My First Fanfic(Part Eleven)

Sorry ppl, cudn't upadate for so long.....thank u so much for all the comments.
Previous Parts

Part 1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318640/my-first-fanfic

Part 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318884/my-first-fanfic-part-two

Part 3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/319518/my-first-fanfic-part-three

Part 4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/332225/my-first-fanfic-part-four

Part 5:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/334344/my-first-fanfic-part-five

Part 6:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/335966/my-first-fanfic-part-six

Part 7:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/337292/my-first-fanfic-part-seven

Part 8:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/340575/my-first-fanfic-part-eight

Part 9:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/341900/my-first-fanfic-part-nine

Part 10:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/343324/my-first-fanfic-part-ten

Scene 31

Outside Mukti's house, the next morning.

Mukti comes out of her house to go for work and sees Prem sittin in his car outside her house. Mukti ignores Prem and walks off. Prem gets out of his car.
Prem: Mukti.
Mukti turns : What do u want now Prem?
Prem: I am sorry Mukti..................... I am really sorry I didn't mean to hurt you yesterday.
Mukti: U always do manage to hurt me.
She turns and walks off.
Prem: I love you Mukti.
Mukti turns: What?
Prem: Yes Mukti, I love you Mukti..... Even I didn't know Mukti.I don't know when I started loving you, when I think about it i feel like I have always loved you, it just that I never realised my feelings for you. I always thought love makes people weak, but now I know the truth, you are my strength Mukti. Without you by my side I will die Mukti.
Mukti: No Prem you don't love me. You just want your baby, thats all.
Prem: No Mukti, its not true. I want you in my life. I want you in my life fightin with me, ruinin all my plans, always competin with me, tellin me wht to do, always interferin in my things,always tellin me I am wrong but always loving me. I can't live without you Mukti.
Mukti's eyes starts fillin with tears.
Mukti: No Prem. I am sorry. I can't trust you again.
Prem: Alrite Mukti. I will prove to you my love is true and I will win your trust. I promise you.

Scene 32

Prem walks into the house and Prerna is sittin there.
Prerna: Prem, why r u lookin so upset?
Prem: I went to meet Mukti.
Prerna: What did she say?
Prem: She said she can't trust me again. I think she stopped lovin me Ma.
Prem sits on the floor infront of Prerna and puts his head on her lap and starts crying.
Prerna: No beta, never think like that. She loves you a lot. I know that. She really loves you.
Prem: Then why Ma?
Prerna: Because she thinks tht u will never love her. give her time.
Prem: I will get her back Ma. I can't live without her. Will you help me.
Prerna: Of course beta. I always wanted you two to be together.
Prem: If you are with me Ma I will never loose her because you never accept defeat (he smiles)and after all I am your son.

Part 12:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/355250/my-first-fanfic-part-twelve

Nice pls continue soon!

wowwwwwwwwww just great 👏
I was looking for your new update
pls continue very soon

tht was gr8 thx for updating

Very good, I had to wait for long...continue every day. Nahi tho I will send you bugging mails...

Krishi

awwwwwwwwww mother son secean so cute. i almost cried redin the lap scene 😭 😭 . it's so nice keep it up 👏

thank you so much for the comments guys 😛