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Posted: 13 years ago
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😭 Aditiii,my heart is broken😭

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Eeeks Mini Sorry galti se mistake ho gaya plz sorry *gets down on knees,holding both the ears and pleading*sorry,sorry,sorry countless times😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: enchanted23

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😭 Aditiii,my heart is broken😭

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Eeeks Mini Sorry galti se mistake ho gaya plz sorry *gets down on knees,holding both the ears and pleading*sorry,sorry,sorry countless times😭

chalo maaf kar diya😆but on one condition my holi scene is no longer a request,it is a demand and you HAVE to put it in😉ab jaa jaldi se update(s) leke aa.I want to read and enjoy 🤗



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Posted: 13 years ago
unresed on page 11 🤗
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Ok Guys, I am back with a new update, please feel free to throw tomatoes and eggs if you are disappointed but also throw some of these in Piyu's direction thanks to her I am still writing chapters pro-leapYour comments and likes are source of encouragement,please keep them coming and please please let me now of any errors...

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this lovely and awesome poster is amazing creativity of our dear Piyu

Chapter 5

growing attractions and dissents



Chal ab jaldi se mere liye halwa bana de,main
tayaar hoke niche aata hu,
said Kesar picking up his towel and trying to
make his way out of the room

Gulaal who was still lost in her thoughts quickly looked at the beautiful bangles that
adorned both her hands, trying to register what he said quickly held on to his
hand and asked Kaha ja raha hai?

Surprised that she was asking this question, he replied with mischievous glint in his eyes,Tere janamdin ki khushi mein school ne toh chutti nahi rakhi hai na aaj


Abhi toh bhukhar bhi thik se nahi utara,aur tu phir bahar jane ki baat kar raha hai,aaj kahi nahi jana hai,halwa bhi kissi aur din bana dungi pehle tu thik to ho ja"


He was about to argue with her, when PB walked in and Gulaal started complaining to her,dekhiye na isse aaj bhi school jana hai,kal toh itna bhukhar tha ki hosh tak nahi tha kuch,PB smiled at her knowing her concerns and worries for him, having witnessed the constant pacing around in the courtyard till he returned, said Kesar aaj ke din thoda aaram kar lo
beta,abhi tu puri tarah thik bhi nahi hua hai na
, seeing that there is no
escape for him today he reluctantly got back in the bed making plainly clear to
Gulaal that he was not happy being there, his plans for stealing and riding
motorbike of one of his school teacher to teach him a lesson in humility for
having mocked students walking from such a long distance effectively biting dust...


Gulaal happy and satisfied with getting her way told PB to be around him and she would
go and get breakfast ready for everyone, PB nodded a small smile playing on her
lips looking at her son who was sulking and angry for having to stay in


Kesar tune kaha tha na kuch der mere pas aake bethega roj,toh ab jab main aayi hu tere pas to tu kyun yuh muh phulake betha hai,naraz hai kya apni Ba se?


Nahi to Ba main kyun naraz hounga aapse,he asked while making her sit on the bed and
sliding down keeping his head in her lap, woh toh aaj Gulaal ka janamdin hai na
aur woh halwa bhi nahi bana rahi isliye,Ba aapse ek baat puchu


Kesar tu har baat main kyun jid karta hai,jab teri tabiyat theek ho jayegi toh bana degi
na woh, ab tu chota nahi hai Kesar bahut saari jimmedaari uthani hai tujhe yeah
ghar ki,kharkhane ki,iss gaav ki,MB aur meri


Aur Gulaal ki? asked Kesar, Gulaal ki jimmedaari bhi toh meri hai na Ba?

PB did know how to answer that, so just nodded in affirmative and asked him if he would like to eat anything


He was so used to this by now that he didn't protest, he knew he had to find answers for
himself, though that day MB had said he will be given all answers, all
explanations but the day looked so far away, he wanted to understand now, he
wanted to grow up now, he wanted to shoulder all the responsibilities that
Vasantbha wanted him to, that's why he was studying so hard to make him proud
but when will Gulaal understand this? When will MB and PB stop treating him
like a kid, Just now she said he was not a kid anymore but he was not old
enough to ask any questions about his responsibilities either, he sighed and
closed his eyes



