed them gently with his hands,her bare shoulder made him crazy and he gently kissed her neck,CHITRA GOT HIGHLY SHOCKED.before she could take any action vishal realized what he did,he pushed her and slapped her tight'''..so tight that it hurt her,she started crying''.

Vishal-yahe saza hain tumhare mere lakshya mein baadha banne ke,chitra was all lying on the bed crying.

Vishal left in anger,she was crying still lying on the bed.vishal came out and he too started crying.

NEXT UPDATE TITLE-CONFESSION ,PASSION AND SEDUCTION,A SIN HE COMMITTED.(NEXT UPDATE WILL BE ALL ABOUT LOVE AND A REALLY HOT ONE,GET READY TO GET BURN''''''''''''''''')AFTER THIS CHAPTER I WILL COME BACK AGAIN TO POLITICS AS LEAD IS CHANDU AND CHANAKYA NOT VISHAL.I WILL TRY TO BRING ALL COUPLES IN THIS CHAPTER .

Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
vry nyc updt moni!!
d way u hav portrayed vishal's anxiety is jus superb...
n i luv ur idea 2 bring in all d couples...
updt soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: frozen.devil

vry nyc updt moni!!

d way u hav portrayed vishal's anxiety is jus superb...
n i luv ur idea 2 bring in all d couples...
updt soon...

thanks and vishal anxiety is not just anxiety,its an obsession,a cruel obsession.you will see this development in coming chapters plus next chapter is a huge development in vitra's relationship.a very big development,its eve quicker than chandrashi.you will think what the hell?????????????????he he he be ready for a very very sexy chapter.i think its sexiest thing i ever wrote.😛 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter-29-part 1 of 4-confession,passion and seduction,a sin he committed.

Rashi was in her room thinking-hey prabhu,vishal awashya he chitra par apna krodh nikalega,muzhe pata hain ke vishal is vivah se prasanna nahin hain kintu agar wo aisa chahta hain to hum uske liye kuch bhe karenge.kal hamari sagai hain,hum nahin chahte ke usse pehle hamare mitrata mein koi bhe khataas aye.

Mihika was in her room seeing moon with all sadness.she knew that next day was the black day for her,she will see her love being engaged to someone else.

Shanky entered.

Shanky-mihika'.

Mihika-aao shashanka.

Shanky glad that she asked him to enter.

Shanky-kya soch rahe ho??

Mihika-kuch nahin bas..

Shanky-chandragupta ke vivah ke uplaksha mein soch rahe ho na??

mihika silent.

Shanky-mihika,tumne mere prastaav ke bare mein kuch vichaar kiya??

Mihika-shashanka mein wo..

Shanky angry-tum kyun nahin samazhti ho is baat ko ke chandu tumse vivah nahin karega.

Mihika-shashanka tum chilla kyun rahe ho??

Shanky angry,he grabbed her shoulder-tumhe aaj nirnay karna he hoga,tum muzhse prem karti ho ya nahin.

Mihika too angry-mera hast chodo.😡

Shanky pushed her off.

Mihika-ah..she saw true pain in his eyes''..she felt so so bad.

Shanky had tears in his eyes'mihika lowered her eyes'

Mihika-tum bahut bure ho shashanka''..😭

She came towards him and grabbed his face and was about to kiss him when'..suddenly someone knocked at the door.🤢

Mihika-ah..🤢

Shanky-ah'🤢 😡

Jogita-mihika,bahar aao,tumse kuch vishesh varatalaap karni hain.

Shanky and mihika both lowered their faces and mihika opened the door.jogita got shocked seeing shanky but she was too cool to care.

Jogita-chalo mere saath,yojna ke taiyaari karni hain.they left.🥱

Chandu talking to acharya.

Chandu-acharya,surasena aur assaka par is samay raj kaun kar raha hain.

Chanakya-raj to tum aur vishal he kar rahe ho kintu assaka mein tumhara pratineedhi akshay hain.

Chandu shocked'''''''..he had tears in his eyes,he reminded all moments with akshay

COUPLE SPECIALLL'''''CHAPTER BEGINS NOW.

Vishal went to a different room,he was all angry on himself and crying.

Vishal-kyun??kyun mein tumse itna prem karta hun,tumhare atirikt muzhe aur koi nahin dikhta hain chitra.tumse ye duri muzhse sehen nahin hote.he screamed very loud''''(that room is soundproof guys)vishal was reminding all the scenes from the past,chitra's smile,chitra's face,chitra's body(remember he saw her naked once)nahin,nahin vishal kyun tum apne mitrata ko dushit karna chahte ho,tumhe aisa nahin sochna chahiye,kadapi nahin'''''.but he could not resist,he quickly left for his room.

