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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for the next part...
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...

lvd the pix...maneet r gettng close bt i wonder wt will happen whn maan will see the divorce pprz...

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update. loved peacock and peahen dance. and loved Maan and Geet paragliding
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Posted: 13 years ago
completed all the parts in a go.
its simply superb.👏
waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago

today is a month anniversary of intehaa and so of maaneet,,, so ek special update to banta h..😊

PART 20

maaneet entered the room and decided to rest after a tiring day...they laid on bed and had a small nap... after an hour or so geet turned restlessly in bed... she moved her hand all arond on bed to find the warmth of her hubby with closed eyes but she didnt felt it... she slowly opened her eyes and found herself alone on bed... she checked in bathroom but he was not there too... then her eyes fell on a gift wrap and a note... one more surprise..how does he get so many ideas uff... she read the note... be ready by 7... a car will be waiting for you... maan... she smiled at the note and opened the box...her eyes grew wide seeing a long white evening gown... it was so pretty and delicate.. she just fell in love with the dress at first sight...

she took a long bath and got ready in that gown...she applied black kohl around her eyes and a strawberry gloss enhancing her lips in the name of makeup...she looked like an angle descending from heaven with her natural beauty... the fitting was so perfect..her each and every curve was enhanced beautifully... it looked as if the dress was carved for her only... her bare creamy white shoulders and back was fully visible... she shied imagining going before maan in that dress... after few minutes she heard a knock ... driver was there at the door at perfect seven waiting for her...

due to hilly area.. there was not much traffic and she reached her destination in half an hour... she was awwed by the exotic beauty she saw... the whole setup was made up of a camp site with a big tent on one side and a table for two placed other side... fire was burned to provide warmth in the chilly night... and the most beautiful thing was the waterfall at the background... and whole area surrounded by beautiful hills..

yes they were at the kempty falls... Located 15 km from Mussoorie, the Kempty Falls lie amidst a mass of hills. Sparkling water gushes down from a height of 4,500 ft and further segregates into five different falls (40 ft each) at this place. Originally, the British conducted tea-parties here. Thus, the colloquial name 'Camp-Tea' earned it the name 'Kempty'. The falls remain open to public from March to July.

since the falls are closed in this season for public noone other than her was present there... after all maan took special permission for a night at the beautiful site for his mishty... she was so lost in the view that didnt realised when two strong arms encircles her thin waist tightly... he lifted her by waist from back and twirled her in the air... she was continuously laughing with the cold air tickling her senses...

do you like it... maan its awesome... i never saw such a view... i think i am in heaven... is it a dream maan... maan slightly rubbed his hard stubble against her soft cheeks... umm i dont think so ... its pure reality jaan... she blushed and hid herself in his neck... maan encircled his arm around her enjoying the feel of their togetherness... ... the used to dream about all these moments with her and now they were his reality...you look so beautiful... i cant keep my eyes of you then dont blame me for doing something that can make you jittery... geet wacked his arms hearing his shameless words and noticed that he was too wearing white see through shirt with blue denim... his first two button was open as always giving view of his chiseled chest...

after few minutes maan pulled her apart... he took a step back and looked deeply in her eyes.. she just pulled down her lashes blocking him from seeing into the mirror of her soul... geet tum to kabhi kuch kehti nhi aur jo mujhse tumhare dil ka haal byan karti h unko tum humse door kar rhi ho... ye palke tumhare dil ka ayna h aur wo mujhe tumhari har kashmakash byan karti h... he caressed her cheeks which turned beetroot red hearing his words... aj tumhe pata h mai bhut khoosh hu... geet looked at him as if asking the reason... today is our first anniversary and our first date too... geet blushed at the word date but then thought of teasing him... who said its a date...twisting her lips she said... oh man he so much wanted to taste those teasing lips but uff he cant... can you explain maam... dates are not like this... you didnt even properly asked me... oh is that so... hmm... ok then...

he lifted his hand in front of her... she expected him to say some romantic words.. some poetic lines etc etc... bt he swiftly pulled her hand and lifted her in his arms like a princess... jaan will you go on a date with me... geet was lost in his hold... his tough jaw so close to her... and his breath that was falling on her neck.. she didnt even realised wen she just nodded her head and accepted... so now you accepted to.. now its a date... he placed her on a chair... geet then registered his words and she was like what type of the proposal was that... jo bhitha you accepted and now dont give me those looks... it make me loose my control... she just lowered her head listening to him... he is becoming a shameless nowadays... she murmured... abhi to tumne meri shamelessness dekhi hi kha h... but i wont mind to show you.... he winked at her...she opened her mouth wide listening to him... maan are you drunk... he just ignored her question and started his teasing again...

after a good teasing session... he went near her and asked.... may i have a pleasure of dance with the beautiful lady... maan i am wearing heels and its a rocky place... how will i dance... you should have informed me before.... maan just pulled her making her stand and asked her to remove her sandels... she did not having any other option...he lifted her slowly and placed her feet on his above his shoes... now will you dance with me... she just nodded lost in his sweet act... the song played in background...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M_MDTYG7I48[/YOUTUBE]


Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan

he slowly lifted her left hand and place on his shoulder... he took her right hand in his hand and pulled her close...they swayed softly on the music with her feet on his... they were lost looking each other and admiring their budding relationship... they came a long way in just few days... she slowly moved more close to him moving her hand from shoulder to his neck...

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Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan

he pulled her more closer placing bot her hand around his neck and moving his around her waist... and swayed with the soft tone of the music... she slowly placed her head on his chest listening soft heartbeat of his which had a soothing effect on her...it seemed as the would stopped seeing the love of the two people who are lost in each other arms at the moment...

Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan

he came more close if it was possible so that air have to take permission to pass between them... her soft chest was touching his hard ones sending a chill down her spine...he lowered his head and planted a soft kiss on her bare shoulder... she jumped with the sudden kiss and her breathing hitched... he moved in upper direction toward her neck planting all the way sweet kisses... soon his kisses turned into open mouth kisses and she just got lost on him... her hands were roaming on his back... he was igniting a fire in her body she never felt before... the thundering of cloud made them realize of their intimate position...

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan

they slowly parted and kept looking everywhere other then the partner... both were feeling so satisfied but none was embarrassed or guilty of the act... they knew it was not wrong... they were just showing their feelings and their heart had already accepted each other... both turned and loooked in each other eyes trying to see whether other was guilty... but felt happy with the confidence in other's eyes...

Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Uljhi uljhi saanson ki aawaaz hai pasand
Moti luta rahi hai saawan ki badliyaan

they decided to have their dinner before it get cold...maan served her and her happiness multiplied seeing all her favourite punjabi dishes... she looked at him with love in her eyes and he just smiled at her... he was going to serve himself but she stopped him... he looked at her with raised eyebrows askng the reason... she made a morsel from her plate and fed him.. he ate from her hands and fed her from his hand... they completed their dinner and decided to have a walk near the waterfall...

precap: raat abhi baki h...

please like and comment...

Edited by neha512 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesme update dear
lovd their romantic date n dance..iam in love with the way hw their relatn is blossoming beautifully..
Hmm raat abhi baki hai par kya hone wala hai?
Waitng 4 next part
Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
haiy...haiy...
kithna romantic tha😍...mey kya comment karoon...
mind-blowing...looking fwd...

Edited by blueopal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

wow...so dreamy yr...

plz update soon next one...

love it...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
I am impressed by ur knowledge abt massuri loved it
Raat abhi baqi hy tu update soon 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful song wid an amazing update😊me waiting for nxt..😳

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