Gulaal entered carrying his breakfast, PB nudged him to get up but he refused and
turned away but remembering PB's word got up with a jerk, PB said she would
serve breakfast to everyone and left slowly instructing Kesar not to leave the
room, the moment PB left Kesar got up and walked up to the balcony with Gulaal
in tow


Main khud kha sakta hu,tu ja,tujhe aur bhi bahut kaam honge na, breakfast ke baad
khana,phir safai,phir chai,phir aur kuch jao tum,jab mujhe jane nahi diya toh
kam se kam mere saath beth toh sakhti thi na,lekin nahi tumhare paas toh itne
saare kaam hai ke mere liye toh waqt hi nahi,he sulked and turned away from her


Gulaal was amused and didn't know why he was fretting so much over a innocent
complaint that she made to PB, all she wanted was to stop him from going out,She
went near and turned him around and holding his face asked, Kyun aisi baate kar
raha hai,main toh yahi thi na saari raat,ab ghar ka kaam hoga toh karna to padega
na,chal ab jaldi se nashta kar le,tu nah hamesha baccha hi rahega,she said
ruffling his hair


That's it,she said it again,he couldn't control himself anymore,why can't she see what
he can, he was already few inches taller than her,he always ensured he took her
out as many time he possibly could thinking of some excuse or the other, he also
took care of her when she was not well and he tried to spend all his spare time
with her, he never let her out of his sight for too long,how could he,he wouldn't
be able to survive without her and he did everything in his power to keep her
happy why she was still considering him a child,no he can't take this anymore,noone
understood him,he was hurt and angry he turned his face away from her and blurted

Kab tak mujhe baccha samajhti rahegi,main kuch bhi karlu,kitna bhi badalu per tumhari
nazar mein toh main baccha hi rahunga na,kitni koshish ki yeah sabit karne
ki,kam se kam tumhari nazaro mein to apne aap ko samajdaar aur sayana sabit kar
pau,per tumhe toh meri har koshish,har harkat bachkaani hi lagti hai,pata nahi
Gulaal kab bada hone dogi tum mujhe


Gulaal was stunned,she was lost not knowing what he was trying to convey,he was indeed
growing,growing up very quickly,there was lot going on in his mind that she
didn't understand,she wanted to be there for him in every step of the way,he
was her Kesar,her reason to be in this house,her entire world and she did not
know what was bothering him,mere thought of her failure to understand him
welled up her eyes and her voice was shaky when she spoke


Kesar mujhe nahi pata tujhe kaunsi baat pareshaan kar rahi hai,meri toh hamesha yeahi
koshish rahi hai ki tujhe kabhi bhi koi takleef ya shikayat na ho,mujhse kya
bhul hui hai bata na,per pehle yeah kha le,kal se kuch nahi khaya tune,aise toh
tabiyat aur kharab ho jayegi



Her quivering voice told him that she was on verge of crying and that was something that made
him weak always,he sighed and turned around and smiled at her,walking closer
said


Mujhe yeah pareshaani hai ki tu kabse yaha khadi hoke baate kiye ja rahi hai,aur mera
bhuk ke maare itna bura haal hai,chalo ab khilao mujhe main bimar hu na
and he
winked at her...


With a big relief on her face and a wide smile she extended her hand with bits of food
towards his mouth and he did the same knowing she wouldn't have had any either...


It was late afternoon and he had dozed off after studying for few hours, he decided to
go and look for Gulaal as she generally went to the temple for her birthday and she
couldn't go in the morning because of him, she was not in her room or in the
kitchen which was unusual, so he decided to go and look for her in the terrace
and couldn't find her there either, where could she go that too w/o anyone as
he saw Talli and Sudha bhabhi in Sudha bhabhi's room and PB and MB,JK and GK
were in the leaving room

He decided to ask PB , Ba aapne Gulaal ko kahi dekha hai kya?

Ha Kesar,woh toh Dushyant ke sath mandir gayi hai,kuch chahiye kya? Mujhe bata main le aati hu

Dushyantbha ke sath kyun?Mujhe nahi utha
sakti thi kya
,he almost shouted, MB,PB,GK were surprised at this sudden
outburst where as JK just smirked

PB tried to specify, Kesar tu soya hua tha na,aur teri tabiyat bhi thik nahi thi na beta,Gulaal
to apne janamdin pe mandir jaati hi hai na iseliye maine hi Dushyant ko kaha
tha usko le jane ke liye


Kesar didn't want any explanation and nodded his head still angry,still shouting Mujhse
kahe bina kaise ja sakti hai woh,aur mere bigar toh bilkul nahi,aakhir patni
hai woh meri...


