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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Very interesting start!!! Wanna read more!! Plz continue!! 😉

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sujana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

twins🤗 update naa re phjeelzzz😳😳

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shiv_sis_square

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: sujana9
twins🤗 update naa re phjeelzzz😳😳

Update in 2hrs

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shiv_sis_square

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Okay people..We have broken enough of our heads but still this is a short update..Well you will know why we broke our heads because we hadnt thought of the continuation of the Story...Hope this doesnt go over the head or seem boring or we hope you wouldnt want to break your computer sreen while reading..And yes Thank you everyone for the comments, it means a lot. ___________________

The color of the glittering liquid resembled the vase Bloom possessed. She gazed at the green thing when Prim spoke up "Do you know what this is?" Bloom now put her index finger forward to touch it, her eyes like they are hypnotized. Prim, her face written with confusion shook Bloom and told her to remove her gaze from the pot and pushed her thin finger aside "You don't know what this is. Don't look at it; this is the blood of the Hoshis." Bloom looked up "Hoshis?" Prim said "Ah you wouldn't know about them. They come from the Nebula. Now don't tell me you don't know about Nebula. Nebula is all above the clouds closest place to God." Bloom was listening to her trying to comprehend whatever her little brain could take in. Prim now covered the earthen pot with her cloth and walked towards the tiny window. She opened it and a gush of fresh air filled the stuffy room with the sweet smell of Nature. "The Hoshis are a gifted race, they are half human and half bird. You must have seen them flying in the evening sky with the melodious flute like voice and in their feathery blue coat" Prim explained, Bloom was in the envelop of curiosity now, but before she could ask anything Prim continued "They only interact with special humans and killing them will give you a harsh death." Bloom was utterly confused but let Prim continue "Their blood is lucky, you keep it and everything turns out good, I have never tried it because I never had it. You are lucky Bloom that a well wisher gave it to me." "The well wisher gave it you why did you get it here?" Bloom asked. Prim came closer to Bloom and stroked her hair "Bloom you are like my young sister, I could do anything for you, you just keep this. This is as good as half a Hoshi protecting you" she said handing her the tiny pot of Hoshi blood "Just remember that don't let it touch your lips and be positive in what you do, whether it be anything" whispering it in Bloom's ear Prim closed the window and walked "But.."Bloom started, her tiny hands clasping the earthen pot tightly "No buts here Bloom, just remember you have to be positive" Prim went out of the room cautiously and closed the door leaving behind a confused Bloom.

Bloom's mind was jumbled up; she sat staring at the liquid for a long time. How could this help me? Her little brain trying to comprehend what Prim explained was now tired. So she decided to let her little brain get some rest and ponder over the Green Blood the coming day.

The next day with the fresh sunlight Bloom opened her chocolately brown eyes. Her head aching as usual in the mornings, maybe because of fear. She rose and fund her arms and legs in pain, because of the chores maybe she thought. A change of clothes thats were no less that worn out rugs. She was going out when her eye caught the small earthen pot, she lifted it up with a uncertain expression and tucked it safely under her robe, so thats its not visible. She then went out of her stuffy room with a worn out expression to...
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Okay yes we know we ended it badly but sorry guys really...Creating a Hoshi was very hard okay so looking forward for your views..
PS The detalied description of a Hoshi is on Page 8
-Shivangi and Shivika

Edited by shiv_sis_square - 13 years ago

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shiv_sis_square

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Okay Guys for PMs Like this post..

Edited by shiv_sis_square - 13 years ago

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Sawyer_Tom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Ok first of all sorry for the late comment. Was a bit preoccupied.

So anyways coming to the update. This is getting so damn interesting. The mystical powers of the Hoshi's blood and the unknown history of the characters themselves just pops up more and more questions in my head. It is damn intriguing, the way you write. So please continue soon. And thanks for the PM.

Edited by Sawyer_Tom - 13 years ago

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

It was really amazing n interesting
I really want a detail description about hoshi please
I curiously want to knw what happened next
Update it soon

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Swaron238

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Strawberries!!!! Awesome Girls!! This is gr8 stuff!! Though the update was short bt it was really very interesting!! :D nd im eagerly waiting for the next part now!! :D

Now cumin to the update the relationship between Bloom and Prim is so sweet! Both of them suffering the same fate yet Prim wants Bloom to keep Hoshi's blood for protection!!
Also yep i need a full detailed description of a Hoshi! How do create such stuff?!

To end it This story is becoming interesting day by day!! Im soo sure im gonna becum really hooked to this one for sure! :D

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sujana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

stry is gng wid full to suspense thing i am loving it
very nicely wriitten twins 🤗🤗

i want an description of hoshins :D

thanks for d pm

update soon

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Its awesome...amazing
loved it
plzz update next part soon

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