Chitra was all crying on her bed thinking-aaj hamare pitaji acharya shaktaar ya acharya chanakya jaise hote to hamein itna apmaan na jhelna padta,hamara jeewan vishal ke den hain she remembered when she first met vishal.

Chitra(7 years old)standing on a top of a hill,she was hell depressed.she lost every hope,she wanted to die as she was about to jump,she was caught by a beautiful boy having extremely short hair.he slapped her hard.

Vishal-ye kya karne jaa rahe ho tum??

Chitra-tum kaun hote ho hamein bachane waale??

Vishal-tumhara baap.

Chitra-haan???

Vishal-main panchala ka raajkumar hun.

Chitra shocked as panchala is an enemy kingdom.she was about to ran off when he caught her hand.

Vishal-kahan jaa rahe ho??

Chitra-muzhe chod do.

Vishal-pehle tum batao ke tum marna kyun chahti ho??

Chitra-tumhe isse matlab.

Vishal-tum aise nahin manoge,he picked her up in his arms and sat on a horse,they both rode to a far deep jungle.

Chitra-tum hamara apharan karke laaye ho??

Vishal-hey prabhu,kya paagal stri hain,to tumhe aur kya dikh raha hain??

Chitra-tumhe kaise pata ke hum surasena ke raajkumari hain??

Vishal shocked-oh to tum ho chitrangada.

Chitra-haan hum hain.

Vishal-tum marna kyun chahti ho??

Chitra started crying''''

Vishal-ye swang mat karo,mein striyon ko koi haani nahin pahunchata.

Chitra-tum hamein haani pahunchao aur maar do hamein.

Vishal-kintu kyun??

Chitra sat under the three,she was crying more and more''..vishal sat with her.

Vishal-dekho tum roa mat,mein hun na,mein tumhare samasya hal karunga.

Chitra wanted to insult her father in front of his enemy so she told him everything.

Vishal-to tum mahel se bhaag kar aaye ho.

Chitra-haan.

Vishal got up and he gave her hand-mere saath chalo panchala.

Chitra-kya wahan chalke tum hamein maaroge.

Vishal-hey prabhu,kis prakaar ke stri hain ye,he again picked her and they both left for panchala(she did not resist as she already wanted to die and going to panchala meant insulting her father though on reaching panchala she got treated like a princess unlike she thought that she will be treated like a trash)she was having flashbacks when someone just came upon the bed and she felt someone came towards her face(she was crying closed eyes).as she was about to open her eyes that person KISSED HER.she got shocked,for one moment she could not move,that person grabbed her waist tight,she quickly kicked him on the stomach and he fell on other side of bed,his head got hit by the wall.chitra got shocked seeing the person.

Chitra-vvv..vishal,ye kya tha??hamari itne ladaiyan hue kintu tum is tarah hamein saza doge hamne socha bhe na tha.grihna hain hamein tumse,grihna hain as she was about to leave vishal grabbed her fully under his arms.

Chitra-chodo hamein chodo..

Vishal started crying-nahin chod sakta,ab aur nahin'''his voice had a deep sadness.

Chitra-vishal kya hua,their faces were too close.

Vishal-nahin jaane de sakta mein tumhe apne se dur.

Chitra shocked'''.-vishal ye kya keh rahe ho?????????itna parihaas bahut hain aaj ratri ke liye.

Vishal pushed her hard,angry-tumhe kya lagta hain mein tumse parihaas kar raha hun.

Chitra-muzhe kuch samazh nahin aa raha hain.

Vishal hugged her-chitra,kyat tum muzhse prem karti ho??

Chitra shocked'''''''''''..-prem????tum ye'..

Vishal cut-bachpan se lekar aaj tak meine kise aur stri ko prem ke nazaron se nahin dekha,tumhe to ye gyat he nahin hain ke maine kabhe bhe tumhe kewal apna mitra nahin samzha,(he was still hugging her and she was all wide eyed)

Chitra thinks-prem????he reminded her mother'..

Flashback'

Chitra-maa..aapke aur pitaji ka prem vivah hua hain na??

Mother-haa,hum tumhare pita se bahut prem karte hain and then she remembered her father selling her mother.

Chitra pushed vishal'.

Chitra-prem,rashi ke bhavnaon ke saath khelkar tumne hamse aise baat karne ke cheshta kaise ke,tum jaante ho hum prem shabd se grihna karte hain,grihna samzhe tum,prem,ye prem nahin kewal aasakti hain,jo ke hamari umra ke saath mit jayega,tumne leenajavi ko nahin dekha kya??haan,tumhare pitaji ke 25th patni,kewal 16 saal ke the jab use vivah karke laaye the tumhare pitaji aur agle he din unke mrityu ho gaye,ek 16 saal ke stri ko wo vidhwa banakar chale gaye,tumhare pita bhe to tumhari maa se prem he karte the na phir unhone apne bte ke umra ke stri se vivah kyun kiya??tum sab raja,grihna hain tumse,grihna hain duniya ke har raja se hamein,vishal had huge tears in his eyes''..