MB and PB just didn't know what hit them and there was a stunned silence in the room
everyone staring at Kesar shocked...

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Edited by enchanted23 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yay me first😃RES

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Aditi,first of all yeh le ek badi si jhappi for this cute chapter🤗ok now let me start with the title.I loved it.perfect for this one.I absolutely adored Kesar in this one.There were so many shades to his character here.The happy-go-lucky fellow teasing Gulaal at the beginning who goes on to become all sulky because he is not allowed to go to school which causes his well thought out plans go to waste...haaawww.me loved it.I could imagine Gulaal running after him with that plate of food😆but once again we come to know the real reason for his sulkiness-Gulaal is too busy to spend time with him.He could have happily bunked school for the rest of the year if only she spent all her time with him na.bechara Kesu and then she had to go and do that.oh Gullu you are so ignorant...You should never ruffle a teenager's hair and call him a bacha.Nothing could be more insulting than that to the bacha...ooops sorry Kesar😆and out comes the blunt Kesar-that outburst was good.He could never hide anything from her even if he tried to.I am loving the GK interactions so much.I am sure if the secret had not come out their relationship would have been exactly like this.While reading that bit about feeding each other I was reminded of the cowshed scene from the show.That was a beautiful scene Aditi😃and I loved that possessive Kesar who gets all riled up because Gulaal went with Dushyant towards the end.I loved Kesu's last dialogue a lot😳and JK ka smirk ha ha ha zaroor kuch khichdi pak rahi hogi.Do make her the cupid in this too.I love our Rockstar😆

Aditi,this was a beautiful chapter and finally the people in the house are waking upto the fact that Kesarji might be taking the DV to his heart.I want to see what they do next cause in the show except for MB no one else gave a damn😡

I hope I made some sense or it it just mindless ramblingsorry for the very haphazard comment😭Now please update soon🤗
Edited by minizz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res 😳

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Aditi 🤗...wow this is an amazing update...
For me the whole update is all abt kesar n his confusions, contradictory statements, concerns n what not...starting from kesar who has to stay at home though he had some awesome plan which is all gone waste...his confusion on the contradictory statements that every one say that he is grown up n also he is still a bachcha...his whole n sole aim to grow up soon to take care of gulaal along with the responsibilities of every one...though he know he would get to know answers to all his questions some time or the other after some years...for him to wait till that so called point is not that easy...offo he is all angry as she is not spending some time with him...bachcha sach mein tu bachcha hi rahega 😆...oops gulaal bhi toh yahi kahaa...n see he is all angry with all this bachcha talk...i just love his dialogues here..he did so many things to prove that he is not a bachcha anymore...atleast he wants gulaal to acknowledge this...but here gulaal is teh one who is being that blind...n see bachcha is very much upset with her shaky voice that he has to come up with some excuse to make everything fine between them...i loved that scene when they both feed each other 😳...I remember that cowshed walaa scene in show after that bangles incident...kesar reaction knowing that gulaal went to mandir with his dushyanth ba...i expected this reaction...what ever may be the reason...his concern would be how can she go with out him...with out asking him...that too with dushy...n ofcourse being his wife 😳...

Aditi...just wow👏...I am just loving loving the kesar n gulaal bond...i am expecting that the last scene is not yet done..I am expecting it to continue in the next chapter...n also the reaction of MB, pb n more important gulaal n dushy...do update soon...can we expect a update in this week end itself or have to wait for next week end...

Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow. A birthday turning "happening" much?! Love how you weave in the plethora of emotions Aditi - from sulking and bordering on frustrated one moment to melting away at the slightest threat of a Gulaal tear-shed ... Kesar is true to his essence.

The highlight of this chapter has to be the ambivalence of existence for Kesar. Of self contradicting comments he faces all the time about "growing up" and "being a child. Of sensing his own growth anyway; of striving tirelessly with the aim of becoming that adult who will finally be given answers to the mindboggling mysteries of his life; of being treated, yet, as a junior.