As she was about to go..

Vishal pulled her on the bed,she was seeing him with all angry eyes.he hugged her.

Vishal said-dhanyawaad,yahe jaana chahta tha mein,meine hamesha chaha ke tum sab muzhse grihna karo.

Chitra shocked''''

Vishal-kintu ye yaad rakhna chitra ke is sansarmein koi ek vyakti hain jo tumhare liye apne praan de dega.

Chitra shocked'''.again',she got horrified at the thought of him dieing'''

Vishal-mere aakhri iccha yahe hain chitra ke tum ek aise vyakti se vivah karna jo tumhe bahut prem kare.

Chitra just never thought that she will hear words of vishal dieing,the thought of death of his made her mad,she hugged him too tightly'''''..

Vishal-kintu tum ye bhe yaad rakhna..he cut off the hug and grabbed her face with his hands'..ke mein tumhe kise aur ka hote hue nahin dekh sakta''.

Chitra shocked

Vishal-tum mere saamne kise aur ke ho jaaye usse pehle tumhe muzhe maarna hoga aur tum nahin maar sakti to ye yaad rakhna ke mein TUMHE MAAR DUNGA kintu tumhe kise aur ka nahin hone dunga.

Chitra had no words to say,she was in a third level,she could not bear such passionate words from the person she all this time respected so much.he grabbed her hair from righte side and kissed the tip of it-tumhare baal''..muzhe tumhare baal,he smelled her hair and kissed it,he placed her hand on her waist again,he again kissed her neck,and bit her there.😳chitra-ah..vishal.

He pulled off her robe type thing and kissed her neck grabbing her waist.

Chitra felt too dizzy-ah''''.

His hands from her waist started going up,chitra was not complaining at all,she does not understood why,she hugged him tightly.vishal in the heat unknowingly opened the back of her blouse type dress(just like mihika) and started kissing her hard.

chitra gasped,chitra pushed him on the bed''..she was on him looking at him,he was staring at her in shock,her long hairs were touching his face,they both had a sad eyelock'''.a tiny drop of tear fell from her eyes and touched his cheeks.

Vishal said-shama karna mein jaa raha hun aur vachan deta hun ke tumhare saamne kabhe nahin aaonga,chitra was too sad but because of emotional blackmailing of him dieing,as he was about to get up chitra stopped him by grabing his hands with her hands,their hands ENTWINED,SHE started rubbing her legs on his legs.Vishal-chitra muzh jaane do but chitra came towards him,she came very close to him,she kissed his lips''''.vishal shocked and he closed his eyes and grab her naked back and pushed her towards himself,their legs,lips and hands entwined in each other,they forgot everything,she broke the kiss and grabbed his face-aaj ke baad kabhe bhe apne mrityu ke baat hamse mat karna and again she cried.vishal was absolutely drowned in passion,he could not think of anything,not about his plan,not about rashi,nothing'''''.if he wanted he could devour her,his love was not just love,it was like an obsession,if anyone touch her he could burn his hands,and now his dream came to reality,she was all devoted to him,he pushed her on the bed.he was all on top of her,he came very close to her,she grabbed his back and they started kissing.they were like two lovers madly in love,chitra realized that she could not live without vishal,even if she did not wanted such a thing,for vishal she was ready to do anything,their faith towards each other was unconditional,though in this moment of heat chitra forgot about rashi.he came to her waist and started kissing it.his hands were touching her lips,they were in each other this night.chitra realized that passion he had for her was beyond the way she expected and enough guys''(I leave it to your imagination,and to be frank I do not support such a thing,I don't wanna give any bad msg to my any reader.even if only one reader reads my ff,still its my duty to not spoil their morale but this thing I planned from the beginning so extremely sry,this is a part of story.such a coincidence,dhanu few days ago predicted this and this became true,oh dhanu'you are an antar yaami)

Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
woah...awsm updtt...am waiting fr ur nxt updt...!!
ur ideas r really different..!! <3 it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chand1234

woah...awsm updtt...am waiting fr ur nxt updt...!!

ur ideas r really different..!! <3 it


next part is a very emotional bomb,i hope you guys will be able to handle it and thanks but i don't believe you because i get very few comments in comparison of other ffs but its okay,everyone has their own taste.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
chitra and vishal...
Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago

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