I guess the reason that never changed even on the show is the fact that Kesar always was the baby of the house after all. Being the youngest member is that position, where no matter what age, you're still the youngest! But being the youngest is the one position also, where you are justified in being incapable of understanding that patronizing attitude from anyone and everyone around you, as being part of their second nature - and not something they imply literally!

Gulaal's dilemma in realizing how the purpose of her life is being there for Kesar, but how his fast growing up makes that exceedingly difficult for her - such a genuine issue! Boys, and recluse at the top of that, can be so unfathomable for a person with Gulaal like age and experience - or the lack of both actually! She was never once a little boy to know what it was like. And there's just too much complication with a DV between them, for her to go all out and explore what she doesn't understand easily. Even with the sense of intuitive right that she feels and extends of Kesar - there is the DV somewhere at the back of her mind which will pose a wall stronger all the more as Kesar keeps growing up...

Kesar's reaction to missing on mandir - so expected! And to be continued, it seems!

Overall, another great chapter with another stage of progressive-regress between GK. Will look forward to next weekend's update Aditi 🤗

JZ
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aditi,I updated my comment😳
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Originally posted by: without-fathom

Wow. A birthday turning "happening" much?! Love how you weave in the plethora of emotions Aditi - from sulking and bordering on frustrated one moment to melting away at the slightest threat of a Gulaal tear-shed ... Kesar is true to his essence.


Jzee that's Kesar defining trait right? He would let anything and everything rest if that makes her cry even his brother's murder, this was far less imperative ,for him he had to find those answers he was seeking within the parameters that were defined and beyond his control


The highlight of this chapter has to be the ambivalence of existence for Kesar. Of self contradicting comments he faces all the time about "growing up" and "being a child. Of sensing his own growth anyway; of striving tirelessly with the aim of becoming that adult who will finally be given answers to the mindboggling mysteries of his life; of being treated, yet, as a junior.

Yes this is what I wanted to convey, you have put it so beautifully, he was trying his best to fit in those shoes as was expected of him, no one ever told him what and how he should go about it, in his mind he had to take over all responsibilities of his elder brother and if he was grown up for some and not for all he had to be explained the reason for it sadly no one understood that…

I guess the reason that never changed even on the show is the fact that Kesar always was the baby of the house after all. Being the youngest member is that position, where no matter what age, you're still the youngest! But being the youngest is the one position also, where you are justified in being incapable of understanding that patronizing attitude from anyone and everyone around you, as being part of their second nature - and not something they imply literally!

So true, he was trying his best to project himself as grown up but there were little things that he did unknowingly like sulking and getting angry when confined to his room and also when Gulaal's not around at his beck and call still proved that he was still a small tantrummy kid at heart who was spoilt by being youngest and getting his way most of the time


Gulaal's dilemma in realizing how the purpose of her life is being there for Kesar, but how his fast growing up makes that exceedingly difficult for her - such a genuine issue! Boys, and recluse at the top of that, can be so unfathomable for a person with Gulaal like age and experience - or the lack of both actually! She was never once a little boy to know what it was like. And there's just too much complication with a DV between them, for her to go all out and explore what she doesn't understand easily. Even with the sense of intuitive right that she feels and extends of Kesar - there is the DV somewhere at the back of her mind which will pose a wall stronger all the more as Kesar keeps growing up...

Yes even if she wants to understand him and get to bottom of his issues, there will always be this DV that will stop her from treating him the way she wanted to, for her he was someone that will fulfil her promise to her late husband and there by relieving her of her duty towards this home and his dreams where as for him there was no such dream that Vasant would have seen,where she was not part of it,sigh! So many ways of looking at this and still getting no right or wrong answer


Kesar's reaction to missing on mandir - so expected! And to be continued, it seems!

Kesar won't be Kesar w/o his outbrust I guess😊

Overall, another great chapter with another stage of progressive-regress between GK. Will look forward to next weekend's update Aditi 🤗

JZ

Thanks Jzee for your continual support,helps me keep going at this story,I will be updating today late evening or tomorrow,I want to get through till he is 21 before Easter break ends

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Aditi..res for the comments on the new update😳
unresed the comments on the previous update on page 11😊

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